I had a close friend that suffered a similar mistreatment. His response was to fashion a sign..." Freinds welcome anytime...family by appointment only." This explains (to me) the depth of his feelings. Betrayal by family is the worst...
Thanks! You’re having a lot of longer stories lately which I like. I have terrible insomnia and listen to them at night. I put them on a playlist. I also have a playlist for the videos that are shorter and sometimes listen to them in the day. I really hope your channel grows. You deserve more subs.
Amazing story, awsome job Dwayne. It's cool to see another writer hit the stage. I hope to hear more from you man, mabey work on a project with ya if you'll have me. Shout out to Love Lost Cronicals for bringing in this talent. You all are amazing 👏
Long distance relationships are the same thing as playing Russian roulette with 6 bullets. 😂❤ But for real this story was heart wrenching or maybe gut wrenching is a more accurate description.
Not 5 minutes in, an important life lesson is given: it doesn't matter if you strike first, you don't turn away from your opponent. You ground and pound till he makes no sound.
Dad says that Sebastian is hurting more than Raine. Yet he says that Raine will never be able to look another man who knows what happened in the eye and it might have been a mercy if Sebastian had killed him. Tell me how those two ideas can co-exist.
Might sound weird but consider it like this the brother was the attacker who for the most part has to live with it versus the person who needs to learn to get past it. It the same logic for people cheating versus the person that cheated. When people find out you cheated it carry on to other relationships on the other hand the pers9n cheated on need to heal from the previous relationship. It's no one caring for you versus you not wanting people to care for you.
One thing I appreciate about this author is that I missed the obvious foreshadowing. This is good 👍 I don’t want to spoil it but it’s the main topic for the last few minutes of this episode and has several connotations including both joy and loss depending on point of view and of course makes one wonder about the potential for the next episode. Well written yet much character development must be sacrificed with so many named characters. With the existence of a previous story that references witchkin, it must be assumed the story is about to break wide open in the next chapter. 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
No, thats a common misconception: not everything is fair game after a first punch in thrown. Self defense is only valid with reasonable force to stop the aggression. In real life, Sebastian would face attempted murder charges. He would be so lucky to be able to plea for aggravated assault.
The older brother that beat his younger brother nearly to death should have, at the very least, been arrested and jailed. An assault like that can't possibly go unpunished.
The fact his father did nothing makes him trash. He didn't protect his son at all. Like what do you think would have happened when he found out after graduation..... Just because he graduated it doesn't make the anger less
23 minutes into the story it has my attention, but I am asking myself. Why has the police not been informed of this severe beating? This is an attempt of manslaughter and the doctors and hospitals are bound to report such acts of violence now I will return and see if there’s any mention of it.
I don’t understand why it was Ruth who was constantly babysitting Tabitha? Why weren’t Grace & Tom not the ones babysitting Tabitha the most or entirely? Grace was basically the architect of Chelsea & Sebastian getting together & it was Tom who chose Sebastian, the Betrayer, over Rain who was utterly Betrayed! Didn’t Tom choose Sebastian cuz of Tabitha & being a Grandfather?Since they BOTH chose Chelsea, Sebastian & their first grandchild, THEY SHOULD BE THE ONES BABYSITTING THE MOST IF NOT ENTIRELY! I’m sure Ruth loved beings Grandmother for the first time & had no problem babysitting from time to time, but the burden of full time babysitter should not have fallen upon her but Grace & Tom!!
My, congratulations on another great story and thank you to D Wayne I am curious if he is perhaps the Author is from around the same area where I was born I know exactly all of the areas discussed and Roads talked about in this story. I am from Portsmouth, Ohio and this is the general area. Congratulations again on a great story.🙏
OMG! Rain, as a name, seemed too hippy-dippy for Kentucky. Then I heard the name Ryan spoken *once*…… DWIGT! The editor”s” failed when they chose to replace Ryan with Rian (like the man who destroyed Luke Skywalker). But spell check doesn’t like alternative spellings, so it was changed to Rain. Just like in the office when Michael Scott’s “Michael Scarn” story was written and spoken out loud. Everyone loved it. Until everyone realized that Michael Scarn’s sidekick’s name was originally Dwight. But since he misspelled that particular time, it remained as DWIGT and then everyone in the office got quiet. The sidekick was the bumbling fool! Holy crap! It happens again latter in the story. Shannon is actually Sean/Shawn towards the end of the story past the 2 hr mark. I should be an editor.
