1. dont be too arrogant/snobby (be kind/thoughtful while mentioning things such as awards and achievements) 2. mentioning wrong school/getting facts wrong about school (make sure you are accurate) 3. being too negative (you should be inspirational and fuzzy) 4. make sure your story tells about who you are (like your personality, how you act, etc.)
If you want to get rejected, write an Essay about how your Grandmother used to fight with your grandfather as you feel that the Mountains of California are the worst part of MIT and you are the perfect student for NYU because you are the only person in this world who can shout loudly while grandparents are fighting.
sugasweetv raay. First, u go to whatever teacher u want them to represent for you, and if they oblige then send ur resume. Normally I would only need 1 or 2.
sugasweetv deadline for turning in ref letters are different for every college but should be posted on their website if you look it up. Regarding writing it, teachers usually like to be informed 3 weeks in advance.
Shardool Gokhale thats awesome! You could take an angle saying that being deaf was actually an advantage or something idk (to appeal to the fact that you’re hardworking or something)
Thank you for your videos. I show them to my students and use them in my lessons! Keep them coming!!!! Also, I write decent letters of recommendations but would love you to create a video helping teachers write better recommendations!
Hi Brooke, I have an an essay that I'm worried might start out too sad. (just first paragraph really). I do end on a positive note, but my counselor said it could be seen as too sad because "I don't come back to it." Would you be willing to read this briefly? I could comment the intro below. PLEASE LET ME KNOW EITHER WAY. If that's not something you do, I totally understand, but please let me know if this is something you'd be willing to do. Much Appreciated, Charlotte
Yes I love the college essay roasting videos!!!! Can’t stop binge watching them on your channel, please make more they’re really interesting and helpful :)
ive seen hours upon hours of videos on the college essay. this is by far the most helpful, because it teaches me how to fix the things in my essay, rather than just avoiding them
Your videos are so helpful!!! I’m in the summer after sophomore year and I’ve been watching several of these videos a day as I prepare for the SATs, starting a mock trial team at my school, getting great grades and writing a great essay.
Hey SuperTutorTV can you do the following videos in the future? - Difference between Early Decision, Early Action & Regular Decision - Letter of Recommendations - Common App vs Coalition App
Jeremiah Mano ED IS binding. You can apply to as many private early action schools (I’m pretty sure only one public). If u don’t apply EA at some schools like tulane u won’t get in so apply EA if possible. EA also lets u know if u get in earlier. RD is just regular. Some schools also have EDII, which u can apply to if u don’t get into ur first ED. Hope that helps.
@@you2teuber1285 Woah amazing! Thank you so much Drew Stein! I see my GC (Guidance Counselor) use these terms and I was one of those students who didn't know what they were talking about and didn't interrupt to ask them what is all that EA, ED & RD is.
@@jeremiahmano8179 You going to get in don't worry, UF is a good behind school, got one of the best debate teams in the Country, ranked high for education and research for medical and overall THE BEST School in Florida (only rivals for 1st depending on who you ask is FSU & UCF)
sugasweetv One of the things I’m doing that really helps me calm down is to remember that I just need to try my hardest, and that even if I don’t get into my top schools, if I’m applying to schools I GENUINELY want to go to, I WILL get into the school that’s right for me.
