@@booksrule0240 Dude, I have no idea. I even ctrl+f that stuff on the page, really only you and me noticed, while it's such an obvious ripoff (for apparently NO reason) that it kinda spoils the entire thing. Really, I spent half of the time thinking about when he is gonna pop that lightsaber and slice the machines into pieces :D
Exactly! The shape has nothing to do with the function they having it do in this clip. It even has the guard to "protect the top of the hand from heat" bit. Threw me for a loop. I get using what assets you have when making clips but don't claim it's original and mention where you borrowed stuff....
I noticed that when I watched the movie. It’s weird. Unless they want to claim this is the start of the clone wars against the droid armies REALLY looks like. But that’s clearly a model of Luke’s lightsaber on Endor and that’s absolutely a clone troop transport.
The AI apparently built a citadel for themselves. They hatched a plot to kidnap human children in order to study them & learn about creativity. All those actions took creativity. You can't build things and hatch plots without creativity.
You're confusing creativity with the act of creation. One can create a plan linearly by following measurable predictability, without the "eureaka" of unconventional inference, but the human mind can realize abstract inferrence across unrelated brain regions that would be all but impossible to simulate with traditional computation. If one built a specialized quantum computing node, however, it might be possible to simulate because those don't have to crunch the impossibly large linear set.
Creation is a Complex process. It requires more than mere intelligence or brain. It requires someone with a Soul, a heart, fine emotions like empathy and sympathy. Nobody needs to to tell anybody anything. Man is a thinking animal. We are awake, alert, aware of what is happening around us. We have an analytical mind, capable of forming impressions and drawing conclusions. Each one of us have the right to adhere to our opinions... whether Right or Wrong. Be it so!!!
I really like this old school animation. There seems to be a lot of nods to others sci-fi classics. The short goes by pretty quick & the viewer has to fill in some blanks. Even still, it's good & sets up well for future adaptations. Some other commenters note the AI is being 'creative' in their search for that which eludes their society. Yet, I think their 'creative approach' could simply be a form of structured methods or a programed process. And what they really lack is free-form expression without boundaries. Hope to see more of this story.
For me, this is more "new" school. I grew up watching Disney stuff from the 40s up to recent, and Looney Tunes and other small studios. I liked the "soundtrack" almost better than the video.
Okay but that ship at the end is the Republic Gunship from Star Wars, but bigger. And the macguffin is very reminiscent of a lightsaber... and the temple kinda looks like the one from coruscant. The maker clearly took some visual inspiration from Star Wars.
As the flying ship curved toward pyramid-like building, I was struck by the structure's grey scaling skin, it's severe lines, it's coldness, it's monumentality, it's lack of human scale and human feeling. It looked uninviting and there seemed to be no human touch about it. It looked formidable. It was made with no concern for people's sense of pleasing proportion, familiarity, or charm. It really didn't look like a person designed it. So, even though in this story, an artificial intelligence probably created it, I think this ugly monstrosity is a perfect example of that modern style called BRUTALISM.
Is there more to this story? I love this kind of stuff. As a child of the 60's, this was as far away to us as Pluto is to the Earth! But just look at us now. I wouldn't worry to much about technology becoming creative as much as I worry about it replacing us. It doesn't need emotions or feelings to clog it up, it just needs a simple program to set it on the path, and we are building roads for it to travel. Scary if you think about it, the only thing it really lacks is to create new ideas, so yeah, the ability to create anything is the only bridge left, and without that it will always be at OUR mercy. (I hope!)
I think I understood the story and the theme. I guess the theme is how dangerous AI can be, as we can see the robots are chasing the boy, this means that once AI malfunctions, it can be very dangerous. I liked the visuals and I appreciate you, Johan Samuelsson. Keep doing what you're good at.
Amazing!! It reminds me a bit of "Futorogical congress" by S.Lem where main hero wake up with world who is controlled by spreading drugs that change perception, and trough time he is able to see the world how it really is. Just a digretion if you are looking for good/weird and disturbing book, knock yourself out. The shift made my day. Good luck with other projects
Now THAT'S an excellent metaphor. Thankfully only Poland built submarines include screen doors. I think they RADICALLY overestimate the time a sub spends cruising on the surface, or fails to understand just how deadly water flooding into floating vessel can be to a human crew who don't have gills....
