It's nice that Caden and Tia were able to find each other and together with their allies and other refugees were able to defeat the empire and the shadow coven and free the universe from their tyranny and make a brighter future for their child.😊
Overall, I love this story. It's about the cliche of humans being special. Fear and destruction are tools to control people into war. Your true motives and values are revealed if you can overlook them to try to find a peaceful outcome.
Damn you. I had to wipe my eyes. Yes there's a couple of interesting things that may have fallen into another universe but this was a great story. Perhaps there's some futuristic anomalies in this one, but the human spirit will never be suppressed. Somehow, we will find a way, even in our current reality to win. Together, the human race is unstoppable. 👽👽👽👽💙
I hope you realize this would make an excellent movie plot. Like the aftermath of a great disaster kinda reminds me of "Planet of the Apes" in that regard. Enjoyed the listen.
An excellent action adventure. Different from your romances, and an excellent change of pace. Only one criticism. Your transition from the start of the fight at the archive ship to their approach to the space station and the arrival of the rebel fleet seemed a bit lacking. Maybe it fell through a quantum tunnel and showed up last week?
I feel that the Author of these stories is someone that has other earthly powers, there’s something very special going on here & it really wouldn’t surprise me if through theses stories we are being prepared for ascension. Anybody find it a little strange that whoever wrote all this has no name when people write stories they try to get there name out at every chance. Stranger things have happened or isn’t anyone paying attention to what’s going on with our planet 🌎 at the moment & only getting stronger 3rd to 4th 5th density. Love & light to all.
Mr. Sci, I know I have said this before, and it needs to be said again. Please take your time in writing these stories. You mentioned in response to my last comment that you got excited when writing the climax that you may have overlooked a few details. The passion and inspiration is great, never lose that. On the other hand, each story I listen too feels like something is missing. Before, I had commented that the relationships in your stories felt too forced, you have improved on that point greatly. Next point to improve is your continuity and clarity. Details or story elements are getting missed. Have someone proof-read your work and give you feedback. The best authors still have an editor. AI reading does not help with clarity either. While the AI voice is better than some, it is far from ideal to impart the passion you put into writing. There are a host of voice talents out there in this space that will lend their talents to you if you can reach them. Not every story needs to be concluded in one episode. Try planning a story out in 2 or 3 "Chapters" that give you the time to impart the necessary detail you need to have a fully fleshed out story. Happy new year and happy writing. Forever your supporter and critic, AH24.
The last human. The last Cerulean. One destiny that will change the galaxy forever.
It's nice that Caden and Tia were able to find each other and together with their allies and other refugees were able to defeat the empire and the shadow coven and free the universe from their tyranny and make a brighter future for their child.😊
Beautiful story! The love tracker found her human.
This is a really well done story.
Overall, I love this story. It's about the cliche of humans being special. Fear and destruction are tools to control people into war. Your true motives and values are revealed if you can overlook them to try to find a peaceful outcome.
Good Story👍
EXCELLENT! Thank you! J Really... Quite Amazingly interesting , Good, Well done! Right On! J
Thank you for another beautiful story my friend and happy new year and I hope this one is better than the last🎉🎉🎉🎉
Happy new year to all of you - let's go for a better future for humanity in 2025 - thank you for this beautiful story 🥳🥳🥳
Very good. Thank you.
Damn you. I had to wipe my eyes. Yes there's a couple of interesting things that may have fallen into another universe but this was a great story. Perhaps there's some futuristic anomalies in this one, but the human spirit will never be suppressed. Somehow, we will find a way, even in our current reality to win. Together, the human race is unstoppable. 👽👽👽👽💙
I couldn't help feeling a little bit of Grasshopper and Kung Fu in this one.
I hope you realize this would make an excellent movie plot. Like the aftermath of a great disaster kinda reminds me of "Planet of the Apes" in that regard. Enjoyed the listen.
What do we have here, another immaculate conception? 😂
Classic story between jedi and sith
An excellent action adventure. Different from your romances, and an excellent change of pace. Only one criticism. Your transition from the start of the fight at the archive ship to their approach to the space station and the arrival of the rebel fleet seemed a bit lacking. Maybe it fell through a quantum tunnel and showed up last week?
Good story just one question, when did Tia get pregnant? Or was it an immaculate conception?
I feel that the Author of these stories is someone that has other earthly powers, there’s something very special going on here & it really wouldn’t surprise me if through theses stories we are being prepared for ascension. Anybody find it a little strange that whoever wrote all this has no name when people write stories they try to get there name out at every chance. Stranger things have happened or isn’t anyone paying attention to what’s going on with our planet 🌎 at the moment & only getting stronger 3rd to 4th 5th density. Love & light to all.
So we r the Jedi 😂😂
Mr. Sci, I know I have said this before, and it needs to be said again. Please take your time in writing these stories. You mentioned in response to my last comment that you got excited when writing the climax that you may have overlooked a few details. The passion and inspiration is great, never lose that. On the other hand, each story I listen too feels like something is missing.
Before, I had commented that the relationships in your stories felt too forced, you have improved on that point greatly. Next point to improve is your continuity and clarity. Details or story elements are getting missed. Have someone proof-read your work and give you feedback. The best authors still have an editor.
AI reading does not help with clarity either. While the AI voice is better than some, it is far from ideal to impart the passion you put into writing. There are a host of voice talents out there in this space that will lend their talents to you if you can reach them.
Not every story needs to be concluded in one episode. Try planning a story out in 2 or 3 "Chapters" that give you the time to impart the necessary detail you need to have a fully fleshed out story.
Happy new year and happy writing. Forever your supporter and critic, AH24.