I love whatever a tale has so much twisting and that the ones betrayal getting the justified karma in the end,now that's a great story thxx LLC for uploading this short story 😀
Detained and arrests aren't the same thing. If the department arrested him without evidence. Then they just openee themselves to a huge lawsuit for false imprisonment. Since at best her claims would be nothing more the hear say
I’m sorry, do you want the list of man arrested on a woman’s word alone in alphabetical order or in chronological order? Either way, it will take you a few days to do over the names
Court does not operate that way. Wife would never be convicted on the evidence without a trial and and would not be sentenced on the same day as a verdict. The judge does not decide the case a jury does Where is the jury???? The father is a cruel and deceitful man, not much of a father, I pity the child to have two selfish mean parents who think just of their vengeance and not about their child.
Anybody who listening to this story should have seen this coming from the start. Kind of hoping that this story didn’t come to this ending. Although better that the son is still alive then dead.
I apologize ahead as this is going to be a harsh review but that stems from my bluntness and not actual disdain. This had all the potential to be a great story and I am sure the idea and outline are still great, but this was a mess. Scenes and even conversations within scenes also have what you could think of as timelines and these were mostly botched. All of this could have been avoided by simply reading the story aloud before giving the final stamp of approval. It should be apparent immediately to the author. You could also say if the author had done that simple action and not noticed, well, that’s pretty clear the author is just copying other authors and is not really suited to write.
I don't know what country does stories supposed to be written about but in the United States prosecutor has to prove guilt you do not have to prove your innocence even if you can't show where you were doesn't matter they have to show that you were at the crime scene they have to prove guilt I don't know why you're in court like this my lawyer would tear up my new one did be a civil suit and a big check coming to me
I love whatever a tale has so much twisting and that the ones betrayal getting the justified karma in the end,now that's a great story thxx LLC for uploading this short story 😀
OMG 😂😂😂 ❤❤she got played and did not see this ending, No Megan keep your mouth shut or you will be soup mix 😂😂😂
Another excellent story…And The Soup Maker in all his glory…It keeps on getting better
Detained and arrests aren't the same thing.
If the department arrested him without evidence. Then they just openee themselves to a huge lawsuit for false imprisonment. Since at best her claims would be nothing more the hear say
w00t w00t! I love when the soup maker makes an appearance 😁👍
What a crappy lawyer, no evidence, and she didn’t it get dismissed??? Sounds like bs to me!!!!
Excellent story! Love those twists and turns.
Very clever plot with brutal revenge. Nice one.
His lawyer could have done better
El Pozolero for the win!
I love the soup maker. He gets stuff done.
What does soup maker mean?
What an ending. The soup maker appears
I just started listening and deciding whether to keep listening.- this did it for me 😂
Good story.
18 minutes in and I already love this, good shit LLC
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Who wrote this? There is no evidence. They wouldn't arrest him on just her word.
The hell they wouldn't.
I’m sorry, do you want the list of man arrested on a woman’s word alone in alphabetical order or in chronological order? Either way, it will take you a few days to do over the names
Oh yea?
Thats naive of you.
Happily Saturday LLC fans...
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wow enjoying this😊😊😊😊,it's cool
Wait... What exactly was her mistake here? Did she cheat or she just got a lover or?
Billy Batson huh? Love a good Easter Egg. Sh, nope can't give it away 😉. Again good job with the story
Shazam, how’s it gonna work out?
I knew you would catch it
Good one
A twist 😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤
Court does not operate that way. Wife would never be convicted on the evidence without a trial and and would not be sentenced on the same day as a verdict. The judge does not decide the case a jury does Where is the jury???? The father is a cruel and deceitful man, not much of a father, I pity the child to have two selfish mean parents who think just of their vengeance and not about their child.
Anybody who listening to this story should have seen this coming from the start. Kind of hoping that this story didn’t come to this ending. Although better that the son is still alive then dead.
The soup man appears😂😂😂
Editor's where are you? Isn't it a given that once pronounced guilty and sent to jail for life she shouldnt be given anything from the house.
The soup-maker has been in heavy rotation lately
It has become trite.
Would rather hear about souping than the regular simping in these stories
@@Xinmyhead The MGTOW clown that cried simp removed all meaning and then one day, a simp ate him.
I apologize ahead as this is going to be a harsh review but that stems from my bluntness and not actual disdain.
This had all the potential to be a great story and I am sure the idea and outline are still great, but this was a mess. Scenes and even conversations within scenes also have what you could think of as timelines and these were mostly botched. All of this could have been avoided by simply reading the story aloud before giving the final stamp of approval. It should be apparent immediately to the author. You could also say if the author had done that simple action and not noticed, well, that’s pretty clear the author is just copying other authors and is not really suited to write.
Appreciate your review, I guess we need to work harder to improve. But I give you my word. We will get better.
Don’t like the ending. Don’t like the actions taken by the ex-husband either. No wonder the wife get sole custody.
AWESOME BABY 😂😅😊
I don't know what country does stories supposed to be written about but in the United States prosecutor has to prove guilt you do not have to prove your innocence even if you can't show where you were doesn't matter they have to show that you were at the crime scene they have to prove guilt I don't know why you're in court like this my lawyer would tear up my new one did be a civil suit and a big check coming to me
Not even superheroes are safe from name stealing, really?😊😊 Shazam😅
This is dumb. The father is the criminal and nothing she did nothing to warrant his reaction. She was right all along about the father.
Dammit man….😂😂😂😂
And I don’t appreciate the Shazam reference, Billy Barton is not a proper name for the AP
Got it no more Shazam AP'S
Brutal but he got money average Joe can just dream to pull this off.....
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Yes they brought her soup
42:01 oh please tell me the ex husband pulled off a great justice to his ex!! lol
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