IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task2-Lesson-8 Problem and Solution essay

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  • @cemaltemiz1567
    @cemaltemiz1567 ปีที่แล้ว +65

    Full essay:
    In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
    What do you think are the causes of this?
    What solutions can you suggest?
    It is true that the behaviour of school pupils in some parts of the world has been getting worse in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
    In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the way young people behave at school nowadays. Firstly, modern parents tend to be too lenient or permissive. Many children become accustomed to getting whatever they want, and they find it difficult to accept the demands of teachers or the limits imposed on them by school rules. Secondly, if teachers cannot control their students, there must be an issue with the quality of classroom management training or support within schools. Finally, children are influenced by the behaviour of celebrities, many of whom set the example that success can be achieved without finishing school.
    Student behaviour can certainly be improved. I believe that the change must start with parents, who need to be persuaded that it is important to set firm rules for their children. When children misbehave or break the rules, parents should use reasonable punishments to demonstrate that actions have consequences. Also, schools could play an important role in training both teachers and parents to use effective disciplinary techniques, and in improving the communication between both groups. At the same time, famous people, such as musicians and football players, need to understand the responsibility that they have to act as role models to children.
    In conclusion, schools will continue to face discipline problems unless parents, teachers and public figures set clear rules and demonstrate the right behaviour themselves.

  • @ominaumarova9220
    @ominaumarova9220 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    In ChatGPT's opinion, this essay is band 7.5. I truly love this teaching technique. Thanks Simon.

    • @mortonlv3490
      @mortonlv3490 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I feel like Chatgpt is underscoring essays by around 0.5-1.0

    • @ominaumarova9220
      @ominaumarova9220 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@mortonlv3490 Yes, I also think so)

    • @NahHaha
      @NahHaha 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ChatGPT gives me score of 90 of my essay, but my teacher only gives me 61😢

  • @juhinars6146
    @juhinars6146 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Simon is my Saviour! Thanks man for getting me through ielts

  • @Ali-jg4og
    @Ali-jg4og ปีที่แล้ว +2

    holy moly thanks for useful video,just ur ideas are only woww amazing u are linking them naturally

  • @gulnozaeshnazarova1985
    @gulnozaeshnazarova1985 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Very useful for every ielts candidate.Thank u

  • @dariusyonatannama1032
    @dariusyonatannama1032 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi Simon, can we answer directly the question in paragraph 1 by combining all points?

  • @RizaCadizza
    @RizaCadizza ปีที่แล้ว

    it's really helpfull. Im waiting for new vidio

  • @umarbekboriyev6938
    @umarbekboriyev6938 ปีที่แล้ว

    No comment. Very useful

  • @NebulaNotesyt
    @NebulaNotesyt 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good day sir, Nicky from India, i m student of general ielts but always face problems in reading,pls sir , suggested me reading reading ,how can I do good

  • @f.tahmasbi
    @f.tahmasbi 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    practical 👏🏻👏🏻🙏🏻

  • @TendaiChukucha
    @TendaiChukucha 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I'm a student may you help in writing task2 essays

  • @niloohoushmand
    @niloohoushmand ปีที่แล้ว

    where can i prepare worksheet paper? on what website?

  • @sarvarbekjoraqulov-zs5lf
    @sarvarbekjoraqulov-zs5lf ปีที่แล้ว

    Gr8t ❤

  • @f.tahmasbi
    @f.tahmasbi 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • @МафтунаАминбоева-з6ю
    @МафтунаАминбоева-з6ю 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It was so helpful thank uuu👍👍👍

  • @meegrace599
    @meegrace599 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank You...

  • @abinguyen2405
    @abinguyen2405 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    is this causes and solutions essay?

  • @RNRezamohammadi
    @RNRezamohammadi ปีที่แล้ว

    📖🙏

  • @fame119
    @fame119 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I know