4 major IELTS Writing mistakes that keep your score down

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  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

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  • @MeemMahabubaIslammimi
    @MeemMahabubaIslammimi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Hey Asiya! I followed all your lessons, especially for the listening and speaking parts. I received my score yesterday. L- 8.5 R- 7.5 W- 7 S- 8, with a band score of 8, in the first attempt. I am really grateful to you and Jay (E2 IELTS). Thank you so much!

  • @RJCM1804
    @RJCM1804 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you from the bottom of my heart ! Had my results yesterday and managed to score 8 overall: L8.5 R8.5 W7 S7

  • @samaia836
    @samaia836 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hello Asiya… thank you so much for your benecial online lessons. I recommend your channel to all who can't enroll for IELTS review centers. Self-study is okay too. Just believe in yourself. Got 6.5 on my first attempt. My employer is asking for 5 only. Thank you so much. God Bless Asiya💜💜💜💜

  • @dimuthusiriwardena1608
    @dimuthusiriwardena1608 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I just wanted to THANK YOU. All your videos helped me to achieve my band 8 in IELTS. May GOD BLESS YOU.

    • @yusufkaya1393
      @yusufkaya1393 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      hello everyone ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
      Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
      Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution.
      Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur.
      Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time.
      In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

  • @mithirasamaranayake4638
    @mithirasamaranayake4638 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hi thank you ma'am. I could archive the desired score by following solely your tips. If someone reads this, the only tip I can share you guys with is refer her TH-cam channel inside out. Thanks again.

  • @nurulauliya6266
    @nurulauliya6266 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Asiya, thank you so much for your clear videos which help me to study about IELTS even though I knew your channel about 2 weeks before my official exams. I managed to get overall 7.5, L 8 R 8.5 W 6 S 6.5. I wish I knew your channel soon then I would get better in writing 😁

  • @yuktaaaaa
    @yuktaaaaa 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got overall band 7.5 with L-8.5, R-8.5, W-7, S-6.5. I referred the book provided by IELTS for L & R and TH-cam videos for W & S.

    • @ashbinshaji2556
      @ashbinshaji2556 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      How to get reading materials from internet?

  • @aarthicelustusable
    @aarthicelustusable 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Kudos on your top notch videos Asiya! I’ve used your IELTS tips and successfully scored an 8.5 band. Thanks so much!

  • @jwalayamphu318
    @jwalayamphu318 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you mam ❤️🥰
    I’ve got overall 7, your videos are very helpful.

  • @jasminekaur4142
    @jasminekaur4142 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    You're the best mam 🙂 love from punjab, india 🇮🇳 ❤

    • @ieltswithmk
      @ieltswithmk 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      u can visit on ielts with mk channel

  • @raiyaan.abdullah
    @raiyaan.abdullah 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Asiya, I achieved a band 8 recently watching your videos.

  • @susireddy8319
    @susireddy8319 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Recently I completely my exam 27/03/2022 . I got score: 7 overall. L- 7.5, S- 7.5, W- 6, R-6 . For speaking they asked me about home decoration,hometown, appartment vs individual house. I could got more in reading if I managed my time well. Anyway Asiya you are very helpful😍

    • @yusufkaya1393
      @yusufkaya1393 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      hello everyone ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
      Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
      Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution.
      Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur.
      Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time.
      In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

  • @nacrynxehra2139
    @nacrynxehra2139 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Hi Asiya! Thanks so much for your beneficial lessons. I pursue your lessons all the time .I appeal you to please write an academic writing task two for us .thank you

  • @sanasana6524
    @sanasana6524 ปีที่แล้ว

    You're my favorite teacher

  • @aakashhukkeri4426
    @aakashhukkeri4426 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Asiya mam I could clear my ielts in first attempt by just learning from your videos.. 👍👍

  • @random_things_07
    @random_things_07 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hii Asiya, thank you for your videos.