@@MikeSVZ I edited my statement. I explained how Sean/Shawn became Shannon. It was well past the 2 hr mark when I heard Shawn/Sean used in lieu of Shannon, and made the connection.
First of all Dad was first class Moron second wife did i need to say, but in the end i figure out why and i would be very disappointed if in the second part Chastel don't play a game "run Sebastian run" Chelsea can join too 🤣Honestly it would be a shame if we don't see some kind o retribution just to turn other cheek is not in human or this story nature.
Of all the stories I've listened to, here... This is the worst, unrealistic bile-rendering BS. So many points made are from a deep-seated sociopathic mentality and the author needs his head checked! The DA's office would determine if charges were pressed or not, depending on the severity. The older brother needs to be locked up and the father needs his teeth kicked in to suggest the brother should have finished him off rather than what was done! I am disgusted!
This is not defending Sebastian or Chelsea, but leaving your young girlfriend by herself, while being at university, and having a long distance relationship, is a recipe for disaster. Loneliness, lack of maturity, attraction, and comfortability, for a young lady, and the available men around her. A lot of pressure for a lonely, and obviously immature lady And Sebastion is caught between his obvious attraction to his brothers girlfriend, and the betrayel, that has occurred. She should have broken up with Rain, but that is easier said, then done. Fascinating story, so far
Interesting story, The kind of man who would cheat with his brothers fiancée, and the damn fiancée who would cheat are beneath contempt. Kind of a recurrent theme in some of these stories usually making me pass on them. But. I absolutely disagree and abhor the “pagans”. Good name for them, for from times of antiquity until now this is a source of great evil. Evil. It leads to unspeakable cruelties and torture followed by death. Not a “urban fantasy”, but a real nightmare. One last thing…..Monsters are real werewolves(Dogman, Sasquatch,Rakes, Wendigo, even giants, and other horrors lurk in what the Bible describes as “The dark places of the Earth”. They are no joke, monsters are real. There are also people who claim to be werewolves that can transform from human form and been witnessed doing so opposed to Dogman who stays in its werewolf form 24/7. I like the story, but be aware certain evil elements are being minimized.
Yeah...well....its fiction. And these are creatures of fiction. How good the fiction is depend on how author weave the world building and place constraint upon the the world. Regarding the cryptids, I think some witchkin family hunt them. Regarding pagans n whatnot, again, it depend how author wanna depict it as long as hes not using mary sue/gary stu format. This is why constantine movie is so interesting. Same with Pope Exorcist. They are certainly better than The Exorcist movie in terms of creature settings.
I’ve listened to this wonderful story many times & I REALLY REALLY REALLY wish there will/could be a part two!!! I want his family to know what he truly is,(they won’t have to be killed either) what he has become & for Kai to put the F’N fear of God in Sebastian & more! Possibly even having a round two where Sebastian truly did NOT have a chance in hell! I also want Tabitha to know that it was her cousin Hunter Jr who was the werewolf that saved her! I don’t know the dynamics between werewolves & Kai’s new world, but I’d like to see Hunter Jr & Tabitha end up together(I know it’s illegal & incest, but can’t help but wanting them to be together?)
I had a close friend that suffered a similar mistreatment. His response was to fashion a sign..." Freinds welcome anytime...family by appointment only." This explains (to me) the depth of his feelings. Betrayal by family is the worst...
@@hardtopindown7781 there's a saying you can pick your friends but family is
The family that accept the older brother's cheating and beating of the younger brother, they are despicable.
