I quietly laughed to myself when i saw this comment bc my family ish sleeping while im still up at like 10:46 at night- i should go to bed butTtt*yawns* night y'all
Im sure its was in everyones recommends OwO Tho i didnt watch im sure its great! Edit: i watched it and I was right about it being great! Its wonderful and incredble!
Guess wut ! .... I subscribed to you and liked your videos . I also stole cookies 🍪 from you guys , muahahahahah !! One more thing I subscribed to your sisters channel too 😊❤️ I love both of your videos
gacha critique with skye: episode 1 all criticism is constructive and meant to help the creator of the video, because I don’t think gacha creators get a lot of criticism that is constructive which will help them improve if you have anything else you think of please let me know I will not be critiquing spelling or grammer unless the video creator themselves requests it 0:34 This transition kind of ruins the mood of this sad scene, I would recommend just a fade or slide 0:50 The baby appears full opacity a bit before the mother, I’m not sure if this was intentional or not 2:30 Character descriptions for me are a big no, I want to be able to figure out their personality through story building and context clues. Having everything spelled out for you makes the story less engaging 3:05 This might be a bit nitpicky, sorry, but the way she slid made me laugh really hard, although that might have been intentional 3:11 This isn’t criticism actually, I really liked the way you used this effect. When I use this effect on my own videos I sometimes find it to be a bit to heavy and unusable but you executed it wonderfully! 4:48 The cursor is at the top of the screen on the second frame of the tail wag. This is just something that bothers me specifically so don’t sweat about it 4:56 Same thing as I already said about this. I want exposition 5:10 More cursor 5:49 I think it would look a bit better if the whole screen had the effect, but I understand the logic around it 6:29 The head accessory on the Elemental Keeper changed. Not sure if this was intentional 8:30 About this last scene, I am just going to assume this was the Nurse’s office, although that is a bit confusing 10:07 There are sure a lot of plants on this roof Wow! That was pretty good! I don’t usually really enjoy gacha stories because they commonly have mundane stories and I just zone out but this one kept my interest! Congrats on earning a sub! Overall: 8/10 Thanks for reading! I’ll probably actually watch the next episode when it comes out, but right now I have some pre-algebra homework to complete! Have a wonderful day!!!
I enjoy critiquing stories, I think it’s pretty fun. Sometimes I make a few gacha stories myself, although I never really upload them lol I just wrote down everything in the notes app on my phone as I watched and then copy pasted it here. I went a little long though lol
For some damn reason, I thought it was really cute when her best friend caught her when she fainted... I don't know why but, I just felt a bit gay. Haha Edit : Wth, 27 likes? Wow, the 28th one is mine By the way, hehe.. Edit No. 1008938264735 : Guys, Jesus Christ and Cheese, 69 likes?! (one is mine).. lol, you guys wouldn't understand what 69 means tho.. (Butt, If ya do - xD) Edit No 1o3892374856837490719729719-7485723.208493787 : Ok 76 likes? Including mine, wot in da world is happening?
Hihihihihi Please do help me 🥺🙏
( P.S : part 2 will be posted in my chaaanneeeelll uwu )
So make sure to visit and subscribe to her channel my Precious ones!
Ok
@@itz_jewelyt5320 okie did you already post it? I'm excited
Did you already post🤗🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤗
@@dollface2556 nope I check it💕✌
This reminds me of roleplaying as a kid - everyone would be every element at all times and were always immortal. ThE mEmOrIeS
Same xd
Ye LOL
Or that one girl who always have cOnJuRiNg as their element
ya... my friends would just find ways to kill me and then eat my dead body.... soo...
@@redactedredacted9131 oof..
Title: The nerd is secretly the strongest hybrid!
Me: YOU GO GURL!
MOM: sToP sCrEaMiNG cHiLD, gOsH!
Then after that, she said.....
I will ban you from your games and iPad!
...MOM COME WATCH GACHA LIFE WITH ME!!!!!! Your mom: IF YOU DONT LEAVE ME ALONE CHILD, GOSH!!!! XD😂😂😂😂
LOL
Thats so my mom
@@user-uo7tk3jn7c that happend to me
"Hey, what's wrong, kiddo?"