  • @Saha9800
    @Saha9800 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Asiya. The essay you have provided is excellent in terms of grammar and vocabulary. However, the essay questions ask students to answer both of these questions: What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society?
    However, you have mainly provided one reason in BP1 and another reason in BP2, without answering the 2nd question fully. There are just some short references to society without full analysis and elaboration. I think the essay needs another BP to cover the impact of the problem on society. I hope we can have a fully developed version of this same essay in the near future. Thank you for valued efforts.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Saeid! In this essay I followed this structure:
      BP1. Reason 1 + impact
      BP2. Reason 2 + impact
      You can also structure the essay the way you're suggesting, with all the reasons in one paragraph and the impact in the other. I've explained this in the video about this sample essay (linked in the PDF)

    • @Saha9800
      @Saha9800 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@FasTrackIELTS Thank you Asiya for your clarification. Now I can understand your approach better. But I don't know why I feel that the essay is focused much more on the first question without fully elaborating on the impact of the problem on society. Even in the introduction, reasons are referred to, but there is nothing about "impact on society". I just wanted to share my understanding with you. Anyways, I've learned from your videos and again thank you for your valued efforts. I know what you're doing is not easy.

  • @Dolly-d2d
    @Dolly-d2d 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello Asiya, I have been watching a lot of your videos lately and I love your lessons. Thank you 😊

  • @diomedesescalajr.
    @diomedesescalajr. 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hillo madam I'm watching from the Philippines....I'm always watching your video....

  • @akhiljoby2041
    @akhiljoby2041 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well explained.... thank you so much ❤️

  • @КаналМиланыЖуравлёвой
    @КаналМиланыЖуравлёвой 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks a lot, Asiya❤️❤️❤️

  • @MaryRoseFabionar
    @MaryRoseFabionar 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you ❤

  • @TIMON155
    @TIMON155 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for all your videos

  • @realvera2683
    @realvera2683 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks Asiya, my greatest challenge has been how to develop ideas in Task 2 Academic. Please help....

  • @adalatqumbatov4605
    @adalatqumbatov4605 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can anybody tell me the structure of" to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?".Should we write the reasons for agree in first paragraph,and disagree in second one?

    • @sandrachisom8656
      @sandrachisom8656 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes you should... Then in the conclusion, you have to indicate the one you chose. Also, remember not to add any point that wasn't added in the paragraph stated earlier under the conclusion.

    • @amnabutt5679
      @amnabutt5679 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I think you should say that I completely agree or disagree and state the reason

    • @adalatqumbatov4605
      @adalatqumbatov4605 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@sandrachisom8656 Thank you veryyy much!!😊I have been mulling over this question for a long time but couldn't find an answer.Thank you again!

    • @sabaali3450
      @sabaali3450 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@amnabutt5679Hello, as you have said I need to mention completely agree or disagree but what if, I partially agree or disagree with a statement?

  • @jobanpreetsekhon6508
    @jobanpreetsekhon6508 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello mam from fewer days I start watching your videos . Mam can you make some videos on writing topics like that video you make on environment. It is very helpful to students. Major topic like education,economic , employment.

  • @muskanmalik6856
    @muskanmalik6856 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam i have been watching your vedio from 3 months and these are helping me a lot ...but i am facing problem in agree/disagree essay type ...can you please make a separate vedio on this topic.

    • @sahilmirza6583
      @sahilmirza6583 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Agree or disagree essay is much easy

    • @sahilmirza6583
      @sahilmirza6583 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Why are you face difficulty in it?

    • @amnabutt5679
      @amnabutt5679 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      To what extent do you agree?

    • @amnabutt5679
      @amnabutt5679 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can we partially agree and disagree?