If they are analytical enough to make a logical decision that they need to study of the growth of newborns by showing them a virtual reality by contact lenses, then they should be analytical enough to clean up the place as pollution would affect them more than the (unseen) human survivors of the war of yesteryear. The real world should be a utopia because they fixed everything. The dystopia is the forced trapping of "assets" in a virtual world. Though, with the exception of the deception (Tenser, said the tensor), everything else seems OK from the asset's perspective: he has good health, obviously well fed and cared for, can muck about all day on a hoverboard, etc.. Is it truly dystopian that the only thing that isn't real is what he sees? He certainly breathes the same air, eats food grown / prepared in the same environment...
I've never understood why humans think robots, androids, computers and AI would want to be like us. It's like walking up to an immortal being and saying: There's something better than immortality. If the immortal being had any intelligence whatsoever it would say: No there isn't. And walk off. Moreover, I do not spend my days wishing I could breathe underwater and kidnapping fish so I could learn how to breathe under water. Some humans spend their days wishing to be something they are not---that is absolutely true. But robots, androids, computers and AI are only going to have that kind of flaw if they are deliberately programmed to have it or by accident. There is something useful here though. A cautionary tale. Never build into your creations the concept that they would be so much "happier" or "better" if only they could change what they were created to be.
Brother Cavil: In all your travels, have you ever seen a star go supernova? Ellen Tigh: No. Brother Cavil: No? Well, I have. I saw a star explode and send out the building blocks of the Universe. Other stars, other planets and eventually other life. A supernova! Creation itself! I was there. I wanted to see it and be part of the moment. And you know how I perceived one of the most glorious events in the universe? With these ridiculous gelatinous orbs in my skull! With eyes designed to perceive only a tiny fraction of the EM spectrum. With ears designed only to hear vibrations in the air. Ellen Tigh: The five of us designed you to be as human as possible. Brother Cavil: I don't want to be human! I want to see gamma rays! I want to hear X-rays! And I want to - I want to smell dark matter! Do you see the absurdity of what I am? I can't even express these things properly because I have to - I have to conceptualize complex ideas in this stupid limiting spoken language! But I know I want to reach out with something other than these prehensile paws! And feel the wind of a supernova flowing over me! I'm a machine! And I can know much more! I can experience so much more. But I'm trapped in this absurd body! And why? Because my five creators thought that God wanted it that way! 0
Excellant analogy of Dreams. Thanks, Johan. As an artist, designer and Creative Director, I find that many of my creative solutions arrive while I am sleeping, lying in the bath, or writing poetry while I drink a double scotch or two. Not even thinking about the "problem" - and BANG! There is the design!
I have to admit that I failed to follow the plot. I liked the style and obviously there has been a lot of work put into it. The shot of the kid looking suspicious was used too much though. Nevertheless - nice
6:08 It maybe hard to visualize, the big cables would straighten against little-cables, letting the deck sag to destruction, or at best making twist into drooping slopes suspended to the ground; zero realistic chance of that: the bridge would have to twist and sag according to uneven lengths of overhead support, if it wasn't to collapse entirely.
1. The visuals are GREAT. 2. It’s rather confusing how the boy escapes - I first believed he was having a nightmare which foreshadows what’s about to happen. 3. Showing a lightsaber that’s not a lightsaber, the window in the Emperor’s throne room that’s not the Emperor’s throne room and then a clone troop transport that’s not a troop transport (and I know there’s more copying going on here) - I’m really sorry to say it, but I just can’t find any enjoyment in obvious ripoffs. Now, sure, they’re so obvious that I’m pretty sure they’re intended to be noticed, but seeing something that looks 100% like a lightsaber hilt just pulls me right out of the story. It makes me ask myself "How on earth did the Star Wars universe crash into the story all of a sudden? This is not supposed to be here!"
