THE WAITRESS WAS PARALYZED WHEN SHE SAW HER CHILDHOOD PHOTO IN A BLACK FRAME IN THE MANSION...

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  • THE WAITRESS WAS PARALYZED WHEN SHE SAW HER CHILDHOOD PHOTO IN A BLACK FRAME IN THE MANSION...
    Lila woke up early, just like every other day. The first rays of sunlight crept through the thin curtains of her small bedroom, casting a warm, golden glow on the few things she owned. The faint scent of coffee brewing in the kitchen wafted through the air, comforting in its familiarity. Today was going to be another long day. She had a shift at the diner later, but before that, there were errands to run, bills to pay, and her younger sister to take care of.
    Life wasn’t easy for Lila. At 23, she had grown used to the grind. There wasn’t much time to think about her own dreams or desires. Between the diner shifts, odd jobs, and helping her adoptive mother at home, she had little space left for anything else. Still, she couldn’t complain. She had a roof over her head, and although they didn’t have much, her family always made sure there was food on the table. Her adoptive mother, Rosa, had taken Lila and her sister in when they were just babies, raising them with love and care despite the hardships.
    As Lila got dressed for the day, her mind wandered. Today was a little different. She had been given the chance to work at a high-end party in the city as a server, something she didn’t usually do. The pay was better than anything she earned at the diner, and even though it was just a one-time gig, it would help cover this month’s rent and maybe even give her a little breathing room for once. Still, the idea of stepping into such an extravagant world made her feel uneasy. The rich and powerful lived lives she couldn’t even begin to understand.

ความคิดเห็น • 55

  • @livinganamazinglife1
    @livinganamazinglife1 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    What a heartwarming twist! It's amazing how the past can come back to surprise us in such meaningful ways. ❤

  • @edwinaviet1270
    @edwinaviet1270 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +18

    Yes , this story definitely needs a part two!!!

    • @SioasiTaliai
      @SioasiTaliai 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @edwinaviet1270

  • @larrymurdock8175
    @larrymurdock8175 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    This is unfortunate. A good story with no ending. This will make me think twice before watching more stories.

    • @leedavis-m2o
      @leedavis-m2o 23 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      So many of these stories have no ending. When I comment saying how can someone put something like this up, then I get warnings from youtube about cyberbullying. Some of these people should not be posting.

  • @DottyWallace
    @DottyWallace วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    JUST LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES, THERE IS NOT AN ENDING OR FINAL CONCLUSION TO THE STORY!!!!!!! IT IS JUST SUDDENLY CHOPPED OFF!!!!!!! WHY DON’T THE STORIES HAVE A PROPER ENDING????????

  • @leedavis-m2o
    @leedavis-m2o 23 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Carlos is stirring a pot of coffee?????

  • @rehanashah9247
    @rehanashah9247 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    ??? Incomplete why bother

  • @Lostchild-ki3rv
    @Lostchild-ki3rv 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Add part two

  • @robbio1100
    @robbio1100 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Where's the rest of the story? Did they find her mother? Did she get what was rightfully hers?

  • @cheryllindsey-n2z
    @cheryllindsey-n2z 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Unfinished. I am a writer & this should have never been published. It is not a completed story but writings as if written as a child's made up stories. The content is empty & writing style is non-existent. I apologize to all readers for such an incompetent person. They have no right to call themselves writers. As for apology, also know that all who write, some are actual writers who can write well.

    • @Norma-cc8ic
      @Norma-cc8ic 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      It held my interest right up to the end, & then THERE WAS NONE ! 1000 percent totally disappointing ! ! ! !

  • @mariettalim4357
    @mariettalim4357 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    YES A GOOD STORY BUT NO CLOSURE.NEEDS A PART 2

  • @gloaggabaoma1859
    @gloaggabaoma1859 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +13

    Where's the Part 2

  • @robbio1100
    @robbio1100 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Was Harland arrested? It was a good story but a terrible ending makes the story obsolete

  • @MaryGreenwood-x1q
    @MaryGreenwood-x1q 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Where is the rest of the story???

  • @claudioclaro7773
    @claudioclaro7773 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    Huh? What an ending...everything hanging on the air?!

  • @FaithIragould-ge3ru
    @FaithIragould-ge3ru 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    Is there a continuation to this story?

  • @daff55odil
    @daff55odil 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    I am slightly disappointed in the ending.