*Me having Patton flashbacks and thinking about the newest Episode*
People:PART TWO OMG (and stuff bout da glmm)
Me:Can yall just look at her intro? Its so good;-;
I love DIS! I WOULD JUMP OFF OF MOUNT EVEREST FOR PART 2!!! 😂🥰❤️
But then you wouldn't be able to watch it :(
Do it
So let me get this straight, SHE IS A HYBRID AND HAVE ELEMENTAL POWERS?!?! THAT'S LIKE OP
What if there an meteor from space and she hit it
No it isn’t
The creator of this gacha life series can just delete her
I agree, it's too op😌
Damnit!, I thought it was a glmm but it's actually a series
;~;
..?
N O T M E H same .>.
why do they even title it glmm when its like a series or adds parts ¯\(°_o)/¯
Global Warming she thought it was a Gacha life mini movie but it’s a series
I don't think you've realized, but it's called a *c l i f f h a n g e r*
New idea: the nerd is secretly and most expensive hybrid car :>
Oop thx for the likes :3 its okay if you dont find it funny :)
BAHHAHAHAHAHA
Not funny
Nice one
Lmao
🤣🤣👌👌
I’m earlier and haven’t even watched it but Ik this will be good and I’m excited!!!
me too I just watched the intro and its amazing'
I can't agree I was late lol
"those brats"
Me: haven't you look yourself in the mirror?;-;
Roasted!!!
Pls join my mep
Roasted,wait what is a hybrid
@@roxyrose4813 a hybrid is a mix of animals in one body
@@joannetherandomnoob9838 I hate to be rude but this is overused
I love this so much. The title sounds like the hated child lol
1 MINUTE EARLY I LOVE UR VIDS
4:46 i love how his tail is wagging xD
I need a part two 😭😭😭
SAME
Yea me too
Me three
Yapppp
There is already part 2 lol
My ad before this: “there’s never cooks in the kitchen”
Me: “soooooo who is gonna tell them???”
What does that mean why did they say there never cooks in the kitchen
me sitting here confused-
Same- @-@ confused
hUh💧👴🏻⭐️
"So don't attack her"
Me: * about to spam her comments in 3-2-1- *
Spam spam
Bruh lol
SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAMS SPAM SPAM SPAM
S
P
Oh look at the time
I dont see anything related to time
Me : eh...gacha logic
Likes vid,subs^ thats more i like it
Alexis: **stomps**
Ad that randomly popped up: 2 boys running
XD
I quietly laughed to myself when i saw this comment bc my family ish sleeping while im still up at like 10:46 at night- i should go to bed butTtt*yawns* night y'all
OH MOI GAWDS UR INTRO IS SU CUTE😍
I'M EARLYYYYYYY
kinda
Me: searches up for part 2*
Also me: realizes this was just posted..*
oof
BIG OL' OOF
Mood. TwT
Same
Oofie
meh
I love the animation part of her getting the elements!! it was so interesting!!
me: sees I intro
OMG HOW TO YOU EDIT LIKE THAT
She didn’t make it someone else did
OMG! PART TWOOOO!
THE EFFECTS ARE WAY SO CUTE AND AWESOME! I NEVER FOUND A GACHATUBER LIKE YOU ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Im sure its was in everyones recommends OwO Tho i didnt watch im sure its great!
Edit: i watched it and I was right about it being great! Its wonderful and incredble!
I searched glmm
Under rated youtuber check
Reeeee I CANT WAIT FOR PART 2!!! HOPEFULLY YOU DO PART 2!!! I LOVE THIS! 😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺💖💖💖
read pinned comment uwu
Beautiful half wing! Amazingly drawn
"Higher tier" Was this by any chance inspired by the webtoon Undordinary?
Marshmelløw, that’s what I think to! I love UnOrdinary.
Gamer Rose I love it too! I don't have any fast passes so I'm always late on the episodes 😢
Omg I was just reading it. I love how Uru-chan made thevstory
UnOrdinary is actually a sick WEBTOON
@@lazywolfgaming86 i know right! The author is amazing
I love this!
Amazing job and good editing
Star rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Not done watching yet, lol.
“Liberty”
Wha- cool name! :3
I love the thumbnail Jewel!
