Also just a quick note on the dynamics of the piece, its incredibly dramatic already but the dramatic arpeggios and build ups such as the part at 1:25 would be accentuated and sound so much more dramatic if earlier phrases of the piece were played softly and slightly slower, with some earlier phrases being played fast and crescendo-ing to show glimpses of the drama to come later on in the piece.
Beautiful composition, the only issue I have is the build up from the start to the middle. It should be more gradual and the change should be unnoticeable from start to finish like a Moonlight Sonata Mvmt 1, where you're at the middle of the piece and you back to the start and you're like 'wow was I really playing that a minute ago?'. The start, middle and end are all excellent, they just need to be more cohesive with each other and sound like they're all part of the same song. Also it would be nice of the some of the arpeggios were mixed with the chords rather than chords then arpeggios and so on, where the left hand could play arpeggios in unison with the right hand at some points in the piece like an Ocean etude for example - which will give the piece more definition and variety and also will tie into the sounds explored at the start of the piece. Also I feel like the key should be changed towards the middle/end to give the piece more variety in the short package of an etude - a change of key whilst using the same techniques you've already composed would be incredibly impressive and beautiful. For example you could change the key to a B sharp minor, which is the relative miner of B major, and the piece would sound incredible. A great start though, let me know if you've followed up on any of my constructive criticism. The piece how it is at the moment is stunning regardless.
I need the sheet music for this one, its just so incredibly good 😭
Sure thing - here it is: musescore.com/user/39844473/scores/12146971?share=copy_link
If you ever happen to perform it message me so I can watch 😁
Wonderful composition.
That‘s soooo good, I love your piece
So emotional 😭😭
Beautiful piece with nice sweeping arpeggios.
Also just a quick note on the dynamics of the piece, its incredibly dramatic already but the dramatic arpeggios and build ups such as the part at 1:25 would be accentuated and sound so much more dramatic if earlier phrases of the piece were played softly and slightly slower, with some earlier phrases being played fast and crescendo-ing to show glimpses of the drama to come later on in the piece.
This is a very cool piece. Well done!
Bravo! What a wonderful piece.
Thanks so much!
@@adambrachman7312 If you keep composing such bangers like these, you'll blow up.
Truly breathtaking!
Glad you like it!
Came back to listen to this masterpiece again xd
Btw that main part sounds like an intro in the song "this is what autumn feels like" by JVKE
Thank you! I appreciate it!
Love this piece, very impressive work! It’s too bad it doesn’t have more views. Maybe when I’m not as busy I’ll learn this one.
Thanks!
Beautiful composition, the only issue I have is the build up from the start to the middle. It should be more gradual and the change should be unnoticeable from start to finish like a Moonlight Sonata Mvmt 1, where you're at the middle of the piece and you back to the start and you're like 'wow was I really playing that a minute ago?'. The start, middle and end are all excellent, they just need to be more cohesive with each other and sound like they're all part of the same song. Also it would be nice of the some of the arpeggios were mixed with the chords rather than chords then arpeggios and so on, where the left hand could play arpeggios in unison with the right hand at some points in the piece like an Ocean etude for example - which will give the piece more definition and variety and also will tie into the sounds explored at the start of the piece. Also I feel like the key should be changed towards the middle/end to give the piece more variety in the short package of an etude - a change of key whilst using the same techniques you've already composed would be incredibly impressive and beautiful. For example you could change the key to a B sharp minor, which is the relative miner of B major, and the piece would sound incredible.
A great start though, let me know if you've followed up on any of my constructive criticism. The piece how it is at the moment is stunning regardless.