How to Write a Novel for Beginners

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  • @imbored3063
    @imbored3063 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1797

    characters: yes
    plot: yes
    wording and keeping it longer than 2 pages: no

    • @stellaemerson5218
      @stellaemerson5218 3 ปีที่แล้ว +146

      LITERALLY I cant figure out how to make my story longer I just want to get to the point 😫

    • @justachildofGod
      @justachildofGod 3 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      i cant figure out how to make my books short

    • @pinkperfumefairy9205
      @pinkperfumefairy9205 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@stellaemerson5218 samee

    • @pinkperfumefairy9205
      @pinkperfumefairy9205 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@stellaemerson5218 maybe start it As normal like drinking, eating, school and all that other stuff

    • @uzmasanam04
      @uzmasanam04 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Writing a chapter longer than two pages is too complicated.😥

  • @mayazgonzalez3392
    @mayazgonzalez3392 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1715

    Something that helps me evolve my idea is to imagine it as a movie in my brain, I am a very vivid visualizer so I just try to see if it is worth writing

  • @KatharineFrancis
    @KatharineFrancis 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2860

    It would be awesome to read first raw thought drafts of best sellers.

    • @VivienReis
      @VivienReis  5 ปีที่แล้ว +252

      Yeessss. Who do we need to talk to??

    • @MadAtreides1
      @MadAtreides1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +132

      I believe it was Stephen King who said it's like going through a collection of horrible ideas

    • @ravenclawwitchdaughterofat4025
      @ravenclawwitchdaughterofat4025 5 ปีที่แล้ว +57

      J.K. Rowling has so of her outlines and first rows in a book I think it’s called “a history of magic“ I have it but I don’t know were it is other wise I would tell you the name. But it stamped on the cover with the British library because it’s samples of the pieces and stuff that are in the Harry Potter exhibit at the British library

    • @TheRogueEmpire
      @TheRogueEmpire 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      i beleive they mad a comic adaptation of the raw first draft of star wars. the one where han solo is a big green alien.

    • @corporalmcmuffin7562
      @corporalmcmuffin7562 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      ALL THINGS Entertainment I use Airtable for my idea recording.

  • @c.r.novilee4682
    @c.r.novilee4682 3 ปีที่แล้ว +185

    Number of story ideas bobbing around in my head: ✨♾✨

  • @mohammedzaidi9081
    @mohammedzaidi9081 3 ปีที่แล้ว +405

    0:44 idea
    1:55 brainstorming
    2:51 out line
    4:13 Writing
    5:04 motivation
    6:24 editing
    8:29 keep positive
    I hope it helped

  • @canopyleaf9152
    @canopyleaf9152 5 ปีที่แล้ว +573

    Finally-A useful guide that doesn’t curse at me every ten seconds.

    • @yellowbroz7120
      @yellowbroz7120 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      Jenna Moreci: *cough*

    • @espy77
      @espy77 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Goofy Goose ha yeah

    • @xtonibx5770
      @xtonibx5770 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@yellowbroz7120 lmao yes

    • @ChewingGumIsCool
      @ChewingGumIsCool 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      so true! Alice Oseman is also very good if you need more help tho

  • @dealchemist720
    @dealchemist720 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2281

    "Don't edit while you write--"
    Who's gonna stop me?

    • @aliwinters7847
      @aliwinters7847 5 ปีที่แล้ว +180

      No one will but it will slow you down a lot. Editing uses a different part of the brain than drafting does. Think of "Don't edit while you write." as advice rather than a command. :)

    • @onewomanarmyish
      @onewomanarmyish 5 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      @@aliwinters7847 I needed this👐

    • @johnoliveira5919
      @johnoliveira5919 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      you will because it sucks to edit while you write because your just going to get board

    • @GurlNamedBrettMarie
      @GurlNamedBrettMarie 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      🤣

    • @samanthawilliams7379
      @samanthawilliams7379 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Romance O.E.M haha i do that

  • @memenee4774
    @memenee4774 4 ปีที่แล้ว +122

    Reading the comments made me realize, that I am not alone with to many Ideas but no point of where to start

    • @00bikeboy
      @00bikeboy 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Ask yourself which are the three novels you would most like to have written, then pick the idea that comes closest to matching those, and start writing that one.

  • @ALBUMOF2008
    @ALBUMOF2008 4 ปีที่แล้ว +496

    “Don’t edit while you write”
    Me, mid-editing while I write: 👁👄👁

  • @yasminedits8928
    @yasminedits8928 3 ปีที่แล้ว +195

    Currently writing my first novel and it's all I can think about 24/7. It's like I'm in my own little world.

    • @ShortskiDuniya1111
      @ShortskiDuniya1111 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Hey,did you finish it!?

