If I Could Tell Her. Part 5 (1hr: The Last Battle of Shadow Moth) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic/Audiofic
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 20 ต.ค. 2024
- Non - lyrical Part 5: Whilst Marinette and Adrien try to hide the Miracle Box, around them Paris is descending into chaos. After recruiting their team, Ladybug second guesses her plan as Cat Noir fixes his sights on stopping his father who schemes his victory from the shadows.
Non-lyrical Part 4: Adrien reeling from the confrontation with Shadow Moth, now has to contend with further disclosed secrets as they try to work out what to do next...
Non-lyrical Part 3: Cat Noir heads back to his home or his prison with a plan to confront his father...
Non-lyrical Part 2: Marinette tries to cope with waiting to see Adrien that night whilst he has his own additional challenges to over come to get back to her... all for the possibilities of love... if he could tell her...
• If I Could Tell Her. P...
Part 1: Cat pops by to visit his princess but isn't prepared for what she has to say...
• If I Could Tell Her: P...
Part 1 uses the lyrics in the song 'If I Could Tell Her' featured in the musical 'Dear Evan Hanson. Lyrics in bold.
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![Lets redesign Marinette!! [this took 3 years to make]](/img/n.gif)
"Us... Bugaboo... Not just you... Together" I'm dying for this to happen in the show, cause as much as we have reasons to be mad at the way LB is treating Chat there, being the Guardian put many more responsibilities on her shoulders... Like if she fails once is enough to Hawckmoth get not only her Miraculous but THE ENTIRE BOX... it's not fair for her alone to deal with that one
Okay! I am going to need to see them cuddling after the fact! This is a serious thing here, Dawn! Epic. The Queen of Cliffhangers is off to challenge Mira herself! I'll bring the popcorn!🍿🍿🍿🍿
Agreed!!
"...it's about feeling it... here" I'm already weak! Stop that, Chat 🙈
Hello 👋 Sorry for the late upload, I couldn't stop writing again and now ended up with an hour long part. So get comfy and I hope you enjoy part 5, the last Battle of Shadow Moth! 👊💖🙀🐞
I am so excited to hear this and an 1hr long goodness 😍 thanks. Can't wait to listwn to it all.
I'm barely reading your story because I'm sick but it sounds really good
Can you take I'm excited for chapter 4 a birthday surprise
When is the chapter 4 for perfect birthday coming out
That was simply awesome Dawn! I loved every part of that! The fact you had Shadowmoth take Viperion out of the picture from the beginning, the sound effects in the staff/cane sword fight in the dark, all of if was amazing! I can see why you spent extra time on this before posting it!
Great job Dawn, this is one of your best.
Wow, thank you - that means a lot!! 😄
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Honestly those additional sounds surprised me!
Not to mention the viperion play. I was expecting him to be taken by Shadowmoth in the Louvre, but it makes so much more sense that he was a Senti-Monster before the fight even began! Maybe…
I also love how you had Polymouse go off as a scout in the beginning after Style-Queen. Namely because in my head it makes a lot of sense for the Mouse Miraculous to have a better time scouting or surveying an area.
@@Will-mk5pj I'm glad they worked, but when I rendered the video, they must have shifted slightly as they just off point to their placement. And I wasn't sure if they would come off sounding random. 🙄
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous They probably weren’t perfect from your perspective but from listening to it I thought they fit rather well. They didn’t sound random, the context of a sword fight between Shadowmoth and Cat made it make sense.
Oh! On a complete sidenote, I found a series of 1-2 minute long videos of Kuro Neko and I must admit, its actually a good episode. There are… some details I personally don’t like. Namely the ending, Cat Noir forgives Ladybug way too fast in my opinion.
