瘂弦〈如歌的行板〉-給冷淡生活一點點溫柔之必要

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @NorisRoberts
    @NorisRoberts 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for your invitation. I just saw your dissertation and presentation at TED, I was moved by your words. I am also a lawyer, but like you I preferred to dedicate myself to my great passion which is writing. I found that sharing is the best way to convey my message of peace, harmony and love. As a poet and writer, and this you must know, sometimes what I write causes controversy because not everyone has the same point of view, but I feel the obligation to express myself. It seems that we share mutual ideals and destiny caused us to cross paths.

    • @2046
      @2046  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for such a rich appreciation of comments, I also subscribe to your channel. You have recorded poetry videos over the years, I admire you very much.

  • @林怡暄-n3j
    @林怡暄-n3j 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    诗中出现了19个【之必要】,与诗人的另一首诗《秋歌-给暖暖》和里爾克的《嚴肅的時刻》都有著同樣的重複,這是為了讓閱讀者加深印象,顯示了重複的【必要性】。
    【音樂銜接的變化】第一段尾句沒有之必要,而第二段的開頭銜接了第一段的尾句。我感覺許多的作文,文章等也是如此做法,它會製造懸念讓讀者有讀下去的慾望。
    【意義上的衝突】是意義上的肯定而每個有的句子都沒有前因後果,沒有遞進的手法,但有許多衝突,感覺會更接近於生活中發生的事。生活一定是起伏不定的,生活時常大起大落,影片末提到生活上的必要与不必要,發人深思。生活上,親情必要,學習必要,獨處必要。反之,無用社交不必要,庸人自擾不必要,阿諛奉承不必要。