Hopefully not, this show sounds even worse than 13 Reasons Why what with the protagonists sounding like typical evil dictators deluded by their dreams to “change the school” while gleefully boasting of their newfound power.
True. Don’t even get me started on Riverdale’s storyline I- Let’s just say anything you can imagine has probably happened or definitely will happen in Riverdale. And I mean, ANYTHING.😭
This is unironically a good concept for a show. Two people find out everyone's secrets and blackmails them to become the top of the hierarchy. My personal favorite part is that they both insist on not caring about who's on top of the school but when given the opportunity the both of them immediately jump at the chance. Is the script good? I don't know, I'm bad at judging the quality of products. I would a hundred percent enjoy reading or watching a reworked and improved version of this.
“Call it a Complisult. Part compliment, part insult-He invented them. I coined the term. See what I did there? That was an Explanabrag.” - Britta Perry
"And I was in second period, and I was like 'I'm 19, I shouldn't even be in this class', but no-one really cared because like if you just show up places totally plastered..." Noah getting me in the first 30 seconds 😂😂
Acting out scripts somebody wrote when they were 16 looks a heck lot of fun! Looks like I need to write scripts now to be amused when I'm about 25 or so.
Rewatching this is so cute when you see courtney lip saying stuff at small moments that aren't her lines. It's like she wants to hear it the way she imagined it way back in the day lol. Aww ❤️
Shayne’s acting skills are one word. Incredible. Also, can we all just laugh about how funny Jackie was when she was “listening” to their conversation 😂
honestly, at this point, i'm just 100% certain that everything that comes from Courtney's diaries/journals and her imaginative, creative mind in general, is absolutely PURE GOLD. :'D love this series and all the Smosh peeps so much
i really want to watch a show done this way, where literally everyone just super overcommits/dramatizes their acting and does a cold read while holding the script. it would make a great comedy/drama.
I love how familiar it feels. Like, it's not professional, but I recognize the beats and I'm like "oh yeah, girl media. I've seen this scene!" It feels nostalgic watching this, and of course you guys made it hilarious
Aside from Jackie's characters, my favorite parts of this video were Damien's reactions and commitment to the ceramic bird. LMAO Garrett as Ditzy Blonde lmao
The Riverdale writer's room has been real quiet since we dropped this...
This made me laugh because it was uploaded 4 minutes ago 😂
like best jeanist they are the not so ninja turtle necks
I love u
No wonder. XD
Very true, very true indeed...
When is Netflix picking this up for a season and immediately canceling it
Hopefully not, this show sounds even worse than 13 Reasons Why what with the protagonists sounding like typical evil dictators deluded by their dreams to “change the school” while gleefully boasting of their newfound power.
@@mechadoggy ummm.... it was a joke
@@mechadoggy ur such a buzz kill 💀
@@mechadoggy it was a joke 😃
@@mechadoggy hon... shh
this is literally a human version of Episode
THATS WHAT I WAS THINKING
It really is though lol
Go kiss Marcus 29💎
Leave Marcus to go see the disgusting Secret 19💎
Go home alone
You:15💎
OMG TRUE LMAO
Hahahaaa yesss
Y'all are sleeping on Noah's drunk character. It was short but so funny
Frfr
everyones always sleeping on noah
Timestamp?
@@keynoteuser4782 2:33
What about Damien's bird cup?
This feels like a live reading of a wattpad fanfic
@Sami Mukhtar it may be good but it's all kinds of cringy
Yeah but written by a 13 year old little horn dog
Without someone getting sold to one direction/Harry styles specifically.
@@ewgross93 they said she wrote it in high school at 16
Me: "Mom can we pay for Netflix so I can watch Riverdale"?
Mom: "No we have Riverdale at home"
Riverdale at home:
I aint complaining
I think you got that mixed up
But honestly this so reminds me of riverdale 🤣🤣 like o can’t 🤣
hahahahhahahaah
Better than the actual show
Keith being Jackie's hypeman and bursting into hysteric laughter whenever she delivers a single line is the highlight of this video for me lmao
I think he has a crush lol
@@kaldogorath Noooooo he’s just nice don’t turn this into anything please.
Keith is so sweet
They’re both so funny
Yeah! It's so funny and sweet hahaha
"This is very close to what Riverdale is."
Um, no, this is what Riverdale wishes it was!
Meghan Nicole true
True. Don’t even get me started on Riverdale’s storyline I- Let’s just say anything you can imagine has probably happened or definitely will happen in Riverdale. And I mean, ANYTHING.😭
I have never watch Riverdale but, I have heard about it bad storyline and going on for too long.
myajanette I hope someone gets a stand then
Courtney: He knows everything about the school
Damien: Its the marauders map
I loved that reference (edit) I typed reference wrong
we stan an hp reference. any day, any time.
