No offence but next time do some math. Y/n is 24 and has 7 years ole daughter. It means that she gave birth when she was 17. She was already married so she was married at 16? It is possible but highly rare in high class CEO's families to marry a highschooler. Moreover, she told him she was pregnant and the same night came to her parents house with a one week old baby. She had really strong amnesia. It makes little sense. Overall your other ff with Jin for example were better. Keep in mind that you make many grammar and spelling mistakes. Use some translation device. And remember I do not want to discourage you. It is a positive constructive critique.
I'm sorry if you have a problem and thanks for pointing out my mistake and btw y/n is 18 when she got married and Also give birth at 18 and her daughter is 6 year old and it's going to be a 7 year's so I wrote 7 and about grammar I already said sorry because English is not my first language and ff editing is little difficult for me because I'm a student and I Also have other stuff to do in my life BTW THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT
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Namjoon is handsome as hell 🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵❤️❤️💜💜
LIKE I WAS WATCH YOUR JUNGKOOK FF THEN YOUR VIDEOS NOTIFICATION POP UP AND ITS MY LOML NAMJOON VIDEO I WAS LIKE CLICK IT WITH THE SPEED OF LIGHT 💜
author-nim!!! this is so good!!!!! pls upload more 😢😢😢
This FF is AmaJiN
Literally a masterpiece 🤠i need a part 2 . IM WAITING 🤡
Just saw this today and subbed today
Finally a Namjoon ff 💜
Ohhh God why you made him handsome and hoooooot like hell please save us from his killer looks
Great to share 🤗
Yes part 2.
Nice i really love it but it was a little less romantic . namjoon is my bias so please Will you make another story that is a bit more romantic
No offence but next time do some math. Y/n is 24 and has 7 years ole daughter. It means that she gave birth when she was 17. She was already married so she was married at 16? It is possible but highly rare in high class CEO's families to marry a highschooler. Moreover, she told him she was pregnant and the same night came to her parents house with a one week old baby. She had really strong amnesia. It makes little sense.
Overall your other ff with Jin for example were better. Keep in mind that you make many grammar and spelling mistakes. Use some translation device. And remember I do not want to discourage you. It is a positive constructive critique.
I'm sorry if you have a problem and thanks for pointing out my mistake and btw y/n is 18 when she got married and Also give birth at 18 and her daughter is 6 year old and it's going to be a 7 year's so I wrote 7 and about grammar I already said sorry because English is not my first language and ff editing is little difficult for me because I'm a student and I Also have other stuff to do in my life BTW THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT