Oh wow, the way you've reworked the direct translation here is PHENOMENAL. I think the actual vocal performance could use work, but the writing is exactly on point!! From "Is it magic or a lie" through to the end of the Falin themed pre-chorus had me utterly blown away - you communicated the meaning of the original very clearly while still giving it a perfect flow in English.
It’s just primal, about the survival instinct of all living beings that will just continue trying to live by eating and be eaten regardless of how they feel, that’s how I read it
Or maybe, its all about what life is supposed to be. If a love one die, the world will continue as normal. If society were to change, only those really cared about it will change while no others just do what they do. Life doesn't revolve around you, so just live and continue, not all goals are absolute and not all problems are roadblocks. We still breathe
Fantastic! the lyrics and tone all flow just as nicely as they do in the original japanese, and hearing it in me native language also helps the lyrics REALLY work better. I'm captvated, buddy, and you've drawn first blood as far as covers for this tune seems, so well done indeed! Keep at it, and keep seeking the adventures ahead, this is what it's all about! Awesome video you put together too, saw some good action-beats and visual gags here and there, nice~
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this!! 😊 Happy the visuals landed too, this is my first time doing an AMV-sort of thing like this so I was curious how it would come out 🤭 ~ Sparrow
The lyrics turned out great!! I looked at the original translation and Wow, you made it flow so much better in english! very obsessed with the chorus btw :D
I have already lost count of how many times I have listened to this in the past two days 😆CAN'T BELIEVE YOU HAD THIS IDEA SINCE EPISODE 1??? the power of Dungeon Meshi... :0
Hey, this is awesome! Thanks for sharing and putting it together. I really like how you translated the chorus so that it rhymes on -ing. It makes for some lovely poetic sentence constructions. I also like the rhyming throughout the song, and you did a good job of matching the lyrics to the beats.
Oh... these lyrics are so nice. They flow so nice, I think. I like these lyrics more than most covers I've seen and that it captures the feeling more. "From its cage, a nightingale cried out a song of sorrow, its verse, you can't reverse the things that you have lost today, tomorrow." Hello????!?!?!? Ok, you ate. You slayed. Ate and left no crumbs. Oh and my absolute favorite part of the song that's just so... arughhgyuyghh. It is just so dungeon meshi. "Why should I move on? Just what is my heart seeking? A rhythmic thrum, pounding drum, constantly beating. Our breathing signs of life, exhaled without a feeling. More times than I can count, too easily releasing" Ohhh this is so good. I'm a first time listener and this is my first impression of your voice. It sounds... raw. I think it's good and it adds charm. But it does sound... strange? I'm not sure what to call it. Oh but God. These lyrics. I'd write them in my common book because I just love the prose. I'd love to see how you grow. Keep singing and writing!
This is so good! I've been asking myself why nobody made an english version of this song, it's such a bop :) Loved your version, there are some really inspired verses!
Halloo I came back to say that this cover's really good!! Love the lyrics it flow so nicely. Translators often gets swept by the need to keep it 100% accurate to the original lyrics that they forget to make it sound and flow good, so kudos!! Im singing with u at home 💗
I love the lyrics, they have a very catchy flow with the rhymes! It's a pretty tough song to translate and then match the flow of the melody and meaning.
These lyrics are phenomenal! I want to ask if I could use them in a synthV cover of sleep walking orchestra, with credits of course! Totally understand if not though!
I actually think that the singer was alright, it just needs a little touch of autotune and maybe some better editing to make it better (and a better mic)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the vocal translation, and thanks for the suggestions! Were there any particular spots you felt the vocals seemed weak on? Personally I know I struggled to get the harmonies to sound quite right as I struggle a lot to pick out the particular tones in them by ear for some reason. ~ Sparrow
@LaserBearCatGaming I think the louder parts had a bit of an echo that made it sound a little bit like a karaoke room, other than that and the chorus/harmony bits, you did really well! The bit at 1:08 sounded especially good.
@@Eagle-2448hmmm, I did apply a light reverb to the whole track, perhaps that could be what's coming through, maybe not the best decision then? 💀 good to know lol! Thank you much! 🙏 ~ S
@@LaserBearCatGamingPersonally would say if you could make the volume of the lyrics and the music match more to the ratio in the original it might help it sound less like karaoke.
Thank you!! I have not done any more here yet, but I do have a cover of the second DunMeshi OP cooking on the backburner, just struggling a lil more with coming up with a good translation for that one 😅
Nice flow. But I think VAguy flubbed it by trying too hard to emulate the lyricist of BOC? I do get that the original singer really had this signature tone that makes the song sound so "fluffy." Would have been better if they experimented with different deliveries something else might fit better in english.
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Oh wow, the way you've reworked the direct translation here is PHENOMENAL. I think the actual vocal performance could use work, but the writing is exactly on point!! From "Is it magic or a lie" through to the end of the Falin themed pre-chorus had me utterly blown away - you communicated the meaning of the original very clearly while still giving it a perfect flow in English.
I like that I can’t tell if the lyrics are optimistic or pessimistic or maybe a little nihilistic.
It’s just primal, about the survival instinct of all living beings that will just continue trying to live by eating and be eaten regardless of how they feel, that’s how I read it
@@RadenWA To me it kinda speaks to the drive that comes from passions and special interest. Though this also me reacting to the songs official video.