    • @yasminedits8928
      @yasminedits8928 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      @@ShortskiDuniya1111 I'm 130 pages into the manuscript! About halfway!

    • @ShortskiDuniya1111
      @ShortskiDuniya1111 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@yasminedits8928 wow!

    • @notmeanttoexist7767
      @notmeanttoexist7767 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Heyyy from 2 yrs into the future, are there any updates? :>

    • @The500k
      @The500k ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm the same, think about my world everyday, I'm 30k words deep atm.

  • @Edit.audios.
    @Edit.audios. 4 ปีที่แล้ว +806

    I know how to end my story but cant find the beginning...

    • @ayanaminayuki234
      @ayanaminayuki234 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      same

    • @rainnueva6657
      @rainnueva6657 4 ปีที่แล้ว +58

      Beginning is really hard.

    • @geewhizkid33
      @geewhizkid33 4 ปีที่แล้ว +95

      [ Wanda ] imagine your story backwards. Unfold your story in reverse. Ex. It’s a murder mystery, you have a dead guy. The police are around the body. Who is your dead guy, what was he doing when he was killed, what brought him to the location of his death. Did someone call him for example. Who called him, what information did they offer to draw him there. Did he previously know the caller to trust the info, was he betrayed by that trust? If so why, etc. etc.... I guess try and visualize it as the closing scene of a movie and imagine the scenes that led up to that point... good luck!

    • @nothingbutgianttrees1995
      @nothingbutgianttrees1995 4 ปีที่แล้ว +46

      My problem is the exact opposite, I love writing beginning scenes buuut then I struggled w progress and ending lol

    • @geewhizkid33
      @geewhizkid33 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Nothing but Giant Trees this is where an outline can be a great tool. It’s like a road trip guide. If you want to go from Seattle to San Francisco you could jump on the I-5 and head south, but that wouldn’t be much of a trip or a story. Lol so you map out interesting places you’d like to see along the way, restaurants you’d like to eat at etc. the outline doesn’t give you all the details, it’s just a general guide to help you get from chapter to chapter. Also I find that when I get stuck, I free write and often times it breaks me through a tough spot. I find free writing with one of my characters in mind is particularly helpful. For ex. What’s my character’s favorite color? Where’d he/she grow up? Did he/she have a favorite pet growing up? Once I start detailing that character, ideas start popping out as to where to go next. It works with scenery and locations too... at least for me... I hope it helps! Keep on writing!

  • @Marshal_Dunnik
    @Marshal_Dunnik 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4131

    Don't start the novel with, "It was a dark and stormy night..."

    • @--BACKTFUP
      @--BACKTFUP 4 ปีที่แล้ว +261

      LMFAOOO 💀

    • @shosty575
      @shosty575 4 ปีที่แล้ว +284

      Actually the same joke was used by Stephen king in a writing tips advice video

    • @The3DSMaxinator
      @The3DSMaxinator 4 ปีที่แล้ว +83

      Funny. I used to play a game called "yarn" that starts exactly like that. xD

    • @innominatusambrosius7103
      @innominatusambrosius7103 4 ปีที่แล้ว +227

      'Twas a gloomy night, and the heavens were filled with wrath.

    • @dreamstetiq2791
      @dreamstetiq2791 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Adon Araphel THE HEAVENS😨😱😱😱

  • @Fangrl_
    @Fangrl_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +62

    I’ve been writing my book for about 8 months now, thank you for these tips 💕

    • @meli2910
      @meli2910 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Lol I'm on chapter two! I mean I started last Wednesday . but it was hard on Sunday but otherwise I've been sprouting new ideas here and there whenever my dad isn't using his computer which im using

    • @bookwritersclub9550
      @bookwritersclub9550 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      😍

  • @kasmanian6908
    @kasmanian6908 5 ปีที่แล้ว +590

    I have 2 minor ideas but 1 BIG idea I've been working on for years-an epic fantasy novel that follows multiple protagonists as they explore a world inspired by my favorite childhood fantasy books, movies, and games. (Skyrim, GoT, Dark Souls, LoTR)
    I finally got over editing-while-writing, which made the process so slow that it took nearly a year to write 20,000 words out of a goal of 300k! #HappyWriter

    • @IMONsCover
      @IMONsCover 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      I loved your idea. I will wait for this!

    • @xinquiote9572
      @xinquiote9572 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Care to tell where I can read?

    • @ayden865
      @ayden865 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      KasManian brooo you just put out ur idea don’t do that! Bad idea

    • @xinquiote9572
      @xinquiote9572 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@ayden865 If there's a will, there's a way.

