Oh wow! I'm the writer for this story, and I had no idea that you did a narration of it! Thank you so much! It's very well done. I hope you liked reading it! For those wondering if The Ruins is a real place - yes, it is. Before it was locally known as 'The Ruins', it was called Standard Portland Cement Corp. I visited this place with the two people mentioned in the story, but of course we didn't encounter any head-tentacle monsters. After going there, I figured it would be a great setting for a story to take place. Again, thanks for doing a narration! I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it.
Hey there! When I first wrote out the prompt for the story, I was originally thinking of making it a few chapters long but decided to just make it a short story. The first heads that the group encounters were the previous workers of the company in the past. There was some kind of accident that caused it, but I never really defined what it was. After some years, the heads resurrected. They never left because the heads weren't familiar with the land anymore. They were able to leave later because a newer head, Robert, joined them, one that knew the surrounding land. After spending some years 'learning,' they were confident enough to leave. The heads found Josh, and since Josh knew where the main character lived, he led them to him.
ahhh... its been a while... but i really needed to binge hear nate to get through my depression. it feels good to get my mind off the stress in my life and focus on a good creepy pasta
OMG!!!! THIS IS CRAZY!!! This is my hometown!!! (Pronounced vuh-lay-yo). SO COOL! The writer went to my high school. I always go to Walmart in American Canyon. I WORKED AT SIX FLAGS FOR 3 YEARS. Lol sorry I'm just in shock. Btw, been addicted to listening to you for almost a year now but this is my first time commenting. Always listen to your creepypastas at bedtime
MultiBallz2u Yes. They do. Unsure if they are really called The Ruins but my late husband has pics of the cement company's ruins. Its was really cool to hear a story about a place that I know actually exists.
I am so happy you are back to uploading more often. you are one of my favorite narrators as I love your accent and it helps me fall asleep! keep up the good work Nat!/
It's those things from Dead Space! The slithering tentacle ladened heads that try to tear your head off and replace it with them? Sometimes they'd bond together, creating this massive howling creature that will call to pieces when shot enough.
Okay, this story got me! Lots of twists and surprises. Usually I can figure out every aspect of a creepypasta well in advance, but this one was awesome! Very well read, too. :-)
*Sees title* Scare the living crap outta me! they can care less as long as someone will bleed! so darken your clothes or strike a violent pose maybe they'll leave you alone but not me!
This was great! What a weird thought for a story lol. Can you imagine tentacles roaming around with human heads, just trying to blend in? XOxo this was a great one. Thanks darling! I'll see you in the comments :) ❤️
I'm still wondering what was stopping the heads at the ruins from attacking them in that final moment, especially if they could move to outside his window. Thoughts?
It's ironic how my closet, has a sweet kind of smell to it, but it does not stink like the smell in the story, but... My room is the complete opposite smell as the closet is, even if iv'e grown accustom to it...
so many questions..what was stopping them at the ruins, amd when they were at his house...why were they suddenly able to leave the ruins 12 years later....? is this a series? i feel like im missing something but i really enjoyed this one
True story, sort of. I'm from the Vallejo area and the ruins is an actual place just as it described in the story. The rotunda the silos, all of it. Obviously writen by a local!
agreed... would have been cooler if the smell was industrial waste and they were tripping balls and then ended up getting killed by not knowing reality.
Oh wow! I'm the writer for this story, and I had no idea that you did a narration of it! Thank you so much! It's very well done. I hope you liked reading it!
For those wondering if The Ruins is a real place - yes, it is. Before it was locally known as 'The Ruins', it was called Standard Portland Cement Corp. I visited this place with the two people mentioned in the story, but of course we didn't encounter any head-tentacle monsters. After going there, I figured it would be a great setting for a story to take place.
Again, thanks for doing a narration! I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it.
