hmm.. not to a predator... to a parasite ....as the parent becomes the predator no longer having any reason to guard the den... only to hunt for those that preys on ther packs young or weak ones.. be neat with a story like this but instead of the guy badging his way in... the gate guard is informed to look behind him seeing the street silently fill with loads of other former parents all keeping to shadows and corners , as he is informed all the surveillance been cut... so no one will know he leet them in ,it will look like the hacked that to , only... if he doess it that it means the monster wont be warned... and all the former parents now turned predators with no other goal in life then to hunt monsters would realy realy like to get to him smoothly... no fuss.. no one else gets hurt , future would been victims is spared , civilization is purged of a parasite and the growing network of hunters... gets retribution... for those that no longer hade a voice.. and most of all... those that would been killed for standing in the way... still lives hehehe serial killers and other sociopaths is after all parasites hiding in ther societies... as they never stand a chance agenst someone that they cant trick or miss lead even lees so to a gathering pack that catched the 'scent' of ther background
Seems to me young one that you should write a story, I would listen to it. I am old and my eyesight is poor. I find much joy in this channel since I find it very difficult to read, I only read now when I have to not for pleasure.
aye , cant lie.... if some parasite for a decrepit pretentious 'me so something' killed any of my close ones... specially if tough times forced them to resort to the more 'un appreciated' lines of work... i'd also go predator on any and all if i found out killed them... reminds me of a movie where the rich kid sates his sadist inclinations by seducing middle income girls only to then rape and abuse them tells the dad to one that 'he is out of his reach' or 'above justice' or such in the dads face outside the court.... only for the dad to pull a gun and end him with one between the eyes and the rest of the mag in the parasite for a rich kids chest.. after all , the social contract only applies when both parties respect it.
The only thing he possibly did wrong was end it to quickly when the bastard deserved to suffer more. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, but hell will prey for mercy in the face of a father's vengence.
I'm reminded of a real life incident. Cops caught the guy that murdered this guy's daughter and were flying him back to stand trial. The father pit on a coat and hat then staked out the corridor of the airport he expected the cops to bring the guy through, pretending to talk at a pay phone. Sure enough the cops walk the perp through and the father puts a bullet through the bastard's brain and surrenders immediately. At his trial the judge let the father walk, saying that it was highly unlikely he'd ever kill again.
I went after my daughter's ex twice with a baseball bat because he harassed her and made her cry. (Calmer minds physically kept me from hitting him.) Can't imagine how far I would go if someone killed her (or one of my granddaughters).
hmm... a nice plottwist would have been, when he enters the room and seeing the Girl beating the asshole to pulp^^ followed by a line like "sorry for the interruption, seems like youre were faster than me and having fun" "We can share him if you want :D He is still alive"
I joined the police after leaving the army, I could name a couple of dozen predators walking around free who deserve that kind of treatment. Obviously I won't, but I have to admit as a father with a daughter I was tempted.
Agro is going way too quick with it. He’s been releasing near daily videos about the story but the author is doing a chapter every 3 days. He should stagger them more so he doesn’t run out
Shot to the groin, shot both knees then a shot between the eyes, is way too kind?? I know eye for an eye etc is tempting but you don’t want to become like the killer. Just take away their subscription to breathing and call it a day. 😊
@@MrTiberus1701normally i would agree with you efficiency and all that. however as someone with no kids but a family i care about deeply i would have done much worse to the SOB if they fell into this situation. i fear what i would do do if it was my child.
Excellant story and one of best executions of story telling by the auther and narrator on this channel. Sci-fy space operas are fun but sometines it's good to get down to the grizzle.
the true predators are those that makes an effort to slake ther blood thirst by delivering some karma to all the pretentious monsters excusing ther parasitic sadism one way or another they hunt for ther species sake.. not ther personal desires...
@@PoldaranOfDalaran also common swear words, only to be replaced by equally common and harder to say words that only _sound_ like swear words. Also, many generic brand names and other similar words are replaced by a compound word or pair of words that describes the function of instead of just using the already established word for it (e.g. "bleach" becomes "cleanwhite", "band-aids" become "healing stickers", etc). The aforementioned receives bonus points if the replacement name is confusing and pretends to be something else entirely with the same function.
Just goes to show that disposing of worthless bimbos is dangerous work, especially when you got assholes wandering around projecting their own daughters onto them as they blindly pursue their completely warped sense of justice. I wonder what Shamus would do if it turned out that the "victim" actually knew she was going to die and consented beforehand?
That is what a Father does when he loses his little girl to a predator, hunts it down and PUTS it Down!
hmm.. not to a predator... to a parasite ....as the parent becomes the predator no longer having any reason to guard the den... only to hunt for those that preys on ther packs young or weak ones..
be neat with a story like this but instead of the guy badging his way in... the gate guard is informed to look behind him seeing the street silently fill with loads of other former parents all keeping to shadows and corners , as he is informed all the surveillance been cut... so no one will know he leet them in ,it will look like the hacked that to , only... if he doess it that it means the monster wont be warned... and all the former parents now turned predators with no other goal in life then to hunt monsters would realy realy like to get to him smoothly... no fuss.. no one else gets hurt , future would been victims is spared , civilization is purged of a parasite and the growing network of hunters... gets retribution... for those that no longer hade a voice..
and most of all... those that would been killed for standing in the way... still lives hehehe
serial killers and other sociopaths is after all parasites hiding in ther societies... as they never stand a chance agenst someone that they cant trick or miss lead even lees so to a gathering pack that catched the 'scent' of ther background
Seems to me young one that you should write a story, I would listen to it.
