I would never forget my fathers face from I was around 7 and 18 years forward..Or his voice, or anything..And I would recognized my own daughter or son anywhere after 18 years.
Interesting perspective! Do you think that parenthood and partnership play different roles in one's life, or could they be equally essential in different ways?
(06:50) The climax occurs when Michael recognizes the pendant on the saleswoman, realizing it is the same one he gave to his daughter before she disappeared.
How did Michael make the leap between finding his daughter and in the next breath suspicious that Samantha was involved somehow? If he took that big of a leap then why didn’t he question her sooner? Also I would have preferred to know how they managed to take Emily and erase her memory. And how did she end up on the side of the road? That would have been more interesting than throwing in the touchy feely parts that just really just a jumble of inconsistencies. So much potential that kind of just fizzled out
If I was writing this story, I would have tied everything together. There are so many loose ends. Like How did Hale dispose of Emily? I would have tied her adoptive parents in with it, like they paid hale in an adoption. And what about Samantha? Did she go to jail? And why didn't Michael ever show emily her old room? Too many unanswered questions!!!
Interesting points! It sounds like you’ve really thought this through. I wonder if the creators left these threads open for a potential sequel or to spark fan theories. How would you have ended it if you were the writer? 🔥
Tons of questions that don’t fit the story. So my largest question, when found, why wasn’t there a missing child report? With the authorities involved , police out searching and interviewing people and following leads, why didn’t they file a missing child report? How does that happen?
"lost in child birth when Emily came into the world." But then there's pictures of her with Emily. Lost in child birth means they passed away during giving birth.
Yes that’s what I thought that her Mother died when she was just born?? And she was left with her Dad only tell her Dad remarried!! So she was alone with him? Until Samantha weaseled her way in as the stepmother (meant wicked stepmother)!! The unthinkable!!
I am confused, at the beginning of the story Elizabeth died in childbirth. But at a about and hour in Elizabeth worried about Emily falling out of the oak tree in the colonial house. So when did Elizabeth actually die?
Does nobody ever call the police in these stories.. Surely Samantha should be in prison for kidnapping and child abandonment, let alone what she did to wipe Emily's memories.
Think of this as a short story rather than an entire novel. The main point is he found his daughter apart from any legal punishment that is deserved by anyone involved in her disappearance. The authorities do become involved toward the end with the man hired by Samantha to make Emily disappear being found and arrested.
You’re so right! Samantha has definitely crossed some serious lines here… Do you think there’s a way they’ll actually hold her accountable in the story?
Didn’t Emily’s mom during childbirth? This story is a bit contradicting. The truth is in front of Emily, yet she has difficulty believing that Michael is her father.
Bit of an odd story 🤔. Mum died in childbirth but didn't. Stepmother not brought to task?--she wanted to make a 7 year old disappear. How can that happen? If you find a child-you report it not adopt her unless it was nefarious but that would incriminate the adoptive parents 🤔. If the story made sense, it could have worked !!!
Why when he found out that Samatha did this he just divorced her and not let her continue to live with him. All this yacking about this ie taking her away from dad. 😮 There is so many inconsistencies in this story. Just don't know why when people write these stories they don't find them.
This story makes Michael appear no brain and stupid. As soon as knowing the truth, he should call the police and reported her. She has no sympathy to Emily why will he have one to someone like her.
Hold up...how does he have memories of her mother worrying she would fall from the tree or holding her as a baby? Didn't her mother die giving birth to her? Also, wasn't he living in the same house with her room in the exact same condition as it was when she disappeared? Teddy bears lined up in a row, silver framed photo of her, etc... Now it is only a photo of a house they used to live in? Proofreading is necessary people!!!
Great catch! It's interesting how these details are often missed in editing. Do you think it could be intentional, or is it just an oversight? I wonder how other fans interpret these inconsistencies!