Hey there! When I first wrote out the prompt for the story, I was originally thinking of making it a few chapters long but decided to just make it a short story. The first heads that the group encounters were the previous workers of the company in the past. There was some kind of accident that caused it, but I never really defined what it was. After some years, the heads resurrected. They never left because the heads weren't familiar with the land anymore. They were able to leave later because a newer head, Robert, joined them, one that knew the surrounding land. After spending some years 'learning,' they were confident enough to leave. The heads found Josh, and since Josh knew where the main character lived, he led them to him.
ahhh... its been a while... but i really needed to binge hear nate to get through my depression. it feels good to get my mind off the stress in my life and focus on a good creepy pasta
This creepypasta scares the living shit out of me.
+PhoenixPoptart I see what you did there *high fives you for having good music taste*
Gigglyrocks Actually I don't listen to MCR. I listen to like.... 70% Indie 30% EDM :0
OMG!!!! THIS IS CRAZY!!! This is my hometown!!! (Pronounced vuh-lay-yo). SO COOL! The writer went to my high school. I always go to Walmart in American Canyon. I WORKED AT SIX FLAGS FOR 3 YEARS. Lol sorry I'm just in shock. Btw, been addicted to listening to you for almost a year now but this is my first time commenting. Always listen to your creepypastas at bedtime
Do the Ruins actually excist?
MultiBallz2u Yes. They do. Unsure if they are really called The Ruins but my late husband has pics of the cement company's ruins. Its was really cool to hear a story about a place that I know actually exists.
wow! could you please host some pics or some video of that place up somewhere?
i feel like an indie-film potential is here for sure!!
Momo Here, I'm from Vallejo too I was delighted to hear this story! Yes the old cement works is known as the ruins.
Saw the title and just... OH TEENAGERS SCARE THE LIVING SH*t OUT OF ME...sorry I'll leave now
SAME OoO
pearl 01 sameee
pearl 01 Teenagers are nothing compared to young children and to top it off...dolls.
veronica, i feel like you've seen some pretty horrific stuff with those pretty eyes of yours haven't you..
Kyle Mouttet More then you can imagine my friend 🌹
This story was creepy and fantastic! It needs to be made into a movie.
"Like ants emerging from a ant hole"
greatest line ever.
I am so happy you are back to uploading more often. you are one of my favorite narrators as I love your accent and it helps me fall asleep! keep up the good work Nat!/
God this was so good. Your old stuff was so concise and clean. This is the kind of pseudo-ASMR that I used to love.
It's those things from Dead Space! The slithering tentacle ladened heads that try to tear your head off and replace it with them? Sometimes they'd bond together, creating this massive howling creature that will call to pieces when shot enough.
Thought I was the only one who thought that.
Teenagers doing stupid things seems like the perfect equation for a creepypasta. I'm not sure why I haven't heard more like this one.
Normally just like the true stuff ...had a marathon of you today and now I'm addicted!!! You rock!!!
natenator77 dude your pastas are better then 90% of most I've listened to and trust me I've listened to tons of them
SOOOO happy your uploading more!! ♥ing these newest ones!! Seriously makes my day!! :)
+Crystal Wallace And I'm happy that you're enjoying them so much! :D Making your day makes my day xD
+Natenator77 so scary and I'm a :(
Awesome story! Keep up the good work Nate!
Okay, this story got me! Lots of twists and surprises. Usually I can figure out every aspect of a creepypasta well in advance, but this one was awesome! Very well read, too. :-)
...tentacle-heads.... ok, I lmfaoed at that.... I just wanna run around screaming TENTACLE HEADS. XD
Mannn the more I listen to Creepypastas the more awesome narrators i find
Love love loved this one. Excellent narration as always
Super story - really creeped me out. Good job!
+isabelle Letourneau Haha, awesome - thank you :)
*Sees title* Scare the living crap outta me! they can care less as long as someone will bleed! so darken your clothes or strike a violent pose maybe they'll leave you alone but not me!
Fantastic story! Only one plot whole tho, why couldn't he just call somebody over in the end? Like the police or a friend?
TEENAGERS SCARE THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA ME
THEY COULDNT CARE LESS AS LONG AS SOMEONE'LL BLEED
Good song 👍
SCARE THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA ME!!!