    • @starblue3648
      @starblue3648 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Tell me when it’s done cause I will definitely read it!! Skyrim is my all time favorite game ever.

  • @jananstunes
    @jananstunes 5 ปีที่แล้ว +81

    Real talk, that legit is what I need to hear. I do have a good idea then like popcorn I start overflowing ideas. Not just ideas for the initial story but with in minutes like 3 worlds or stories in general.. So yes this advice is right on point. Thanks

  • @SaucyLiving
    @SaucyLiving 5 ปีที่แล้ว +196

    I have about 3 story ideas that I keep thinking about.
    2 of them are simple novels with a philosophical theme
    the other is a crazy fantasy series that I've been slowly developing for at least 2 years now lol

    • @VivienReis
      @VivienReis  5 ปีที่แล้ว +27

      Letting the book idea simmer usually leads to bigger plot breakthroughs for me! Perfect for a fantasy series 😄 But hard to have the self control to not dive in haha

    • @TheLJShow-ys8wr
      @TheLJShow-ys8wr 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same with me

    • @TheLJShow-ys8wr
      @TheLJShow-ys8wr 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same goes with me

  • @lifeisamazingwithouteffort2952
    @lifeisamazingwithouteffort2952 4 ปีที่แล้ว +111

    "don't edit while you write" Well i think that's the problem why i can't finish every stories i make 😂

  • @usachiichan
    @usachiichan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    I always love to hear about another author's writing process. I feel like we're always growing, so it's always nice to learn and try new things!

  • @swillou2
    @swillou2 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    I feel like you just changed my life ! Xx I’ve been writing a novel, almost finished it but at a mental blockade, for the past 5 yrs. I’ve written a lot of it but before I completed the actual writing I began to edit my lines...... so I’m half way through line editing and I haven’t even finished the full structure yet! It makes me crazy when I try to think of writing ( I have 5 kids too.... just wait and see how much they do for writing past 6 months of age.. yikes) and now i realise why! I should have finished the full story first! Now I feel better and will get on with that. Thankyou for enlightening me xx and best wishes with the Bub xx

  • @mynameisrain8281
    @mynameisrain8281 4 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    Omg I love you!! I'm writing my first novel and I'm having a really hard time on not crying like a baby because I feel like an awful writer who just keeps ruining the characters, and you just gave me the strength to keep pushing and keep moving on no matter what my insecurities say!!!❤️❤️

  • @dandy_candy835
    @dandy_candy835 4 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    I’m writing a book! I’m DEFINITELY not trying to make it publish worthy (since it’s a Harry Potter sequel and that’s copyrighted) but i think it will be fun to try to finish it before quarantine ends :)!

    • @indianathe3rd742
      @indianathe3rd742 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oh come on not another Harry potter scherade

    • @lanainmydreams
      @lanainmydreams 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I believe it will be better than Cursed Child, whatever you may write

    • @Dmitri_Shostakovichssymphony12
      @Dmitri_Shostakovichssymphony12 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      wait hang on whats ur wattpad user id love to read ur book :)

    • @monkeypunk7504
      @monkeypunk7504 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I have had so many Harry Potter book ideas!

  • @Hikari156
    @Hikari156 5 ปีที่แล้ว +68

    Congrats on ur baby and ur best friend’s baby due dates. And I have several ideas but mostly I want to try and focus one story at a time (the ideas are for the different books in the series I’m working on it right now). It’s a YA paranormal fantasy book with a bit of romance in it. love ur videos so much Vivien Your videos really help me out and yes I suffer from self-doubt and thinking my writing is bad and that I should give up. But I won’t cuz I know I have a story to write just like we all do. Thank u so much Vivien. #happywriter also I’m really having a hard time with worldbuilding and character relationships. Actually...I’m having trouble with writing the novel period but I’m trying to keep at it with help from friends, family and my fiancée. But yeah it’s a bumpy ride but I’m trying to get through it.

  • @HART-sk3bz
    @HART-sk3bz 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This really helped me.
    I kept editing and editing and it was taking it's toll on my soul 😰 I think I lost what I truly like about my story trying to find out what other's liked

  • @antoniofaulkner6018
    @antoniofaulkner6018 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I imagine that artwork and music are effective ways of keeping your imagination alive and in good shape, serving as inspiration.

  • @freechurro17yearsago84
    @freechurro17yearsago84 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This video just made me continue working on my novel.... jeez Vivien really knows what she's doing.

  • @robmoss8198
    @robmoss8198 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Great video. I’m writing my first novel and feel absolutely overwhelmed. This was really sensible, heartening stuff.