Summed it up perfectly. I don’t even know if I could call the visuals good because the reused shot with the weird mouth was so distracting. I don’t understand how this is considered “award winning”…
I hate to say that, but that 'survellience' misspelling really ruined the mood for me initially. It's one of those little things that, while being insignificant on their own, contain the potential to become an apples that spoil the whole barrel if neglected. As a consequence there's also an unintentional irony of sorts as the boy demonstrates the awareness of details in the end noticing the same symbol on the item and the craft - the creation surpassed the creator, which is hardly the idea behind the film, but is an amusing fact to admit. Please don't get me wrong - I just feel I'd have a much more favourable impression overall if not because of this one particular little detail. The plot is intriguing and the animation is enjoyable, though it feels a bit too old-schoolish at times. I wish you best of luck and hope to see more of your work in the future. Keep it up :)
The way he kept looking over he’s shoulder squinting the same way got me
The good: intriguing story and idea.
The bad: tons of re-used assets over and over.
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Whats the deal with lightsaber and clone's transport ship?
And why are you and I the only people noticing it?
@@booksrule0240 Dude, I have no idea. I even ctrl+f that stuff on the page, really only you and me noticed, while it's such an obvious ripoff (for apparently NO reason) that it kinda spoils the entire thing.
Really, I spent half of the time thinking about when he is gonna pop that lightsaber and slice the machines into pieces :D
Exactly! The shape has nothing to do with the function they having it do in this clip. It even has the guard to "protect the top of the hand from heat" bit. Threw me for a loop. I get using what assets you have when making clips but don't claim it's original and mention where you borrowed stuff....
I noticed that when I watched the movie. It’s weird. Unless they want to claim this is the start of the clone wars against the droid armies REALLY looks like. But that’s clearly a model of Luke’s lightsaber on Endor and that’s absolutely a clone troop transport.
I was about the say the same thing!
The AI apparently built a citadel for themselves. They hatched a plot to kidnap human children in order to study them & learn about creativity. All those actions took creativity. You can't build things and hatch plots without creativity.
yeah my thoughts exactly. plus it looked like the writers were the ones lacking creativity using those star wars designs.
@@TheFloorface Good point.
Nah, that’s strategy, not creativity.
@@celenathetrinigirl to use a strategy you first have to create it
You're confusing creativity with the act of creation. One can create a plan linearly by following measurable predictability, without the "eureaka" of unconventional inference, but the human mind can realize abstract inferrence across unrelated brain regions that would be all but impossible to simulate with traditional computation.
If one built a specialized quantum computing node, however, it might be possible to simulate because those don't have to crunch the impossibly large linear set.
Real life already disproves this: "I believe that the ability to create concepts and develop ideas cannot be replaced by technology."
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the truman show and the matrix in one pill with a sprinkle of star wars.
Just by "kidnapping and monitoring newborns", you can say that the AI are absurdly creative! At least the machine that thougth on this solution.
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Ai isn’t the threat, it’s us
Creation is a Complex process.
It requires more than mere intelligence or brain.
It requires someone with a Soul, a heart, fine emotions like empathy and sympathy.
Nobody needs to to tell anybody anything. Man is a thinking animal.
We are awake, alert, aware of what is happening around us.
We have an analytical mind, capable of forming impressions and drawing conclusions.
Each one of us have the right to adhere to our opinions... whether Right or Wrong. Be it so!!!
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The lack of anyone on the rescue ship makes me wonder if it's just a rival AI group trying to steal the 'asset'
Thanks for watching :) Who knows! We might find out in a future longer version. Updates on instagram.com/the_shift_film/?hl=en
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I really like this old school animation.
There seems to be a lot of nods to others sci-fi classics. The short goes by pretty quick & the viewer has to fill in some blanks. Even still, it's good & sets up well for future adaptations. Some other commenters note the AI is being 'creative' in their search for that which eludes their society. Yet, I think their 'creative approach' could simply be a form of structured methods or a programed process. And what they really lack is free-form expression without boundaries.
Hope to see more of this story.
Hi Richard! Thanks for watching and your curiosity. There is more to come... ;)
For me, this is more "new" school. I grew up watching Disney stuff from the 40s up to recent, and Looney Tunes and other small studios. I liked the "soundtrack" almost better than the video.
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Okay but that ship at the end is the Republic Gunship from Star Wars, but bigger.
