New TOEFL Writing Question: Guide to Academic Discussion Questions (July 2023)
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Thanks a lot for your video! But I still don`t understand why the "perfect score example" is perfect if it doesn`t match the topic at all. Is this an answer for some another question? If anyone can clarify it, please...
I should have been clearer in the video. The sample essay at the 6:00 mark is an example from ETS for a different question. I included it here to show you that you could earn a high score without including any information from the people in the discussion. At this point of the video, I did not want to show a sample question and essay yet. The "watching television" question is a different prompt from ETS that I used to show what the question will look like on test day. Keep watching later on in the video for a sample question and accompanying essay. Sorry for the confusion.
@@TSTPrepThanks for the clarification; I had exactly the same concern.
I ask myself this question every day. Nonsense
@@Banana-wk5wf he legit clarrified this as soon as the question was asked. The answer is in this feed...
Thank you Josh. It seems to me that, the new format is much easier than the former version but the main problem is :Time!
Can't agree anymore. Usually, I can't meet the word count requirement in a limited time 🥲
I recommend you learn fast typing on the keyboard. It will help you save extra time.
@@bilalbgt5949 Fast typing is an ability that I got because I spent too much time in front of the computer 😅, I strongly believe is the easiest TOEFL's question to me.
I personally agree with the opinion of Bryan and I believe that globalization could has so many benefits for us like interacting with people from different cultures and so you can learn about diverse range of cultures and you can make new friends from different countries, I am living in a multicultural city in which I have made new friends from different countries and I gave me the opportunity to learn from them and sometimes thinking in a different perspective enabled me to come up with different solution for my questions. I think our cultures shape our personality and if you can interact with people from different cultures you can learn how to think in a different way compared the way you have been brought up with. Moreover, globalization makes it easier for us to have access different products from different countries and therefore you can find any specific products based on your need, like as I have access to different cream products for my skin, I can choose a product suitable for my skin.
Thanks! As always, you are the first one in updating us. I have so much faith in this new shorter toefl test that I feel like I will finally pass it with flying colors. Thanks 🙏
Thanks for commenting and good luck on your test!
Thanks for sharing.I think the new format is much easier and more flexible than the old version.
In my view, it is easier than previous independent writing tasks plus it promotes the very purpose of being a learner/student, to be critical in an academic environment. The new task gives us more freedom over writing. I really like the new update writing task 2.
Thanks for your feedback.
Thank you Josh.
I love the work you do here
Perfect points, Thank
It looks like much easier, i think the time is really short. Thank so much for keeping us update.
Thank you so much professor for the most useful content on youtube! This video helped so much. I think that this task is way better that the previous one. I need to write only 120 words instead of 300, less stress for sure.
Thanks for taking the time to comment and good luck on your test!
Definitely much easier and faster than the old one!
It is really a great privilege that we have your channel Mr. MacPherson. Thank you sir.
Hey! Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. Much appreciated :)
That's very helpful Josh, thanks a lot. The new format is much easier but, the problem is about the duration.
Hope you will continue looking for time management strategies.
Hi Josh, I think that the new format is less stressful that the old one. My big concern is the time, I have to be faster at thinking and writing. I took the test twice and I need a few points to get the score that I need. Thank you for your videos, they are so helpful to me.
Thank you for taking the time to comment and good luck on your next test!
Wow! Thanks a lot!🌅
That was great!
To succeed, the main ingredients is: practice, practice, practice! 💖
Very clear, Josh. I definitely think this written assignment format is easier than the previous one.
Hello, dear...??
Thank you so much Josh!
Thank you so much for the advice! I'm 12 years old and I took the TOEFL test for the first time recently to test my English proficiency. I scored 89 in total and got 25 in Writing. I got a raw score of 5 out of 5 in the academic discussion part. I wrote 148 words focused on stating my opinions and counteracted one student from the discussion. I appreciate your effort!
Thanks for commenting and congratulations on your score! Great job! I admire your dedication, taking the TOEFL test at such a young age.
how did you know you got 5/5
Sounds like this task is much easier!
Thanks Josh! It was a very useful video and I took a lot of screenshots.
Thank you very much for the useful video.
Amazing, what a video. It definitely helps mitigate my scare or stress when thinking of new format of the test. Thanks a lot
Thanks for the comment and good luck on your test!
