Here's Lauren's info because it couldn't fit into the description: Survivor: Lauren Perk Names: -Recording... -I'll Find You -Silent Protagonist Biography: "The one thing worse than not knowing where you are is not knowing how you got there. While the recent memories-specifically everything about her recent investigation-were relatively clear, it was Lauren's more distant ones that had grown inaccessible ever since she found herself... here. She wasn't even able to recall her last name. But some things about her past, before she got involved in all of this, managed to slip through. Whether it be from anxiety, some psychological disorder, or just a preference, Lauren never muttered a word, barring maybe a few babbles as an infant. To her, however, she never considered it a "disorder", as she had heard the quote "actions speak louder than words" a thousand times in all the movies and books she found herself immersed in. Though her caring parents worried about how she'd function as a mute when she was older, Lauren knew she'd find the right people for her-and she did. Kate Milens-Hayes-funny how she could remember someone else's last name-had been her friend since they were maybe six years old. They first met at the school playground and Kate, feeling sympathy for the poor girl who was swinging along, struck up a conversation, and Lauren was surprisingly receptive. "Hey! Wanna come over and play at my house later? I got a swing-set way bigger than this one!" How could Lauren refuse an offer like that? That swing-set always brought good memories back to Lauren; she was thankful at least that memory stayed. On their aptly-named "swing talks" Kate would go on and out about how she loved exploring the woods of Oakside Park with their soon-to-be mutual friend Carl Ross. Lauren never liked those woods-she'd often etch notes and hand them to Kate to address such. She would never join them on those adventures. One of those days Carl and Kate marched on adventurously through the forests and a bad feeling ran through their guts. They saw something that day, but the memory was gone even a second after it had formed. The two ran back home and tried-and failed-to explain to their parents what had happened. At some point the entire account of the incident must have faded into the recesses of their minds, undiscernable from whether it was true memory or childish paranoia. Those types of things tend to only be remembered by the forest. Yet the feeling of it lingered among those vague periods of history, forever remaining an insidious stain on their minds. If unearthed... well, no point in thinking about that. Having conversations through words on paper became commonplace for Lauren and Kate, at least while in private. Lauren studied sign language, and in their teens Kate began to study it as well-though they couldn't deny something about good old fashioned paper felt warm and homely to them, as it served as the bridge between them in their growing years. In their late teens Kate's mother passed away and the house she belonged to became a burden. At age 17 Lauren, working as a realtor, tried her very best to help Kate sell her house, though they were unable to get it sold perhaps because the property was positioned right within those Oakside forest pines-near the Matheson homestead, no less-and local superstition and fear was rampant. But one day Kate hadn't written back to Lauren. That was alright, perhaps she was busy. But deep within Lauren was a concern of the mental state of not just Kate but also Carl, whom she'd heard rumors was not taking very well to Kate's rejection of the feelings he'd revealed to her prior. She set out towards Kate's home and found it unlocked and empty, but every crevice in her bedroom was filled with mad scrawlings of things Lauren didn't understand-she recognized the handwriting, it was Kate's handiwork no doubt. Then she heard it: a blood-curdling scream-Kate's-leaking in through the open window, echoing from the endless forests she was trapped in. With a camcorder in hand she pushed forward to follow the source. Something was following her the entire time, watching her. She spotted its silhouette on mountains, in the distant woods, sometimes mistaking it for a branch or a stump. She'd hold her hand out and wave to it, hoping it was some person willing to help, but it never once waved back. Lauren found random notes from Kate littered around the woods and the various points of interest within Oakside Park-she'd read them like Kate was still here talking to her. Upon picking one up she'd feel an pang in her chest, like something was heading right for her-and it was getting closer. The thing, suited and tall, grew so oppressive from just its mere existence she was sent spiraling into the woods in and out of consciousness like a panicked sleepwalker. By the time the morning came around she awoke with no sense of direction near Kullman Mining Facility, so she scrambled inside for shelter. Near the outpost she found another sheet of paper-this one wasn't from Kate, but it was instead a missing poster for a little boy... Something else was hunting Lauren inside Kullman: a masked figure in a white hoodie-one with no autonomy of its own, lunging at her like a wild dog. Kate's pages, they all led down