What I would suggest is making the rain noise alot quieter, or simply removing it. Parts where things happen suddenly like when the lights turn on with a sudden noise would be more impactful when theres no other noise going on, as it feels out of nowhere and unexpected.
Complete silence, or even a very silent low hum leaves your ears to come up with all the rest of the noises. Add spurts of random noises here and there for environmental sounds, that’s how you really scare a player with sounds.
Yo how do u get that scary typa horror proximity prompt text? do you mind telling me how? or if its like a model script?, this video made me wanna make a horror game myself, and that interaction script proximityprompt will go well with it, please thank you.
Everyone is talking about the game while I'm talking about how it's literally the mandela catalogue but a short horror game also great job. This inspires me to edit my horror game more (and make it shorter but have better gameplay)
you gotta release a full tutorial for this man, or at least publish assets online cuz it's really good for a short horror game, it definitely can be expanded upon!
To make the game faster, I think you should start with building the basic mechanics and the general gameplay structure first, then you should focus on the models and graphics, just some helpful advice😄
just a tip if you're going to make a story horror, do the script of the story first and then make the game, planning is important, because doing graphics first can be wasteful if the story you make ends up not being good
Suggestion if u make an update; add lightning, make the game slightly longer, make the rain sound more muffled because of the windows, try to make the electric box a bit more realistic, make the headbob more realistic and make the footstep sounds aline with the feet stepping, and that’s about it for all my suggestions This is an extremely well made game good job
Bro I swear you code the exact same way as me lol 😂Anyway, good game bro. You should try using lighting effects to add blurs and stuff, but other then that, it's a really good game!
I tried the game, looks very nice, I was expecting a jumpscare at the end, but I didn't really get any lol..........I noticed that there was a few ways that you could improve on the realism of this horror game, and somewhat overall look. I noticed that there was nothing outside of the windows that you could open, yet there was for the garage. Maybe if you could add something outside of those windows instead of it being empty void? I could see the stars from the bottom of the world. Also disable shift lock. Another thing that might make it feel a little more real possibly would be camera swaying (moving your camera back and forth or moving it sideways a little when moving your camera.) These things might make the game a bit more realistic. I also think that you should introduce that exact same ending that you did in the video, where you died and it made that exact same sound, it was a lot scarier thinking that I would have that happening to me in the game than the ending that happened where it just said someone was in my house and the game just kicks me with no other thing happening.
what script did u use, like when u first join the game. example once u joined a game u it will say a ("you must explore the hospital and find the key") ("youve found the key, go to the room 50)
Bro, I reallyyyy need to get in to Blender. Modeling is my passion, it’s like a hobby but also what I do, I have been building in a game engine called Rec Room and haven’t actually gotten into genuine 3D modeling yet. I tried to start out, but it was just so difficult and confusing, I gave up.
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@@fnkfauzan See? Now, just because you had stroke making that, it doesn't mean you have to make people have stroke too! I just had a seizure reading what you made.
@@fnkfauzan WDYM BRO? WHO'S "HER"? THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS YOU MAKE KEEP TRIGGERING ME. YOU MOST LIKELY DONT EVEN UNDERSTAND WHAT I SAY KNOWING THAT YOU'RE A MINOR
Forcing them to walk past or near a place that they expect to have a jumpscare is a good way to scare them
Alarms are well... Alarming so they also nice
Corners and doors
Not really, lol. It's overused in every walking sim horror game. I think we should strive for more creativity
@@darreldarrenman3334 you are Lucky this aint twitter becuase if it was then everyone would be like: "nO yOu ArE lYiNg!1!"
@@AutisticNerdBoy Yep, Thanks for not being one of those people...
What I would suggest is making the rain noise alot quieter, or simply removing it. Parts where things happen suddenly like when the lights turn on with a sudden noise would be more impactful when theres no other noise going on, as it feels out of nowhere and unexpected.
Complete silence, or even a very silent low hum leaves your ears to come up with all the rest of the noises. Add spurts of random noises here and there for environmental sounds, that’s how you really scare a player with sounds.
thanks for 2k subscribers
Can you do some game assest or do some tutorial how do you make it? Please, am making similar game and i need know how to make the game like work..
Yo how do u get that scary typa horror proximity prompt text? do you mind telling me how? or if its like a model script?, this video made me wanna make a horror game myself, and that interaction script proximityprompt will go well with it, please thank you.
also do u know the text font of it?
GOD DAM This Game even if it is short it is INSANELY Good Keep Going Bro👍
What’s the game name? I wanna search it (too lazy to log into safari)
Everyone is talking about the game while I'm talking about how it's literally the mandela catalogue but a short horror game
also great job. This inspires me to edit my horror game more (and make it shorter but have better gameplay)
you gotta release a full tutorial for this man, or at least publish assets online cuz it's really good for a short horror game, it definitely can be expanded upon!