And the macguffin is very reminiscent of a lightsaber... and the temple kinda looks like the one from coruscant. The maker clearly took some visual inspiration from Star Wars.
The story is straight from the beginning of the Matrix, and ends before anything happens.
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Awesome work, Love this.....hope part 2 comes right before 3 & 4-5 then 6 and her good friend 7.😍👌
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It’s coming ❤️
that hoverboard and broken car, gave me back to the future vibes.
Love It!
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Great work!
Hmm, methinks kinda channeling ‘The Matrix’ right there 😎
As the flying ship curved toward pyramid-like building, I was struck by the structure's grey scaling skin, it's severe lines, it's coldness, it's monumentality, it's lack of human scale and human feeling. It looked uninviting and there seemed to be no human touch about it. It looked formidable. It was made with no concern for people's sense of pleasing proportion, familiarity, or charm. It really didn't look like a person designed it. So, even though in this story, an artificial intelligence probably created it, I think this ugly monstrosity is a perfect example of that modern style called BRUTALISM.
AI cannot think outside the box because, creatively, they are the box.
That baby looked like Jon Lovett's "The Critic".
XD
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awesome! Maybe matrix inspiration? Great work!
Thank you! Actually looked more at Blade Runner but understand the green tone feels very matrix XD
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Is there more to this story? I love this kind of stuff. As a child of the 60's, this was as far away to us as Pluto is to the Earth! But just look at us now. I wouldn't worry to much about technology becoming creative as much as I worry about it replacing us. It doesn't need emotions or feelings to clog it up, it just needs a simple program to set it on the path, and we are building roads for it to travel. Scary if you think about it, the only thing it really lacks is to create new ideas, so yeah, the ability to create anything is the only bridge left, and without that it will always be at OUR mercy. (I hope!)
Extraordinary, good movie, great idea.
I think I understood the story and the theme. I guess the theme is how dangerous AI can be, as we can see the robots are chasing the boy, this means that once AI malfunctions, it can be very dangerous. I liked the visuals and I appreciate you, Johan Samuelsson. Keep doing what you're good at.
Amazing!! It reminds me a bit of "Futorogical congress" by S.Lem where main hero wake up with world who is controlled by spreading drugs that change perception, and trough time he is able to see the world how it really is. Just a digretion if you are looking for good/weird and disturbing book, knock yourself out. The shift made my day. Good luck with other projects
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Big Panda Bear Hugs from a 68 yr old Grammy from Kirby, Texas, USA 🐼
The fades and transitions in this are seamless. Absolutely gorgeous piece of work. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 Loved it
Glad you liked it 🙏
This is cool... Love sci-fi stuffs.... Would love to turn my animations into something like this with what I already have... Good job, mate!
Just a question..You an Aussy?
@@krishelfferich3487 Why? hahaha....
@@eggimation1064 Mate 😋
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Creativity is nothing more than, "What if."
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There were several pretty blatant copies of Star Wars designs here, such as that LAAT gunship... XD
made as much sense as a screendoor on a submarine.
Now THAT'S an excellent metaphor. Thankfully only Poland built submarines include screen doors. I think they RADICALLY overestimate the time a sub spends cruising on the surface, or fails to understand just how deadly water flooding into floating vessel can be to a human crew who don't have gills....
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the animation is beautiful , very HEAVY METAL, the magazine, not the movie .
truly an old school look that this old stoner truly appreciates .
Why this animation looks similar to Star Wars Clone wars?
The ship, the laser saber...
Honestly his dream life wasn't that bad, I would have loved to live there lol
Incredible work overall
Thank you 🙏
AI out of control, and trying to understand what it means to be human. What an innovative concept.
Thougtfully imaginative explanation of our disabled presentation here.
35sec in and first logical error.. idea to kidnap newborns IS a creative thinking.
Interesting point :)
*MiklavjF*
If only _you'd_ written it.
It could have done with a more realistic and logical approach rather than this dreary offering.
If they are analytical enough to make a logical decision that they need to study of the growth of newborns by showing them a virtual reality by contact lenses, then they should be analytical enough to clean up the place as pollution would affect them more than the (unseen) human survivors of the war of yesteryear. The real world should be a utopia because they fixed everything. The dystopia is the forced trapping of "assets" in a virtual world.