    • @muskanmalik6856
      @muskanmalik6856 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sahilmirza6583i am facing difficulty in making my self clear through out the essay whether i agree or disagree

  • @IELTSExpert1
    @IELTSExpert1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks a lot

  • @Manisha-ms3nh
    @Manisha-ms3nh 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    My desire band is 7😥but I got stocked between 5.5- 6 😥

  • @arnold4996
    @arnold4996 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Am so afraid from my Exam 🙁..i am so confused ..🙁

  • @yusufkaya1393
    @yusufkaya1393 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    hello everyone ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
    Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
    Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution.
    Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur.
    Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time.
    In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

  • @aimannkhan2888
    @aimannkhan2888 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi asiya,i need help for writing task-2. At my mock test am getting band score 6. I need to catch minimum 7

  • @uroosaaziz5868
    @uroosaaziz5868 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello mam thank uuhh soo much for ur oll video about ielts bt mam i'm little bit confuse about agree or disagree qustion bcoz i dont understand if i'm agree this statment then i wriiten whole essay agree rather disagree plz mam

  • @fatimamohammed3245
    @fatimamohammed3245 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got an overall 8 Band in my first attempt
    L- 8.5
    R- 8.5
    W- 7
    S-7
    Thank you so much

    • @kxkxkx7
      @kxkxkx7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey,congratulations how long did it take to prepare?

  • @salilthapa3841
    @salilthapa3841 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can we go for middle ground in opinion?

  • @sumedhasharma5788
    @sumedhasharma5788 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm doctor and I'm going to appear for general ielts for uk ..wish me luck

  • @secret650
    @secret650 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi! I've already finished my exam and got the results. Thank God I've reached the overall band score that is needed and I surpassed the minimum required score for each band 🤧😊 Thank GOD for you and what you do. Your videos helped me a lot in each section because of your free tips I learn a lot and I know I'll be able to use it still in the future. I wish I can thank you in person and all the people who made this videos possible. Numbers 6:24-26 - The Lord bless you and keep you; the Lord make his face shine on you and be gracious to you; the Lord turn his face toward you and give you peace 💙

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi! I'm so happy to hear you've passed your exam and my lessons helped you along the way. And thank you so much for your kind words. All the best with whatever you took this exam for!

  • @ahmadzia3407
    @ahmadzia3407 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    great ❤

  • @hardeep1966
    @hardeep1966 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Plz mam help me in ielts exam writing module ch down level

  • @vidhyashah5370
    @vidhyashah5370 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thnk u mam 🥰🥰

  • @moeenakhtar7813
    @moeenakhtar7813 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Assalamualaikum Ramadan Mubarak.🎊🎊🎉🎉😊😊

  • @umidjonsiddiqov5568
    @umidjonsiddiqov5568 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love you.
    Happy Ramadan

  • @PREET_in_CANADA
    @PREET_in_CANADA 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got 7 band overall , in 1st attempt 🥰

    • @samaafaiz6523
      @samaafaiz6523 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Gongrats, how you prepare for reading have you go through ielts books Cambridge, any advice

    • @sayeeed1303
      @sayeeed1303 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah. Did you?

    • @PREET_in_CANADA
      @PREET_in_CANADA 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I preferred makkar readings rather than Cambridge

    • @PREET_in_CANADA
      @PREET_in_CANADA 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sayeeed1303 ☺️

    • @sayeeed1303
      @sayeeed1303 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@PREET_in_CANADA bro, when it comes to writing, should I use phrases like, "on the other hand "or in conclusion"

  • @LetsGoMiK
    @LetsGoMiK 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Greetings! Can u tell us, when video regarding essay types will b uploaded??

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm afraid I don't have a video on this topic planned, but we look into each essay type and how to answer them in our courses if you'd like to have a look

    • @LetsGoMiK
      @LetsGoMiK 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@FasTrackIELTSThank You Mam ! I would love to!

  • @zilla9296
    @zilla9296 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam I stuck at 5 bands

    • @ieltswithmk
      @ieltswithmk 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      u can visit on ielts with mk channel

  • @dharanidurai8460
    @dharanidurai8460 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I got my scores today. L-7 R-6.5 W-6.5 S-7 I'm very disappointed :-(

    • @amnabutt5679
      @amnabutt5679 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      What is your overall score

  • @natsagnyamtumen7827
    @natsagnyamtumen7827 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello 👋

    • @natsagnyamtumen7827
      @natsagnyamtumen7827 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello, could you help me my lesson of ielts speaking, I am writing from Mongolia, i've already booked my exam a month later 6 June of 2022, but i can't speak 😪