Thanks! You’re having a lot of longer stories lately which I like. I have terrible insomnia and listen to them at night. I put them on a playlist. I also have a playlist for the videos that are shorter and sometimes listen to them in the day. I really hope your channel grows. You deserve more subs.
I do the same, much better than sleeping tablets
Loads of love for you.
Wow, who needs enemies when you have family like this
My grandfather always said; “You pick your friends, but take pot luck on relatives!”
@@LarryDeclue-sl5rlmy grandmother said you can choose your friends, not your family. The meaning is close for yours and mine.
Thanks you Wayne, wonderful story so far. Unique. And thank you LLC for publishing it.
Loads of love for you!!!
Amazing story, awsome job Dwayne. It's cool to see another writer hit the stage. I hope to hear more from you man, mabey work on a project with ya if you'll have me. Shout out to Love Lost Cronicals for bringing in this talent. You all are amazing 👏
Sebastian needs jail time. Tom better keep an eye on his 304 second wife. Chelsea is an evil 304. Grace is a complete AH.
Agreed!
Long distance relationships are the same thing as playing Russian roulette with 6 bullets. 😂❤
But for real this story was heart wrenching or maybe gut wrenching is a more accurate description.
Finally, a paranormal story. I am enjoying the plot. I have never understood how a sibling could backstab the other like that.
It's....a tale as old as old Testament.
You can do without family but not a good friend!
Not 5 minutes in, an important life lesson is given: it doesn't matter if you strike first, you don't turn away from your opponent. You ground and pound till he makes no sound.
I dug out my partly written story of 2 wraiths finding each other, imagination is a wonderful way to create ❤😂😂😂😊
American God's vibe really enjoying it
Oh chelsie has nerve !!! Id have screamed at the top of my lungs and not given her one word and thrown anything i could grab at her jeeze the nerve!!
57 minutes in.... This is not going anywhere Near the direction I thought it would. I am confusicated and puzzled and thoroughly enjoying it.😆
Dad says that Sebastian is hurting more than Raine. Yet he says that Raine will never be able to look another man who knows what happened in the eye and it might have been a mercy if Sebastian had killed him. Tell me how those two ideas can co-exist.
Might sound weird but consider it like this the brother was the attacker who for the most part has to live with it versus the person who needs to learn to get past it. It the same logic for people cheating versus the person that cheated. When people find out you cheated it carry on to other relationships on the other hand the pers9n cheated on need to heal from the previous relationship. It's no one caring for you versus you not wanting people to care for you.
One thing I appreciate about this author is that I missed the obvious foreshadowing. This is good 👍
I don’t want to spoil it but it’s the main topic for the last few minutes of this episode and has several connotations including both joy and loss depending on point of view and of course makes one wonder about the potential for the next episode.
Well written yet much character development must be sacrificed with so many named characters. With the existence of a previous story that references witchkin, it must be assumed the story is about to break wide open in the next chapter.
5 stars
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We need a part three. Something has to be done with grace..
These stories are absolutely fantastic I love the science fiction part
Please post the second part soon. I love this storyline
Will there be a part two?
What a great way to start my Saturday morning! Thanks Wayne! A long one as well!! 👍👍👍
I swear, part 2 better have some damn retribution..
Great story loved it nice ending
This one is so good, would love to see it in multiple parts, looks like there are a few years worth of jump we could explore!
Hi. No time to comment. Gotta' get to part two 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I wish they would've fell apart it wasn't fair for them to be happy with their betrayal!
Love these types of story.
This does a great job of explaining PTSD
No, thats a common misconception: not everything is fair game after a first punch in thrown. Self defense is only valid with reasonable force to stop the aggression. In real life, Sebastian would face attempted murder charges. He would be so lucky to be able to plea for aggravated assault.
Loved this story
Cheating story with furries? Count me in! 😊
Yeah, that son would be disowned under penalty of homicide.
Love this one! So interesting! ❤❤
This is a cold blooded story! Brother, father and stepmother are garbage!!! I’m glad this is fiction and a good story.