Though, with the exception of the deception (Tenser, said the tensor), everything else seems OK from the asset's perspective: he has good health, obviously well fed and cared for, can muck about all day on a hoverboard, etc.. Is it truly dystopian that the only thing that isn't real is what he sees? He certainly breathes the same air, eats food grown / prepared in the same environment...
Nice to see that Republic Gunships survived the end of the world.
I've never understood why humans think robots, androids, computers and AI would want to be like us. It's like walking up to an immortal being and saying: There's something better than immortality. If the immortal being had any intelligence whatsoever it would say: No there isn't. And walk off. Moreover, I do not spend my days wishing I could breathe underwater and kidnapping fish so I could learn how to breathe under water. Some humans spend their days wishing to be something they are not---that is absolutely true. But robots, androids, computers and AI are only going to have that kind of flaw if they are deliberately programmed to have it or by accident. There is something useful here though. A cautionary tale. Never build into your creations the concept that they would be so much "happier" or "better" if only they could change what they were created to be.
Brother Cavil: In all your travels, have you ever seen a star go supernova?
Ellen Tigh: No.
Brother Cavil: No? Well, I have. I saw a star explode and send out the building blocks of the Universe. Other stars, other planets and eventually other life. A supernova! Creation itself! I was there. I wanted to see it and be part of the moment. And you know how I perceived one of the most glorious events in the universe? With these ridiculous gelatinous orbs in my skull! With eyes designed to perceive only a tiny fraction of the EM spectrum. With ears designed only to hear vibrations in the air.
Ellen Tigh: The five of us designed you to be as human as possible.
Brother Cavil: I don't want to be human! I want to see gamma rays! I want to hear X-rays! And I want to - I want to smell dark matter! Do you see the absurdity of what I am? I can't even express these things properly because I have to - I have to conceptualize complex ideas in this stupid limiting spoken language! But I know I want to reach out with something other than these prehensile paws! And feel the wind of a supernova flowing over me! I'm a machine! And I can know much more! I can experience so much more. But I'm trapped in this absurd body! And why? Because my five creators thought that God wanted it that way!
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I like the scary touch that the Golden Gate no longer spans the SF Bay, but a wasteland of ruined buildings.
Thank you !:D
But what is holding it up? Did you not notice that?
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Everything is fkn winning awards these days
Excellant analogy of Dreams. Thanks, Johan. As an artist, designer and Creative Director, I find that many of my creative solutions arrive while I am sleeping, lying in the bath, or writing poetry while I drink a double scotch or two. Not even thinking about the "problem" - and BANG! There is the design!
Me too, it's called stream of imagining 👍
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Glad you liked it and thanks 🙏
Cool thanks for all your effort and time to make this
Excellently done ✅
Thank you 😀
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Soon nobody will be able to make things without AI-tools.
Crazy ❤❤❤
I have to come back to watch this when I’m not so high
Really enjoyed this. Tone and environment artwork look fantastic. Very nice work
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How is dare not more dis was awesome
Amazing, can’t wait for more!
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I have to admit that I failed to follow the plot. I liked the style and obviously there has been a lot of work put into it. The shot of the kid looking suspicious was used too much though. Nevertheless - nice
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I would love to see this in live action movie!!!! Amazing video!!!
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Thank you! Would love to see that too
Chill vibe. Deserving of a continuation.
Thank you! In some shape or form It's coming. Updates on Instagram: instagram.com/the_shift_film/?hl=en
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I like the music and sound fx for most of the part
We need more!!!
It's coming!:D Updates here instagram.com/the_shift_film/?hl=en
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This whetted my appetite for the story to see what happens next.
Loved the music and sound design. Good job all 'round!
Thank you! 🙏
A new universe for a bunch of stories!
Yeah! More is coming. Check out instagram.com/the_shift_film/?hl=en for more info :)
I absolutely love the animation style!
Thanks for watching :D
Why was the guy's mouth directly beneath his nose? Odd animation choice.
I never heard of this one before, but with a bit longer story and animation I think this could have been on Love Death Robots ep. too. Great job!
