Good content, but your read of the script is too fast. There aren't long enough pauses between words and especially between different sentences. You also sound rushed and slightly out of breath, kind of like you're frantic. It would be a lot easier for viewers to understand the info you're trying to communicate if you slow down your delivery and pause longer in between thoughts so we can digest before we move on to the next idea.
Good content, but your read of the script is too fast. There aren't long enough pauses between words and especially between different sentences. You also sound rushed and slightly out of breath, kind of like you're frantic. It would be a lot easier for viewers to understand the info you're trying to communicate if you slow down your delivery and pause longer in between thoughts so we can digest before we move on to the next idea.