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Part 3

Who is her girlfriend

Please part 2

Please make part 2

I am bit confused here it’s awesome about Naruto being token care of by volunteers summons but why is he a girl and not a boy like i thought he was a boy until i heard the 3rd leader said at (5:51) saying the 4th daughter like why not fix the title name from Naruto to Naruko so we know it’s going to be a girl and not think it’s a boy

😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨nope lost interest y the f do they make naruto a girl and not change the name and 2 I'm not a fan of fem naruto stories this had such potential but those 2 things ruined it 💔😤😮‍💨 but if u like that kind of thing then go for it this story is 4 u. O and I also hate how useless hiruzen is 😮‍💨😮‍💨😤😤😤😤like wtf he is supposed 2 b a leader not a puppet

Jiraiya could have had the toads check on Naruto when Jiraiya is too busy to do it himself. On a side note the toads would wonder why Velociraptors would want human clothing, And likely investigate to find out why.

Oh boy a 7 hour yap session

Fanfic name or author name please

Add add Utah raptors

Part 2 please

What's the name of the author

Please do part 2

Next part please

Part 2plz 🎉

Please tell me you're going to get the second part

Definitely need a part 2

Haters are going to hate.

Interestingly, he literally pulled the stick out of his but 😂.

More parts please Teteibaiyo.

We really do need a part 2 this is amazing

Please make a part 2

This is a old incomplete story i saw this story on anime kings channel a couple of years ago

Part 2

Let's gooooo like a boss OP naruto part 2 Awesome damn daniel is man a menace 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😎😎😎😎😎😀😀😀🙏🙏🙏🙏💯💯💯💯💯😊😊😊😁😁😎😎😎

Make part two

Love the episode need more please please please 🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚

But to add to it mixing and matching different things is very annoying stick with one strategy when it comes to writing the Jurassic world I like mixing in other things randomly distracts from what your story originally was it throws too many variables into the story which makes it where the reader becomes disinterested in the story. I'm not saying that you shouldn't make a story with twist to it but too many will make not only the readers confused but it keeps the story from being interesting to the reader I'm just giving an honest criticism I'm not being disrespectful I kind of like the concept.

Okay I understand you're complaining about the flashbacks they are a bit annoying but everyone has to learn how to write a story it's not as easy as people think it is riding takes practice just like any other art painting and playing a musical instrument do you have to practice you have to learn and you have to be taught. Even Mozart had to be taught how to play a piano even though he was a prodigy

This guy doesn't know how to write a story

I’m not a fan I was kinda expecting him to be transformed into a Dino or something not be a basic human I mean come on it’s boring

you should fix the a i so that they put unnecessary spaces between words that don't need unnecessary spaces

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Okay I can't wait to see part 2 to come out because it is really good.

I am not a fan of the 10 minute freaking flashback of the entire synopsis

If there's a part 2 I can't wait to see it

Keep up the great work can't wait to see more of this what if movie soon part 2 and 3

Hell yeah that's was awesome it needs a part 2 soon

Part 2 plzzz

Pt 2 please

Please make a part 2

I found a similar what if he's the link

Part 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 pls ❤❤❤❤ , really awesome series so far really good start and great potential as well. Pls make more parts of this series 🙏.

Part 2 pls ❤❤❤❤ , really awesome series so far really good start and great potential as well. Pls make more parts of this series 🙏.

Hey bro, is there gonna be a part two to the story cause I would like to hear more of the story

Let's gooooo like a boss OP naruto part 2 Awesome 🤯🤯🤯🤯😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏💯💯💯💯❤❤❤❤😎😎

Part 2 please

This story is really good I hope there is a part 2

Love it and I missed this series I was wondering what happened to this series and please please please make part 2!!

Can someone please tell me the name of this fanfiction please?