Mein 1.Song

Ich habe keine Ahnung, wie man gute Songs macht, aber ich habe es einfach mal versucht...
Ihr dürft den Song gerne benutzen, aber es würde mich freuen, wenn ihr mir dann Credits gebt, da ich den Song erstellt habe.

[@AnnoyingDog1]

Mein erstes Video auf TH-cam

[@commiekiller3000]

I don’t speak german, so hopefully TH-cam will do a good job translating my comment.
The song’s melody is pleasant and the arpeggiation make for some nice movement. Overall, it’s fun and simple. Keep making music and look for where you can improve. I would add a four on the floor drum beat at 0:38 because the rides and claps make it sound like the buildup to a drop.
If you want to upgrade to some better applications for making music on your IOS Device, I recommend Garage Band, which free of charge, or FL Studio Mobile, which is relatively inexpensive. The best that money can buy for a mobile device seems to be Cubasis 3 at the moment, but there seems to be many other strong alternatives compared to when I started out making music.
Watching this video brought back some good memories. I downloaded this app almost seven years ago and I immediately fell in love with making music. My music from back then sounded terrible, but I loved making it! Seven years later, I’m still learning and growing.
Anyways, cool stuff, dude! Keep it up 👍

[@AnnoyingDog1]

Hi @CommieKiller3000!!! Don't worry I do speak English almost fluently. Thank you so much for your feedback! In the future I will make some more songs but I'm going to focus on uploading video game content like Minecraft or Undertale. I'm glad that you like my song😃

[@jenspalaz2618]

Der song hört sich gut an

[@AnnoyingDog1]

Vielen Dank!

[@ValionkaVia]

Guter erster Versuch! Ich habe auch so angefangen und dann probierte ich vielmal aus, etwas zu schreiben. Welche App benutzen Sie?

[@AnnoyingDog1]

Ich benutze Medley

[@AnnoyingDog1]

Schreibt gerne in die Kommentare, wie ihr den Song findet