I want the pc drill
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To make the game faster, I think you should start with building the basic mechanics and the general gameplay structure first, then you should focus on the models and graphics, just some helpful advice😄
THANK YOU MAN I NEEDED THIS SO BAD!!!!!!!
yeah a lot of realistic games on roblox just lack content
just a tip if you're going to make a story horror, do the script of the story first and then make the game, planning is important, because doing graphics first can be wasteful if the story you make ends up not being good
2:18 That was creepy as hell but cooler if it was coming after or a jumpscare nice video/Game
I love this. Keep up the good work!
Suggestion if u make an update; add lightning, make the game slightly longer, make the rain sound more muffled because of the windows, try to make the electric box a bit more realistic, make the headbob more realistic and make the footstep sounds aline with the feet stepping, and that’s about it for all my suggestions
This is an extremely well made game good job
I would recommend to disable the force field because it looks ugly when you spawn.
"Mandela County" the mandela catalogue reference
and the face
Bro I swear you code the exact same way as me lol 😂Anyway, good game bro. You should try using lighting effects to add blurs and stuff, but other then that, it's a really good game!
Amazing broooo nice!
I'm definitely checking this out sometime and I might make a video on it to see what happens
Bro honestly the best short game I have ever played on roblox, NICE JOB!
I tried the game, looks very nice, I was expecting a jumpscare at the end, but I didn't really get any lol..........I noticed that there was a few ways that you could improve on the realism of this horror game, and somewhat overall look. I noticed that there was nothing outside of the windows that you could open, yet there was for the garage. Maybe if you could add something outside of those windows instead of it being empty void? I could see the stars from the bottom of the world.
Also disable shift lock.
Another thing that might make it feel a little more real possibly would be camera swaying (moving your camera back and forth or moving it sideways a little when moving your camera.)
These things might make the game a bit more realistic.
I also think that you should introduce that exact same ending that you did in the video, where you died and it made that exact same sound, it was a lot scarier thinking that I would have that happening to me in the game than the ending that happened where it just said someone was in my house and the game just kicks me with no other thing happening.
I have a multiple questions to ask
Most important of it is "How did you make the roof dark"?
I really love your content
Keep up the good work ❤
played the game and seeing a person in the shadow of the window area LITERALLY MADE ME TEAR UP... this game deserves a award
This juice gave me a huge inspiration for my hotel game
that ending actually scared the hell outta me
🌟Wow !!! I was not expecting that !!! It's awesome !!! Good job !!! 👍
Will there be a tutorial to create the game ? 🤔
Hello I met your channel today, I'm inspiring me in your games, to, I create games like yours too.
Is that jerma face?
there is already a gaem called the intruder I think thats why the game has not that many people playing
Or it's because youtubers haven't recorded playing it
you know your screwed when the EAS is for mandela county.
amazing!!!! I love it
love the work!
We need to turn this into a full game.
You should have added head bobbing to make it realistic lmao
Speed jumpscare scared me, I thought something else was gonna happen
THis was quite amazing! i wish i could make an game like that i cant script lol
if you know how to build we could make a game together if you'd like lol
@@albert-2664 i have a some of the storyline for a horror game but idk how to script ill make one with you
@@bucketotter6737 i can help too
Pls make a full game of this you could go on the front page easily
PLEASE i love the game
Nice game! New sub.
This game has so much potential, you should definitely invest more time into the game.
Yeah the sound of the door give it not horror feeling
Amazing game! But can you make a tutorial about how to make the lighting for a horror game + realistic flashlight? Thank you :)
you should make a multi-player version. changing dialouge. and you can see who is speaking!
he sounds like he just woke up lol
Future lighting is great.
Can you please make a video on the power generator tutorial I really need it for my game
LOL ME AND SPEED HAD THE SAME MOVEMENT, because i wasnt looking at the tab i was jumpscared by the loud music
btw did you use future as the lighting just curious!
Please make a tutorial on how to make stuff like this! I love IT❤😩
bro did all that for the nextbot death sound 💀
its gonna take me more than 3 weeks to build a horror game like yours
WAIT THIS IS MANDELA CATALOUGE?!?