😢 I have to agree with the previous commentator. There are so many irregularities in this tale, so many contradictions that it is laughable. Find some writers who can actually put it together, build a plot and stick to it, not change the story to fit
I love the story, but I don’t understand who lock the shop up. He couldn’t leave the jewellers open.❤❤❤❤ and I’d be telling her to get out she deliberately got rid of the daughter disgusting
I could even remember many happenings, fragrance, surroundings & people I saw when I was only one year old! And she disappeared when she was seven years old!
Please proofread these stories before release !!!!! It was like 3 stories mixed together. And why wasn't Samantha in the cell next to the Hale fella. Who didn't see her as one of the bad guys in the beginning. Also the adopted parents being financially taken care of by Samantha. Duh!!!!
PS Also also shows enen through his grief at the loss of wife and later his daughter, as a man letting the BRAIN between his legs take 18 years to find the truth...😢☹️. So sad 😭
I forgot to mention in the beginning Emily's mother died giving birth to her and later they all lived together in the Colonial house and she played in the backyard together with her mom and dad.
You need to do better than this. The last one I listened to was worse! Think I’ll try somewhere else. Mother died at birth, didn’t have her room set up where he lived now but in Colonial house, didn’t get real story from Hale, etc.
This is a good story but it is like it is rough draft and not cohesive, First she knows she was adopted, but gets a mad at her adoptive mother for what? Second the father in his mantion has preserved her bedroom with a very descriptive telling and next they are going through a box of of pictures and talking about a Colonial house ? Plus many more inconsistencies.
You said her mother died at childbirth and then her mother holding her and loving her how?It is a good story if it was thought out and organised. From Kenya East Africa.
I see what you mean! Maybe the storytelling could benefit from some extra depth and clarity. What would you change or add to make it more cohesive? Curious to hear your thoughts!
We all know that anyone that's adopted has a fantasy that a parent will return not for them to be the adopted child savior but to remove that little tick in the brain about being thrown away
Strange contradiction. First his wife died at childbirth. And then at 1.03.she is telling Emily says..I wish I had more time with her..looking at a picture with her mam holding her as a baby.????? How ??? This picture couldn't exist hahhaha😅
When you tell other stories ; tell if you put your X Wife in prison and make sure you know if your first wife died giving birth ! This ruined this story even though it ended well 😊
This too is not a true story, at the start the dad walks into Emily's bedroom as she left it @ 7 years old. Later in the story her dad shows her the old house she lived in when she went missing, further more he had lost everything searching for his daughter everything would include his house. The story line contradicts itself several times. Plus kidnapping and abandoned is a serious crime i do not belive it has protection from arrest. His current wife should be charged as well as the lawyer as well as disbarred. And jail time. These are very serious charges. 18 years is a long time but i do not belive the statues of limitations can Protect his soon to be x wife.
This story is incredibly moving and beautifully written. The emotions are so raw and relatable, and it's heartwarming to see the hope and connection that Michael seeks with Emily. Thank you for sharing such a poignant tale of love and perseverance.
Please no😢te: the word gnawed at he is not use correctly; also the word side should be sighed Someone already mentioned that wife died in childbirth then laster it's mentioned that the woman loved the baby and berks the baby. Come on. You can do better. Story was okay though. . ,🎉
I was thinking the very same thing. It could very well be that Emily was given some kind of drugs or maybe even been hypnotized back then. He should try every avenue he can to give her back her memory..
I thought you would be happier without her?😂 wtf. Time to divorce and if no prenup sue her for destroying both your lives, kidnapping, child endangerment. Storyline is he marries a batcrap crazy woman.
I would never forget my fathers face from I was around 7 and 18 years forward..Or his voice, or anything..And I would recognized my own daughter or son anywhere after 18 years.
A wife can be replaced anytime BUT A CHILD YOUR FLESH AND BLOOD COULD NEVER BE RELACED BY ANYONE.
Not true
Interesting perspective! Do you think that parenthood and partnership play different roles in one's life, or could they be equally essential in different ways?
(06:50) The climax occurs when Michael recognizes the pendant on the saleswoman, realizing it is the same one he gave to his daughter before she disappeared.
