I Wrote a March...

Welp I made another one! I will show my march today that I have spent quite a long time making today! This march was intended to be a military like march, but it also kinda sounds like a circus march, what do you think?
Sheet Music: musescore.com/...
Audio:
Part List:
Piccolo in C
Flute
Clarinet 1
Clarinet 2
Alto Saxophone
Tenor Saxophone
Bari Saxophone
Horn F
Trumpet 1
Trumpet 2
Trumpet 3
Trombone 1
Trombone 2
Tuba
Snare Drum
Bass Drum
Cymbals

[@Alexander-oh8ry]

Try to give individual instrument lines smaller and more different jumps from one another, also mix up the octaves of some notes in some voices or morph the first voice into the seconds and vice versa. This will help you to make it sound more coherent and fluid.
In a march, avoiding these ideas might actually be intentional, but I think a little bit of this will help the sound

[@thefitness-grampacertest9364]

I think the snare could have grace notes when it plays on the offbeat. Also, you could use repeat measures if the application you're using has them.
These are just little details that most percussion parts would have, this composition is really great already and I would love to see what you could do in the future :)

[@TallGuyRubix]

this was great, as a tuba player i always appreciate a few breaks from the oompa loompa playing during a march :)

[@tabbything]

It’s weird having 15 bar strains but it works out in the end. I really liked the difference between the trio and finale. Honestly, only thing I would’ve added was a euphonium/baritone part.

[@drewracer777]

@@tabbything Crap! I forgot baritone, I’ll add it in a future update

[@Disfigure__]

Youre really talented man, keep it up!!

[@CipherSphereqxc0698]

Better than me, I say.

[@KeegzAndersen]

Hey that’d be fun to play! Well done!

[@noelpatata3948]

how long did it take you to make this?

[@drewracer777]

I started from scratch about 3 weeks ago chipping in a changing parts every day or so, I'd say in total 20 ish hours, maybe more.

[@noelpatata3948]

@@drewracer777 godspeed

[@jesseoppelaar9199]

Sounds cool, only thing with repeat it doesn’t sound logical. It’s almost like it just stops and goed again in a random place without finishing a phrase

[@drewracer777]

That was a challenge with this piece, it used to be really bad, this is something I am working on, thank you tho, I need to know things like this 👍

[@deadbydebt6859]

Thats what i was gonna say

[@wither_tm]

Mate, it's June

[@demoxy7243]

I'm about to write a July

[@justaddi4177]

woman