I am old and my eyesight is poor. I find much joy in this channel since I find it very difficult to read, I only read now when I have to not for pleasure.
Yeah. Don't mess with a Father. If they can't save their kid, they will make sure no one can save you either
As a father, don't think the man did a thing wrong to the monster.
aye , cant lie.... if some parasite for a decrepit pretentious 'me so something' killed any of my close ones... specially if tough times forced them to resort to the more 'un appreciated' lines of work... i'd also go predator on any and all if i found out killed them...
reminds me of a movie where the rich kid sates his sadist inclinations by seducing middle income girls only to then rape and abuse them tells the dad to one that 'he is out of his reach' or 'above justice' or such in the dads face outside the court.... only for the dad to pull a gun and end him with one between the eyes and the rest of the mag in the parasite for a rich kids chest.. after all , the social contract only applies when both parties respect it.
The only thing he possibly did wrong was end it to quickly when the bastard deserved to suffer more. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, but hell will prey for mercy in the face of a father's vengence.
@@truekurayami My daughters ex boyfriend who broke her jaw learned that lesson the hard way.
I'm reminded of a real life incident. Cops caught the guy that murdered this guy's daughter and were flying him back to stand trial. The father pit on a coat and hat then staked out the corridor of the airport he expected the cops to bring the guy through, pretending to talk at a pay phone. Sure enough the cops walk the perp through and the father puts a bullet through the bastard's brain and surrenders immediately. At his trial the judge let the father walk, saying that it was highly unlikely he'd ever kill again.
@@robertschumacher2707 I remember watching that on the News, and it was in Georgia if I am not mistaken.
I went after my daughter's ex twice with a baseball bat because he harassed her and made her cry. (Calmer minds physically kept me from hitting him.) Can't imagine how far I would go if someone killed her (or one of my granddaughters).
if someone even harmed my little brother i would make their life pain, and i feel you on that one mate
hmm... a nice plottwist would have been, when he enters the room and seeing the Girl beating the asshole to pulp^^
followed by a line like "sorry for the interruption, seems like youre were faster than me and having fun"
"We can share him if you want :D He is still alive"
I joined the police after leaving the army, I could name a couple of dozen predators walking around free who deserve that kind of treatment.
Obviously I won't, but I have to admit as a father with a daughter I was tempted.
My Mother & Many Peoples Fathers are like this: Hurt their kids, Feel Their Wrath.
i would have thought the angel of death but he did torture the creep so fair cop
Cyberpunk…. Love it.
Im really waiting for the Nature of Predators series to continue
Im not
@@mbdzel why not ?
Me too but this one was good.
Same can’t wait
Agro is going way too quick with it. He’s been releasing near daily videos about the story but the author is doing a chapter every 3 days. He should stagger them more so he doesn’t run out
Such determination. Teeth kicked out, shot in the genitals, a bullet in each knee. And still defiant. Insanity is a powerful motivator.
No, not insane, just mentally sick.
he was way too kind...
Although shooting in the kneecaps were nice.
Shot to the groin, shot both knees then a shot between the eyes, is way too kind?? I know eye for an eye etc is tempting but you don’t want to become like the killer. Just take away their subscription to breathing and call it a day. 😊
@@MrTiberus1701normally i would agree with you efficiency and all that. however as someone with no kids but a family i care about deeply i would have done much worse to the SOB if they fell into this situation. i fear what i would do do if it was my child.
Excellant story and one of best executions of story telling by the auther and narrator on this channel.
Sci-fy space operas are fun but sometines it's good to get down to the grizzle.
From edge lord to white knight and back in 60 seconds..
I find myself what a "stack" is that folks are craving... ironic if it was pancakes with syrup or something.
the true predators are those that makes an effort to slake ther blood thirst by delivering some karma to all the pretentious monsters excusing ther parasitic sadism one way or another
they hunt for ther species sake.. not ther personal desires...
For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Disembodied Voice!
Shadow run inflorescence cool story
As a father the perp got of WAY easy. I'd have gave him an attitude adjustment him for days!
gives me a partial feels of a shadowrun gumshoe campaign
As a father, I can't fault the man.
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The start has some really cringe refer madness vibes. Got decent after they left the bar at least.
48th, 13 March 2023
It’s spelled Seamus
In the dystopian future, the spelling is the first thing to go.
@@PoldaranOfDalaran also common swear words, only to be replaced by equally common and harder to say words that only _sound_ like swear words. Also, many generic brand names and other similar words are replaced by a compound word or pair of words that describes the function of instead of just using the already established word for it (e.g. "bleach" becomes "cleanwhite", "band-aids" become "healing stickers", etc). The aforementioned receives bonus points if the replacement name is confusing and pretends to be something else entirely with the same function.
Just goes to show that disposing of worthless bimbos is dangerous work, especially when you got assholes wandering around projecting their own daughters onto them as they blindly pursue their completely warped sense of justice. I wonder what Shamus would do if it turned out that the "victim" actually knew she was going to die and consented beforehand?