A good story and a surprising awareness of galactic leaders. The one thing they did not understand that Earth could have been their worse enemy even without the weapons they were capable of making.
Very very good story that I enjoyed allot. Only one suggestion tho, the story was obviously composed by a computer and it showed in the narration. The lack of punctuation is obvious in the pauses, delays and miss-pronunciation of words. Punctuation is the key to a good story, all you have to do is get any book and look for the positioning of commas, full stops, start and stopping of paragraphs etc etc. Again very good story well done.
The story was excellent but I noticed that the Ambassador was described as dark skinned but presented as light skinned. Nice try, Author. Shame the illustrator did not pay attention.
You assume colors are based on human standards. Example the color red is chosen for humans , but the same color red is referred as the color black. Further example humans from different countries call a lemon a Lime
@@danieldevault716 what are you talking about? This is English being written as English. These stories usually have protaganists who are not WASPs so seeing one as the illustration shows that the author and illustrator are not on the same wavelength. If it is AI, changing skin pigments is easy.
This story has intrigued me, no doubt. Anyone want to become my sales rep on Jupiter? I have a great range of anti-gravity footwear.😊🦶🏻The rep has to find beings with feet….
That was refreshingly different.
No "humans are deathworlders" or "humans are week" or "humans are freaks".
That was really nice.
This was a different type of story. I must say, I enjoyed it
Cheers from the Netherlands!
Love this story. Very cool.
I am glad to see a story that paints humans at their best rather than their worst. This would be a good universe to incorporate into a novel.
I really like this story. It is different from most other stories. Blessings
Me 2.
Well done, a very good story. Thanks.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
Really nice, I'll be watching for more. Thanks 😊
Love the story. Liked, Subed, Shared. Rewatched.
I enjoyed the story .. thank you
A good story and a surprising awareness of galactic leaders. The one thing they did not understand that Earth could have been their worse enemy even without the weapons they were capable of making.
Good one, nice narration. Enjoyed 😊🌹👌
Great story please keep it up
Enjoyed this story
Nice
Very very good story that I enjoyed allot. Only one suggestion tho, the story was obviously composed by a computer and it showed in the narration. The lack of punctuation is obvious in the pauses, delays and miss-pronunciation of words. Punctuation is the key to a good story, all you have to do is get any book and look for the positioning of commas, full stops, start and stopping of paragraphs etc etc. Again very good story well done.
The story was excellent but I noticed that the Ambassador was described as dark skinned but presented as light skinned. Nice try, Author. Shame the illustrator did not pay attention.
The illustrator is ai
And later on, a dark skinned female in a white suit appears.
You assume colors are based on human standards. Example the color red is chosen for humans , but the same color red is referred as the color black. Further example humans from different countries call a lemon a Lime
@@danieldevault716 what are you talking about? This is English being written as English. These stories usually have protaganists who are not WASPs so seeing one as the illustration shows that the author and illustrator are not on the same wavelength. If it is AI, changing skin pigments is easy.
It sounded like a decent premise, but the AI reading miscues kept derailing my immersion. Let's hear you read it please!
Captioning software needs tweaking, too. It is jarring at times.
This story has intrigued me, no doubt. Anyone want to become my sales rep on Jupiter? I have a great range of anti-gravity footwear.😊🦶🏻The rep has to find beings with feet….
Somebody’s gotta share this with Vladimir Putin.
too many commercials