This was great! What a weird thought for a story lol. Can you imagine tentacles roaming around with human heads, just trying to blend in? XOxo this was a great one. Thanks darling! I'll see you in the comments :) ❤️
teenagers scared the living shit outta me
This is one of the best ones I've heard in a while!
Read this one perfectly mate 👌 keep up the amazing work!
+Perry Lauder Cheers dude :D
Hey Natenator, love your stories!
+Lyhieng Te Hey Lyhieng, thank you
That’s actually really terrifying
*sees title*
TEENAGERS SCARE
THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA ME!
THEY COULD CARE LESS
AS LONG AS SOMEONE'LL BLEED
How I have searched for this one! This is a really scary storie
Another amazing story! Love you xx
+xunyue Thank you so much
So the two questions I have is what kept them from crossing the border last time and why now years later they can leave that place and come after him?
+CLOWN6DEVIL6BOY6 I have but one answer for both questions: Creepypasta magic ;)
Lol
I'm still wondering what was stopping the heads at the ruins from attacking them in that final moment, especially if they could move to outside his window. Thoughts?
It's ironic how my closet, has a sweet kind of smell to it, but it does not stink like the smell in the story, but... My room is the complete opposite smell as the closet is, even if iv'e grown accustom to it...
so many questions..what was stopping them at the ruins, amd when they were at his house...why were they suddenly able to leave the ruins 12 years later....? is this a series? i feel like im missing something but i really enjoyed this one
Loved it brilliantly read 👍👍❤️❤️
Hello Nate Mate ;^D My second listen to this, so scared, why do I love that feeling? I be craaazy man! Thanks again ; › Barrow
+Love Barrow Yooo, you be totes crazy mate! Thanks for watching again :)
And let the counting, Begin!😎
very lovecraftian, reminds me of the creepy pasta "the deep"
Creeeeeeepy indeed! Thanks Nate :^D
This is on level with Stephen Kings It
Man, the Thing developed a sick agenda after it got out of Antarctica.
When the chase started, somehow the indiana jones music started playing in my head and ruined the scare for me :(
+natenator77 would you ever do a colab with creeps mc pasta?
+Seth Massey I would, for sure, but I don't think he knows I exist XD
+Natenator77 He should man, You're awesome xD
Thst's so not fair.😒I'm over it!Great narration tho.
Your voice is heavenly...❤
True story, sort of. I'm from the Vallejo area and the ruins is an actual place just as it described in the story. The rotunda the silos, all of it. Obviously writen by a local!
The teenagers scare the living shit out of me....
Very good
Thanks Nate! Great before sleep like always! Lol.😈🎃💀👻
Great story tell it got unrealistic
Non the less it was really good not trying to crap on it it just didn't feel that scary once it was a tentical thing but before that I was shivering:)
agreed... would have been cooler if the smell was industrial waste and they were tripping balls and then ended up getting killed by not knowing reality.
Or if it was a muslam.
22:53 rip in rip Robert
They think they know EVERYTHING. You give dem and inch, dey swim all over you.
wow that's sad
.-.
Good thing I have no friends...
AND COMMON SENSE.
rip
DIRY ROTTEN TEENAGERS!
Lol, author says don't tell anyone about what they did, goes and makes a creepypasta out of it.
im thinking The Showers. am I the only one?
great
I walk into a real mine field for real
We weren't thinking 😐😑😐😓
+Natenator77 British accent makes it scary . . . *hides*
ok wow freaked me out a little... I was one of those thrill seeking teens once... I couldn't even imagine 😱
Did MCR write this pasta?
A story with some spooks? thats not PC.
Eat a snickers
My age is 13 I am in prep school
day cliche ending tho
boring is what this is
second.
+Ammie aghah #gratz
third.Ha!😏
+Cassandra Wright On the board, well done XD
First!
+Kerman Guy B-but, I wanted to be first :c
Natenator77 Well you dun fucked up then, didn't you?
+Natenator77 you are you made it lol
666th
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