Excellent tips for the new writing question are provided in this video.
Thanks
Thank you so much.
Thank you Josh, this is very helpful 👍
Hey, Josh! I don't know how to thank you. I had taken the TOEFL once before and, despite knowing English, I was frustrated with my score and didn't understand why. But your videos showed me that understanding what each section requires makes all the difference. Understanding each type of question in Reading and Listening, for example, made a significant impact on my score, and your explanation in this Writing video helped me increase my score by 4 points because it made me understand the session's purpose and what to write.
So, thank you very much for all the material you provide! It helped me a lot! 🙌🏻
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot! If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you leave your review at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep.
Thanks, Josh! Sharing this on the latest blog post that I'm working on publishing.
Thanks for sharing, Anne! Let me know when you have the link up. Maybe we can squeeze in a link to your blog somewhere in one of our articles.
Thanks millions.
tysm!
Thank you so much Josh! We, the TOEFL test takers are so grateful for you. I learned a lot from just watching your videos. However, I still haven't passed the exam for the third time. Foreign Pharmacists know the struggle because of high passing scores to take the Equivalency Exam and since there will be major changes, I wonder how will this affect the scoring system by the National Assoc. of Board of Pharmacy. Pretty frustrated right now :(
Hi @nicaramos5210 I am in the same boat. I am also in this process and need to take toefl. So far, I haven't heard any news from the NABP. If you want to keep in touch, I would be happy to talk to someone that is going through the same struggle. Let me know!
Iam also in the same situation
@@sivakumarpalanisamy8838 Do you know if anything have changed? Regarding the minimum passing scores from NABP?
Hey @nicaramos5210! I am also facing the same challenge. Hopefully, the major changes in TOEFL iBT does not impact the scoring system by the NABP.
Hi, may I ask what score you have set as your goal?
THANKS A LOT :) WELL DEFINIETY IT WILL BE MUCH MORE EASIER. THANKSSSSSS
Finally, thank you Josh
thanks!
Very hepful Josh
Thank you for the video!
I'm definitely going to take test after the update. It looks easier. You shouldn't concentrate on "fake" reading questions, shouldn't keep essay for 300 words...i like it❤
Thank you for your feedback and good luck on your test.
Thank you❤
Thank you so much Josh. This look easier than the previous but I enjoyed both
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Thanks Josh! I didn’t have idea it had changed 😅
Thank you Josh! I really appreciate your effort in this video about new question.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. Much appreciated :)
Thanks a lot for useful video🎉
Thank you sir
It is indeed easier than previous independent writing🙌🙌
Thank you, dear Josh. This was so helpful😍🤩
I'm gonna take an exam in 2 months and it will be my first TOEFL exam. I have recently started following your channel in hope that I will get some good things from your instructions. Thank you for your work.
Thanks for the comment and good luck in your studies!
Did you pass it???
@adrianacuellar748 yes I did with flying colors
Thank you Josh for the detailed explaination. Hope your fingers are fine now !😀
Thank you :)
Thanks a lot, subscribed you!
Thank you for your support. :)
thanks
I thought it's easier when I first heard the pattern. But having 2 student opinions actually makes it hard to think differently. They do help when we don't have any idea about the topic. But, when our only idea is already given by a student, it's frustrating! I am finding it helpful to roughly think of an idea or a stance before looking at the opinion part.
I'm going to give my TOEFL in 3 days. Will share my experience here. Thank you for your videos Josh!
Thank you for commenting. How did your test go?
did you give your exam ?
Thank u mr,i think this new version is much technically than the previous one,and students get the highest scores who have practiced a lot.
Thanks a million! I got 110/120 and 29/30 in writing. Your videos definitely helped a lot with preparation and also helped me feeling more prepared to the new test.
Congratulations and thank you for your kind words. It means A LOT. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you say the same thing at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!
Thank you, Josh. The lecture and structure break down are very helpful! Writing is the most difficult part for me. I completed my first essay, though it takes me over 30 minutes!😂
Thanks for taking teh time to comment. If you ever want some additional help, you can check out our site: www.tstprep.com :)
Why would TOEFL guys not give us enough time to read what THEY want us to understand?! Makes no f... sense
Thats why u practice reading books alot bruhv.. sounds like a skill issue to me 🤷♂️
Totally agree! They should give more time for reading so we can understand and comprehend. So stupid!
