But to add to it mixing and matching different things is very annoying stick with one strategy when it comes to writing the Jurassic world I like mixing in other things randomly distracts from what your story originally was it throws too many variables into the story which makes it where the reader becomes disinterested in the story. I'm not saying that you shouldn't make a story with twist to it but too many will make not only the readers confused but it keeps the story from being interesting to the reader I'm just giving an honest criticism I'm not being disrespectful I kind of like the concept.
Okay I understand you're complaining about the flashbacks they are a bit annoying but everyone has to learn how to write a story it's not as easy as people think it is riding takes practice just like any other art painting and playing a musical instrument do you have to practice you have to learn and you have to be taught. Even Mozart had to be taught how to play a piano even though he was a prodigy
We really do need a part 2 this is amazing
Please do part 2
Part 2plz 🎉
Please make a part 2
Let's gooooo like a boss OP naruto part 2
Awesome damn daniel is man a menace 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😎😎😎😎😎😀😀😀🙏🙏🙏🙏💯💯💯💯💯😊😊😊😁😁😎😎😎
Love the episode need more please please please 🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚
Next part please
Make part two
What's the name of the author
More parts please Teteibaiyo.
Haters are going to hate.
Interestingly, he literally pulled the stick out of his but 😂.
But to add to it mixing and matching different things is very annoying stick with one strategy when it comes to writing the Jurassic world I like mixing in other things randomly distracts from what your story originally was it throws too many variables into the story which makes it where the reader becomes disinterested in the story. I'm not saying that you shouldn't make a story with twist to it but too many will make not only the readers confused but it keeps the story from being interesting to the reader I'm just giving an honest criticism I'm not being disrespectful I kind of like the concept.
Okay I understand you're complaining about the flashbacks they are a bit annoying but everyone has to learn how to write a story it's not as easy as people think it is riding takes practice just like any other art painting and playing a musical instrument do you have to practice you have to learn and you have to be taught. Even Mozart had to be taught how to play a piano even though he was a prodigy
This is a old incomplete story i saw this story on anime kings channel a couple of years ago
I am not a fan of the 10 minute freaking flashback of the entire synopsis
I’m not a fan I was kinda expecting him to be transformed into a Dino or something not be a basic human I mean come on it’s boring
This guy doesn't know how to write a story
Keep this kind of crap to yourself it’s a story not yours
@CalebBourasa you mean this story is not yours.
Part 2 please