  • @francit4856
    @francit4856 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

    This is like an overwordy book that has the last few chapters missing. What a waste of my time.

    • @terivertefeuille6996
      @terivertefeuille6996 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      That was my first thought when it ended !!!

  • @puananihoku7302
    @puananihoku7302 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Waste of time, long and boring... No ending for this story. Feels like a part 1.

    • @m.mickeypayne9811
      @m.mickeypayne9811 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Gee, thanks for spoiling it for the rest of us.

    • @puananihoku7302
      @puananihoku7302 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@m.mickeypayne9811 Your welcome. if your going to listen to a story, why do you come to the comments section before you listen?
      I come to the comments section to see if people like it I will watch or if they dont like when the story has no ending, or poor writing or editing, I wont waste time on it. And in this case I warned others about the no ending. Dont read comments before you listen then it will not spoil for you. And I'm not the only one warning others.

    • @patriciareeves3471
      @patriciareeves3471 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      I agree with you!

  • @AbCa-kx4yn
    @AbCa-kx4yn 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Sloppy AI generated pictures that don’t even jive with the story. Lazy!

  • @brendalohrke2402
    @brendalohrke2402 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    STUPID STORY THAT LEAVES THE LISTENER HANGING. RIDICULOUS. AN AMATURE COULD HAVE DONE BETTER

  • @angietodd-dennis5292
    @angietodd-dennis5292 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    Thos story is too tedious and unbelievable

  • @icehousebeverages6430
    @icehousebeverages6430 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    I was liking the suspense until the unfinished ending.
    Part 2 wouldn't have gone astray.

  • @MaryGreenwood-x1q
    @MaryGreenwood-x1q 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Really, is there a second part?

  • @brendalohrke2402
    @brendalohrke2402 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    A SERIOUS STORY WITH NO CLOSURE. WHAT KIND OF WRITER IS THIS!!!?

  • @godlovesyousomuch5894
    @godlovesyousomuch5894 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    These stories are made by AI right?

  • @terezatsiokana7453
    @terezatsiokana7453 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I like it .The conclusion,.its not necessary to elaborate more.Laila found Edgar and from there the story stop.meaning ,Laila found Edgar with him they will her mother Edgar will testify against the Uncle the uncle will go to prison and Laaila will get back her rights, her fortune etc..the narrator don't need to elaborate more.Laila found what she needs for justice.and the sory goes on..
    That is the end.

  • @DilyseD
    @DilyseD 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    What a ridiculous story. A waitress taking on business titans.

  • @leedavis-m2o
    @leedavis-m2o 23 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    All these comments about the ending and if there will be a second part. Yet you the uploader, do not respond. What is wrong with you? I hope TH-cam will stop your channel.

  • @micheleracine2871
    @micheleracine2871 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +31

    so ridiculous : always the same texts probably all written by the same person, the poor girl, the millionnaire, the marble floors and the chandeliers, etc. ; no inventivity, so boring and dull !

    • @creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973
      @creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

      Well don’t ruin it for the rest of us jeez

    • @kens32052
      @kens32052 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      And no ending. Also they sure found Edgar fast. Marta never said her mother was still alive.

    • @brendalohrke2402
      @brendalohrke2402 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      THE NARRATOR REPEATS THE SAME THINGS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN......

    • @puananihoku7302
      @puananihoku7302 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      @@creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973 I wouldnt listen to this knowing there is no ending like it got cut short or maybe its a part 1 but no part 2.

    • @aqrst1430
      @aqrst1430 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      For heaven sakes, stop ruining everything for the author and us! Like by stopping to watch these! There are great old movies on TH-cam!

  • @DonnaAschenbrenner-yy2yq
    @DonnaAschenbrenner-yy2yq 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What the heck half of a story?

  • @mariettalim4357
    @mariettalim4357 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    where is the continuation of this stor

  • @brendalohrke2402
    @brendalohrke2402 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    SO THE ENDING IS THIS..... HARLAN WAS TAKEN TO COURT. AND PROSECUTED FOR HIS CRIMES. A LIFE SENTENCE WAS HIS PUNISHMENT. THE END

  • @edwinaviet1270
    @edwinaviet1270 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why make in complete stories, especially with the truth and conclusion hanging in the balance?? This is not correct.

  • @elizabethpascalli2233
    @elizabethpascalli2233 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Get back to the. storyiwhachthis2story

  • @MaryGreenwood-x1q
    @MaryGreenwood-x1q 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Really, is there a second part?