I love marichat mondays, even when its day later
lol Happy to hear, hope you're enjoying it. 😺
1 HOUR
Time to get the popcorn and drinks for this
AWWWWWWW! I Love it! Now my poor babies can rest for a bit 🤧
Just spent the night binge watching this series, so excited for the last part! I have a lot to catch up on 😁
After part 5, I have 2 oneshots coming up and then a season 2 to the series. So glad you're enjoying it 😊 💗
Binged the whole story, insta subscribed. I really want even a short happily ever after
Hello Kailyn, thanks for subscribing and welcome to the community 😀 there is more to this story coming soon, just waiting on a couple of thing. In the mean time there is tones more to binge 😉😸
Ladybug: I don't see why we would need jubilation during this battle
Also Ladybug: needs to use the Pig Miraculous in order to win later in the story
Just found this foreshadowing funny lol 😂
Oh, and the music and sound effects were AMAZING!
Hehe thank you! 😊
love it!! this was wonderfully done!! can’t wait for your next vids!✨❤️🐞🐈⬛
Thank you ❤️ usually I don't like listening to long audiofics cuz I fall asleep quickly but this one didn't make me sleepy so I could listen to all of it 😄
😄 I know what you mean. Glad you enjoyed it. 😉
Awesome! Caught the Viperion foreshadowing and wished LB would trust her gut but how often does she not overthink? Nice!!
Now THIS is a gift.
This was truly amazing. I loved every moment. I would also love for you to continue this to "show" what Gabrial saw in gift, and then have Ladybug and Cat Noir explore the grimoire and figure out how to fix/heal someone who had used a broken miraculous (Eamalie, and Natalie) because it had happened in the past, and that is the reason why there are instructions on how to fix a broken miraculous.
So glad you enjoyed it and yes, it will be continuing and thank you for the suggestions 😊
I was sooooo into this!!!! I forgot it had to end 😭💔😂 I really love it, it was amazing!!! Can't wait to know what happened next!
aww thanks, but yeah after an hour I needed to stop but there will be another part coming soon, called 'One Day' 😃💖
Cool!!! I know it's gonna be awesome!!
"I think you can do anything, my lady" 🤧🤧🤧🤧
The sound of the swords made me shiver
Loved it wish you would do a part or about after the fight and how everyone is recovering and reacting .
This was amazing! 💕 beautiful job with this series, thank you for writing such truly wonderful stories!! 💝💕💗
Thank you so much! 💖 and there are more parts coming soon.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous super excited! 🤗
It was epic!!!!!!!🤯🤯😱😱 I loved it!!!!
Holy guacamole… that WAS ✨epic✨. 🤩🤯🥺👀👌🏻✨✨
Wooooooo please don't let it end there that's was great your voice sounds great you are great just love it.
No, it doesn't end there, I have two oneshot planned and possibly a second series.
I just need to say, your work is amazing and you are so dedicated to making us enjoy the experience the most ❤ the suspense song in the background put me so deep in the history, like I was watching a movie. I just realized how tense I was when I paused the video and the song stopped. Thank you so much
You are so welcome and really happy you enjoyed it so much! 😊 your encouragement means a lot, so thank you! 💖
I’d love to see another part 😃💕💖✨🐞🐾
There are two oneshots coming, I am currently waiting on commissioned piece of art. After that, there maybe a second half to the series. But they are coming I promise you. 😉🌟
Wait, this was your first hawkmoth showdown? I would never have figured that, exceptionally well done! This is probably in my top 3 bext ones, or at least still top 5 as I may be forgetting some ones I heard years ago.
"...the love was overwhealming as happy tears forming in his" 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧
*settles in with some chippies and some fresh juice
Been looking forward to this!!
Sooooooo? What you think 🤔? Lol 😬🥺
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I keep having to stop and start thanks to having kids at home today 😅
Have really enjoyed it but need to make time once they go to bed to listen right through
OK they're in bed and asleep so I'm going to multi task and get this started again while I'm in the shower and getting stuff organised for work tomorrow!!