Yo can we more stories like this. My imagination is on fire
This is a fabulous story.
ok i enjoyed this story been 10 minutes and still waiting for next part lol
Good morning LLC from east Tennessee.
I hope everyone has a great Saturday.
Good Afternoon Tennessee from Cumbria
The older brother that beat his younger brother nearly to death should have, at the very least, been arrested and jailed. An assault like that can't possibly go unpunished.
Welcome to KY. Not how we do things.
Not in the South!
After a certain point the police will press charges without the victims consent. Especially when the assault is that brutal.
The fact his father did nothing makes him trash. He didn't protect his son at all. Like what do you think would have happened when he found out after graduation..... Just because he graduated it doesn't make the anger less
Had it been my brother he better move to Siberia and pray I don't find him 😊
Interesting story!
Part two please
Where is part 2??? When??? 😮😮😮
Good story but i think it needs another part
This is some MtA shenanigans.
Covered a paranormal part and cryptid part of the story
23 minutes into the story it has my attention, but I am asking myself. Why has the police not been informed of this severe beating? This is an attempt of manslaughter and the doctors and hospitals are bound to report such acts of violence now I will return and see if there’s any mention of it.
I enjoy tales of witchery ❤😂😂.
The cheaters don't pay for what they did?!?!?!!?!?
Sab and chels shoul have been convicted for battery and attempted murder
Wow love The story 👏👏👏👏👏❤️ paranormal………..😂
Going to kindle later to buy the ebook😊
The damn father is just as bad
Yes I agreee
And definitely the father's new wife too.
O Lordy you are not kidding.
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I don’t understand why it was Ruth who was constantly babysitting Tabitha? Why weren’t Grace & Tom not the ones babysitting Tabitha the most or entirely? Grace was basically the architect of Chelsea & Sebastian getting together & it was Tom who chose Sebastian, the Betrayer, over Rain who was utterly Betrayed! Didn’t Tom choose Sebastian cuz of Tabitha & being a Grandfather?Since they BOTH chose Chelsea, Sebastian & their first grandchild, THEY SHOULD BE THE ONES BABYSITTING THE MOST IF NOT ENTIRELY! I’m sure Ruth loved beings Grandmother for the first time & had no problem babysitting from time to time, but the burden of full time babysitter should not have fallen upon her but Grace & Tom!!
My, congratulations on another great story and thank you to D Wayne I am curious if he is perhaps the Author is from around the same area where I was born I know exactly all of the areas discussed and Roads talked about in this story. I am from Portsmouth, Ohio and this is the general area. Congratulations again on a great story.🙏
Is this part 3 of a continuing story?
Dang a beat down so early 😕 its sounds like its gonna quite a tale and this less than 5 minutes 😳
Gulf Shores is the city near Mobile Alabama.
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Is part 2 already out?
Yes, here is the link for part 2: th-cam.com/video/45-O6rpb2Mc/w-d-xo.html
@@LostLoveChronicles thank you!
Their dad seems to really suck at first notice ...
This has something to do with the one the gods destroyed
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I wish there was a part two
Here is the link for part 2 :- th-cam.com/video/45-O6rpb2Mc/w-d-xo.html
OMG! Rain, as a name, seemed too hippy-dippy for Kentucky. Then I heard the name Ryan spoken *once*……
DWIGT! The editor”s” failed when they chose to replace Ryan with Rian (like the man who destroyed Luke Skywalker). But spell check doesn’t like alternative spellings, so it was changed to Rain. Just like in the office when Michael Scott’s “Michael Scarn” story was written and spoken out loud. Everyone loved it. Until everyone realized that Michael Scarn’s sidekick’s name was originally Dwight. But since he misspelled that particular time, it remained as DWIGT and then everyone in the office got quiet. The sidekick was the bumbling fool!
Holy crap! It happens again latter in the story. Shannon is actually Sean/Shawn towards the end of the story past the 2 hr mark.
I should be an editor.