The reasons that I have for wishing to go to Harvard are several. I feel that Harvard can give me a better background and a better liberal education than any other university. I have always wanted to go there, as I have felt that it is not just another college, but is a university with something definite to offer. Then too, I would like to go to the same college as my father. To be a "Harvard man" is an enviable distinction, and one that I sincerely hope I shall attain. April 23, 1935 John F. Kennedy
I absolutely love your videos and your personality! Your videos are so helpful and interesting. I’m here watching videos to show my son who’s a jr in high school
lol my early action is due tmrw and i left everything to the last minute cuz i truly was just in writers block, if anyone even sees this and gives me some sort of feedback that would be great lol. Basically rn im not sure if i should keep on writing this but, my essay is about the time where i was in this stage at a modelling competition in a local mall at Jakarta my home city.i talked about my nerves, how the audience was loud, cheery, and for an introvert, this felt like the Superbowl. i also talked about how the building up of how i didnt feel like i could win amongst all these other talented girls. but i talked about at the crowd there was my parents watching me with a smile, my dad mouthing the words “thats our girl” and then after my short anecdote I jumped to talking about growing up in Jakarta i struggled with my self identity of being a mix kid (i know vey cliché) but long story short i wanted to highlight how growing up, my self worth was so small and i didnt have much friends but that small moment where i won the competition made me feel at total shock, i couldnt believe my ears when they called out my name. By then my confidence grown and moving to a new school opened so many doors for me, i was able to grow, my first language was english so a lot of kids used to make fun of me but growing older i was able to speak indonesian better, and talk to more ppl and make genuine relationships. Take up leadership roles and becoming the head of arts for student council, and other cool stuff i never thought i could do before, all this happened because i truly finally believed in myself, and that whole stage moment only gave me this little push to strive to find myself and become mature as a person.. then i think i might end with after that day of winning i come home with my whole family enjoying my favorite soup noodles ever from my home town’s chinese restaurant l go a lot since i was a kid (lol maybe not add that it doesnt relate to everything im saying) but hopefully this makes sense, theres some parts i left out which is in the essay but kinda hard to put it all in this comment. If its not good enough or doesnt rlly relate to prompt one on identity, background, or talent ig im screwed lmao pls be dead honest, i know so much of these parts are cringe, i rlly dont wanna sound like a snob cuz thats just not who i am
Wow. I love torturing myself after submitting my application and wondering if I'll even get accepted. I just have a question, what if the essay prompt asked to talk about a personal experience and not about accomplishments or explaining why you would be a great student?
I ended up writing it about the time I went to an event where the keynote speaker was Brandon Wolf, the pulse nightclub shooting survivor. And I wrote how it impacted my life.
I mean achieving something is also personal experience...and I think your essay topic is pretty good? At least I’m interested if I see that as the topic. Depends on what u write tho.
Zachary Quinn I know you’re not asking for my opinion and you’re asking for hers, but to be completely honest that might come across as too privileged if it’s not written in the right way
@@km0146 you're probably right, although personally I feel like I could convey this in a positive and good way it in a wsy by describing the different struggles I was faced with, what frustrated me the most( not being able to express myself) and the way I confronted and overcame my struggles and then to ultimately write about what what keeps me going forward . Could you or someone let me know if they think this is a good topic? I just want to write on something I have a true passion for.
@@zacharyquinn2144 I think that would be a good essay. It being a "privilege" shouldn't matter to them, even though it was, but their is nothing wrong with that. Write about it.
@i ou1! really! I'm shocked haha everyone who read my essay said they've never seen someone write an essay about this topic. I have my essay finished and I wrote about a specific trip I had to france, and how I prepared for the trip by learning about the language and culture and I wrote about all the issues I was faced with in between and how I overcame them. I wrote about a Parisian man that gave me insight on what it takes to be successful and stuff along those lines. I guess it may not be original but I'm not really applying to very competitive schools so I think my essay is pretty good for the schools I'm looking at.
*technically speaking here, just trying to help you be culturally correct 8:21 Yin (white part) is meant to represent the brighter side, while the Yang (black part) is meant to represent the darker side
So I have a 3.44 unweighted gpa (IB). I go to the top highschool in my state. I have a weighted gpa of 3.77. I have 1D, 4 C's, and a mix of As and Bs. How do my grades look to you. I'll take any raw feedback possible.
I’m by no means an expert, but I’m writing my essay on being a lesbian, and I took it to a few people who said it’s really good, so here’s my advice: I think it’s a great topic and one that has the potential to reveal a lot about you. But the biggest part is using your journey as a transgender person and your unique experience to show how it has shaped you and made a better, stronger person. Don’t just say “I’m trans,” say “BECAUSE I’m trans, I’ve learned to be strong/accepting/resilient” But it’s a really good essay with a lot of potential to show emotion and growth.