You should add more things to that cool game and longer
Ngl it’s kinda like Jim’s computer
thee may be a well-skilled developer!
continue working on that it got potential
How did u make the flashlight? I need to know it looks so clean
THATS THE FUCKING JERMA SUS FACE AT THE JUMPSCARE
how did you make that little text whenever something happens
and also how did you make that EAS system
Hey it would be more realistic or maybe advanced if the game have voice actors
JERMA??!!!
how to make a door like that ive been trying to find a door that slams
you should have variaties of door squeaks so it wouldnt sound repetitive
Not the start of the vid immediately jumpscaring me so badly- 😭💀✋
The Door Openning is from RM ( Residence Massacare ) 💀 1:47
Even The Warning Brodcast💀 ( Jim's Computer 1 ) 2:14
I’m going to a scripting club on the 7th of august hopefully it teaches how to actually script opening a vent for my horror game
2:19 got me so good 😂
hey can you tell me how you did the dialog? i need it cuz idk realy how to make it smooth like yours
(PLEASE RESPOND OR MAKE A VIDEO!!!) Ty
What game is that background music from I swear I don’t remember where it’s from😅
Can you please make a video on the flashlight tutorial please?
Please give me the id of that face in the roblox studio
ik this game is old but why is there an eas alert on a computer?
heres something you should add.
particles, cuz in real life you see particles in the air
thats so sick!
Short but really good
What color did u use for the walls?
you an a pro at making games....
new sub, how long did it take for you to learn scripting and how did you do it
TIP: The model he is letting us use, place a rig inside and then the door will work.
please give a model ;(
mandela catalogue references
mandela county: 2:14
cesar torres face i think: 2:20
I love this!
the fact that this video is only 2 minutes and 30 seconds-
i have a slight feeling this is a horror game.
Hey Pluto can you make mobile support in your game?
Can you make a tutorial? (Like for the flashlight, how to make a door like that, first person and lightning)
Wait ain't that jerma sus face you put in yo horror game?
what script did u use, like when u first join the game.
example
once u joined a game u it will say a ("you must explore the hospital and find the key")
("youve found the key, go to the room 50)
2:19 is that jermas face?
i accidentally played ur game before finding this vid xd
How do you make locked door text (aka “the door is locked..” at the bottom of the screen?
amazing!
Bro, I reallyyyy need to get in to Blender. Modeling is my passion, it’s like a hobby but also what I do, I have been building in a game engine called Rec Room and haven’t actually gotten into genuine 3D modeling yet. I tried to start out, but it was just so difficult and confusing, I gave up.
How do you get it so dark when the powers out?
Hey it you make Mobile in your gamexalso you can make alot player because It 50% People are mobile so you should make mobile also
That's so cool
Game-Idea:Make A Roblox Horror-Game Know As “Uh-Oh You Made A Mistake” Or “Oopsie The Japanese-People Are Mad” Have You Heard About Noppëra-Bō If You Don’t Search That Up Anyways It Starts With You As A Fishermen Fishing At Koi-Pond Heiankyo Then All Of A Sudden A Girl With A Frown Wears A Kimono “You Shouldn’t Do That” While You Said A Greetings Then “Do That What” And She Suddenly Drops To The Ground And Her Face Suddenly Disappear Causing You Too Run Away And Leave You’re Fishing Things Behind You Are In An Abandoned-Hospital With Dead-Patients And Blood With Organ Shattered Everywhere And Noppëra-Bō Chasing You While You Have To Find Tools To Unlock Exit You Can Be Multiplayer Whenever You Want Btw I Love Pluto_❤!:>
thats nice
Thing You Need:
1. Add Jumpscary & Sound Jumpscary
2. Realese Game To Roblox
3. So There Have Bug In Game Just Fix (Update)
Things you need and/or to do:
1. Proper education.
Ex.: the amount of exceedingly noticeable grammatical errors you have made throughout this small guide you made will trigger most users across this toxic community. Meaning, you could get yourself an insult that will offend you greatly.
2. A better username
Ex.: Did you go through every stages of cancer and a consecutive outburst of stroke when you wrote and thought about that username??
3. Don't use TH-cam without parental guidance or without being older than 10
Ex.: There are many things in this community that may harm and/or change your perspective of something that isn't true. When you have proper knowledge, come back and have fun.
@@myhandleisdash Nah,what the fuck this
@@fnkfauzan See? Now, just because you had stroke making that, it doesn't mean you have to make people have stroke too! I just had a seizure reading what you made.
@@myhandleisdash nah,you know what? i Just Ask About Her Game Not you
@@fnkfauzan WDYM BRO? WHO'S "HER"? THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS YOU MAKE KEEP TRIGGERING ME. YOU MOST LIKELY DONT EVEN UNDERSTAND WHAT I SAY KNOWING THAT YOU'RE A MINOR
I just tried it and I jumped at the end, I was not expecting that oml!
How did you make the alert pc could you make the script to make that please?
How do you learn to script like this?
Cool game. But it can’t be played on mobile sadly :(
wait was that doorscript my freemodel?