Good work em oi ❤. Here’s an improved version for you: Society is witnessing a plethora of violence-related TV programs, which are detrimentally impacting audiences as well as the community.
Good work! Here’s an improved version: TV programs featuring a multitude of violent content have been having a detrimental impact on society these days.
@@ieltswithdatio more advanced: TV programs featuring a multitude of violent content have been posing detrimental impacts on society in contemporary times.
How about that:" In this day and age, there has been a growing tendency among individuals in society to purchase some products such as clothing items,vehicles from enterprises which have already gained populay
It looks a little too excessive for me especially for the word "vehicles", it's a little bit too broad to be a synonym to "cars" would take it this way personally: Nowadays, there has been a growing trend in which people are gravitated towards purchasing prevalent brandnames' items. I won't cover "clothes, cars and other items" since it's already included in the term of "brandnames' items"
Good work em! Here’s a better version: In this day and age, there has been a growing tendency among individuals in society to purchase products, such as clothing items and vehicles, from enterprises that have already gained popularity.
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A negative impact is being caused to community by aggressive TV shows
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In recent day, there’s a noticeable change in consuming products manufactured by famous brands
The appearances of violent programs on TV are having a detrimental impact on community. I tried all my best❤
In recent days, individuals have been affected badly from several TV's violent programs
the society is witnessing a plethora types of violence related TV programs, which impacting detrimentally on audiences as well as the community
Good work em oi ❤. Here’s an improved version for you:
Society is witnessing a plethora of violence-related TV programs, which are detrimentally impacting audiences as well as the community.
“Increasingly, society is being negatively affected by a great number of violent programs on TV”
Excellent ❤
the fact that the adverse impact on society are being caused from watching violent programs on tv. Nhờ a xem giúp vs ạ
-> The adverse impact on society is caused by watching violent programs on TV.
The fact that community is negatively affected by violent TV channels. Mong anh rep😢
It's said that people are affected negatively by violent TV programs
TV films related to violently are having a perishable consequence on community. Mong a rep😅😅😅
Good attempt nha em ! Here’s a better version: TV and films related to violence have an adverse effect on the community.
Thank you so much!
A negative social implication is derived from television shows.
"These days, TV programs with a multitude of violence have had a detrimental impact on people".
Good work! Here’s an improved version: TV programs featuring a multitude of violent content have been having a detrimental impact on society these days.
@@ieltswithdatio more advanced: TV programs featuring a multitude of violent content have been posing detrimental impacts on society in contemporary times.
TV shows with brutals content is extremely detrimental to the society nowadays.
ước gì được anh rep :)))
How about that:" In this day and age, there has been a growing tendency among individuals in society to purchase some products such as clothing items,vehicles from enterprises which have already gained populay
It looks a little too excessive for me
especially for the word "vehicles", it's a little bit too broad to be a synonym to "cars"
would take it this way personally: Nowadays, there has been a growing trend in which people are gravitated towards purchasing prevalent brandnames' items.
I won't cover "clothes, cars and other items" since it's already included in the term of "brandnames' items"
Good work em! Here’s a better version:
In this day and age, there has been a growing tendency among individuals in society to purchase products, such as clothing items and vehicles, from enterprises that have already gained popularity.
cách ng 9. spak thao túng chúng ta :))
TV program with vehemence’s show are bringing a hamful consequence on people who exposure to them.
The fact that bad effect on community are had by resort to violence channels on TV
Notably, the emergence of television channels, with violent contents are generating a significantly detrimental impact on the society as the whole.
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