    • @queen_of_dramas5222
      @queen_of_dramas5222 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Are you done with your novel? Best of luck though

  • @Bee-ww7ip
    @Bee-ww7ip 5 ปีที่แล้ว +59

    Your tips have really helped me through the my writing experience...Thank you♡

  • @wearegonnadance
    @wearegonnadance 3 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    1. Idea - stick to the most exciting idea
    2. Brainstorming - to come up with the STORY
    3. Outline - planning the story
    4. Writing - TIME TO GO HOOLO!!!
    5. Motivation - a reason
    6. Editing - tape it up then, stick it
    7. Keep pushing - that's how you were born, your mom kept pushing to give birth
    8. Celebrate - novel, BOOM, it's out! FLY!!

  • @MundusMeus974
    @MundusMeus974 5 ปีที่แล้ว +133

    I'm currently writing my first novel, have been writing it over the last year. I have my idea, protagonist, antagonist, and side-characters and setting.
    HOWEVER.
    I cannot find a decent motivation for my antagonist. I find one idea, but then in writing it does not feel so good. So I struggle with this.
    I'm on my THIRD draft for my novel.
    I currently have about six different ideas for my novel or continuation for like, second books haha. But for now I've stuck to writing fanfic.
    #happywriter

    • @veereshbadiger8166
      @veereshbadiger8166 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      What u explain is the Victorian method of writing a novel- everything is known to the author in advance it is a building's blueprint.

    • @dee.s.4513
      @dee.s.4513 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      You're halfway there - literally and figuratively. You've already nailed the problem: plotts rise and fall on the motivation for the antagonist. For me, that's the hard part - especially for genre fiction.

    • @ej-ej49
      @ej-ej49 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Same situation, I'm sticking with fanfiction instead because I can't make original characters to save my life. I have a writing buddy now though, they're very good at making OC's and brainstorming.

    • @emxry
      @emxry 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Mine is that I can’t find motivation to write it or a decent way to start it.

  • @gutenbird
    @gutenbird 4 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    The perfect opening is “Hello, I’m the author of this book. My name is Phil in the blank.”

    • @mimix2331
      @mimix2331 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Genius

    • @aaa_0000
      @aaa_0000 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      😂😂😂

  • @dynah9245
    @dynah9245 4 ปีที่แล้ว +807

    I am 14 and have always wanted to become an author, and i just started writing (well actually, typing) a book. Do you have any experience with publishing any books? If so, what is the process like?

    • @amyv9312
      @amyv9312 4 ปีที่แล้ว +69

      d y n a h hi🙂 I’m 14 too!’ And I also dream of publishing a novel one day, have you continued writing your book or havw you stopped “?

    • @nexxx1238
      @nexxx1238 4 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      Same everyone, same.

    • @xtonibx5770
      @xtonibx5770 4 ปีที่แล้ว +53

      Writing a book and typing it are the same thing because people don't hand write their novels.
      But anyway, I'm 15 and I'm also an aspiring author. I really wish you good luck with the process of finishing and publishing your novel 💕

    • @xtonibx5770
      @xtonibx5770 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@amyv9312 That's great! Have you started writing your novel yet? (:

    • @cluejpg
      @cluejpg 4 ปีที่แล้ว +83

      welcome to the teenage writers gang lol

  • @amymendoza2680
    @amymendoza2680 4 ปีที่แล้ว +110

    Is it just me or does anyone get a story idea by just listening to song lyrics? 😊

    • @jackramen2704
      @jackramen2704 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Amy Mendoza I do the same lol

    • @teriajackson2339
      @teriajackson2339 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      You are not the only one 😭 I’m literally writing a story based off of a song and If I never heard that song i wouldn’t be writing this story

    • @youraverageloser9711
      @youraverageloser9711 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yeah same, I have a story idea with the title of the song🤣🤣🤣

    • @snickbiordking5748
      @snickbiordking5748 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Holy shit same! But just by imagining a scenario with the song in the background!

    • @xXGamingWithCoffeeXx
      @xXGamingWithCoffeeXx 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I THOGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE OMG!

  • @Vishleshan1999
    @Vishleshan1999 3 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    My novel is set in 2001. Here is a starting.
    'Me and my mom were happy with our life. But then I came to know a truth. Truth that changed everything. '

    • @audiocity1979
      @audiocity1979 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Cool. Mine is about dimension traveling

    • @Vishleshan1999
      @Vishleshan1999 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@audiocity1979 wow, you mean your story evolves around two dimensions?

