I particularly find young people who have the intelligence, discipline, and drive to nut out an effective process and develop legal writing skills on their own just so impressive to me personally. Bravo.
How you finished with a 1st is unreal. I just did my 1st year resit for one module 😭 I know my poor mental health and bad experiences at the time made me unable to perform my best- but I still felt ashamed failing one module (by 3%🥲). Either way, I’m going into my second year and I’m getting myself together by watching videos like this! Thanks you utter genius ❤️
I’ve never had 90% but usually get 65 to 85 percent, I generally think the reason most student never achieve extremely high marks is because we tend to leave things to last minute and we don’t have the time to finesse. Gramma, referencing, amount of reading done etc. I’m doing my MSc in Marketing and it’s very hard to even get 80% all the exemplar essays seem to cap at 75%, they often have great, original ideas and concepts but have silly mistakes throughout it
Love this, thnak you so much. I have completed my first year of my Msc in Dental Hygiene, Now started the second year. As older student, I almost forgotten how to plan essays wtc, with working a full time job as well. Finding you has been perfect. Thank you. I hope you are proud of yourself. 90 is truley amazing. :)))
I really like the way you structure your plan - I always end up putting too much information and exact quotes into the plan and it then is too much and messy. Only making note of the academic, maybe key idea and the page number is great!
Thanks! These tips were really useful, I’m going to be starting my first year soon and I’m excited but also very nervous. Hope everything goes well for you!
thank you so much for this video! I wish I had watched it earlier on in the year, your advice is really helpful :) Also, how do you get motivated to actually start writing your essays? and when do you start to write them before the date it's due? I have a bad habit leaving it to 1 or 2 days before the due dates :/
I'm glad you found it helpful! How much time I spend on an essay completely depends on how much time I have (at the moment I'm working from a rough goal to complete 10 credits a week). I think motivation is tricky because different people feel motivated by different things. I find it useful to break tasks down into smaller chunks. That way, it's not 'I have to write my essay tomorrow', it's just 'I have to read a few articles tomorrow'.
More detailed videos like this will be brilliant for people that struggle with i.e being CRitical, Evaluating, assessing etc You should break that down for people that is what i struggled with coming into year 1
Amazing video. Don’t listen to that hate comments I saw on here. You are amazing!! Honestly a 90 is incredible. Do you have any key phrases you used to make sure you are hitting the marking criteria. I used to have that for my a levels and now I’m starting law in September. I’m currently watching all your videos 😂😂 thank you for the amazing advice and sharing with this community. Role model 😇
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Things that will hit the marking criteria will vary university to university and module to module. I've always found that the important thing is understanding what each course wants from you by reading the criteria and going to office hours :) Good luck with starting Law, I'm sure you'll love it!
I'm a PhD student at the university of York and an advisor for the writing centre there, I hope it will be okay if I direct students to this video, it'll be really helpful for them. Also, you should definitely consider doing a Ph.D. in the future, you definitely have the aptitude and attitude for it, especially when it comes to engaging with scholarship. Awesome job!
Thanks, that's really nice to hear. I'm definitely considering a PhD, just waiting to see how I get on with a master's and whether I can find one topic that interests me enough. No problem at all about directing students to the video, I'm glad you think they'll find it useful :)
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I really appreciate the insight! Going to involve some of your strategies into my writing process. How many hours would you say you spend reading vs writing?
Hi Eloise. I am writing a descriptive essay on nanoengineering. I want to check it from you. would you spare some time to check it? please let me know.....
Thanks! Most of my assessments are 2000-2500 words and I could do that in a week if I worked pretty hard, so I'd guess at least two weeks. Although it'd totally depend on what it was worth and how much time I had :)
Hello! I just came across your videos and am working my way through them all. I'm a mature student looking to study law, but first I want to see if I can actually do it (before financially committing). So what I'm doing right now is studying, reading, and creating my own assignments. I wondered if you still have some example essay questions your uni gave to you that you could share? Ps: I'm loving how straightforward and clear your videos are. It is much appreciated, so thank you.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the videos and good luck with your independent studying :). Lots of the earlier essays that I was asked to write for my course went something like 'read this case and discuss whether the decision developed the law in a positive way'. I believe that in first year I was asked to look at Elitestone Ltd v Morris [1997] (a land law case) and Patel v Mirza [2016] (a contract law case). Otherwise, if you have access to them some textbooks (especially revision or concentrate books) list possible essay questions at the end of chapters too. Hope this helps!
@@eloiseslawchannel2129 thank you, that's honestly perfect and exactly the kind of thing I was looking for! I have a tendency to waffle! What did you find were the average word counts you had to adhere to?
@@eloiseslawchannel2129 oh wow, in my ecology degree they've mostly been 4000 words. One was even 8000. I'm going to need to get used to writing shorter essays, haha!