There are actually not 2, but 3 topics you should avoid. Religion, politics and SEX. No matter how tolerant people are nowadays, it is always a little risky to consider your gender as an applicable topic, especially in your COLLEGE essay.
@@paurec6345 you don't have to avoid sex, it's not a controversial issue. It's only controversial if you politicize it. That's like saying don't talk about race.
mellymelly84 I thought they were holistic? Combined with a 33ACT and a overall solid application with extenuating circumstances would u think they’d take it with a grain of salt
Since you are not strong on the academic side, you could get in if you demonstrate really strong characteristics in other categories, for example, being a really good athlete and having national recognition, or participating in impactful research, etc, and having a really good overall application, with stellar recommendation letters and compelling essays. Otherwise, it would be unlikely for a student with a 33 act and 3.5 uw gpa to get in, because that is really below their average student academics. If you still have time (I know this response is kinda late), I would recommend you to, if possible, improve your gpa and test scores (a 35 act would be really good). A strong academic profile for top-tier schools would be something like 4+ weighted gpa, 34-36 act, 750+ sat subject tests, and maybe some medals in competitions. (btw that is not a gpa, im assuming you got a 3.52 )
@@tiarragreen5913I have two parts of my self talking to each other that form my self its a short intro to my paper and they pop in during other parts of the paper every so often
Emaan Toseef I got into the colleges I wanted, so pretty well😂 I wouldn’t have had the nerve to send it if it wasn’t for this reddit post by college admissions people basically saying “I’m more likely to let you in if you write about your hatred of cilantro than if you write about your volunteer work” lol
Hey Brooke! I really enjoy your videos but I found the part where you talked about ailments to be problematic. I totally understand the importance of focusing on what you learned from the experience rather than the hardship itself, but the way you phrased it came across that only life-threatening illnesses are life defining, which is definitely not the case. Your tone just minimized the consequences of non life threatening illnesses which actually alter lives. I hope you don’t continue to perpetuate the idea that chronic illnesses, especially pain, are not valid. Just some food for thought! :)
Only you can determine whether something is life defining. I am sharing from my experience what I've seen that doesn't work so well or makes people seem to be making things that are more minimal discomforts out to be their "toughest challenges" in life which can come off as awkward or make people seem like whiners. Please take everything with a grain of salt. Even the toughest topics to pull off can sometimes make for a good essay in some circumstances-- I'm speaking to my experience and the majority of essays that come across my desk in this category.
im a start acting deaf and write about how I became deaf at the ages of 16 and the hardship I went through and how it made me a stronger person LMFAO. btw don't get offended its just a joke.
1. dont be too arrogant/snobby (be kind/thoughtful while mentioning things such as awards and achievements)
2. mentioning wrong school/getting facts wrong about school (make sure you are accurate)
3. being too negative (you should be inspirational and fuzzy)
4. make sure your story tells about who you are (like your personality, how you act, etc.)
john mayer thanku sir
5. Slipping in a $20 bill
Basically, don't be yourself and try to be as manipulative as possible.
Tysmm
Legend
Someone: I have written the best possible essay ever
Brooke: I'm going to end this man's career
Steven Yang it’s mine. It’s my career she ruined.
X2
@@maddy5827 how lol?
If you want to get rejected, write an Essay about how your Grandmother used to fight with your grandfather as you feel that the Mountains of California are the worst part of MIT and you are the perfect student for NYU because you are the only person in this world who can shout loudly while grandparents are fighting.
Thank you for this advice. It will be very useful.
I can honestly see some college admitting someone who had the creativity, the boldness, and frankly, the balls to do that 😂
And mind what words you capitalize.
