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Humans Primitive Weapon Humiliated Them At An Intergalactic Bar | Best HFY Stories | HFY Sci-Fi
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  • @bigstevie1690
    @bigstevie1690 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What 4 armed beasts are in Earth's jungle? so the aliens decided to bomb near the team during a superstorm/earthquake

  • @richardhelms2404
    @richardhelms2404 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Story repeats itself

  • @schorsch5677
    @schorsch5677 วันที่ผ่านมา

    And again diplomacy by military personnel

  • @mitchaelcallahan9308
    @mitchaelcallahan9308 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You’re telling me the aliens didint water proof and prepare for this at all….

  • @ASCII_68
    @ASCII_68 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Could have been a cool story but too many repeats and appraisals of humanities genius and few details how the soldiers did theirs job...AI generated blah blah..story could have been told in 5 mins also.

  • @petewilliams7809
    @petewilliams7809 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    A.I.s cannot pronounce the word 'Debris' the thick A.I. pronounces it as 'DEBRISS' and NOT 'DAYBREEE'. Also, advert after advert after advert - the story, such as it is, is ruined by these constant interruptions, I cannot sit back and listen, I have to hover over the mute button and 'skip ad' option. The advertisers know we want to skip their never ending 'messages at us' so - why not have a block of adverts TEN minutes long at the start, or the end of the story and leave us alone to enjoy, after all it's what we logged on for - yes?

  • @EggSripaisal
    @EggSripaisal 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Nice story. But it repeated so many times.

  • @Democratsforever1977
    @Democratsforever1977 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sadly this is just randome AI ramblings... The truth is if there is aliens out there that can hear us (humanity) they should stay far away! Look at our history if you dont get it then....

  • @yaelius_pnglife
    @yaelius_pnglife 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Same points were repeated over and over again making the story long and boring.

  • @Jalbesbe
    @Jalbesbe 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Nah, this is one of those stories that holds too strongly to a poor idea. First off we barely have predators as is. By the time we are really space faring 90% of all species on earth minimum will be extinct. If you can construct something to go into space you can deal with both hot and cold climates, and most likely things flying at high speeds. So no race would have issue with visiting earth in a suit.

  • @speedballjones5235
    @speedballjones5235 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Let's see how many times we can say the same thing in different ways. Extraneous

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    sorry, cant stand it anymore, moving on

    • @petewilliams7809
      @petewilliams7809 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yes, totally agree, there are much better Sci Fi stories out there waiting for us, and hopefully, in a galaxy far, far away, far enough away that bloody advertisers haven't yet got wind of the planet? And I know why these things have to have adverts, it's just that there were MORE adverts than story line!

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    15.06 bad guy advances toward the human, remember human is cloaked the bad guy cant see him. Write once, read twice and respect what you wrote.

    • @petewilliams7809
      @petewilliams7809 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Wow, aliens land on Planet Earth, intent on conquering us, and stealing OUR technology - when the A.I narrator clearly said several times Planet Earth was a backwater planet. IF we were sooooo backward and primitive then why bother landing to steal non-existent technology. A MUCH better story line would have been along these lines 'alien mercenaries land on Planet Earth intent on taking slaves, and one way or another they would get them. THEN - us Earther's have a reason to fight back and be bloody minded about it. And Earthers - with cloaking technology, wowza, that's a first eh, and plasma weapons to boot. I've not got to the end of this story yet, and I may not get there thanks to interminable bloody advert breaks, I have made a bet with myself that these 'mercenaries' see the error of their ways and surrender on mass and we all leg it to the nearest pub to get plastered!I wonder what it's like to watch a pint of beer disappearing into the gullet of a cloaked and pissed up Earther. Yay, hiccc fadumphhh - BLURGHHHHHhhhhhh!

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    12.06 the bad guy can take apart any ennemy. Oups, those humans have weapons that can destroy fleets...... get real

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    love it, handheld weapons deployer by ground troops capable of destroying fleets......magic

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    ok magic number one is quantum, magic number 2 is AI. Please this is science fiction, not magicians and dragons.

  • @captainobvious9233
    @captainobvious9233 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    All your Tortured Human Child Stories = The Child is ALWAYS a BOY All your 'Killed a Human Child' Stories = The Child is ALWAYS a BOY All your 'Enslaved a Human Child Stories = The Child is ALWAYS a BOY THEN... you post artwork with a girll.. BUT STILL You make the story about a boy!! What is it with you and little boys??!!! Why is the child NEVER A GIRL?! YOU SICK BOY LOVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEVER COMING TO YOUR CHANNEL AGAIN!! BYE!

  • @goshring
    @goshring 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Lack of descriptive story telling makes so many of these stories all but impossible to listen to. The premise is sound, but the presentation is so weak. Take the time to paint a picture for the listeners.

  • @ParallelHorrors88
    @ParallelHorrors88 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Video it my the good❤❤❤❤

  • @russelllowden1660
    @russelllowden1660 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    grate story keep them coming

  • @markoknezevic3027
    @markoknezevic3027 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    There is OP Earth Fleet but Earth and Earthlings have lost War and gone extinct? Interesting...

