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Strong woman again. Butch sci-fi.

Why isn't the probe blown to bits?

The AI narrator has the irritating habit of varying tone height and volume in a very unnatural way. So the voice does not get enough quality control. Also the story contains some glaring disreptancies with reality like the density of the asteroid beld as mentioned by others. It is also not always consistent with itself. Giving the impression it is written by someone very young or inexperienced or by an AI. Over all, it was not terrible but all points combined result in my not wanting to listen to more stories from the same producer/channel. So for now the channel is blocked from my feed.

Yeah usually ruins disappear after 5,000 years

I enjoyed the story but 500,000 years, maybe 50,000 years.

By calling her Sergeant Lisa goes to show this story was written by by AI. No military would address any NCO by title and first name, if anything an NCO would only be address by their rank... Corporal, Sergeant, etc. Even officers are addeessed by their ranks!

Don't mistake my kindness for weakness. -- Al Capone

Since, my original comment looks like it has miraculously disappeared, I'm going to say this. The story was not written well. This story was written by someone that did not even proof-read their own story, and how the entire plot made absolutely no sense. If the writer of the story wishes to contact me, for my constructive criticism, they are more than welcome to do so. But this story, needed some severe polishing.

The story is so far looping in repetitiveness at 04:32. Bott written compost.

Why showing aliens our technology? We conquer them. We make peace. Human peace.

Great story looks unreal though. I don't think it's possible for humans to be 5000 years somewhere and then come back after all so quicky and so simply. In my imagination aliens are much more intelligent and progressive than humans. Well, this story looks unique though.

This is the Stuff of what SF should be. Sense of Wonder and a Story that boosts the Imagination....Please release more of this Story. It needs to be continued.

First like

First here

What is with these feminist wet dream stories...they're bullshit

High energy pulse cannon. HEP. C

,,40 previous viewers and I am the first to 😯😧😮comment??? 😣😖😵😠 What a disgraceful, shameful, uninspiring gang of uninvolved viewers.!!! You don't even have to READ THE STORY.!!! IT'S read to you and you STILL CAN'T like or comment.??? Move out of your mommies basement and join the involved human race.!!! Major clue, it's messy and awkward, not at all the humans you have seen in these sci-fi stories, ha ha😁😅😆😂 Good luck at life🤗 people of earth and the basements there in.!!!!!😬😬😬🙄🙄👽🖖👽🖖👍

I truly HATE when the writers, or the👎 damn evil A.I.'s, craft and release 1\3 of a flippin' story and NEVER FINISH THE DAMN TALE.!!! And they want me to like and subscribe.???? Are they outta their Incomplete storytelling MINDS.???? FAT FLIPPIN' CHANCE.!!!👎👎🙄🙄😬 I and the Emojis say NO, NOT UNTIL YOU FINISH THE FLIPPIN' STORY.!!!😣😖😵😠😠😠💥😎💥🤓😁👽🖖👽🖖

The title of this story does not match the story at all. Did you make the title so different that it would generate more comments for the youtube algorithms? The story itself was good and could use a follow on or two. Although I never did figure out how old Emily might be, she was called a young girl but was also a diplomat...............

This story feels like a slightly more sophisticated version of a nine year old telling his bully that if he doesn’t stop making fun of him, he’ll bring Grandpa’s boom stick and MAKE him stop. 🤨

Like what happen to the Allen ships that could blown them all to hell ! You call that a Si Fi story ! Find you a good Si Fi writer Rate the story D -

Name of movie

So, you have 9 year old storywriters now ? Are you that desperate ?

The asteroids in the asteroid belt are not evenly space, but with an average distance of 965,600 KM between asteroid the kind of density your story has is ridiculous.

Can't you tell a story without repeating portions verbatim? The title of the video bears absolutely no relationship to the video itself.

palpable: 2x - that is not too bad. The story, that is something else. Has anyone else noticed that the 'ultimatum' was not even addressed to earth? It was addressed to all the others 'to stay away or be destroyed '. - And the rest is like The Federated States of Micronesia could resist the united military of the rest of Earth.

You’re just gonna end it like that?🤬

So now all humans are looked at as a unique proverof this organ? This would put every human at risk of being killed, etc.. This story makes no sense at all.

119. Points. Julie. 😊🎉❤gryffindor. Hogwarts house 🏡

More AI trash. Goodie.

What happened to the so-called secret fleet?

Great story who is the narrator?

Excellent story. Keep it up!!

First 9 minutes:BLAH, BLAH, BLAH BLAH. Then action for 3 minutes, and the rest is BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH!! 😮😮😮

I honestly thought it was a dick for the first 3 minutes then switched to the adrenal gland but not to be

I liked the story but had a lot off Bla Bla to fill story lines like where some lines told over and over like where Idiots! + with a story with no ending ! rate the story C -

Bad one

I like these short and interesting stories. I usually skip anything thats more the 20+ minutes unless it sounds interesting

What is this from

A lot of repetition not required.

8:31 WTF?

Uh, the video cuts out at 3:29.

AI mass produced stories, with AI generated pictures as background and an AI narrator. I am fine with AI narrators and AI generated pictures.... And you have not written it, it was your computer or wherever the AI software is running on.

Col. Darah michtelle? That is when i checked out. I am done with woke scifi.

boring scifi story

Picture clickbait... Good story, though you lost the opportunity for a lovestory😊

What a crock of shit. Look...we can breach your defenses and not destroy anything, We can attack a convoy from long range but send in ground troops to set charges....wtf? Yeah, you showed them. We have the ability to disrupt your supply line. Not destroy but disrupt your depot defenses....that'll show them. Sorry couldn't finish this AI generated story. I use them to lull me to sleep but you guys pissed me off so much, think I'll just go back to audio books. Best of luck in your next life...

1st shit really I mean do people really still do that kind of stuff? Oh well go with the flow.

I liked the use of EMP drones sent out into the enemy fleet to destroy their electrical systems and communications. I also liked the use of nanotechnology nano drones to both use to repair our damaged systems and to inflict microscopic damage and continue to build up on it until the ship and/or system was destroyed.

Newbie here just coming in for the first time. Don’t know if I’ll stay or sub but will see.