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Yep, sweet baby inc and all her ilk ar taking civilisation back to the 1900's. I lived through the time when because you were female you had to learn cooking and needlework, not woodwork and metalwork. Those who are pushing this so called equality down our throats, are just making mainstream people bloody frustrated and angry. I do support LGBTQ+, I write gay science fiction as a hobby and there will be pushback against these 'women are better', proponents. The push back will impact ordinary women and LGBTQ+, not those who are whipping the flames. We women wanted equality, the LGBTQ+ community want equality, not superiority.
The asteroids in the asteroid belt are not evenly space, but with an average distance of 965,600 KM between asteroid the kind of density your story has is ridiculous.
@@shonnagann3743 Hate to say it but read the current post I just put in, I had argued with myself about posting anything, but no, this story needed proper polishing. Because the last eight weeks, all the sudden all these stories are like they're being written by an AI, or someone that seriously needed to proof-read their own work and failed to do so.
Since, my original comment looks like it has miraculously disappeared, I'm going to say this. The story was not written well. This story was written by someone that did not even proof-read their own story, and how the entire plot made absolutely no sense. If the writer of the story wishes to contact me, for my constructive criticism, they are more than welcome to do so. But this story, needed some severe polishing.
The AI narrator has the irritating habit of varying tone height and volume in a very unnatural way. So the voice does not get enough quality control. Also the story contains some glaring disreptancies with reality like the density of the asteroid beld as mentioned by others. It is also not always consistent with itself. Giving the impression it is written by someone very young or inexperienced or by an AI. Over all, it was not terrible but all points combined result in my not wanting to listen to more stories from the same producer/channel. So for now the channel is blocked from my feed.
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So.... when did they take out the leader of the Galactic Council? Seems to me there's more to this, or at least there should be.
"Copyright Notice: In accordance with Section 107 of the Copyright Act of 1976, this material is used under the 'fair use' provision for activities such as criticism, commentary, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Fair use is a legally sanctioned practice that might otherwise be considered copyright infringement. Non-commercial, educational, or personal use leans in favor of fair use." Notice the word Criticism. I've noticed several posts have now been deleted. No, you don't go around using the Copyright act, when it starts getting abused, when the writer refuses criticism.
Why do women write books about war .
Strong woman again. Butch sci-fi.
Yep, sweet baby inc and all her ilk ar taking civilisation back to the 1900's. I lived through the time when because you were female you had to learn cooking and needlework, not woodwork and metalwork. Those who are pushing this so called equality down our throats, are just making mainstream people bloody frustrated and angry. I do support LGBTQ+, I write gay science fiction as a hobby and there will be pushback against these 'women are better', proponents. The push back will impact ordinary women and LGBTQ+, not those who are whipping the flames. We women wanted equality, the LGBTQ+ community want equality, not superiority.
The asteroids in the asteroid belt are not evenly space, but with an average distance of 965,600 KM between asteroid the kind of density your story has is ridiculous.
It's a story not historical fact
It's a story not a 🍆. Don't take it so hard girl
Nit-picking? It's a story
@@shonnagann3743 Hate to say it but read the current post I just put in, I had argued with myself about posting anything, but no, this story needed proper polishing. Because the last eight weeks, all the sudden all these stories are like they're being written by an AI, or someone that seriously needed to proof-read their own work and failed to do so.
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Since, my original comment looks like it has miraculously disappeared, I'm going to say this. The story was not written well. This story was written by someone that did not even proof-read their own story, and how the entire plot made absolutely no sense. If the writer of the story wishes to contact me, for my constructive criticism, they are more than welcome to do so. But this story, needed some severe polishing.
The AI narrator has the irritating habit of varying tone height and volume in a very unnatural way. So the voice does not get enough quality control. Also the story contains some glaring disreptancies with reality like the density of the asteroid beld as mentioned by others. It is also not always consistent with itself. Giving the impression it is written by someone very young or inexperienced or by an AI. Over all, it was not terrible but all points combined result in my not wanting to listen to more stories from the same producer/channel. So for now the channel is blocked from my feed.