I don't think the ending is bad. It does leave your imagination to fill in the ending but I've read many stories that don't explain everything. The whole bright light and everythings gone almost felt too technology-like for me; but that's my opinion and does not detract from the story. After all the mention of sentience I kept expecting a symbiotic relationship or the plants/animals/planet to react in some manner.
Why all the hate? That’s a pretty good ending. Let your imagination fill in the loose threads, what do you think a jungle planet would do with unwelcome guests?
By not describing what actually happened to Vos, or the others, just poof he's alone in a clearing now... That is just no way to end any story. I like the story in itself, bit flimsy plot, but... to end it without explanation like that, Blegh.
Vos, realized then that it was all in his head, a dream, a vision of an unknown future that never happened? Who knows? At any rate, he felt pretty good about the outcome. So, with a sigh, he looked around his cooling twilight gray surroundings. "Now, how to get off this rock..."
come on. the fate of the world & Galaxy in the balance from saving an animal from downing? Are you 5 yrs old? Grow up and grow some common sense. Good idea for a story but poor execution!
Mommy, why is that man groping the kitty lady? You said it’s not okay to touch someone in a no-no zone.
"and everyone got hit by a bus. The end."
I don't think the ending is bad. It does leave your imagination to fill in the ending but I've read many stories that don't explain everything. The whole bright light and everythings gone almost felt too technology-like for me; but that's my opinion and does not detract from the story. After all the mention of sentience I kept expecting a symbiotic relationship or the plants/animals/planet to react in some manner.
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Love the story's. Please keep them coming.
UMMM YA so now what??? The story just sort of ended. It was a good story but I have teh feeling there could have been more.
lol Is there a second journey?
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Why all the hate? That’s a pretty good ending. Let your imagination fill in the loose threads, what do you think a jungle planet would do with unwelcome guests?
Hey someone who understood me and was kind. Thanks!
Would have been nice if it would have had an ending that didn't blow chunks
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I was about to say that but you already did.
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what ai tool you use for script and for image
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I wonder if there any stories where humans encounter furry aliens like protogen or sergals
Chewbacca?
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By not describing what actually happened to Vos, or the others, just poof he's alone in a clearing now... That is just no way to end any story.
I like the story in itself, bit flimsy plot, but... to end it without explanation like that,
Blegh.
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Vos, realized then that it was all in his head, a dream, a vision of an unknown future that never happened? Who knows? At any rate, he felt pretty good about the outcome. So, with a sigh, he looked around his cooling twilight gray surroundings. "Now, how to get off this rock..."
That ending... too sudden. =.= LIKE WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED NEXT!?
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Help the animal dude
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Interesting ending ... Open to "few interpretations" .... Most of YT commentators would not grasp it XD ...
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Nice ending.
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Great story. Really crap ending... really crap!
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nonsensical ending unless this is not the end and there is a second episode or chapter
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Why do I keep hearing a clicking noise all through this and other videos??
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There's a cloaked predator getting close trying to ear the story in your headphones.
Sorry but i don't get the ending. What happened to everyone else.
Do you think there is room for a continuation to explain more?
@@FictionalReimagined Hope not once was enough, lot of platitudes no substance
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After reading about the crappy ending I am going to pass
Well you missed a great story but here,
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Im sorry the picture above does not look like he is saving that animal the reading along with it is a bit stomach turning.
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Bad writing. Mayne if they had edited better. Ai writing.
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What, you expect an AI to write a story with an ending that makes sense?
Blah!
bit weak
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come on. the fate of the world & Galaxy in the balance from saving an animal from downing? Are you 5 yrs old? Grow up and grow some common sense. Good idea for a story but poor execution!
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So is this a guy or a girl?
Why the girls name?
Strange story.
So what happened to Karen and the child?