    • @Democratsforever1977
      @Democratsforever1977 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yeah and it works after 3000 years so its not made by the apple....

  • @petermatthews-ob1dg
    @petermatthews-ob1dg 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    rubbish, to many adverts, i gave up

  • @thomasandrews6910
    @thomasandrews6910 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Wow How many different ways can you say the same thing Bad bad bad

  • @puffnstuff12
    @puffnstuff12 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The chronology in the storyline is super bad. How many times does the fleet get destroyed then limp away to be destroyed again.

  • @edbergin4902
    @edbergin4902 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Earths defence, destroyed the alien fleet at least 3 times. Story needs work.

  • @NancySmith-x4t
    @NancySmith-x4t 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This story was so stupid. First they’re killing everybody down the last person and destroying every ship then all of a sudden they’re saying they’re letting the ship slip away and so is the general or the admiral. He can’t do both and how would they say Earth Day remembered earth for all time, how great that was the Earth was forgot about it for 5000 centuries that was stupid who was there witnessing that only the one ships they destroyed most all of them I guess if they told everybody they know it but otherwise we would leave an AI to destroy everybody. What the heck is that for makes me freak not one AI around me.

  • @willwade1101
    @willwade1101 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    So what happens if while the aliens are marching toward their target, their ship gets taken by earths soldiers back to their underground base, stripped and investigated? When the aliens return from their "Successful mission" in order to leave they are stunned to find their ship gone, what then? Of course their mission was a set up by humans but how would the aliens react? Do the humans surround them but only watch as they look around? Do the aliens surrender or wait for the humans to attack? Do the aliens give up once their supplies run out or do they get rescued by their alies?

  • @leonwallace9449
    @leonwallace9449 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    We must remember that the AI we create today will live forever. Therefore, we must be careful how we develop our A.I.

  • @Sol_yluna
    @Sol_yluna 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hear me out. What if all the channels on youtube that pass stories off as fantasy, are actually stories from real life. Only without the spaceships and other planets and stuff. Have heard too many military people speak of battles with creatures unknown.

  • @publiusforum
    @publiusforum 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Not bad. I enjoyed it. But someone needs an editor.

  • @TheDurid1
    @TheDurid1 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Drinking game! Drink every time you hear a statement repeated 2 minutes later!

  • @JoesChillingChannel
    @JoesChillingChannel 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Nice!

  • @bladerunner2361
    @bladerunner2361 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This story keeps repeating itself.

  • @michaelking7231
    @michaelking7231 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Repetitive garbage

  • @michaelking7231
    @michaelking7231 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Repetitive repetition

  • @michaelking7231
    @michaelking7231 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    WTF no explanation of how did Bonner die …..honestly these stories written by stupid AI are not only idiotic but lack continuity and at least a pinch of SFI realism woul work

  • @RobertL.JonesJr-hz8vl
    @RobertL.JonesJr-hz8vl 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You may have a clocking device, but you still emit a smell a dog can sense and find! Or as I call them a four-pegged, fur covered, sharp toothed, heat-seeking missile.

  • @AndyCaley
    @AndyCaley 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Too much repetition. But still ok. How many times do u have to say mercenaries???????

  • @126wil
    @126wil 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I can't ignore this one: A "Human dog?" If the dog is human, then it is not a dog... Am I being too literal? Perhaps "...a Human's dog, "would be a clearer way to phrase this? I hesitate to mention this because I am not a writer, but it seemed to need a bit of tweaking.

  • @kayombomangowa3624
    @kayombomangowa3624 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is BS. Where was the CIA and MI6 and others

  • @thaddeuszukowski4633
    @thaddeuszukowski4633 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Whoever wrote this was premature in releasing it to be read. There are numerous inconsistencies which detract from what could be a very interesting story. Try reading it to your friends first, everyone likes a few minutes of a break to listen to a friends work and most people are kind enough to comment on how to make the story better.

  • @jeffreyschuler7271
    @jeffreyschuler7271 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Stupid

  • @Shadowkey392
    @Shadowkey392 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    A bit inconsistent. You shouldn’t be so reliant on AI to write your stories.

  • @abraham99929
    @abraham99929 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The pictture is a very good piece of art.

  • @michaelo393
    @michaelo393 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Needs a human narrator

  • @Weaselbroom
    @Weaselbroom 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Let me get this straight. The humans had something hidden. Some technology that they were not supposed to have. God this is horrible.

  • @ThePuko24
    @ThePuko24 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Missleading title. Also, video is riddeled with ads but story is okay.

  • @brianblackwell5713
    @brianblackwell5713 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bonner died before the first fight, when did you resurrect him?

  • @eugenehiggins8695
    @eugenehiggins8695 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why is the start repeated twice? Still a great story

  • @maximusmorphine2418
    @maximusmorphine2418 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    They kicked me out for smoking in the bathroom...