When you postpone submitting your college essays so that you can get more advice from SupertutorTV’s new videos
Now do a 4 ways to do great in your College Essay
This ^^^^
do the opposite of this
Amoxyl big brain
Please!!!
Can you please make a video on teacher recommendation letters? Thank you!💜
sugasweetv raay. First, u go to whatever teacher u want them to represent for you, and if they oblige then send ur resume. Normally I would only need 1 or 2.
Tim Bat thank You!! Do you happen to know what the deadline is?
sugasweetv deadline for turning in ref letters are different for every college but should be posted on their website if you look it up. Regarding writing it, teachers usually like to be informed 3 weeks in advance.
10:53 Some questionable physics there.
She is saying, Don’t be the 3rd derivatives!
YES
Integral Man your name, though
Lol how ironic
@@Majestic469 Glad you appreciate it :)
Jerk
Lmaooooo
Thanks for the tips, now I know how to ruin my essay like a pro 👍
I might write about how being deaf affected my life but also made me a stronger person.
I was born deaf btw
Shardool Gokhale thats awesome! You could take an angle saying that being deaf was actually an advantage or something idk (to appeal to the fact that you’re hardworking or something)
Shardool Gokhale definitely talk about what features of you were enhanced or utilize
I think that's definitely a great topic! It's very unique, best of luck!
I got my college essay checked by my English teacher, helped me so much
Got the notification as I wrote my common app essay for the fifth time. This video came at an ironically perfect time:)
cami, sameeee
@@stephanieaka8566 so hard to write can anyone help instagram @zia3.15
Thank you for your videos. I show them to my students and use them in my lessons! Keep them coming!!!! Also, I write decent letters of recommendations but would love you to create a video helping teachers write better recommendations!
Hi Brooke, I have an an essay that I'm worried might start out too sad. (just first paragraph really). I do end on a positive note, but my counselor said it could be seen as too sad because "I don't come back to it."
Would you be willing to read this briefly? I could comment the intro below. PLEASE LET ME KNOW EITHER WAY. If that's not something you do, I totally understand, but please let me know if this is something you'd be willing to do.
Much Appreciated,
Charlotte
I think for point 2, you should be stressing the fact that we shouldn’t duplicate the “why us” essays in the first place
Agree there. If the essay can be copied and pasted, it probably isn’t specific enough for a why us essay.
Yes I love the college essay roasting videos!!!!
Can’t stop binge watching them on your channel, please make more they’re really interesting and helpful :)
I’m applying to Rice ED but Im not feeling good about getting in rn. They only take 15 percent Ed so I’m feeling sad rn.
Drew Stein at least by applying early, even if you get deferred, you can still try to get in RD
Alexa Williams except their regular decision acceptance rate is 8 percent LOL
@@you2teuber1285 rice is 15% not early I thought?
Drew Stein i’m applying to rice ed too! best of luck my dude, just do your best and hopefully we’ll both attend :)
yo did you get in?
ive seen hours upon hours of videos on the college essay. this is by far the most helpful, because it teaches me how to fix the things in my essay, rather than just avoiding them
Your videos are so helpful!!! I’m in the summer after sophomore year and I’ve been watching several of these videos a day as I prepare for the SATs, starting a mock trial team at my school, getting great grades and writing a great essay.
Hey SuperTutorTV can you do the following videos in the future?
- Difference between Early Decision, Early Action & Regular Decision
- Letter of Recommendations
- Common App vs Coalition App
UF GANG
Jeremiah Mano ED IS binding. You can apply to as many private early action schools (I’m pretty sure only one public). If u don’t apply EA at some schools like tulane u won’t get in so apply EA if possible. EA also lets u know if u get in earlier. RD is just regular. Some schools also have EDII, which u can apply to if u don’t get into ur first ED. Hope that helps.
@@you2teuber1285
Woah amazing! Thank you so much Drew Stein! I see my GC (Guidance Counselor) use these terms and I was one of those students who didn't know what they were talking about and didn't interrupt to ask them what is all that EA, ED & RD is.