here, into the mines. After scrambling to power the lift, she got out of there and ascended above the mountains, now deep within its sharp terrace. She sees a distant radio tower and figures it might be her only chance of relative safety. But as she proceeds further she uncovers that the forests are burning, and the thing is back on her trail. Go. Forward. Please. Her legs almost gave out like they had earlier but the thought of Kate kept running through her mind and in turn kept her running. At the base of the tower she realized her flashlight, the one counter to not just the darkness but her wracking fear, had finally reached its end, and her camcorder which she had desperately clung to-in the hopes of some hallowed soul finding it-was nearly out of batteries as well. And inside? Inside was a series of winding shadowy corridors leading to a room where a man burned alive sat next to his collection of recordings and tapes, which Lauren slotted into the small television next to him. On them... was that Carl's voice? He detailed what he knew about of the disappearance of Charlie Matheson Jr-wasn't that who she saw on that missing poster?-and the following tapes showed his ensuing located at the nearby Matheson farmhouse. Something there wanted him dead, and it was linked to the hell she was experiencing. And from knowing of its presence it had come after her now. She awoke in the destroyed remnants of the same basement shown on the tape. It was with her, lanky and short and barely resembling what was once a normal child, looking down at her with intent just as malicious as it was curious. Then it scrambled off. Someone was crying down here, but it had no relation to that thing. It was Kate's voice, real and true. She had found her best friend. They would be okay now, even if their fates were sealed. She stood on the top of the doorway in hysterics, and Lauren reached out a hand to comfort her, to hug her once more... but whatever was influencing Kate didn't let up its grip. Only Kate in name, it lunged at her once more. Perhaps Lauren's intended destiny was to become like Kate, a subservient slave-or maybe she had just a glimmer of her past self and wanted to end Lauren so she wouldn't that fate wouldn't be brought upon her friend. It didn't matter. A fog submerged over both of them in the struggle, but not one relating to the insidious force that had been watching over them; it was an entirely seperate consciousness with its own goals. Anything past those surface level details are gone now... but Lauren's drive, her determination to find Kate again in whatever this new and twisted world was, it was the only thing keeping her going."
@@alfiewhitestone8676 I'm not very good at designing balanced abilities, but I imagine it'd be the opposite of the Unknown/Ghostface in that looking directly at Slenderman not only fills the screen with static but is detrimental to survivors. Perhaps there could be some side objective of collecting eight random pages while doing the gens that could act on a risk-reward system; the more pages collected in total by survivors, the faster the Watcher is but also the faster gen progress is. Or maybe every 2 or 4 pages collected completes one random generator.
@@ExtraQuestionableContent Hm, mind if I make a video concept for the Watcher for you some day? (Maybe based of Rarithlynx’s video of Slender-Man mixed with Doctor and Ghost-face idk)
Fun Fact: Slenderman is not in Marble Hornets, that story has a monster known as the Operator which is a different creature of the same species who has different powers. However the sheer popularity of Marble Hornets combined with the fact that the two creatures being separate isn't spelled out for the viewer led to Slenderman gaining the powers of the Operator in most depictions of the character.
My perk concept: Killer:The Watcher/Slenderman Perks: •Hex: Forgotten lullaby Cooldown:80 seconds Every time you injure a survivor, then within a radius of 5 (perk level: 1) / 10 (perk level: 3) meters from the survivor, the nearest totem becomes cursed And if any survivor within 8 meters of the totem is within the totem's radius for 15/12/9 seconds, they will fall into madness, thereby revealing their location to the killer for 3 seconds (The effect cannot be repeated on the same survivor within 25 seconds). (The totem can be cleansed to remove this effect from it) •Close observation If there is a generator in your terror radius that is being repaired, then the survivor's skill check becomes more difficult, and if he fails, he will receive "Turmoil" status effect for 30/45/60 seconds (During this effect, healing/repairing generators/cleansing totems will be slower and skill checks will be more difficult.) •Left alone If a survivor within a radius of 16 meters does not have another survivor(s) in his radius for 12/8/5 seconds, then while being chased all his actions will be slower by 8%, and the duration of blinding/stunning on the killer will be reduced by 10%. (If during a chase another survivor appears within the survivor's radius, the effect will not end until the survivor is no longer being chased. Survivor: Lauren Lauren's idea is that after going through many manipulations of Slenderman, she built her plans for surviving alone in such conditions