So many of these stories have no ending. When I comment saying how can someone put something like this up, then I get warnings from youtube about cyberbullying. Some of these people should not be posting.
As she approached, her fingers tingled with an unfamiliar energy. She recalled that old treehouse, where they carved their names into the wood, dreams of the future swirling above them like the leaves in the breeze. This mansion was a world away from that innocence.
JUST LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES, THERE IS NOT AN ENDING OR FINAL CONCLUSION TO THE STORY!!!!!!! IT IS JUST SUDDENLY CHOPPED OFF!!!!!!! WHY DON’T THE STORIES HAVE A PROPER ENDING????????
@@m.mickeypayne9811 Your welcome. if your going to listen to a story, why do you come to the comments section before you listen? I come to the comments section to see if people like it I will watch or if they dont like when the story has no ending, or poor writing or editing, I wont waste time on it. And in this case I warned others about the no ending. Dont read comments before you listen then it will not spoil for you. And I'm not the only one warning others.
You are supposed to figure out the ending by what you just read or in this case heard. You don't read many books it sounds like nor took literature in school.
(11:09 - 15:54) Lla learns from a staff member, Marta, about a tragic accident that befell the Waywright family years ago. The realization that her picture is connected to them leads her to suspect that she may be linked to their tragic history, potentially involving her own parents' deaths.
Too many stories on here have no ending. There is no point in listening to them because we never know what the end is. Whoever is putting these things on needs to wake up put the ending on or do not put a beginning on.
A great story that took too long and the end is not known. That makes your stories very cruel. The ending is the whole storey. I will not start any more of your stories. What a very bad company 1:19:33
All these comments about the ending and if there will be a second part. Yet you the uploader, do not respond. What is wrong with you? I hope TH-cam will stop your channel.
Unfinished. I am a writer & this should have never been published. It is not a completed story but writings as if written as a child's made up stories. The content is empty & writing style is non-existent. I apologize to all readers for such an incompetent person. They have no right to call themselves writers. As for apology, also know that all who write, some are actual writers who can write well.
Lila and her sister adopted by Rosa. What did Rosa tell her? Who actually killed her parents? Her mother still alive. That's a new twist. How does she know? Sorry, not subscribing.
I like it .The conclusion,.its not necessary to elaborate more.Laila found Edgar and from there the story stop.meaning ,Laila found Edgar with him they will her mother Edgar will testify against the Uncle the uncle will go to prison and Laaila will get back her rights, her fortune etc..the narrator don't need to elaborate more.Laila found what she needs for justice.and the sory goes on.. That is the end.
so ridiculous : always the same texts probably all written by the same person, the poor girl, the millionnaire, the marble floors and the chandeliers, etc. ; no inventivity, so boring and dull !
Where's the rest of the story? Did they find her mother? Did she get what was rightfully hers?
Where is the rest of the story???
This is unfortunate. A good story with no ending. This will make me think twice before watching more stories.
So many of these stories have no ending. When I comment saying how can someone put something like this up, then I get warnings from youtube about cyberbullying. Some of these people should not be posting.
As she approached, her fingers tingled with an unfamiliar energy. She recalled that old treehouse, where they carved their names into the wood, dreams of the future swirling above them like the leaves in the breeze. This mansion was a world away from that innocence.
Half a story……frustrating to get the first part.
A deeply emotional and well-written story, truly impressive work ❤❤❤
Where's the Part 2
I am slightly disappointed in the ending.
A SERIOUS STORY WITH NO CLOSURE. WHAT KIND OF WRITER IS THIS!!!?
JUST LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES, THERE IS NOT AN ENDING OR FINAL CONCLUSION TO THE STORY!!!!!!! IT IS JUST SUDDENLY CHOPPED OFF!!!!!!! WHY DON’T THE STORIES HAVE A PROPER ENDING????????
This story truly touched my heart! It made me reflect deeply on life and the kindness in people. ❤
??? Incomplete why bother
Yes , this story definitely needs a part two!!!
@edwinaviet1270
Many of these stories do need Pat#2, but you couldn't trust that to happen. There must've been a lot of complaints so far. This is just ridiculous.
Waste of time, long and boring... No ending for this story. Feels like a part 1.
Gee, thanks for spoiling it for the rest of us.
@@m.mickeypayne9811 Your welcome. if your going to listen to a story, why do you come to the comments section before you listen?
I come to the comments section to see if people like it I will watch or if they dont like when the story has no ending, or poor writing or editing, I wont waste time on it. And in this case I warned others about the no ending. Dont read comments before you listen then it will not spoil for you. And I'm not the only one warning others.
I agree with you!
You are supposed to figure out the ending by what you just read or in this case heard. You don't read many books it sounds like nor took literature in school.
Harland gets busted and Lyla gets justice and all the rest.
Huh? What an ending...everything hanging on the air?!