@@jeremiahmano8179
You going to get in don't worry, UF is a good behind school, got one of the best debate teams in the Country, ranked high for education and research for medical and overall THE BEST School in Florida (only rivals for 1st depending on who you ask is FSU & UCF)
Can you please make a video on how to manage college app stress? Thank you!
sugasweetv One of the things I’m doing that really helps me calm down is to remember that I just need to try my hardest, and that even if I don’t get into my top schools, if I’m applying to schools I GENUINELY want to go to, I WILL get into the school that’s right for me.
It’s not stress if you actually enjoy writing your essays :)
Dragoon GT I’m fine with the essays...it’s just the thought of having to get everything before the deadline!!
Alexa Williams thank you! 💜
could you please make some videos about questbridge/questbridge essays?
Really wished you would've done this earlier
Dani G exactly I turned in my dream school app a day before this went up
Hay Dayyy
Chloe93 woah that early
Bruh same
Video starts at 1:25
Idk why im watching this when im already in college
i'm in the 7th grade....
really i'm feeling nervous.
The reasons that I have for wishing to go to Harvard are several. I feel that Harvard can give me a better background and a better liberal education than any other university. I have always wanted to go there, as I have felt that it is not just another college, but is a university with something definite to offer. Then too, I would like to go to the same college as my father. To be a "Harvard man" is an enviable distinction, and one that I sincerely hope I shall attain.
April 23, 1935
John F. Kennedy
I absolutely love your videos and your personality! Your videos are so helpful and interesting. I’m here watching videos to show my son who’s a jr in high school
Great video! You are very knowledgable about the college application process, unlike others I know
lol my early action is due tmrw and i left everything to the last minute cuz i truly was just in writers block, if anyone even sees this and gives me some sort of feedback that would be great lol. Basically rn im not sure if i should keep on writing this but, my essay is about the time where i was in this stage at a modelling competition in a local mall at Jakarta my home city.i talked about my nerves, how the audience was loud, cheery, and for an introvert, this felt like the Superbowl. i also talked about how the building up of how i didnt feel like i could win amongst all these other talented girls. but i talked about at the crowd there was my parents watching me with a smile, my dad mouthing the words “thats our girl” and then after my short anecdote I jumped to talking about growing up in Jakarta i struggled with my self identity of being a mix kid (i know vey cliché) but long story short i wanted to highlight how growing up, my self worth was so small and i didnt have much friends but that small moment where i won the competition made me feel at total shock, i couldnt believe my ears when they called out my name. By then my confidence grown and moving to a new school opened so many doors for me, i was able to grow, my first language was english so a lot of kids used to make fun of me but growing older i was able to speak indonesian better, and talk to more ppl and make genuine relationships. Take up leadership roles and becoming the head of arts for student council, and other cool stuff i never thought i could do before, all this happened because i truly finally believed in myself, and that whole stage moment only gave me this little push to strive to find myself and become mature as a person..
then i think i might end with after that day of winning i come home with my whole family enjoying my favorite soup noodles ever from my home town’s chinese restaurant l go a lot since i was a kid (lol maybe not add that it doesnt relate to everything im saying)
but hopefully this makes sense, theres some parts i left out which is in the essay but kinda hard to put it all in this comment. If its not good enough or doesnt rlly relate to prompt one on identity, background, or talent ig im screwed lmao
pls be dead honest, i know so much of these parts are cringe, i rlly dont wanna sound like a snob cuz thats just not who i am
Thanks for the tips of what to do on my essay. Will definitely do all the things you mentioned
Please do a video on “what’s a good GPA?” Thank you 😊
4.0 is a good GPA
Adi meaning 90% average taking no “on level” classes?
nothing, gpa's are different for every school and for the types of classes you take
Wow. I love torturing myself after submitting my application and wondering if I'll even get accepted. I just have a question, what if the essay prompt asked to talk about a personal experience and not about accomplishments or explaining why you would be a great student?