Rain is what bothering you? Not the brother named Shanon?
@@MikeSVZ I edited my statement. I explained how Sean/Shawn became Shannon. It was well past the 2 hr mark when I heard Shawn/Sean used in lieu of Shannon, and made the connection.
The name could also be spelled Rayne.....
Forget tabitha they should've gotten thrown out of the family!
First of all Dad was first class Moron second wife did i need to say, but in the end i figure out why and i would be very disappointed if in the second part Chastel don't play a game "run Sebastian run" Chelsea can join too 🤣Honestly it would be a shame if we don't see some kind o retribution just to turn other cheek is not in human or this story nature.
The ads on this video are a bit too pervasive.
Great story but he should only connect with Shannon and Melissa!
I'll bet Grace is a cheater, dad needs to divorce asap as she's incredibly devisive. Also if I were the dad I'd ostracize the other son and the GF.
Of all the stories I've listened to, here... This is the worst, unrealistic bile-rendering BS. So many points made are from a deep-seated sociopathic mentality and the author needs his head checked! The DA's office would determine if charges were pressed or not, depending on the severity. The older brother needs to be locked up and the father needs his teeth kicked in to suggest the brother should have finished him off rather than what was done! I am disgusted!
This is not defending Sebastian or Chelsea, but leaving your young girlfriend by herself, while being at university, and having a long distance relationship, is a recipe for disaster. Loneliness, lack of maturity, attraction, and comfortability, for a young lady, and the available men around her. A lot of pressure for a lonely, and obviously immature lady
And Sebastion is caught between his obvious attraction to his brothers girlfriend, and the betrayel, that has occurred. She should have broken up with Rain, but that is easier said, then done. Fascinating story, so far
2nd!! Lol
First😊
another no sense🤣🤣🤣
Interesting story, The kind of man who would cheat with his brothers fiancée, and the damn fiancée who would cheat are beneath contempt. Kind of a recurrent theme in some of these stories usually making me pass on them. But. I absolutely disagree and abhor the “pagans”. Good name for them, for from times of antiquity until now this is a source of great evil. Evil. It leads to unspeakable cruelties and torture followed by death. Not a “urban fantasy”, but a real nightmare. One last thing…..Monsters are real werewolves(Dogman, Sasquatch,Rakes, Wendigo, even giants, and other horrors lurk in what the Bible describes as “The dark places of the Earth”. They are no joke, monsters are real. There are also people who claim to be werewolves that can transform from human form and been witnessed doing so opposed to Dogman who stays in its werewolf form 24/7. I like the story, but be aware certain evil elements are being minimized.
Yeah...well....its fiction. And these are creatures of fiction. How good the fiction is depend on how author weave the world building and place constraint upon the the world.
Regarding the cryptids, I think some witchkin family hunt them.
Regarding pagans n whatnot, again, it depend how author wanna depict it as long as hes not using mary sue/gary stu format.
This is why constantine movie is so interesting. Same with Pope Exorcist. They are certainly better than The Exorcist movie in terms of creature settings.
13 mins in….3 sets of commercials….STOP!!!!
Man, I hate that shizz.
I’ve listened to this wonderful story many times & I REALLY REALLY REALLY wish there will/could be a part two!!! I want his family to know what he truly is,(they won’t have to be killed either) what he has become & for Kai to put the F’N fear of God in Sebastian & more! Possibly even having a round two where Sebastian truly did NOT have a chance in hell! I also want Tabitha to know that it was her cousin Hunter Jr who was the werewolf that saved her! I don’t know the dynamics between werewolves & Kai’s new world, but I’d like to see Hunter Jr & Tabitha end up together(I know it’s illegal & incest, but can’t help but wanting them to be together?)
Another most excellent story. I’m board with the usual stories of betrayal. These are… different. Another double thumbs up from me.
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19:05 simple. The AP brother doesnt love his younger sibling.
0:33 LDR? In usa? Thats not wise...
Not wise on planet earth.
15:15 wow....the dad has been blue pilled....