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Great animation 🙌
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Thank you 🙏 glad you liked it
I liked this. A lot! :)
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Is this old? We've just learned lately that "creativity" is very easy for AI. Still no sentience, but lots of creativity.
Is every short film award winning? Who reward it their mommy?
Stellar
Good work!
Thanks :)
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Nice Star Wars assets.
Awesome work, a lot of dedication and attention to details!
Thanks Germano! You know It XD
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Incredible work!!
Thank you!:)
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Bra jobbat 👍
Stort tack!:D
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lovely... very
This is pretty dope would love to see some more
Thank you! Stay tuned at instagram.com/the_shift_film/?hl=en for more ;)
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We will have Droid armies, count on it
That was mysterious man, I have this short. I have this more to this story.
If there was no "Award Winning" shit, I would simply forget about this. Now though, I have to know, who and why gave award to this "creation".
Yeah, I could NOT WAIT to give this S#(t a Thumbz down.
Perspective conflict is at a max!
Oj, vilken bra film!! 😊
Hej! Kul att du gillar den :)
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I need more 😄
Excelente...quiero ver mas👌💌
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Snyggt, bra jobbat!
Stort tack! 😁
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Sweeeeet
眼睛所见未必真实，大部分人一辈子都在追求真相，非常赛博朋克的背景，音乐也很棒，虽然很短但是能让人遐想，希望未来能有更多的故事情节
Thank you Alix! For what I understand from google translate you did a lovely interpretation of the film. Would love read that in English as well :D
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Great job 👏
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thank - you
6:08 It maybe hard to visualize, the big cables would straighten against little-cables, letting the deck sag to destruction, or at best making twist into drooping slopes suspended to the ground; zero realistic chance of that: the bridge would have to twist and sag according to uneven lengths of overhead support, if it wasn't to collapse entirely.
Well done. Thanks.
Nice quiet animat
WTF!!! I WAS RAISED BY ALIEN ROBOTS TOO !!!
Witch award does this film won?
1960 called and they would like their animation back
*laughs in midjourney*
Midjourney is the perfect example to support the idea of this movie :)
My dyslexia thought it said "The SNIFF" 💀
Dammit I thought Darth Vader was going to show up with some clone troopers lol
1. The visuals are GREAT.
2. It’s rather confusing how the boy escapes - I first believed he was having a nightmare which foreshadows what’s about to happen.
3. Showing a lightsaber that’s not a lightsaber, the window in the Emperor’s throne room that’s not the Emperor’s throne room and then a clone troop transport that’s not a troop transport (and I know there’s more copying going on here) - I’m really sorry to say it, but I just can’t find any enjoyment in obvious ripoffs. Now, sure, they’re so obvious that I’m pretty sure they’re intended to be noticed, but seeing something that looks 100% like a lightsaber hilt just pulls me right out of the story. It makes me ask myself "How on earth did the Star Wars universe crash into the story all of a sudden? This is not supposed to be here!"
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Summed it up perfectly. I don’t even know if I could call the visuals good because the reused shot with the weird mouth was so distracting. I don’t understand how this is considered “award winning”…
This is the golden gate bridge but there's no way San Francisco has geography like that at that angle.
Cool animation style!
Glad you liked It! :)
Buena gráfica
Great work buddy.What tools did you use for the 2d and 3d work?
Hi Matthew! Thanks for watching. Mainly made in After Effects, Photoshop, and Cinema 4D :)
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Great
I hate to say that, but that 'survellience' misspelling really ruined the mood for me initially. It's one of those little things that, while being insignificant on their own, contain the potential to become an apples that spoil the whole barrel if neglected. As a consequence there's also an unintentional irony of sorts as the boy demonstrates the awareness of details in the end noticing the same symbol on the item and the craft - the creation surpassed the creator, which is hardly the idea behind the film, but is an amusing fact to admit.
Please don't get me wrong - I just feel I'd have a much more favourable impression overall if not because of this one particular little detail. The plot is intriguing and the animation is enjoyable, though it feels a bit too old-schoolish at times. I wish you best of luck and hope to see more of your work in the future. Keep it up :)
Bravo! That was awesome. Really appreciate the hard work put into this.
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Que buenos soundtracks