What’s your question? There’s nothing wrong with getting a different prompt
@@Majestic469 "Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it."
I ended up writing it about the time I went to an event where the keynote speaker was Brandon Wolf, the pulse nightclub shooting survivor. And I wrote how it impacted my life.
I mean achieving something is also personal experience...and I think your essay topic is pretty good? At least I’m interested if I see that as the topic. Depends on what u write tho.
I love this! ❤️ thank you
kinda dumb question, does my common app and coalition essay need a title?
It’s not a dumb question, I also don’t know haha
Ari No most times you shouldnt waste the words on a title unless it adds an important elemeent
does it make a difference if the letter of recommendation is from an alumna of the school?
I'd say it's a good thing
Well, if they think you’re a good fit for the school and they went to it, that’s a really good sign.
So I recent lost eyesight in my left eye it was very hard for me to sorta heal from that mentally . Should I not write about that?
Brooke seems to be so so smart and cool.
Would writing about my passion for learning a language and the hardships I faced while traveling abroad be a good essay?
Zachary Quinn I know you’re not asking for my opinion and you’re asking for hers, but to be completely honest that might come across as too privileged if it’s not written in the right way
@@km0146 you're probably right, although personally I feel like I could convey this in a positive and good way it in a wsy by describing the different struggles I was faced with, what frustrated me the most( not being able to express myself) and the way I confronted and overcame my struggles and then to ultimately write about what what keeps me going forward . Could you or someone let me know if they think this is a good topic? I just want to write on something I have a true passion for.
@@zacharyquinn2144 I think that would be a good essay. It being a "privilege" shouldn't matter to them, even though it was, but their is nothing wrong with that. Write about it.
@@Jaynicole03 okay I will! Thanks :)
@i ou1! really! I'm shocked haha everyone who read my essay said they've never seen someone write an essay about this topic. I have my essay finished and I wrote about a specific trip I had to france, and how I prepared for the trip by learning about the language and culture and I wrote about all the issues I was faced with in between and how I overcame them. I wrote about a Parisian man that gave me insight on what it takes to be successful and stuff along those lines. I guess it may not be original but I'm not really applying to very competitive schools so I think my essay is pretty good for the schools I'm looking at.
why Does she look like pennywise in the thumbnail
Srivishnu Janakiraman she looks like pennywise in every thumbnail now that I think of it💀
She does that🤷🏻♀️
but what if your life is straight up boring
Thank god you posted this before ed and rd. I only ever get your videos after the fact
Thank you so much for your videos. Is there a way I could email you with more specific questions?? I'd really appreciate it.
*technically speaking here, just trying to help you be culturally correct 8:21
Yin (white part) is meant to represent the brighter side, while the Yang (black part) is meant to represent the darker side
I wish she could read my essay😅
My Essay***😂😂😂
@@dysonschmidt3813 oh yeah🤭
How do we sign up for her online tutoring?
@@Majestic469 go to her website (the one she mentioned in the beginning)... there's an option there for SAT/ACT prep
So I have a 3.44 unweighted gpa (IB). I go to the top highschool in my state. I have a weighted gpa of 3.77. I have 1D, 4 C's, and a mix of As and Bs. How do my grades look to you. I'll take any raw feedback possible.
Watching this video with courage
reasons are too vague
11 minutes of pain
Brooke what’s your opinion on writing an essay on being transgender? How do you think I should use it to help me rather than use it as a cliche?
I’m by no means an expert, but I’m writing my essay on being a lesbian, and I took it to a few people who said it’s really good, so here’s my advice: I think it’s a great topic and one that has the potential to reveal a lot about you. But the biggest part is using your journey as a transgender person and your unique experience to show how it has shaped you and made a better, stronger person. Don’t just say “I’m trans,” say “BECAUSE I’m trans, I’ve learned to be strong/accepting/resilient”
But it’s a really good essay with a lot of potential to show emotion and growth.