Me:*searching the intro song*
Types: samakotowo kata way taway ko no to mo
Also me: can you please tell me🥺🤧
Omae mo Shindeiru by deadman
Omae wa mou.. Sheindeiru.. AHH
how could you not know the song-
I LOVE THE INTROO
Well it's pretty good i love it
Hi can you help me you have a lot's of subscriber's but its okay if you dont have to i really love your channel
Guess wut ! ....
I subscribed to you and liked your videos . I also stole cookies 🍪 from you guys , muahahahahah !!
One more thing I subscribed to your sisters channel too 😊❤️ I love both of your videos
"I smell a hybrid."
I smell a ship...
And it isn't sinking...
The ship won't sink
i really love your intro
SCREEEEEEEE HEHEHE IDK WUT TO SAY QWQ
The intro was like the cutest thing EVER
THE EDITS ARE AMAZINGGG I LOVE ITTTT
1:18
My epileptic brother liked that transition so much he started doing a little dance on the floor
O-oh- OwO
Bruh someone made the joke first :(
Don’t lie
No one
No one can resist
Resist.....
THE INTRO!!!!!!!
Love the vid!
#precious!
Pls do a part to pls pls and this was great
OMG ITS MY FIRST TIME ON UR CHANNEL AND UR INTO IS SOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEE
me sees intro:
me again: *THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD*
Love the intro
gacha critique with skye: episode 1
all criticism is constructive and meant to help the creator of the video, because I don’t think gacha creators get a lot of criticism that is constructive which will help them improve
if you have anything else you think of please let me know
I will not be critiquing spelling or grammer unless the video creator themselves requests it
0:34 This transition kind of ruins the mood of this sad scene, I would recommend just a fade or slide
0:50 The baby appears full opacity a bit before the mother, I’m not sure if this was intentional or not
2:30 Character descriptions for me are a big no, I want to be able to figure out their personality through story building and context clues. Having everything spelled out for you makes the story less engaging
3:05 This might be a bit nitpicky, sorry, but the way she slid made me laugh really hard, although that might have been intentional
3:11 This isn’t criticism actually, I really liked the way you used this effect. When I use this effect on my own videos I sometimes find it to be a bit to heavy and unusable but you executed it wonderfully!
4:48 The cursor is at the top of the screen on the second frame of the tail wag. This is just something that bothers me specifically so don’t sweat about it
4:56 Same thing as I already said about this. I want exposition
5:10 More cursor
5:49 I think it would look a bit better if the whole screen had the effect, but I understand the logic around it
6:29 The head accessory on the Elemental Keeper changed. Not sure if this was intentional
8:30 About this last scene, I am just going to assume this was the Nurse’s office, although that is a bit confusing
10:07 There are sure a lot of plants on this roof
Wow! That was pretty good! I don’t usually really enjoy gacha stories because they commonly have mundane stories and I just zone out but this one kept my interest! Congrats on earning a sub!
Overall: 8/10
Thanks for reading! I’ll probably actually watch the next episode when it comes out, but right now I have some pre-algebra homework to complete! Have a wonderful day!!!
I'm shooked...
How much you can rate a good episode so fairly
@@poisonsisters532 *shooketh*
DuaiPuqi I know right? xD
How is this so long!
I enjoy critiquing stories, I think it’s pretty fun. Sometimes I make a few gacha stories myself, although I never really upload them lol
I just wrote down everything in the notes app on my phone as I watched and then copy pasted it here. I went a little long though lol
I’m new to your channel and that intro was one of the cutest things I’ve ever seen-
How did you do that!?
It’s so cute!
Me: oh no another hybrid
Also me: Oh it's by Itz_JewelYT let's watch!
Me agian: this is soooooooooooo good
Me to: part 2 please
I love the transitions you used, they're really cool. Unlike some glmms, the transitions are nice.
I LOVE THIS
I love the Intro
When there’s a part two and your late to the party:
Hee hee hee
Then the 3rd part isn’t out
T^T
For real -^-
IT'S ADAM DUMB OUT TO ME NOT ADAM
Omg I love the vid and the intro!!! It’s so good!
Your sis have to mush inspirassion i like her
I really love the intro how did u do it ??