    • @audiocity1979
      @audiocity1979 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Vishleshan1999 not two.. 5

    • @audiocity1979
      @audiocity1979 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      And yes, the main character is Sonic

    • @Vishleshan1999
      @Vishleshan1999 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@audiocity1979 interesting, well this comment over here is 3 years old. Since then I have did so many changes. But still haven't published it.😁

  • @gabriellastarling4159
    @gabriellastarling4159 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    I have 7+ ideas for books (some I have the whole plot for, some only part, one is even a whole series) and I want to write ALLL of them. 😅

  • @cartoonsandcoffee9733
    @cartoonsandcoffee9733 5 ปีที่แล้ว +71

    I have two drastically different ideas one is a alien to earth story and one is a super hero story.I think I’m gonna go with the alien one because it’s really speaking to me right now.Also I want to get together with my friend who’s an artist and turn my superhero idea into a comic book.I’m a maladaptive daydreamer though so ideas come and go 24/7 #HappyWriter

    • @dizuko3241
      @dizuko3241 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Krunker Kid lol love this comment

  • @goofael
    @goofael 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Idk why watching this makes me excited thank you for this!!

  • @itsevan1029
    @itsevan1029 5 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    I can up with my novel idea in my dream!

  • @joemoultrie8118
    @joemoultrie8118 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You have such a great speaking voice.im pretty sure this resonates in your writing.thank you for imparting the knowledge that will allow us beginner writers to avoid common pitfalls on the way to being published.

  • @MediumSizedZ
    @MediumSizedZ 5 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I’ve lost count of how many ideas I have. The number of works I want to actually write amount to at least seven.
    #happywriter
    Edit: thank you for highlighting this Vivien, I really appreciate it. Your content is helpful and fun to watch.

  • @kohiturpoheli5526
    @kohiturpoheli5526 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love how you added motivation and keep pushing as steps cause god! they are the big ones! Thank you for making the video, lots of love!

  • @sparhelt718
    @sparhelt718 5 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    I just finished my first whole novel, so right now I have 7 ideas, most of which are history-inspired, and I'm working on 2 right now. #HappyWriter
    And thank you for the video, Vivien, it's awesome as always!

    • @dizuko3241
      @dizuko3241 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello, I just wanna ask for advice. I'm kind of stuck at which time I'm gonna set my history-inspired book too. I am also stuck with what's the purpose of this novel like what is the main conflict or reason like that. I am basically like 98% stuck in the whole novel.
      Do you have any tips in my problems? Any tips would be very helpful to me and it would give me a lot of help so much.

  • @kevinmcpeek5799
    @kevinmcpeek5799 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice video. You are NOT long winded, can't tell you how much I appreciated that.

  • @josephinecezar4001
    @josephinecezar4001 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Frustrated novel writer here😅 glad you're making vlogs and giving some tips, very helpful👍

  • @myleemartin4297
    @myleemartin4297 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love this video! This definitely helped me, and I love how she acknowledged that different types of outlining can work for different people. Also, she is so pretty!
    🌟😊

  • @sarahfenlonfalk
    @sarahfenlonfalk 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I currently have ideas for a couple non-fiction books and three different fiction series! So, 5!!! #happywriter

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    @william_ochieng 4 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @newpocahontas1
    @newpocahontas1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I have 3 book ideas! One has an outline (thanks to your help from other videos), and two that have character and plot notes ready for an outline. Definitely most excited for my outlined story though for sure 😊 The idea has been in my head over a year and has all the details down, just need to start writing! I have a toddler and currently 20 weeks pregnant so Im taking my time for now, making sure I have everything ready so I can attempt to avoid getting stuck anywhere! ❤ #happywriter

  • @sianh.4265
    @sianh.4265 ปีที่แล้ว

    WAY TO MANY IDEAS!! A new one every few days that suddenly seems like the BEST idea

  • @misery8264
    @misery8264 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Everyone is talking about valentines day and here I am, having my operation tomorrow and therefore the first valentines date in years.:D

    • @KutWrite
      @KutWrite 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hope it all "comes out" all right!

    • @indianathe3rd742
      @indianathe3rd742 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      How did it go

  • @curatedhomelife
    @curatedhomelife ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I"ve always wanted to write a novel. I started with an idea and now had a fair bit of outline for starters. OMG. I can't believe I'm here filling blank pages. :D Thanks for the tips!

  • @windowpain1758
    @windowpain1758 5 ปีที่แล้ว +80

    I have two ideas and honestly it's so difficult to choose!
    #happywriter

    • @henkman00
      @henkman00 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      uhm....THAT one ;P

    • @merlin22light11
      @merlin22light11 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wright down the synapsis for both so that way you can set one to the side and work on the other

    • @pickleskittyhd8696
      @pickleskittyhd8696 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same

    • @christiangerard395
      @christiangerard395 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I had an idea and this happened because it was sci-fi and it cane from my dream. It was not vivid

    • @ahaangaur4178
      @ahaangaur4178 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @T B sßßßŕpopoppopp the only problem I see 👀 😏 the other problem was were the about that things the most right 🙄 problem it I the to 👌 price their all to for us the 🇺🇸 our home business free our our this in 🏡 for we summer best the no on from or nights or at that we 😀 not the do 😀 one 😀 for think have 😀 have 😀 and do make 😀 to that it a why simple important 😀 that the you side one 😀 you in 💙 the with 💙 it get help your home from home in your body or body 💙 😀 ❤ 😊

  • @honuloulou5194
    @honuloulou5194 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    dont edit while you write is honestly the best advice, thank you. I have been stuck on the first 5 chapters for a while now because of this.