During a uni term I'm pretty sure I work a normal work week (around 35-40 hours) but at least 15 hours are normally contact hours rather than just reading, and a few more will be writing/ preparing papers etc. I find it really useful to take thorough uniform notes that I'll be able to understand later. The most important thing is that you analyse what you're reading carefully :)
Why isn't it possible to achieve 100% grade with university work? Even if everything is perfect, how can you possibly improve. It's a broken grading system.
I feel I have a good process for writing my essays but seem to be stuck on a mid 2.1. I got one 75% in my first year but cannot seem to breach the 70% barrier now I'm in second year. This year its been 65% most of the time even when I ask for feedback and do everything asked.
That must be really frustrating, especially if you're really trying to hit the marking criteria. I haven't had any grades back so far this year (I'm about to get my first marks back this week) so I'm not too confident giving advice on this sort of thing just yet. I really hope you manage to figure it out though! :)
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The style you have tried to integrate into this video is extremely obnoxious and distracting. The intercuts are long and shot entirely differently to your webcam discussion. The whole inclusion of the drink looks tacky. It's not relevant, it doesn't give off the relaxed vibe you think it does. You might have had some good points but it's situated between unhelpful filler that made this needlessly long. You should consider video essays like written essays. Your subheadings don't need to take up an entire page of your document, do they?
I'm impressed with the effort that went into this hate comment. Good use of research but poor structure overall, would've benefited from subheadings. 70%.
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90 is truly outstanding. You should be proud and never be ashamed of your pride. :)
one time I got a 90 by guessing the answer a day before deadline and putting the citations in after lmao
I particularly find young people who have the intelligence, discipline, and drive to nut out an effective process and develop legal writing skills on their own just so impressive to me personally. Bravo.
This is such a helpful video, thank you! I'm doing an LLM at the moment after years out of studying, and your approach is fab.
I’m in the same boat. Congratulations and goodluck with your LLM. I wish you all the best x
How you finished with a 1st is unreal. I just did my 1st year resit for one module 😭 I know my poor mental health and bad experiences at the time made me unable to perform my best- but I still felt ashamed failing one module (by 3%🥲).
Either way, I’m going into my second year and I’m getting myself together by watching videos like this! Thanks you utter genius ❤️
I’ve never had 90% but usually get 65 to 85 percent, I generally think the reason most student never achieve extremely high marks is because we tend to leave things to last minute and we don’t have the time to finesse. Gramma, referencing, amount of reading done etc. I’m doing my MSc in Marketing and it’s very hard to even get 80% all the exemplar essays seem to cap at 75%, they often have great, original ideas and concepts but have silly mistakes throughout it
Love this, thnak you so much. I have completed my first year of my Msc in Dental Hygiene, Now started the second year. As older student, I almost forgotten how to plan essays wtc, with working a full time job as well. Finding you has been perfect. Thank you. I hope you are proud of yourself. 90 is truley amazing. :)))
Thankyou for this video ! I just got a 94 on my sociology essay which i am stoked about :D I am in Australia...
Wow that's fantastic, congratulations! :)
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Great essay plan I’m in my first year of uni study straight law llb and this is really going to help me out
I'm so glad it was useful! Good luck with your essays :)
I really like the way you structure your plan - I always end up putting too much information and exact quotes into the plan and it then is too much and messy. Only making note of the academic, maybe key idea and the page number is great!
Thank you so much for this video. I was overwhelmed looking at an intellectual property law essay and thinking what do I start? I love this video.
This helped so much. I’m a first year student and struggling so thank you!
that's amazing, well done!!!! thanks for sharing your tips
Thanks! These tips were really useful, I’m going to be starting my first year soon and I’m excited but also very nervous. Hope everything goes well for you!
Thank you! Good luck with starting uni, I'm sure you'll have a really good time :)
You saved my day! this is great, and well done on your grade! my sister just got a 90 in forensic accountancy, it is like the unicorn grade! :)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the video :) Congrats to your sister, that's really impressive!
thank you so much for this video! I wish I had watched it earlier on in the year, your advice is really helpful :) Also, how do you get motivated to actually start writing your essays? and when do you start to write them before the date it's due? I have a bad habit leaving it to 1 or 2 days before the due dates :/
I'm glad you found it helpful! How much time I spend on an essay completely depends on how much time I have (at the moment I'm working from a rough goal to complete 10 credits a week). I think motivation is tricky because different people feel motivated by different things. I find it useful to break tasks down into smaller chunks. That way, it's not 'I have to write my essay tomorrow', it's just 'I have to read a few articles tomorrow'.
thank you for the tips!!
This is excellent... thanks for sharing!
Brilliant breakdown
More detailed videos like this will be brilliant for people that struggle with i.e being CRitical, Evaluating, assessing etc
You should break that down for people that is what i struggled with coming into year 1
Amazing video. Don’t listen to that hate comments I saw on here. You are amazing!! Honestly a 90 is incredible. Do you have any key phrases you used to make sure you are hitting the marking criteria. I used to have that for my a levels and now I’m starting law in September. I’m currently watching all your videos 😂😂 thank you for the amazing advice and sharing with this community. Role model 😇
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Things that will hit the marking criteria will vary university to university and module to module. I've always found that the important thing is understanding what each course wants from you by reading the criteria and going to office hours :) Good luck with starting Law, I'm sure you'll love it!