Sometimes wearing long-time jewelry is a great identification. Love the story for that part!!!
I can’t finish this story, too many inconsistencies. Does nobody proof read their work anymore? What a mess!
How did Michael make the leap between finding his daughter and in the next breath suspicious that Samantha was involved somehow? If he took that big of a leap then why didn’t he question her sooner? Also I would have preferred to know how they managed to take Emily and erase her memory. And how did she end up on the side of the road? That would have been more interesting than throwing in the touchy feely parts that just really just a jumble of inconsistencies. So much potential that kind of just fizzled out
I think these stories are written by people with lower education . They are not edited by professionals.
If I was writing this story, I would have tied everything together. There are so many loose ends. Like How did Hale dispose of Emily? I would have tied her adoptive parents in with it, like they paid hale in an adoption. And what about Samantha? Did she go to jail? And why didn't Michael ever show emily her old room? Too many unanswered questions!!!
That's what I was thinking.. The writer forgot 😅
@@catherinejames3420the “writer” was prob a computer programme.
Interesting points! It sounds like you’ve really thought this through. I wonder if the creators left these threads open for a potential sequel or to spark fan theories. How would you have ended it if you were the writer? 🔥
Tons of questions that don’t fit the story. So my largest question, when found, why wasn’t there a missing child report? With the authorities involved , police out searching and interviewing people and following leads, why didn’t they file a missing child report? How does that happen?
The author screwed up. The mom died in childbirth but then he mentions the mom watching Emily in the yard. A good story though.
"lost in child birth when Emily came into the world." But then there's pictures of her with Emily. Lost in child birth means they passed away during giving birth.
I loved this story true or not
I hate it when an essentially decent story is screwed up by so many inconsistencies. This one wouldn't rate above a "C" in English because of those.
Yes that’s what I thought that her Mother died when she was just born?? And she was left with her Dad only tell her Dad remarried!! So she was alone with him? Until Samantha weaseled her way in as the stepmother (meant wicked stepmother)!! The unthinkable!!
The story is interesting, I like the illustrations too 💝💝💝
I am confused, at the beginning of the story Elizabeth died in childbirth. But at a about and hour in Elizabeth worried about Emily falling out of the oak tree in the colonial house. So when did Elizabeth actually die?
Does nobody ever call the police in these stories.. Surely Samantha should be in prison for kidnapping and child abandonment, let alone what she did to wipe Emily's memories.
I thought exactly the same thing
Think of this as a short story rather than an entire novel. The main point is he found his daughter apart from any legal punishment that is deserved by anyone involved in her disappearance. The authorities do become involved toward the end with the man hired by Samantha to make Emily disappear being found and arrested.
You’re so right! Samantha has definitely crossed some serious lines here… Do you think there’s a way they’ll actually hold her accountable in the story?
I love the story, but I don’t understand who lock the shop up. He couldn’t leave the jewellers open.❤❤❤❤
I thought the same thing. 😂
A lot lot of mistakes written in the story, but it’s a good story just kind of confusing
So who manned the small jewelry store that llily worked in when she ran out of the store
Good question 😂
I don’t know how this Emily can’t remember at 7 years, at least They drugged her.
Agree but drugs wear off.
Why They don’t take paternity test? Just to extend the story?
I like the Stories a lot.
But this one in red dress is Samanta, why you show her picture
Didn’t Emily’s mom during childbirth? This story is a bit contradicting. The truth is in front of Emily, yet she has difficulty believing that Michael is her father.
Bit of an odd story 🤔. Mum died in childbirth but didn't. Stepmother not brought to
task?--she wanted to make a 7 year old disappear. How can that happen?
If you find a child-you report it not adopt her unless it was nefarious but that would incriminate the adoptive parents 🤔.
If the story made sense, it could have worked !!!
Why when he found out that Samatha did this he just divorced her and not let her continue to live with him. All this yacking about this ie taking her away from dad. 😮 There is so many inconsistencies in this story. Just don't know why when people write these stories they don't find them.