  • @mattias9095
    @mattias9095 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I've been mentally working on a story for the past 6 months now. I'm kinda scared and doubtful about writing the whole thing, but really want to make it. (Sounds strange perhaps) thanks for all the tips and motivation in your vids!

    • @VivienReis
      @VivienReis  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's not strange at all! We all go through this!

    • @mattias9095
      @mattias9095 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@VivienReis Oh wow you saw my comment :o Thank you! I really hope to someday be able to write a comment that I did it! Keep up the good work! We all appreciate the time and effort you put in your videos. Love from Belgium

    • @VivienReis
      @VivienReis  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Aww thank you so much!!

  • @frasomer2720
    @frasomer2720 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks. I have just started, I have got all feelings you mentioned while writing.

  • @kimberlyreichh
    @kimberlyreichh 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    I have about 33 ideas I wrote down and 4 are more on my mind. But because of that and the fear it will never be good enough I write nothing. #HappyWriter

  • @michellemcmiken8952
    @michellemcmiken8952 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Vivien, a lot of what you said hit home. Especially the 'don't edit while you're drafting'. Oooh! I am so guilty of this. Also a pantser and suck at outlining. That's why I've gone back to basics, story structure, plotting, outlining etc. I have 18 WIPs. Yes. That many. None of them are finished because I edit while writing, get sick of it, self-doubt creeps in and then I get up close and personal with Jimmy, Jack and all his alcoholic little buddies. Love the keep on swimming! New subscriber, think you're fantastic. Thanks for making videos like these.

  • @theaipomboy3056
    @theaipomboy3056 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I'm trying to make a horror/fantasy type book as it involves a little island in between the us and Canada and the island holds weird looking monsters and there's people who try to survive

  • @oliviaparker738
    @oliviaparker738 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am a kindle unlimited addict and I am so glad I found this because I found your book!

  • @mountainjune
    @mountainjune 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    This whole post sounds exactly like what I've gone through, save for having a completed first draft of my story. From world building to organizing my brainstorming. I've been watching your channel on TH-cam for many months now, but only just subscribed to your newsletter on your website. I just have to buckle down and fill some holes left in my story, the first book in a series. (Because one book isn't going to tell the whole story) Thank you for the encouragement. :) Oh, and I've got like several ideas vying for my attention at once. #happywriter

    • @jamalim4569
      @jamalim4569 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello June How are you today !?

  • @artofphillipdallas
    @artofphillipdallas 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got a first draft done and you aren't kidding when you say there is a lot of work ahead to fix it. Great video and some tips I can still use.

  • @emmabyrd6931
    @emmabyrd6931 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    i have a dissociation problem where whenever im angry i go to a different world and i come out of my body kinda, i realized recently that the places i go to in my mind and whatever my mind makes up, i can turn them into novels. ive always loved writing but ive never been able to get over writers block, now i know how to. :)

  • @OUTSS1
    @OUTSS1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm a songwriter who is looking to dabble in short stories just for fun and I'm already having a lot of fun! Thanks for the tips. Love the creative freedom of it all

  • @نبضالأمل-م8و
    @نبضالأمل-م8و 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I wrote a novel called the struggle of love between angel and devil.

  • @insignificant-dust
    @insignificant-dust 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So helpful! Thank you so much! Seriously, you addressed all of my pitfalls.

  • @brandonedwards1181
    @brandonedwards1181 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I needed this so much, thank you Vivien

  • @zeeteecreate347
    @zeeteecreate347 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I’ve just started writing a novel that essentially I had no end in sight. It’s based around my favourite sector of sci-fi MAGIC. I’m one of those people that try a bunch of different hobbies and can’t stick with them but writing a book has always been prominent in my head xxx

  • @skeletalfracture5335
    @skeletalfracture5335 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    One way I stay motivated to keep going with the same story is by creating playlists, etc. Playlists full of music I think would fit, animatics that inspire me, aesthetics that fit, etc., and when I feel unmotivated I go through them and it basically gets me excited to write all over again. Also, what I do when I just feel like I *have* to write that other idea, I find a way to incorporate it (usually by making it a story for another character, or a myth that's part of a religion, etc.) into the story. Not only does this help to get it off my mind, but it also helps to really build the world.