and sharing with other survivors, motivating them to fight for their lives Perks: •Blessing: Wherever I am Charge: one charge for the whole trial Lauren can choose any survivor and give her amulet. The amulet creates a 3/7/10 radius in which any survivors (except Lauren) gain 10% movement speed and 5% healing speed. If Lauren is within the radius of the amulet bearer, they will receive the "Courage" status effect. Also, when a survivor dies, the amulet falls at the place where he died and Lauren can safely pick it up and/ or give it to someone. Lauren can also keep the amulet and survivors within the radius of the carrier will receive the same effects from the amulet + a weakened "courage" effect that will weaken with each survivor who is in the radius, but if Lauren dies with the amulet, then the amulet will disappear from the trial (If Lauren manages to give someone an amulet and she dies, then the amulet will not disappear and even after the death of the wearer, any survivor can pick up this amulet) The "Courage" status effect gives an increase movement speed towards the survivors, and any actions with items (such as toolbox, first aid kit, etc.) will be faster. •Antecedence When Lauren gets into the terror radius, any (PERFORMED) actions reveal the location of the killer for 2/3/4 seconds. •Forced Alienation When Lauren is away from the survivors, she receives a token for each knockout survivor. Each token gives repair speed and healing speed for 1/3/5% (maximum tokens:3). If the survivor returns to a wounded/normal state, then you lose 1 token. If the survivor dies, then you get half of the stats from one token for the entire game. If everyone dies, then Lauren gets half of the stats from one token for each survivor + gets 5% of the movement speed
Update 1:I came up with perks for Lauren Future update: I will start working on the Slenderman ability (The concept is already there, I just need to finalize something) P.s About halfway through my work, I was writing perks for Lauren, but I accidentally refreshed the page and all the changes were reset, so I apologize if there's a clumsy description because I'm terribly tired of writing it.
![Power Scaling Slenderman [NO Scans, Hitchen’s Razor]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/h_4ic-6CU7M/mqdefault.jpg)
Here's Lauren's info because it couldn't fit into the description:
Survivor: Lauren
Perk Names:
-Recording...
-I'll Find You
-Silent Protagonist
Biography:
"The one thing worse than not knowing where you are is not knowing how you got there. While the recent memories-specifically everything about her recent investigation-were relatively clear, it was Lauren's more distant ones that had grown inaccessible ever since she found herself... here. She wasn't even able to recall her last name. But some things about her past, before she got involved in all of this, managed to slip through.
Whether it be from anxiety, some psychological disorder, or just a preference, Lauren never muttered a word, barring maybe a few babbles as an infant. To her, however, she never considered it a "disorder", as she had heard the quote "actions speak louder than words" a thousand times in all the movies and books she found herself immersed in. Though her caring parents worried about how she'd function as a mute when she was older, Lauren knew she'd find the right people for her-and she did.
Kate Milens-Hayes-funny how she could remember someone else's last name-had been her friend since they were maybe six years old. They first met at the school playground and Kate, feeling sympathy for the poor girl who was swinging along, struck up a conversation, and Lauren was surprisingly receptive. "Hey! Wanna come over and play at my house later? I got a swing-set way bigger than this one!" How could Lauren refuse an offer like that? That swing-set always brought good memories back to Lauren; she was thankful at least that memory stayed.
On their aptly-named "swing talks" Kate would go on and out about how she loved exploring the woods of Oakside Park with their soon-to-be mutual friend Carl Ross. Lauren never liked those woods-she'd often etch notes and hand them to Kate to address such. She would never join them on those adventures. One of those days Carl and Kate marched on adventurously through the forests and a bad feeling ran through their guts. They saw something that day, but the memory was gone even a second after it had formed. The two ran back home and tried-and failed-to explain to their parents what had happened. At some point the entire account of the incident must have faded into the recesses of their minds, undiscernable from whether it was true memory or childish paranoia. Those types of things tend to only be remembered by the forest. Yet the feeling of it lingered among those vague periods of history, forever remaining an insidious stain on their minds. If unearthed... well, no point in thinking about that.
Having conversations through words on paper became commonplace for Lauren and Kate, at least while in private. Lauren studied sign language, and in their teens Kate began to study it as well-though they couldn't deny something about good old fashioned paper felt warm and homely to them, as it served as the bridge between them in their growing years.