Or maybe, its all about what life is supposed to be. If a love one die, the world will continue as normal. If society were to change, only those really cared about it will change while no others just do what they do. Life doesn't revolve around you, so just live and continue, not all goals are absolute and not all problems are roadblocks. We still breathe
optimistic nihilism! my favorite philosophy
Fantastic! the lyrics and tone all flow just as nicely as they do in the original japanese, and hearing it in me native language also helps the lyrics REALLY work better. I'm captvated, buddy, and you've drawn first blood as far as covers for this tune seems, so well done indeed! Keep at it, and keep seeking the adventures ahead, this is what it's all about! Awesome video you put together too, saw some good action-beats and visual gags here and there, nice~
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this!! 😊 Happy the visuals landed too, this is my first time doing an AMV-sort of thing like this so I was curious how it would come out 🤭 ~ Sparrow
The lyrics turned out great!! I looked at the original translation and Wow, you made it flow so much better in english! very obsessed with the chorus btw :D
This has just gone on my playlist lol. You did amazingly
I have already lost count of how many times I have listened to this in the past two days 😆CAN'T BELIEVE YOU HAD THIS IDEA SINCE EPISODE 1??? the power of Dungeon Meshi... :0
awesome job reworking the lyrics to flow in English! you captured the spirit of the original lyrics really well
Hey, this is awesome! Thanks for sharing and putting it together. I really like how you translated the chorus so that it rhymes on -ing. It makes for some lovely poetic sentence constructions. I also like the rhyming throughout the song, and you did a good job of matching the lyrics to the beats.
Oh... these lyrics are so nice. They flow so nice, I think. I like these lyrics more than most covers I've seen and that it captures the feeling more.
"From its cage, a nightingale cried out a song of sorrow, its verse, you can't reverse the things that you have lost today, tomorrow."
Hello????!?!?!? Ok, you ate. You slayed. Ate and left no crumbs. Oh and my absolute favorite part of the song that's just so... arughhgyuyghh. It is just so dungeon meshi.
"Why should I move on? Just what is my heart seeking? A rhythmic thrum, pounding drum, constantly beating. Our breathing signs of life, exhaled without a feeling. More times than I can count, too easily releasing"
Ohhh this is so good. I'm a first time listener and this is my first impression of your voice. It sounds... raw. I think it's good and it adds charm. But it does sound... strange? I'm not sure what to call it. Oh but God. These lyrics. I'd write them in my common book because I just love the prose. I'd love to see how you grow. Keep singing and writing!
I love this translation! Any time an English cover of an anime song rhymes, you know they put a lot of work into making it flow naturally.
Cant believe its full
Me encanta!! thanks for sharing!!
This is so good! I've been asking myself why nobody made an english version of this song, it's such a bop :) Loved your version, there are some really inspired verses!
The lyrics are SO GOOD 🤩
Halloo I came back to say that this cover's really good!! Love the lyrics it flow so nicely. Translators often gets swept by the need to keep it 100% accurate to the original lyrics that they forget to make it sound and flow good, so kudos!! Im singing with u at home 💗
I love the lyrics, they have a very catchy flow with the rhymes! It's a pretty tough song to translate and then match the flow of the melody and meaning.
Great 👍👍👍
Thank you
well, good cover men. u make me happy. I'm not laughing at u. This is just make me happy 😊
The voice is so similar! Have you sung the Spy Family ops before? Your voice sounds so familiar!
These lyrics are phenomenal! I want to ask if I could use them in a synthV cover of sleep walking orchestra, with credits of course! Totally understand if not though!
@@untitleduntitled6257 Thank you so much!! Yeah I'm cool with that, I'd love to see when it's completed! 😊
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Wow, those lyrics are amazing. Nicely done! Now if only the voice and recording were better... try finding a singer to record it?
I actually think that the singer was alright, it just needs a little touch of autotune and maybe some better editing to make it better (and a better mic)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the vocal translation, and thanks for the suggestions! Were there any particular spots you felt the vocals seemed weak on? Personally I know I struggled to get the harmonies to sound quite right as I struggle a lot to pick out the particular tones in them by ear for some reason. ~ Sparrow
@LaserBearCatGaming I think the louder parts had a bit of an echo that made it sound a little bit like a karaoke room, other than that and the chorus/harmony bits, you did really well! The bit at 1:08 sounded especially good.
@@Eagle-2448hmmm, I did apply a light reverb to the whole track, perhaps that could be what's coming through, maybe not the best decision then? 💀 good to know lol!
Thank you much! 🙏 ~ S
@@LaserBearCatGamingPersonally would say if you could make the volume of the lyrics and the music match more to the ratio in the original it might help it sound less like karaoke.
Have you done other anime covers? Because you really need to make more of these!
Thank you!! I have not done any more here yet, but I do have a cover of the second DunMeshi OP cooking on the backburner, just struggling a lil more with coming up with a good translation for that one 😅
@@LaserBearCatGaming I'll be sure to check it out when you do
ahhh mis oidos jajajajaja
I love the translation lyrics, but the voice just doesn't hit the way it should to be perfect cover. Maybe try another record?
Good job anyway!
Nice flow. But I think VAguy flubbed it by trying too hard to emulate the lyricist of BOC?
I do get that the original singer really had this signature tone that makes the song sound so "fluffy."
Would have been better if they experimented with different deliveries something else might fit better in english.