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous oh I loved that interaction at the start where she is trying to glare at him and failing 😂
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Alya is either going to have ALL the questions tomorrow or has already worked it out, there will be no middle ground with her 😂😂
It was lovely❤ it was beautiful😍 it was full of surprises 😃 Battle with shadow moth was described so well. 👍 And yes I do like it.
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This is so good you are my favorite Miraculous Fanfic writer.
Wow, thank you 😊 so glad you are enjoying it. 😄
I hope this is how it goes in the real final battle.
OMG YAS I am doing my homework and watching this
We need another part! What do they do with Gabriel? How will everyone treat Adrien? So many Questions!!!
There are more parts to come but waiting on a art commission for the thumbnail to come first. 😀🌟
Hey Dawn, hope all is well.
can’t wait eeeeekkkkk😍🥰😍🥰
Hope you enjoy!! 😺
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous oh I did enjoy it very much, absolutely amazing 🤩 🐞🐈⬛
OMG THIS WAS THE BEST AHHHH
Wow, thank you, glad you enjoyed it so much! 😊
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous AH OMG YOU’RE WELCOME!! YOU ARE SO UNDERRATED!!
I hope we don’t have to wait that long for the next story
Please do a part 6 it was soooo good 😊
There will be a special oneshot, hoping to have it out on Friday, of the day after the battle... 😏😉
Can’t wait 😜
AHHH AN HOUR LONG PT 5 :O
This was AMAZING! I can't wait for the one shots/hopefully next part to come!
omg this was SO good!!!
Wow grate scenario
Okay, Where's part 6?? I need part 6
Also I listened to this series to help me fall asleep, now it's 2 am 😂
I kinda want a part 6 to see the aftermath of the fight, mainly a certain reporter asking ladybug/Marinette how she got cat/Adrien as a boyfriend, ah the chaos, or perhaps a celebration of finally defeating shadow moth.
I am currently working on Part 6: Coffee Break, taking place straight after the battle and Part 7: One Day. I am also working on a season 2 of the series. 😀🌠
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Can't wait 😁😁
It was very well done!
Love it
Loving this series
Loved it very good
Glad you liked it 😊
I have no words
I hope in a good way? 😊
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous you have noooo idea🤩🤩
Viperion and Purple Tigress are sus right now. I'm also commenting before listening all the way through lol. I'll be back
Can't wait to read your thoughts of it afterward. 😀
The thumbnail is just too much for my heart 😭
Yeah!
The erie music in the backgrlund makes it all the more real in my mind
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For the algorithm
"Kitty... Stay safe... No bug risks... Ok... Not today" please chat please chat please chat please chat please chat please chat please chat please chat
SHE DIDN'T PROMISE BACK!! SHE DIDN'T... oh god... SHE DIDN'T! Ladybug TAKE. CARE!
i didnt trust that the fight actually ended when it did but i guess thats just from all the twists in the fight
When is the bonus part is coming out??
I am waiting for an art commission for the thumbnail, once I have that, I will upload the two one-shots. 😊
I wonder where or what happens to Gabriel and adrienette hope there’s another part
Hmm....Something missing
HUH
Mayura?
I don't think I'm ready lmao
OMG U DID IT AGAIN
@@ashthegreat1371 😄 I hope that's a good thing?! 🙎♀️
Yes a very good thing lmao
😲 omg!! Eeeks!!
Please tell me there's a next part 🥲
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Yes, I'm planning on more to come, first should be a oneshot on Friday. 😉
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous yay! I am glad ♡ can't wait. ♡
You mean the pig miraculous was this powerful this whole time
22:18 min what are Alya and Nino referring to?
I don't like being a fast reader sometimes. I can read it before the emotion gets through and I don't like that for this fanfic
Noooooooo cliff hanger
Guys I know how to fix everything cataclysm the ladybug snake and bunny miraculous and boom every fixed
But what about the Kwamis? Tikki? 🥺
Haha didn’t think about that lol
Okay, Where's part 6?? I need part 6
Also I listened to this series to help me fall asleep, now it's 2 am 😂