Is every one a English Critic 😡
Dang you are free to rewrite the story
Folks it JUST a STORY👀chill
There was no answer for why she lost her memory. They lived in another house? Her mom passed away at birth. What was the future of Samntha? in Jail?
This story makes Michael appear no brain and stupid. As soon as knowing the truth, he should call the police and reported her. She has no sympathy to Emily why will he have one to someone like her.
Hold up...how does he have memories of her mother worrying she would fall from the tree or holding her as a baby? Didn't her mother die giving birth to her?
Also, wasn't he living in the same house with her room in the exact same condition as it was when she disappeared? Teddy bears lined up in a row, silver framed photo of her, etc... Now it is only a photo of a house they used to live in? Proofreading is necessary people!!!
It’s all lies
Suspension of disbelief.
Great catch! It's interesting how these details are often missed in editing. Do you think it could be intentional, or is it just an oversight? I wonder how other fans interpret these inconsistencies!
Why confront,he should have her investigated. He’s stupid if he thinks she’ll confess.
So your wife is the worst criminal alive. Why don't you report now to the authorities so she will pay for her crime. Wow... a criminal for a wife.
And why wouldn't the kidnapper say, I kept her safe. Your wife wanted her DEAD.
SO MANY ERRORS in what could have been good.
The story can teach step mother's a lesion
😊 part of it is slightly confusing
DNA will sort this quick smart.
😢 I have to agree with the previous commentator. There are so many irregularities in this tale, so many contradictions that it is laughable. Find some writers who can actually put it together, build a plot and stick to it, not change the story to fit
The story is fascinating.
What kind of truth you want girl ? This people didn’t now more then you knew
I love the story, but I don’t understand who lock the shop up. He couldn’t leave the jewellers open.❤❤❤❤ and I’d be telling her to get out she deliberately got rid of the daughter disgusting
She locked the store before she left but the important question is did he have his wife put in Prison for longer than the lawyer???
This story just made me angry even though their reunion was the best part ! It was a waste of my time 😮
They didn't mention how she doesn't remember being taken away. Thus is lame
Samantha should have been in jail with Hale.
They need to find out how she lost her memory ,a third person is involved ,I am guessing a Hypnosist
I could even remember many happenings, fragrance, surroundings & people I saw when I was only one year old! And she disappeared when she was seven years old!
I’m confused I thought Elizabeth died in childbirth so how could she be worried about Emily falling out of the tree
wait wait a min how could there be a picture of his late wife holding her when at the beginning of the story it says she died giving birth
He should never bother the girl who lived that life for 18 years.
Please proofread these stories before release !!!!! It was like 3 stories mixed together. And why wasn't Samantha in the cell next to the Hale fella. Who didn't see her as one of the bad guys in the beginning. Also the adopted parents being financially taken care of by Samantha. Duh!!!!
PS Also also shows enen through his grief at the loss of wife and later his daughter, as a man letting the BRAIN between his legs take 18 years to find the truth...😢☹️. So sad 😭
@@Barbara-qb5jr. Funny
@@Barbara-qb5jr yep, so sad. :(
I forgot to mention in the beginning Emily's mother died giving birth to her and later they all lived together in the Colonial house and she played in the backyard together with her mom and dad.
Yeah, I thought that was a big mistake in the story too!
I assume the stepmom was in the picture by that time
I know that part confused me.
How could there 5:05 a picture of Elizabeth with Emily when she died at childbirth at the beginning of the story.Am confused.
You did mention about that
What a wicked woman 😢
If I were the biological father, I would just give her a clump of my hair and some money for the DNA examination, to see if their DNA matched.
finally exposed the truth after many years of searching and suffering.
I miss my father :(
Its like the writer dont know how to close a story
Another EMILY...😂😅
Why the rambling? To extend the length of the story? Cone on get to the point
Then if she felt all the time that something is missing,, why the disbelief?
7 years old and don't remember??
Yes I agree didn’t make sense
Y DIDNT HE MICHAEL FILE A CASE AGAINST SAMANTHA SUE & LET HER GO 2 PRISON LIKE HALE ?