You must be kidding with us. How can ı read the questions also two different review AND jot down my personal ideas in 10 munites? You guys do not give us for reading time.
Thanks a lot for your work! Subjectively, I think that it depends on person, like many people thought independent essay was the hardest thing in the TOEFL, but actually for me that was Integrated 😅. Last time I could write very long time, and then edit, because I just wrote my essay and that's it. However, now I should read or SCAN the passages and then write my opinion about that topic and all that thing I should do in 10 minutes. That is much more stressful than Independent essay was.
Thank you for your feedback. Of course, everyone is different.
I consider this format more difficult because there is no template. We need to write a lot more, and with just 10 minutes, many errors can be made. I appreciate your explanation; at least, going to the exam knowing what to expect is helpful.
Thank you for your feedback.
Thank you for the video and tips
Hey it's my first time thinking for TOFEL can u just help me out how to do and prepare .please lemme help out
Thank you so much for the structure and the guiding through how to practice for Academic Discussions. It helped me greatly in improving my score. I am definitely recommending everyone I know who are preparing for TOEFL to check out channel and website.
Great! Thank you for sharing! If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you say the same thing at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!
Thank you, Josh! It's my first time commenting here, thank you for the content! In my opinion, this new type of writing is more difficult because for me it's easier to write from previous discussions than add my opinion. I know the topic in my native language, but when it comes to writing in English I struggle with vocabulary :(
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot! If you want to build your vocabulary, the first site we would recommend is LingQ. It is a program designed to give you a ton of reading content, from news articles to short stories at all levels of proficiency. It also has flashcards and other tools to help you remember vocabulary.
The second site we would recommend for more "TOEFL-like" materials is Scientific American, which is an academic journal with similar types of passages from the test
Excellent job
Thanks :)
Hey Josh! Thanks for the video. I find more stressful this new format because you always want to have as much time as possible. But, either way with both formats you should prepare very well the templates you are planning to use.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Hi could you please score this? It will help me out to gauge my current level.
This topic puts the light on the crucial topic of globalisation. I firmly believe in the transformative power of globalisation. The tremendous potential that we see in our world today is because of the advent of globalisation. To counter to what Alex believes, I would like to put it in a way that since centuries mankind has been divided and isolated. You can see how the ancient civilisations disappeared just because of the lack of technology transfer. We live in an inter dependent world and to meet the needs of our populations, collaboration is the way to go. There have been scores of instances of nation building and development of the poorest of the regions because of open economies. The concept is of collective advancement and generation of new opportunities. Today we can sit in a part of the world and work in another. This is possible because of the international bonhomie and cultural awareness. The diversity is actually the pillar of a strong nation including the developing ones. They must open up their economies and they themselves will realise it as the best decision in their history.
Guys, your visual information around 6:10 has a mistake. The student opinions are from another question (effects of television) rather than the one about discoveries. So, clearly the student opions on that question have nothing to do with the sample answer. Otherwise, great video as usual.
I'll have TOEFL exam today about an hour and a half on July 26th in Korea... Wish me good luck pls!!!
Hi
How did you get on? 🙂
@@medsarad 110!!! got 26 in reading and listening but 30 and 28 in speaking and writing!
@@piano_boy8981 Hey, that's a great score! May I ask you how you have prepared for the test? Did you learn any templates or specific phrases/formulations and vocabulary?
Thank you so much Josh you help me so much keep going U doing amazing 🎉
Thanks. Much appreciated!
Hi Josh. First of all i want to thank you for this such an amazing video. I wrote my own answer. I would be delighted if you give your own opinions about my answer in your free time.
Also i am open to other people's opinions.
Although there are both pros and cons of globalization, I definitely think that the advantages are more dominant. First of all, it gives a great opportunity to earn money. With the help of globalization, even people who have low wages can sell their home-made products to the world. Secondly, it makes discovering cultures and cultural exchange possible. People can travel to their dream country, develop their perspectives about other cultures, and even defy their cultural biases. While I also give rights to Alex's points that state it can cause local people to extinct, It can be prevented by taking action. Governments can ensure that local people will not be a part of globalization, and they can legislate against the harsh conditions of employees.