Eloise Harris-Hews thank you so much for your reply 😊
Really helpful thank you.
Super helpful, thank you!
amazing work and well done!! hoping to get a first class law degree and the best grades possible as ai graduate next semester!!
thanks for sharing your tips ☺️
:) no problem, thanks for watching!
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I'm a PhD student at the university of York and an advisor for the writing centre there, I hope it will be okay if I direct students to this video, it'll be really helpful for them. Also, you should definitely consider doing a Ph.D. in the future, you definitely have the aptitude and attitude for it, especially when it comes to engaging with scholarship. Awesome job!
Thanks, that's really nice to hear. I'm definitely considering a PhD, just waiting to see how I get on with a master's and whether I can find one topic that interests me enough. No problem at all about directing students to the video, I'm glad you think they'll find it useful :)
Hey again, just a question, for a 6000 word legal research essay, how many sub arguments would you include? :)
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I really appreciate the insight! Going to involve some of your strategies into my writing process. How many hours would you say you spend reading vs writing?
Thank you ❤️
Great info 👍
video starts at 2:02
How do you answer a “critically analyse” question ?
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Hi Eloise. I am writing a descriptive essay on nanoengineering. I want to check it from you. would you spare some time to check it? please let me know.....
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Interesting video! How much time does it usually take you to write a 5000-word essay (including all five stages)?
Thanks! Most of my assessments are 2000-2500 words and I could do that in a week if I worked pretty hard, so I'd guess at least two weeks. Although it'd totally depend on what it was worth and how much time I had :)
Hello! I just came across your videos and am working my way through them all.
I'm a mature student looking to study law, but first I want to see if I can actually do it (before financially committing). So what I'm doing right now is studying, reading, and creating my own assignments. I wondered if you still have some example essay questions your uni gave to you that you could share?
Ps: I'm loving how straightforward and clear your videos are. It is much appreciated, so thank you.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the videos and good luck with your independent studying :). Lots of the earlier essays that I was asked to write for my course went something like 'read this case and discuss whether the decision developed the law in a positive way'. I believe that in first year I was asked to look at Elitestone Ltd v Morris [1997] (a land law case) and Patel v Mirza [2016] (a contract law case). Otherwise, if you have access to them some textbooks (especially revision or concentrate books) list possible essay questions at the end of chapters too. Hope this helps!
@@eloiseslawchannel2129 thank you, that's honestly perfect and exactly the kind of thing I was looking for! I have a tendency to waffle! What did you find were the average word counts you had to adhere to?
@@brionyhall4250 The first essay I wrote was 1500 words, later ones were 2000, and in third year it's gone up to 3000 :)
@@eloiseslawchannel2129 oh wow, in my ecology degree they've mostly been 4000 words. One was even 8000. I'm going to need to get used to writing shorter essays, haha!
What are the things to include in an introduction
Thank you may I ask for reading tips please and how many hours do you read daily usually ???
During a uni term I'm pretty sure I work a normal work week (around 35-40 hours) but at least 15 hours are normally contact hours rather than just reading, and a few more will be writing/ preparing papers etc. I find it really useful to take thorough uniform notes that I'll be able to understand later. The most important thing is that you analyse what you're reading carefully :)
Any tips on structure to practise notes ???
Why isn't it possible to achieve 100% grade with university work? Even if everything is perfect, how can you possibly improve. It's a broken grading system.
how do you structure your essays?
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I feel I have a good process for writing my essays but seem to be stuck on a mid 2.1. I got one 75% in my first year but cannot seem to breach the 70% barrier now I'm in second year. This year its been 65% most of the time even when I ask for feedback and do everything asked.
That must be really frustrating, especially if you're really trying to hit the marking criteria. I haven't had any grades back so far this year (I'm about to get my first marks back this week) so I'm not too confident giving advice on this sort of thing just yet. I really hope you manage to figure it out though! :)
@@eloiseslawchannel2129 Thats fair! Ive only got half back so far so might be better for the most recent stuff. :) Hope you get the grades you want x
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Sound is very low. So please speak loudly. Or make another video on essay writing with better sound quality.
The style you have tried to integrate into this video is extremely obnoxious and distracting. The intercuts are long and shot entirely differently to your webcam discussion. The whole inclusion of the drink looks tacky. It's not relevant, it doesn't give off the relaxed vibe you think it does. You might have had some good points but it's situated between unhelpful filler that made this needlessly long. You should consider video essays like written essays. Your subheadings don't need to take up an entire page of your document, do they?
I'm impressed with the effort that went into this hate comment. Good use of research but poor structure overall, would've benefited from subheadings. 70%.
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