@@avianace6201 Heck yea!
Smosh would lose a good 30% of content if it wasn't for teenage Courtney.
lmaoo fr
FR
Our godsend....
Teenage Court-bourt
fr
True she is. So interesting 😂
is no one going to talk about how courtney literally rewrote mean girls but made it 10 times as entertaining? 😂
The phone is the burn book!!! I see it now!!!
I think you mean every show ever made
Honestly, they should’ve just made her script come to life instead of making the dumpster fire that it Mean Girls 2
@@Yourhotolderbrother there's a second Mean Girls??
Keith gets so hyped about everything Jackie does, and honestly? He's right
I honestly enjoy Smosh more because of her. She has a lot of chemistry with the cast and it rrly shows. Not to mention she is SUPER funny
She’s a perfect addition I’m obsessed with her
Yes! I feel like everyone's having a lot more fun since she started doing pit stuff
Omg did you notice that too?
@Harsha Subasinghe i dont think they should replace anybody :///
also uh... not to be ''that'' person but... funnier*
The only difference between this and Riverdale is that this has more POC representation
No no, Riverdale has the redheads
Tsukki woW
That's the tea
And the poc characters aren't just side characters
Ok........ not this shit lol.
This is unironically a good concept for a show. Two people find out everyone's secrets and blackmails them to become the top of the hierarchy. My personal favorite part is that they both insist on not caring about who's on top of the school but when given the opportunity the both of them immediately jump at the chance.
Is the script good? I don't know, I'm bad at judging the quality of products.
I would a hundred percent enjoy reading or watching a reworked and improved version of this.
Im a writer and proof reader let me get back to you after this video
Isn't it kinda like control z?
@@Babyteef where u at
*gossip girl*
Succession but in a public high school
Noah's character totally embodies being 19 and drunk
Noah steals the show throughout the whole thing
Real
-19 and drunk
"She yanks him to the bathroom. They are in the bathroom now."
Lolll
"he leans on the sink" *the sink is on the other side of the room*
Keith laughing at Jackie’s performance is the most pure thing in the world.
I know!!
It is just wholesome and cute 🤣😍
He always seems to really enjoy her performances in these types of things, and I love it. 😂
@Abby Garrison I don’t think so, no. That’s not the point though haha.
The most pure thing is that young Courtney writing this, thinking hooking up is a simple kiss xd
He did grow up with like a bunch of sisters
Shayne looks like a drama teacher that goes through a lot of drama
Every drama teacher goes through their students drama secondhand
@Emerson Lima i approve of this message.
😂
Ben Lohmer students* sry i had to also that will be 5$
@@stanloona8733 There I fixed it. Give me your credit card number and cvv/zip code so I can add 5 bucks to your account
(Don't do this kids)
Kameron Blue Farynista is literally the prep version of Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way
18:49 is my favorite part.
“They burst out of the bathroom, Tara falling down with the door.”
Tara: *æ*
This deserves way more likes than it has 🤣🤣🤣
@@angelicxoutcast Thank you.
Courtney couldve deadass written for the CW whenever she wrote this. That’s an insult and a compliment.
An insult to the CW and a compliment to past Courtney 😂
“Call it a Complisult. Part compliment, part insult-He invented them. I coined the term. See what I did there? That was an Explanabrag.” - Britta Perry
Yeah Vids ahh community, the one where the bottle episode is better than any episode from any other series
Pesty Lucas whats that supposed to mean?
Edwin Nah other guy gets it
Jackie’s acting and Keith’s hyping up of Jackie’s acting seriously gave me serotonin 🤣😂
spittin straight facts
The amount of commitment Jackie gives her characters is amazing.
Right?
Jackie is so funny as hell 😂😂
she’s slowly becoming my new fav
“Most girls would look at me and-“
“Blow chunks? Me too.”
I actually love this so much lmaooooo😭
“I literally wrote that.”
- Courtney in shame
Me and the boys getting ready for the club:
"T-shirt Time!"
XD hahhaaa
I swear the moment Courtney's hair goes past her shoulders she looks like a whole different person
Circa 2017 Court Bourt. Her hair was flawless AF 3 years ago
Yeah I got so used to seeing it short
Hair theory
Jackie is def becoming my favorite. She’s so funny.
She is great. She’s always so fun to watch
Same tho😂
Agreed
Tru. She became my fav too
Shayne, Jackie, and Courtney are definitely my fav😂👌
Everyone is talking about Keith and Jackie but is no one gonna mention how cute Damien is here?? His laughs and facial expressions are heaven
His shocked reactions to the plot are killing me 😂
obsessed with the fact that teenage courtney pulled dialogue directly from jersey shore a la “t-shirt time” and “pulled a robbery”
“T-shirt time” killed me as soon as i remembered the boys always said that😭😭
Marcus Mathers: *brushes fingers through hair*
me: Knees weak, arms are heavy.