Josh is the best of the best. You're a life saver. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Happy to help :)
I feel this is a LOT easier than the old version, I'm an English major in Asia and I basically do similar tasks like this all day, while for entire article, not so much😅
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
It's incredible how I'm getting score 4.0 on every test of this new question just following your tips! I'm losing fear of the writing section.
How do you know your mark?
@@RamiroBrandolini You'll get an AI-generated score after submitting your response for the practice questions on their website.
@@idrisbaird365 Sory to bother, wich website? Thanks
I already completed 5 practice tests on the website. While I tried to vary my writing style and implemented some of the suggested tips from TST I always scored a 4.0. Did anyone here get a different result, or is the current system simply not yet sufficient to evaluate the text properly?
I think in some ways, they are the same because we are writing about a topic with our own idea. although we can use some idea in our writing, as you said, ETS maybe evaluates our contribution
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
I think it's not that much difficult and beside they shortened time for that we will practice on it and increase our writing skills faster.tha nk you Josh i needed this since they changed TOEFL writing section 😊
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
I think that this is easier than the previous task.😊
Thanks for your video, Josh🌸
In my opinion, the new academic discussion task is easier than the previous independent task.
I have my test next week on January 17. I hope for the very best.
Thanks for commenting and best of luck on your test.
@@TSTPrep Thank you. I got my results today.
I had a 28 in writing following your templates. Thank you🙏
I guess it is more relax than the former one.
Josh please make more videos on this and speaking as well
Sure, more videos to come soon :)
My test is tomorrow and I have been practicing and studying with your videos for about a month. You have such a large and great palette of studying material for the TOEFL. If I get the score I need, I'll start a fandom for Josh.
Haha, thanks for commenting :) How did your test go?
actually I believe this new academic task is much better compare to the perviouse one, less words and clear direction are notably the biggest advantages of this new updated writing task
Thanks for your feedback and good luck on your test!
Hello! I tried writing the answer to the question:
I believe that globalization contains both positive and negative impacts. However, the positives of globalization overwhelms its negative effects. Even though Alex says that globalization can lead to loss of culture and characteristics of countries, I believe that this will not happen if we are careful enough. For example, I learn at an international school where it represents a form of globalization as people with different cultures gather together and get educated. It is a great platform to share each other’s cultures and compare their differences. Instead of dishonouring the diversity, we respect them. We make sure to value the cultures and include them. Therefore, through globalization, we can also achieve world peace as the community gets closer to each other. We can develop further understanding towards one another and avoid unnecessary conflicts. To conclude, I agree with Bryan that globalization brings advantages and will improve our current lives.
Are there any improvements I could make?
Thank you so much Josh, but I have one question:)
Can you tell me where the source for the three questions is?
Psychology- What are smoe strategies that people can use to manage stress in their daily lives?
Political Science- What are some ways that individuals and goverments can work to reudcue air pollution?
History- But what about the impact of ancient civilizations on science and technology? How dis these civilizations contrubute to our modern understanding of science and technology?
You mentioned that the source of the three questions is from ETS, but I couldn't find them on the ETS website T.T
Thanks for your video! Both questions will be like that?
Thank you, Josh! I definitely think this question is way easier than current independent writing, and the adjustment time helps to finish the test quickly and be less tired.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Hi Josh,
Thank you for simplifying Academic writing! I just received my score- 112 with 29 in the Writing section
This was the only video I referred to while preparing for Academic writing.
Once again, thank you😊
Hey, how long did it take for you to get your TOEFL scores after the test day?
Congratulations and thank you for sharing. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you leave your review at this link - es.trustpilot.com? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!
Thank you, this helps a lot. My biggest problem is spelling mistakes or even typos. For some reason, it is really hard for me to see them in the English text that I wrote even though I know the correct spelling. If anyone has any tricks for that, I will be glad. Working in progress :)
The best way to improve this skill is to practice it. There are many great free typing programs on the internet. Or even using Grammarly will help you improve. The trick is to work on your typing and grammar for between 15-30 minutes every day.
Thanks a lot for responding :)
Hey there, first of all thanks a lot for this great video, it shows that you've went through multiple different ETS questions and answers to spot some good ones as examples.
My question is: are we offered to choose from multiple subjects/questions from a given list or is it a one-shot, single question about a specific subject? The reason why I'm asking this is to see if it's possible to get caught in a subject that we are not very familiar with and have to make up a decent size paragraph with limited knowledge about the subject.