In their late teens Kate's mother passed away and the house she belonged to became a burden. At age 17 Lauren, working as a realtor, tried her very best to help Kate sell her house, though they were unable to get it sold perhaps because the property was positioned right within those Oakside forest pines-near the Matheson homestead, no less-and local superstition and fear was rampant.
But one day Kate hadn't written back to Lauren. That was alright, perhaps she was busy. But deep within Lauren was a concern of the mental state of not just Kate but also Carl, whom she'd heard rumors was not taking very well to Kate's rejection of the feelings he'd revealed to her prior. She set out towards Kate's home and found it unlocked and empty, but every crevice in her bedroom was filled with mad scrawlings of things Lauren didn't understand-she recognized the handwriting, it was Kate's handiwork no doubt.
Then she heard it: a blood-curdling scream-Kate's-leaking in through the open window, echoing from the endless forests she was trapped in. With a camcorder in hand she pushed forward to follow the source.
Something was following her the entire time, watching her. She spotted its silhouette on mountains, in the distant woods, sometimes mistaking it for a branch or a stump. She'd hold her hand out and wave to it, hoping it was some person willing to help, but it never once waved back.
Lauren found random notes from Kate littered around the woods and the various points of interest within Oakside Park-she'd read them like Kate was still here talking to her. Upon picking one up she'd feel an pang in her chest, like something was heading right for her-and it was getting closer.
The thing, suited and tall, grew so oppressive from just its mere existence she was sent spiraling into the woods in and out of consciousness like a panicked sleepwalker. By the time the morning came around she awoke with no sense of direction near Kullman Mining Facility, so she scrambled inside for shelter. Near the outpost she found another sheet of paper-this one wasn't from Kate, but it was instead a missing poster for a little boy...
Something else was hunting Lauren inside Kullman: a masked figure in a white hoodie-one with no autonomy of its own, lunging at her like a wild dog. Kate's pages, they all led down here, into the mines.
After scrambling to power the lift, she got out of there and ascended above the mountains, now deep within its sharp terrace. She sees a distant radio tower and figures it might be her only chance of relative safety. But as she proceeds further she uncovers that the forests are burning, and the thing is back on her trail. Go. Forward. Please. Her legs almost gave out like they had earlier but the thought of Kate kept running through her mind and in turn kept her running.
At the base of the tower she realized her flashlight, the one counter to not just the darkness but her wracking fear, had finally reached its end, and her camcorder which she had desperately clung to-in the hopes of some hallowed soul finding it-was nearly out of batteries as well. And inside? Inside was a series of winding shadowy corridors leading to a room where a man burned alive sat next to his collection of recordings and tapes, which Lauren slotted into the small television next to him. On them... was that Carl's voice? He detailed what he knew about of the disappearance of Charlie Matheson Jr-wasn't that who she saw on that missing poster?-and the following tapes showed his ensuing located at the nearby Matheson farmhouse. Something there wanted him dead, and it was linked to the hell she was experiencing.
And from knowing of its presence it had come after her now. She awoke in the destroyed remnants of the same basement shown on the tape. It was with her, lanky and short and barely resembling what was once a normal child, looking down at her with intent just as malicious as it was curious. Then it scrambled off.
Someone was crying down here, but it had no relation to that thing. It was Kate's voice, real and true. She had found her best friend. They would be okay now, even if their fates were sealed. She stood on the top of the doorway in hysterics, and Lauren reached out a hand to comfort her, to hug her once more... but whatever was influencing Kate didn't let up its grip. Only Kate in name, it lunged at her once more.
Perhaps Lauren's intended destiny was to become like Kate, a subservient slave-or maybe she had just a glimmer of her past self and wanted to end Lauren so she wouldn't that fate wouldn't be brought upon her friend. It didn't matter. A fog submerged over both of them in the struggle, but not one relating to the insidious force that had been watching over them; it was an entirely seperate consciousness with its own goals. Anything past those surface level details are gone now... but Lauren's drive, her determination to find Kate again in whatever this new and twisted world was, it was the only thing keeping her going."
Sounds dope
That was a long one, but a good lore. I loved every second while reading it. Great job on the music as well!
What is the power of the Watcher?