Looking at my old sweater already
Mom's spagetti
In my lunch bag the old hag is oh so loud-
m o m s s p a g h e t t i
👀👀............... 11:13
How many diaries does Courtney have💀
And props to the editor cause the backgrounds made that really funny
6 I think
I’m not sure
7
8
9
10
Nothing brings me more joy than seeing Keith LIVING for Jackie. She is such a delight!
I know! I thought the same thing. I feel like he's her biggest fan 😂. It's adorable.
Love Jackie
I ship it
The chemistry come on
4:10 I thoroughly enjoy Damien's reaction to the reveal of the original girlboss *Kameron Blue Farynista*
Courtney better get to writing the sequel. That cliffhanger though
Smosh messing with Courtney is the best thing ever.
Didn't Courtney's hair used to be red?
@@grayluk She dyed it back to blonde.
IKR? See “Chris Pratt is on you posted that” for more!
@@grayluk I like her blonde
I liked her more when she was ginger. She looked dope but either way she looks so good.
this is literally a stereotypical sitcom with a sprinkle of riverdale but better i love it
But this was created before riverdale
The Black Nostalgia Nerd it’s better than river dale.
@@rickbuddha4372 definitely
@@TheBlackNostalgiaNerd riverdale was a comic before the show
"And I was in second period, and I was like 'I'm 19, I shouldn't even be in this class', but no-one really cared because like if you just show up places totally plastered..."
Noah getting me in the first 30 seconds 😂😂
Honestly that line was the best bit of dialouge. If I heard more stuff like that in the background of party scenes I would enjoy them much more.
I love how they always wear the black shirts like true theatre people
Acting out scripts somebody wrote when they were 16 looks a heck lot of fun! Looks like I need to write scripts now to be amused when I'm about 25 or so.
you make me feel old
How's the script going?
Any progress?
No one:
Literally no one:
Damien: *summons Californians energy*
🤣😂
fr, all I could think about was Fred Armisens "w-w-whatr yiu doing here?"
I was waiting for this comment my whole life
Deobihoe stuart
Eueueuwhatre yew dewing heerr
Courtney isn't cringing as much anymore, infact she seems to enjoy it!
Character development 😂
GUY VER gross, dude.
he deleted that comment so fast
l k what comment?
I think it helps that it’s not like her personal stories haha.
I love how she specifically wrote that he had a Bo Burnham poster on his wall 😂
"You ever been with a black woman before" --- Jackie 14:50
Heh
@@Starsaroundmyscars.13 heh.
lol the ironic thing is that the two main characters are the most power hungry of them all lol
I'm so glad Jackie has joined the cast, she's hilarious
If this is anything like the diary scripts, I'M SO READY!!
To the editor: thank you for cutting to Keith every time Jackie is iconic. I appreciate you. Have a great day.
I’m convinced someone on the writing team for the movie ‘Do Revenge’ based it off of this and casted Olivia for her performance here
i lost it when jackie and shayne met at the party, even olivia couldn't stop laughing into her cup
“Are you guys gonna do chaos?” And then immediate chaos is absolutely cracking me up.
This whole thing seems like a string of SNL skits
i think we all agree to please consider: episode two written by Courtney in 2020
L 🙂
petition to turn this into an actual series on episode, I’m down to make one
Me too. This will be the next big thing in 2020 or whatever ( I didn't keep track of the year)
Im sorry comment from 2 yrs ago. I’m discovering this now and I have bad news…
Is it bad that I really want to see the sequel to this? Like, I'm invested now!
Courtney was literally every teenager that grew up in the 2000s...bo burnham and jersey shore references killed me 😂
Riverdale writers watching this:
"Write that down, write that down!"
So happy to see Jacklyn is becoming more of a main smosh member. Kimmy and Amanda next!
Rewatching this is so cute when you see courtney lip saying stuff at small moments that aren't her lines. It's like she wants to hear it the way she imagined it way back in the day lol. Aww ❤️
Shayne’s acting skills are one word. Incredible. Also, can we all just laugh about how funny Jackie was when she was “listening” to their conversation 😂
7:30 & 14:50 are Jackie's "Tara" scenes up for nomination for best supporting role
"Tara swoons at Marcus."
Jackie: *Brief glance at Shayne.*
I was fucking dying XD
Bro, when Jackie put Shane’s arm around her, I was like LMAO when I saw Shane’s face
Dude I screamed! I couldn’t believe she actually did that. Jackie is the real MVP!