I appreciate the effort!
Hi there and good question. Unfortunately, you can't select the topic, and there is no way to know what topic you will get on a test day.
@@TSTPrep that hurts… thanks for the answer though!
I believe globalization makes our world more and more interconnected. I can emply with confidence that one of the differences of our era is about globalization; what I want to make point of it is this that human being has alot more life assets today by trades, travels and other types of communication than other times of human history. Also it is important to say that globalization do makes societies far more foreign from each other in fact very familiar and connected which we can expect with adoration and peace. But I should remark, not all connections are based with good wells and people of different countries makes effort to gain one sided profits and leave considerable harms to others. Because of this, there must be accepted policies that causes equality and balance of economic power not putting pressure nor colonising.
If anyone could check my answer it will be a significant help for me!
Sir thanks very much for these updates
It's vert easier than the other independent writing task 2
Sir I still appreciate you for these videos
They didn't updates us in our school about these .which tomorrow am writing my TOEFL exam
Thanks very much sir josh
Thank you for commenting. How did your test go?
question- social media influncer can sell any thing they want? your thought?
I strongly feel that social media influencers with a lot of followers have the power to sell their product. In my opinion, this is not a bad think but many influencers in today’s time sell harmful or addictive products without even caring about the consequences the buyers will face. For example, recently a famous influencer secretly partnered with tobacco company and acted like its cool to use tobacco based products. His followers started using this product without even giving it a thought just to act like a cool guy in front of the society. I understand Emily’s view but she is missing another important point. Influencer after becoming famous know that their fame won’t be for long so they just try to make as much as money they can by selling any products, no matter whether it is good or bad. In the end I would say that we should watch these influencers but we must always know of what’s right and wrong and not fall into their trap.
plz rate the response
got 103 in my first test, thank you for the helpful content!!
Happy to hear you have earned the score you needed!
Thanks, Josh, but at 9 minutes - I don't think that sample answer is the answer to the discussion board on the right. I think the sample answer refers to inventions, whereas the discussion board on the right refers to the impact of television. I may be wrong. Your thoughts, please. Btw, thanks for all your great content - much appreciated.
hi Josh! Thank you a lot for the video. I am thinking about subscribing for your Emergency Courses for the TOEFL. Are those updated with these changes around the test? Thank you :)
Thank you for asking and yes, every course video and practice test has been updated to reflect the version of the TOEFL iBT launched on July 26, 2023.
I think the problem in this question will be the time (i think till now it will be not enough to think and write down the answer but still easier than the old format
Thank you for your feedback.
Thank you so much Josh, I think this new way of answering is much easier than the previous one! Please I want to ask if this applies to those taking the test in May, this month?
These changes won't apply till July 26th, 2023, so you'll be taking the current 3-hour version of the test.
@@TSTPrep Thank you so much for the explanation.
You and your guides for speaking and writing were the reason that my speaking score went from 22 to 26 and my writing score went from 23 to 28. I got 113 overall score.
Cant thank you enough 🙏
Hey, how long did it take for you to get your TOEFL scores after the test day?
@@ruchamehta8600 test was on 24 dec, got the result on 29 dec.
Happy to hear that:) Thank you so much for your kind words. It would be a HUGE help if you could leave a review on Trust Pilot - es.trustpilot.com.
Done
Thank you perfect 🙏🏻
Hy Josh, my question is that should the answer be in a paragraph form? and must we add connectives like firstly, secondly and so on when answering or we should just go straight to the points
It should be in paragraph form and also use the transitional phrases you are asking about. Here is a link to an article that has an example of the correct structure. Hope it helps. :)
tstprep.com/articles/toefl/sample-essays-for-the-writing-section-of-the-toefl-test/
OMG!! only 10 minutes?!!!! this is not enough at all!!!
I will take the test in less a month, you are my hope teacher 😢
Thanks for commenting. If you ever want some additional help, you can check out our site: www.tstprep.com :)
I think this is more tricky compared to the independent writing scenario.
Thank you for your feedback.
Hey Josh, I was wondering if we can also give personal examples to support our opinion on the topic or if the examples have to be general. Thank you in advance!
Yes, personal examples are fine as long as you give a clear reason that the example is explaining.