Not bad but would consider a rewrite on human strategy. Maybe humans sacrifice most of the fleet so one can get through ala Enders Game or maybe they attack everywhere at once with a small force going after the nexus… calling upon sun tzu or Clausewitz to build some tension… and what if humans weren’t worshipped afterwords but feared for their ruthlessness… just some spitball ideas
Not bad but would consider a rewrite on human strategy. Maybe humans sacrifice most of the fleet so one can get through ala Enders Game or maybe they attack everywhere at once with a small force going after the nexus… calling upon sun tzu or Clausewitz to build some tension… and what if humans weren’t worshipped afterwords but feared for their ruthlessness… just some spitball ideas