Alexa Williams thanks Alexa‼️
Yeah I think I’m going to write how it changed my perspective on life and why I’m glad it happened to me
It’s a good topic, but just don’t get POLITICAL and you will do great 👍
There are actually not 2, but 3 topics you should avoid. Religion, politics and SEX. No matter how tolerant people are nowadays, it is always a little risky to consider your gender as an applicable topic, especially in your COLLEGE essay.
@@paurec6345 you don't have to avoid sex, it's not a controversial issue. It's only controversial if you politicize it. That's like saying don't talk about race.
9:47 😆
I’m super stressed out
Is a 88/100 gpa an automatic disqualification to colleges.
No
If you’re applying to Harvard, yes.
mellymelly84 I thought they were holistic? Combined with a 33ACT and a overall solid application with extenuating circumstances would u think they’d take it with a grain of salt
Since you are not strong on the academic side, you could get in if you demonstrate really strong characteristics in other categories, for example, being a really good athlete and having national recognition, or participating in impactful research, etc, and having a really good overall application, with stellar recommendation letters and compelling essays. Otherwise, it would be unlikely for a student with a 33 act and 3.5 uw gpa to get in, because that is really below their average student academics. If you still have time (I know this response is kinda late), I would recommend you to, if possible, improve your gpa and test scores (a 35 act would be really good). A strong academic profile for top-tier schools would be something like 4+ weighted gpa, 34-36 act, 750+ sat subject tests, and maybe some medals in competitions. (btw that is not a gpa, im assuming you got a 3.52 )
For my essay I'm doing something completely out of the box. How would I know it is
Informal what
@@tiarragreen5913I have two parts of my self talking to each other that form my self its a short intro to my paper and they pop in during other parts of the paper every so often
so technically they break the fourth wall
@@thatartsyphoenix1665 did it work??
5th way: Suck at writing like me.
is type one diabetes a worthy enough ailment ?
A How-To
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I know a few people who will have trouble with the first one.
Huh. I _think_ I didn't blow my essays? I wrote about country music...
Emaan Toseef I got into the colleges I wanted, so pretty well😂 I wouldn’t have had the nerve to send it if it wasn’t for this reddit post by college admissions people basically saying “I’m more likely to let you in if you write about your hatred of cilantro than if you write about your volunteer work” lol
Emaan Toseef thanks💙😊
third
Hey Brooke! I really enjoy your videos but I found the part where you talked about ailments to be problematic. I totally understand the importance of focusing on what you learned from the experience rather than the hardship itself, but the way you phrased it came across that only life-threatening illnesses are life defining, which is definitely not the case. Your tone just minimized the consequences of non life threatening illnesses which actually alter lives. I hope you don’t continue to perpetuate the idea that chronic illnesses, especially pain, are not valid. Just some food for thought! :)
Only you can determine whether something is life defining. I am sharing from my experience what I've seen that doesn't work so well or makes people seem to be making things that are more minimal discomforts out to be their "toughest challenges" in life which can come off as awkward or make people seem like whiners. Please take everything with a grain of salt. Even the toughest topics to pull off can sometimes make for a good essay in some circumstances-- I'm speaking to my experience and the majority of essays that come across my desk in this category.
Totally understand. No hard feelings!
Get on tic tok
Working on it.
Fourth
im a start acting deaf and write about how I became deaf at the ages of 16 and the hardship I went through and how it made me a stronger person LMFAO.
btw don't get offended its just a joke.
Am I the only person in middle school watching this
1st
Brag, self promote
Show don’t tell
Down to earth
Don’t exaggerate
Don’t inflate
More straightforward and relatable
I don’t even need to study for anything, I just find Brooke attractive.
yammmit cringe
kanye sethwonder toe Thank you
I think this is the wrong channel for you
Dragoon GT It seems like it’s the right one.
Alice Rodríguez What? Compliments?