  • @haua3096
    @haua3096 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This really helped especially the 'don't edit while you write' part. I'll keep that in mind. Thank you so much.

  • @talimediaart
    @talimediaart 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I have about 10+ plus other story ideas. Can you do a video on avoiding plot holes?

  • @jelliebombshell2159
    @jelliebombshell2159 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you, Vivien. The 'outline' idea has made such a difference to my writing.

  • @sxnvgl
    @sxnvgl 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you so much! I am currently writing a novel called, "Howl like a Wolf"

    • @AshokKumar-zq2wy
      @AshokKumar-zq2wy 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      r u done

    • @sxnvgl
      @sxnvgl 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@AshokKumar-zq2wy yesh!

    • @AshokKumar-zq2wy
      @AshokKumar-zq2wy 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sxnvgl have u published it

    • @sxnvgl
      @sxnvgl 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AshokKumar-zq2wy lol no but can u sub to my channel I might do video on it!

  • @michaelkeithbanez5968
    @michaelkeithbanez5968 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was really help me, I'm not a writer I'm an amateur artist but I want to make a story that can inspire or at least make people be aware of what's happening on our modern society, thank you very much for this!!!

  • @chowrites6179
    @chowrites6179 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Currently working on 20 YA novels, 2 of those are collabs. I just want to write for the rest of my life and enjoy the process an "architect" type.

  • @matthewstroud5195
    @matthewstroud5195 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks, I've had this story in my head and felt inspired to make it into a novel but had no clue to start, you helped me with what I have to do.

  • @mackenzietucker4292
    @mackenzietucker4292 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I want to write a variety of my ideas, however I lack the self confidence!

    • @sarahlumoindong3475
      @sarahlumoindong3475 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      that's normal! i had a lot of ideas for novels and i asked for help! i got lots of critiques..but it helped me grow. i'm currently working on a horror novel called "Lights Out" its a personal novel that i wont be publishing..just have built a support community for your writing! friends, family, online, anything! hope this helps :)

    • @Dogbertforpresident
      @Dogbertforpresident 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Try writing as if no one will ever read it.

    • @indianathe3rd742
      @indianathe3rd742 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sarahlumoindong3475 Um you're writing a novel that no one will read

  • @dee.s.4513
    @dee.s.4513 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks, Vivien. Really enjoyed this video. Your enthusiasm is motivational.

  • @spence4657
    @spence4657 3 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    "Don't edit while you write"
    Me, on my third draft, never having made it past chapter four:

  • @dellieborton
    @dellieborton 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So many people have said that "not everyone can do this" or "not every story is good enough to tell" and I LOVE that you don't say that. I also believe that if you are willing to LEARN and WORK for it, it's possible.

    • @dellieborton
      @dellieborton 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Also, Congratulations on being so close to your due date! You got this Mama. Praying for a safe and fast labor and delivery!

  • @bryant8294
    @bryant8294 5 ปีที่แล้ว +35

    #happywriter I may have about 8 story's in my head and probably 20 written down in my brainstorm notebook.

  • @jacobdw98
    @jacobdw98 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I haven’t been watching your videos for long but I want to thank you. If it wasn’t for you I don’t think I’d get as far in my novel as I have. So thank you so much

  • @thomasswritingjourney
    @thomasswritingjourney 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I have several ideas that I think about everyday. I want to write all these stories, but then again I would never get through my first draft😂. #happywriter

  • @Weirdthingsareexisting
    @Weirdthingsareexisting 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was actually really helpful! One of the shorter ones, but still great information, even 3 years later!

  • @thepokemonprofessor1650
    @thepokemonprofessor1650 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I’ve started my first novel. I trashed 5 rough drafts and it’s super hard but I am LOVING IT. My only problem is I keep thinking about other ideas. I haven’t even finished the first book yet and I already have ideas for 2 sequels and 3 spin-offs so oof. I’ve really enjoyed world building right now and I feel like I have a lot of these. I also need to a top writing on Notes lol

  • @nickelrevie
    @nickelrevie 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Man I've been morphing an idea in my head to write for years now. I've actually taken steps to write down a lot of worldbuilding at least. Planning to begin the rest of the process after I sort out some life things. Thanks for all of the tips!

