Beef jerky I guess (animated story)

#animation #2danimation
So I had a random thought some odd years back about silica gel packets in beef jerky packs. It still makes me laugh so I thought I'ld share. I also would appreciate some feedback on the writing, don't be afraid to share how you actually feel about it I tried a new "writing style" and need to know what you guys think.
This will also be posted to my newgrounds account and probably 9gag just to annoy them. (They hate youtubers).
bit.ly/BTGNewgrounds
bit.ly/BTGTwitter
(fairly obvious which one leads where)

[@e4999]

Yeah they are the forbidden seasoning, actually taste pretty good.
I know nothing about writing but it reminded me of this "simba is stupid in school" video I watched eons ago lol.

[@alorota9728]

LoL, fun video

[@jandrosdumb]

I love the animation

[@mr.y9669]

Actually, they just put that on the silica packet so they can have all of the delicious silica packets for themselves.

[@BobTheGodly]

They're a bit dry for my taste if you catch my drift.

[@Yguy]

Nice animation.

[@joeroganofficial5433]

Bro the silica’s are seasonings dawg

[@your_friend_G]

I hope you're feeling better

[@BobTheGodly]

Thanks I am. Found a job I love to support me while I work on videos. I even have a cool boss that comes with his own ankle bracelet. Its blinks a lot.