Jackie is basically part of the squad now, and I'm here for it
honestly, at this point, i'm just 100% certain that everything that comes from Courtney's diaries/journals and her imaginative, creative mind in general, is absolutely PURE GOLD. :'D
love this series and all the Smosh peeps so much
Noah had 1 improv line and it was the best one of the episode. Kudos
Courtney has the biggest balls on earth. You couldn't torture my middle school creative writing out of me.
Keith and Noah dying of laughter at Jackie’s scenes, Damien’s face reactions and thoughts, and the green screen awkwardness make his so great
Jackie is the most committed actor i've ever seen. Poor Shane xD
Olivia and Shane couldn't even touch each other. Aren't they like... the actors? At least someone had the commitment, yeah gj Jackie.
Rythian Enderborn I think they’re trying to avoid actually touching each other because of covid
@@rythianenderborn5185 they act for sketches, in here, they can respect each other space
@@rythianenderborn5185 Maybe it's more awkward cause Olivia is dating Shaynes best friend?
@@alexishitcher9712 Olivia is dating Jackie?
Courtney's dairies should be kept safe in a museum
Yeah, I think she's lactose intolerant so the milks and cheeses should be kept away. Maybe not a museum, but somewhere secure
Comdidy Gold now that’s Comdidy
I love how Damian is literally just sitting with a bird in his cup as he watches intrigued 😂
i really want to watch a show done this way, where literally everyone just super overcommits/dramatizes their acting and does a cold read while holding the script. it would make a great comedy/drama.
Me before the start of the video: "There's no way this tops Court's diary entries"
Me after the video ended: "WE WANT EPISODE 2!!!"
If they did a Part Timers style thing but this
Shayne is way too good at acting serious in a Trainwreck of a script😂😂
He is on the goldbergs 🤷♀️🤣
i REFUSE to believe that Shayne and Damien didn’t write a script together years ago. all I know is I need to see it
You’re a literal genius for thinking of this. I now need it in my life
Shayne wrote that "erotic novel" during a smosh video while they were gaming. He used the word "munge" a lot.
heyysimone OH MY GOD. YESYESYES
nobody:
theatre kids in the hallway: 18:24
Okay but for real this is pretty impressive writing for a 16 year old
Courtney drops a new pilot episode of a teen drama:
Riverdale writers: *SHOOK*
Jacky is literally mvp in these sketches. Two roles and so much dedication, where is her oscar?!
Courtney's talent is so underrated.
ehh
If nothing else, she's super brave to use her childhood diary as material for the channel
I absolutely love Jackie in everything she has done with Smosh.
I love how familiar it feels. Like, it's not professional, but I recognize the beats and I'm like "oh yeah, girl media. I've seen this scene!" It feels nostalgic watching this, and of course you guys made it hilarious
Low key this could have been an actual early 2000s “cool teens” movie that only 12 year olds watch and fantasize about high school
Twilight?
Yeah the level if cringe gave me a nostalgic vibe
jackie is SO funny, what a great addition to the cast
I love Jackie so much, she looks so friendly and the aura auround her is so positive
The camera constantly cutting to Damien for reactions is amazing
KEITH CHEERING FOR JACKIE EVEN THO SHE PLAYS THE RIVAL IS SO FUNNY PLSSS 7:53
"Kameron Blue Farynista" every female lead with a UniQUe name on Wattpad ever.
My Immortal
@@uncaaj ah yes, who can forget Ebony somethingsomething Raven Way? ✨A gReAt HeRoiNe inDeeD ✨
BAHAHAHA MAY WE NEVER FORGET THE BEAUTY OF MY IMMORTAL😂😂😂😂
Dang, Courtney has written a lot of dramatic pieces as a child. Props to that!
Damien's little bird he's holding is my son now
It's cute
Our son😌 jkjk
It took me the whole video to realise it was a bird I just thought it was green slime or something
Courtney: This script is so bad!
Riverdale writers watching this video: *WRITE THAT DOWN WRITE THAT DOWN*
So Courtney basically wrote a Netflix original before Netflix originals were a thing.
My favorite part is Olivia saying "Whatever" and angrily walking right through a locker.
Aside from Jackie's characters, my favorite parts of this video were Damien's reactions and commitment to the ceramic bird.
LMAO Garrett as Ditzy Blonde lmao
honestly gutted they didn’t make noah “Tara”
"Somebody help me!" - Courtney
-Damien swoops in with the assist, lowkey awesome friend moment
8:23
for a second i thought she said "I'm not like the other horse girls" lmao
Jackie better go far, she's actually amazing. I'm tryna see her in a movie with like Kevin Hart or something 😭
Courtney’s arm going through the green-screen couch SENT ME
"you dont know me"
"ahahah u right u right"
*collective laughter from everyone else*
The cuts to Damien's face laughing at Shayne and raising his eyebrows directly at the camera is GOLD
The random zooms of damiens face are the cherry on top of this treat 💀💀💀💀💀