(11:09 - 15:54) Lla learns from a staff member, Marta, about a tragic accident that befell the Waywright family years ago. The realization that her picture is connected to them leads her to suspect that she may be linked to their tragic history, potentially involving her own parents' deaths.
Sloppy AI generated pictures that don’t even jive with the story. Lazy!
What a heartwarming twist! It's amazing how the past can come back to surprise us in such meaningful ways. ❤
Why the story ended before she got her rights, this is not fair !
Why only half storys😢and not post the rest of the story
These stories are made by AI right?
INCREDIBLE STORY INCOMPLETE NO ENDING - Very bad bad ‼️😡😡😡
YES A GOOD STORY BUT NO CLOSURE.NEEDS A PART 2
Too many stories on here have no ending. There is no point in listening to them because we never know what the end is. Whoever is putting these things on needs to wake up put the ending on or do not put a beginning on.
A great story that took too long and the end is not known. That makes your stories very cruel. The ending is the whole storey. I will not start any more of your stories. What a very bad company 1:19:33
STUPID STORY THAT LEAVES THE LISTENER HANGING. RIDICULOUS. AN AMATURE COULD HAVE DONE BETTER
Carlos is stirring a pot of coffee?????
Part 2 please…love the plot
I won't watch it, because of these comments, but I wish people would be more genteel. The author needs to polish his ways. Enough!
Too many commercials. Hard to watch if you are resting with your eyes closed just listening. Every few minutes you need to skip the commercials.
Add part two
A good story with no ending...
It's very, very good.... but where's the rest of it?
All these comments about the ending and if there will be a second part. Yet you the uploader, do not respond. What is wrong with you? I hope TH-cam will stop your channel.
This is an incomplete story. Too, much fill-in narrative. That extra narrative could be eliminated, then story could be complete.
Is there a continuation to this story?
I need an ending.!!!!!!
No need to continue watching when the story has no ending! 😢
I'm sorry I started this story after reading the comments I will not continue with it.
Was Harland arrested? It was a good story but a terrible ending makes the story obsolete
Super!!!
I was liking the suspense until the unfinished ending.
Part 2 wouldn't have gone astray.
This is like an overwordy book that has the last few chapters missing. What a waste of my time.
That was my first thought when it ended !!!
PART 2 ???????
Really, is there a second part?
What the heck half of a story?
Thos story is too tedious and unbelievable
Unfinished. I am a writer & this should have never been published. It is not a completed story but writings as if written as a child's made up stories. The content is empty & writing style is non-existent. I apologize to all readers for such an incompetent person. They have no right to call themselves writers. As for apology, also know that all who write, some are actual writers who can write well.
It held my interest right up to the end, & then THERE WAS NONE ! 1000 percent totally disappointing ! ! ! !
Go away,it’s not up to you.
Talk is cheap.
Where's the rest?
well, where is pqrt 2, I hate stories that leave you hanging ! NO SUBSCRIBE OR LIKE till I get paret 2!
Where is part 2 ?
The rest?,,
One hour and twenty-three minutes wasted on a story without a finale! 😮
wanrt the end!!!
What a ridiculous story. A waitress taking on business titans.
Buang masa, cerita separuh jalan...
where is the continuation of this stor
Why make in complete stories, especially with the truth and conclusion hanging in the balance?? This is not correct.
Lila and her sister adopted by Rosa. What did Rosa tell her? Who actually killed her parents? Her mother still alive. That's a new twist. How does she know? Sorry, not subscribing.
I like it .The conclusion,.its not necessary to elaborate more.Laila found Edgar and from there the story stop.meaning ,Laila found Edgar with him they will her mother Edgar will testify against the Uncle the uncle will go to prison and Laaila will get back her rights, her fortune etc..the narrator don't need to elaborate more.Laila found what she needs for justice.and the sory goes on..
That is the end.
what kind of story is this, no conclusion?
A 5yr is not a baby.
so ridiculous : always the same texts probably all written by the same person, the poor girl, the millionnaire, the marble floors and the chandeliers, etc. ; no inventivity, so boring and dull !
Well don’t ruin it for the rest of us jeez
And no ending. Also they sure found Edgar fast. Marta never said her mother was still alive.
THE NARRATOR REPEATS THE SAME THINGS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN......
@@creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973 I wouldnt listen to this knowing there is no ending like it got cut short or maybe its a part 1 but no part 2.
For heaven sakes, stop ruining everything for the author and us! Like by stopping to watch these! There are great old movies on TH-cam!
SO THE ENDING IS THIS..... HARLAN WAS TAKEN TO COURT. AND PROSECUTED FOR HIS CRIMES. A LIFE SENTENCE WAS HIS PUNISHMENT. THE END
What a waste of time!!! Unfinished symphony.
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Get back to the. storyiwhachthis2story
Really, is there a second part?