She should've said
ZA WARUDOOOOOO
Instead of adorable "stop"
Love it!
I had a feeling this would be different than other 'similar' glmms, and it is.💜💙💚💛💗
For some damn reason, I thought it was really cute when her best friend caught her when she fainted... I don't know why but, I just felt a bit gay. Haha
Edit : Wth, 27 likes? Wow, the 28th one is mine By the way, hehe..
Edit No. 1008938264735 : Guys, Jesus Christ and Cheese, 69 likes?! (one is mine)..
lol, you guys wouldn't understand what 69 means tho.. (Butt, If ya do - xD)
Edit No 1o3892374856837490719729719-7485723.208493787 :
Ok 76 likes? Including mine, wot in da world is happening?
Thx for the like, random bootiful hooman.!
I liked aswell ^>^
Harry Corrigan - Awww Mah God! You beautiful hooman being, i LoVe YoU (bE mY fRiEnD, sO i WoN't bE lOnElY) Pls
Thank you for liking this is a lot of likes,
I appreciate everything! This is the Gacha Tuber that led me here, All credits goes to her!!!
40th like!
Wtf! Ur intro is so freaking cute!!! I'm gonna die TwT
Btw nice videoo love it!!! I'ma sub to u UwU
EYYY_YY_YYYYYYYYY
MAH REAL NAME IS JEWEL
NAHHHH I LIKE HAVING ANOTHER PERSON NAMED JEWEL SO I WONT BE ALONE UWU
Your really underrated. But this is great! I can’t wait for part 2.
1 minute lol
I love it so so much uwu HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!?! 😱 :○
Just to tell you... YOU'RE INTRO WAS AMAZING YOU NEED MORE SUBS!!!
Hello, Jewel! i just have to say, Your so amazing, and what is the intro song called?
Aww! I love your introooo!! It’s so cutee
THE INTRO NEVER GETS OLD ALSO I LIKE HOW IT TWEEN SMOOT
I added you in roblox ;-; Nice edit and animation btw,do you mind if I know what music your using..? UwU
YOUR INTRO IS LEGIT REAL PERFECTION 🌸✨
holy moly trhis is rlly good and doesn't make me cringe when i watch it cause it actually kinda makes sense
You always make the best mini movies and make me so happy when I'm down luv your vids keep it up
I absolutely FELL IN LOVE with your intro!!!!!
Why is your intro so frickin adorable ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ
Woah- the OC DESIGN! SO PRETTY!
This edit is nice
The intro is Soo cute!!! And this video was awesome!
AHHHhhhh yesssssss a cute intro!!!
Her editing is amazing 😉
I like the mashup of: The nerd is secretly a celebrity (or something like that) and The hated child is secretly a hybrid princess/strongest hybrid :D
Finally 😒A person who knows what a hybrid means -_-
Edit: i dont hate hybrid vids but some call a normal wolf a hybrid in gacha---
OML NICE INTRO!!
Subbed for da intro...hehe :3
..New Subscriber Here! Love The Intro And Video Keep Up The Good Work! ♡
I'll love ur intro so cool no one has every had editing skills this good
AWWW your intro is so cuteeeeee!
that intro is everything new sub uwi
i love the sound effects when she earns her powers 😭
i never saw a flying hooman scorpion beforegdjsjghjdk
in 3:18 me watching be like *clap* noice
Random purple guy:I smell a hybri-
Alexis:that’s bad news!
Jewelz:That’s not in the script!
Everyone:XD
I subscribed you for a part 2 so i wont miss it and i subscribed to you because I LOVE YOU
Hehe was that good enough or am i just a freak?
i really love your intro its soo kawaii
THIS IS so GOOD AND YOUR INTRO Is so KaWAII
I like how it's not like any other serious! Great work!
Omg i love ur introooo xD its very cool
I jusy cried over how cute ur intro is TnT
How is this the first time I’m seeing this channel! You got amazing vids :0 :)
this is amazing i just subbed to you and your sister annnd Alexis' mom has the same name as me 🤩😅
I dunno how you peeps make these good quality entertaining GLMMs. And I’m just sitting her too lazy to make a short GLMV
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEE your intro omg!😂💖
Wow!!! This is amazing keep up the work!