  • @karaygeoushearts
    @karaygeoushearts 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I'm currently working on the outline and character profiles for my debut novel Alter, which is about a grieving couple struggling to reconnect after losing a child at birth. I've set a quarterly goal to complete them by the end of March and start pages April first. Alter will have a sequel, perhaps be a trilogy.
    Then, I have the Aftershocks - a series about women support group for those who were molested/sexually assaulted, Jonesing - a series about a recovering addict trying to build healthier habits but can't escape her past, MUSE/Porcelain - a series about an artist with a complicated history and the courage to create, Mikellah - an untitled series about a girl with two disabled brothers who strives to be one kid her parents don't worry about yet has her own just as legitimate problems, and an action/adventure novel idea about a conman turned magician showman whose daughter is kidnapped. Outside of that last one, I clearly write dramatic fiction.
    I hope the synopsis of my first doesn't create any stress. I wish for you and your friend a happy and healthy delivery.
    #happywriter #happywriters

  • @shrimpgaming1749
    @shrimpgaming1749 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this video. I'm actually glad you said "your first draft will suck" it makes me feel better that others feel the same.

  • @epicnessoverdrive9175
    @epicnessoverdrive9175 4 ปีที่แล้ว +193

    When you have finished a novel but no one reads it: *[proceeds to cry]*

    • @tidbitsforkids6448
      @tidbitsforkids6448 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      I'll read it...

    • @cleockeo
      @cleockeo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Heyy I'd love to read it😄💞

    • @yrhhh
      @yrhhh 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I’ll read it:))

    • @syaeintrovert5148
      @syaeintrovert5148 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      This is literally me!

    • @bobshamin4868
      @bobshamin4868 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I'd read it if you read mine :)

  • @april9591
    @april9591 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much! I’ve gotten so far in the brainstorm because of this!!

  • @sachinbhandari3506
    @sachinbhandari3506 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I personally issues with the timing. It took me six months to finish my book. It's called God's destiny.
    Due to work and stuff, it felt like I would never make it, but I did. Thanks for helping me pull through.

  • @aruxani
    @aruxani 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    8:58
    I know this is a Finding Nemo reference but I'll happily take it as an "It ends with us" reference

  • @jademorgan4254
    @jademorgan4254 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I live on a secluded farm that doesn’t have WiFi and we don’t own a computer. I’ve been writing a story BY HAND about a young girl who kills her little brothers. I’m only on my 1st draft, but I have 1/3 of the book done!

    • @oceantearsky
      @oceantearsky 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I want to read it!!!!!

  • @philgalbraith9874
    @philgalbraith9874 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This video was so so helpful and Vivien touched on several of the issues and emotions that I am feeling while trying to write my first novel!

  • @laylassong2377
    @laylassong2377 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Good ways to begin novels
    -walking in nature
    -waking up
    -dozing off to someone talking
    -just describe the setting

    • @salontafel100
      @salontafel100 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      satire?

    • @m1key838
      @m1key838 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@salontafel100 why would it be satire

  • @findlayj6607
    @findlayj6607 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I get so many ideas that my brain gets all jumbled up. I've created a neat and clean document thanks to you and it has helped me a lot. Now I'm working on my time management for writing. Thanks!

  • @consistentlychristy2991
    @consistentlychristy2991 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    For one short story, I have about 4 different ideas. That story is due tomorrow #happywriter

    • @VivienReis
      @VivienReis  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oh boy, good luck!!

  • @Billy-eo8vk
    @Billy-eo8vk 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I have the whole story in my mind. Now all I have to do is get it on paper. If you have a good idea for a story, run it thru your mind like a movie. Keep adding to it. Keep running the movie, stop go back and run again, add names and situations ect. Take a break .It will come back to mind with new ideas. Subtract things, add things. Eventually you will have the story completed.

  • @luciusdreyse7643
    @luciusdreyse7643 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I have a lots of story in my head. Every time I'm struggling to sleep i always imagine a sotry that i can make. I want to take out the story in my head but i don't know how

  • @bowtiebetty820
    @bowtiebetty820 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Vivien. I love your grounded and practical tips. I am so glad I subscribed to your channel.

  • @theatheistpaladin
    @theatheistpaladin 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    How many book ideas?
    1. Military Science fantasy with 3 factions. High fantasy Magepunk, Steampunk Alchemists, Solar/cyber tech. 9+ books
    2. Star Trek mixed with Babolyn 5, 3 books
    3.Steampunk cowboys with dragons! 4 books
    4.A Warlock who hunts warlocks. 3 books
    5. Empire falls because it bargained with dark power. Then the post-apocalyptic/grimdark aftermath. 2 books
    6. Portal fantasy with gods controlling their own worlds. 5 books
    7. Murder/comedy with Peter Dinklage like character as a novelist helping to solve crimes. 3 books.
    *TOO DAMN MANY*
    #Happywriter

  • @abundantauthorlife
    @abundantauthorlife 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love seeing other authors' routines!