@@alfiewhitestone8676 I'm not very good at designing balanced abilities, but I imagine it'd be the opposite of the Unknown/Ghostface in that looking directly at Slenderman not only fills the screen with static but is detrimental to survivors. Perhaps there could be some side objective of collecting eight random pages while doing the gens that could act on a risk-reward system; the more pages collected in total by survivors, the faster the Watcher is but also the faster gen progress is. Or maybe every 2 or 4 pages collected completes one random generator.
@@ExtraQuestionableContent Hm, mind if I make a video concept for the Watcher for you some day?
(Maybe based of Rarithlynx’s video of Slender-Man mixed with Doctor and Ghost-face idk)
His mori is just him making the survivor wither away after looking at his nonexistent face
survivor menu music is very nice
Slenderman sure would be an interesting license.
Huh, the sounds in the terror radious remind me of FAITH.
Fun Fact: Slenderman is not in Marble Hornets, that story has a monster known as the Operator which is a different creature of the same species who has different powers. However the sheer popularity of Marble Hornets combined with the fact that the two creatures being separate isn't spelled out for the viewer led to Slenderman gaining the powers of the Operator in most depictions of the character.
i love spreading misinformation
Seriously underrated
Awesome stuff
My perk concept:
Killer:The Watcher/Slenderman
Perks:
•Hex: Forgotten lullaby
Cooldown:80 seconds
Every time you injure a survivor, then within a radius of 5 (perk level: 1) / 10 (perk level: 3) meters from the survivor, the nearest totem becomes cursed
And if any survivor within 8 meters of the totem is within the totem's radius for 15/12/9 seconds, they will fall into madness, thereby revealing their location to the killer for 3 seconds (The effect cannot be repeated on the same survivor within 25 seconds).
(The totem can be cleansed to remove this effect from it)
•Close observation
If there is a generator in your terror radius that is being repaired, then the survivor's skill check becomes more difficult, and if he fails, he will receive "Turmoil" status effect for 30/45/60 seconds
(During this effect, healing/repairing generators/cleansing totems will be slower and skill checks will be more difficult.)
•Left alone
If a survivor within a radius of 16 meters does not have another survivor(s) in his radius for 12/8/5 seconds, then while being chased all his actions will be slower by 8%, and the duration of blinding/stunning on the killer will be reduced by 10%.
(If during a chase another survivor appears within the survivor's radius, the effect will not end until the survivor is no longer being chased.
Survivor: Lauren
Lauren's idea is that after going through many manipulations of Slenderman, she built her plans for surviving alone in such conditions and sharing with other survivors, motivating them to fight for their lives
Perks:
•Blessing: Wherever I am
Charge: one charge for the whole trial
Lauren can choose any survivor and give her amulet.
The amulet creates a 3/7/10 radius in which any survivors (except Lauren) gain 10% movement speed and 5% healing speed.
If Lauren is within the radius of the amulet bearer, they will receive the "Courage" status effect.
Also, when a survivor dies, the amulet falls at the place where he died and Lauren can safely pick it up and/ or give it to someone.
Lauren can also keep the amulet and survivors within the radius of the carrier will receive the same effects from the amulet + a weakened "courage" effect that will weaken with each survivor who is in the radius, but if Lauren dies with the amulet, then the amulet will disappear from the trial
(If Lauren manages to give someone an amulet and she dies, then the amulet will not disappear and even after the death of the wearer, any survivor can pick up this amulet)
The "Courage" status effect gives an increase movement speed towards the survivors, and any actions with items (such as toolbox, first aid kit, etc.) will be faster.
•Antecedence
When Lauren gets into the terror radius, any (PERFORMED) actions reveal the location of the killer for 2/3/4 seconds.
•Forced Alienation
When Lauren is away from the survivors, she receives a token for each knockout survivor. Each token gives repair speed and healing speed for 1/3/5% (maximum tokens:3).
If the survivor returns to a wounded/normal state, then you lose 1 token.
If the survivor dies, then you get half of the stats from one token for the entire game.
If everyone dies, then Lauren gets half of the stats from one token for each survivor + gets 5% of the movement speed
Update 1:I came up with perks for Lauren
Future update: I will start working on the Slenderman ability (The concept is already there, I just need to finalize something)
P.s About halfway through my work, I was writing perks for Lauren, but I accidentally refreshed the page and all the changes were reset, so I apologize if there's a clumsy description because I'm terribly tired of writing it.