Yea
That's not love samantha, thats cruel!!!
You need to do better than this. The last one I listened to was worse! Think I’ll try somewhere else. Mother died at birth, didn’t have her room set up where he lived now but in Colonial house, didn’t get real story from Hale, etc.
Many errors in story , someone needs to edit story before posting it.
This is a good story but it is like it is rough draft and not cohesive,
First she knows she was adopted, but gets a mad at her adoptive mother for what?
Second the father in his mantion has preserved her bedroom with a very descriptive telling and next they are going through a box of of pictures and talking about a Colonial house ?
Plus many more inconsistencies.
You said her mother died at childbirth and then her mother holding her and loving her how?It is a good story if it was thought out and organised.
From Kenya East Africa.
It's a chat gpt written story that's the issues with the story. @bilhahicks2232
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I see what you mean! Maybe the storytelling could benefit from some extra depth and clarity. What would you change or add to make it more cohesive? Curious to hear your thoughts!
We all know that anyone that's adopted has a fantasy that a parent will return not for them to be the adopted child savior but to remove that little tick in the brain about being thrown away
Strange contradiction. First his wife died at childbirth. And then at 1.03.she is telling Emily says..I wish I had more time with her..looking at a picture with her mam holding her as a baby.????? How ??? This picture couldn't exist hahhaha😅
Do the DNA test pliz.
When you tell other stories ; tell if you put your X Wife in prison and make sure you know if your first wife died giving birth ! This ruined this story even though it ended well 😊
But this lady didn’t know about her parents, this LilyEmily should be very much thankfull not acuzing
Really do you think this is real some people will believe anything.
This too is not a true story, at the start the dad walks into Emily's bedroom as she left it @ 7 years old. Later in the story her dad shows her the old house she lived in when she went missing, further more he had lost everything searching for his daughter everything would include his house.
The story line contradicts itself several times. Plus kidnapping and abandoned is a serious crime i do not belive it has protection from arrest. His current wife should be charged as well as the lawyer as well as disbarred. And jail time.
These are very serious charges.
18 years is a long time but i do not belive the statues of limitations can
Protect his soon to be x wife.
Mom sounds amazing, shows her a picture of her mother holding her,
But the mother died at child birth!
Pack your bags and leave!
Indy loves her new mom, Rebecca. I’m happy for her !!!
This story is incredibly moving and beautifully written. The emotions are so raw and relatable, and it's heartwarming to see the hope and connection that Michael seeks with Emily. Thank you for sharing such a poignant tale of love and perseverance.
Please no😢te: the word gnawed at he is not use correctly; also the word side should be sighed
Someone already mentioned that wife died in childbirth then laster it's mentioned that the woman loved the baby and berks the baby. Come on. You can do better. Story was okay though. .
,🎉
Same old stories always bad endings.
They could have tried hypnosis therapy to see if that would help.
I was thinking the very same thing. It could very well be that Emily was given some kind of drugs or maybe even been hypnotized back then. He should try every avenue he can to give her back her memory..
Evem at 1.75x speed, this is 30 minutes of wasted life. Inconsistent, circular, repetetive TRIPE! This creaor is absolutely untallented.
I thought you would be happier without her?😂 wtf. Time to divorce and if no prenup sue her for destroying both your lives, kidnapping, child endangerment. Storyline is he marries a batcrap crazy woman.
😊
They are all too long,the same thing over and
over again.
There wereany bad comments so i didn'
Nice wow well done❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This is typical AI. Badly put together, full of inconsistencies.
❤❤🙏
I’m fed up with this her mother died in childbirth?????
Repeatedly story
8:14 The suspense is killing me-Lily's story feels too connected to be a coincidence!
And she had a room in the house she shared with Samantha,so on which house did Emily dissappear from?
Annoying background music or noises cause the video to be stopped immediately, given a thumbs down, and the channel blocked!
If I were the biological father, I would just give her a clump of my hair and some money for the DNA examination, to see if their DNA matched.