Nice waltz! Really inspiring to see works of other aspiring composers. It's a constant reminder for beginner composers like me to keep writing more,and to learn from others :D Just subscribed your channel :)
Wow, this is a good piece! Good basic idea of melody, cool major seventh harmonies and polyphonics to enhance and develope the stating idea :D Also lovely B section. What I would recommend is that in bar 74 the mini-cadenza is a little bit lonely. In the bar prior (third beat) the L.H. validates the root tonality (c# minor) with the roottone and the minor third. You could give this ending of the B section an additional validation in adding a c# minor arpeggio in bar 74. It sounds more rich and doubtlessly states the c# minor with all three chord tones :)
@@builderdog3875 I am not saying that the cadenza is out of context. I was just suggesting to implement the fifth to the c# minor chord beforehand to make it more rich
@@allegrocomposer do you have perfect pitch or relative pitch it's good. i didnt asses the harmony but the motives are coherent and i think that's something commendable
Beautiful composition
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That is very good
Really nice!!
This is excellent
Thank you :))
Nice waltz!
Really inspiring to see works of other aspiring composers.
It's a constant reminder for beginner composers like me to keep writing more,and to learn from others :D
Just subscribed your channel :)
@@Benatural1 Thank you so much! I hope you do great :)
Great work!!
Thanks a lot!
inspires me to continue my compositions, really pretty :)
@@AromaIsSilly Thank you! You definitely should continue with composition!
I want to learn this for my own pleasure can you share the sheet music? you are soo talented its nuts!
Thank you! I have attached the link to the sheet music PDF in this video's description :)
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Almost! Thought it was op.64 no.2
Ywah
Amazing work! ;D
@@a_minorr5870 I know right :D. Thank you!
This is gorgeous, I love it
@@AltoonaYourPiano Thank you :)
where i can find pdf?
@@fffffffff6862 drive.google.com/file/d/1FSWqwDXqH3JMjBcSAAb3938u_5ruxTVu/view?usp=drivesdk
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Is this musescore? Nice waltz by the way ^^
Yes. Thank you !
Wow, this is a good piece! Good basic idea of melody, cool major seventh harmonies and polyphonics to enhance and develope the stating idea :D
Also lovely B section.
What I would recommend is that in bar 74 the mini-cadenza is a little bit lonely. In the bar prior (third beat) the L.H. validates the root tonality (c# minor) with the roottone and the minor third. You could give this ending of the B section an additional validation in adding a c# minor arpeggio in bar 74. It sounds more rich and doubtlessly states the c# minor with all three chord tones :)
Disagree, I think it gives the listener a bit of a break to recap and process what they've heard.
@@builderdog3875 I am not saying that the cadenza is out of context. I was just suggesting to implement the fifth to the c# minor chord beforehand to make it more rich
@@Jan-Schneider-Music Maybe, I don't have the most knowledge on music theory, I know the basics, but I sure can't compose.
Thank you for the feedback :) Helps me a lot!
Pdf
@@SusanaCastagnet The link is in the video description
Sounds awesome! If you mind asking, what are those fermatas with 2 dots?
Thank you! According to musescore 4, they're long fermatas.
are you enrolled as a composition student?
No, I'm self taught :)
@@allegrocomposer do you have perfect pitch or relative pitch
it's good. i didnt asses the harmony but the motives are coherent and i think that's something commendable
@@TheElectricCheeseProductions22 I don't have perfect pitch. I may have relative pitch tho.
Thank you :D
that opening note had me thinking you were just copying chopin but that’s actually really nice
I know right. I tried not to make the piece sound like his waltz op. 64 no. 2. Thank you :D