This is sick af but the clean vocals sound weird and don't fit. It sounds almost like an audio recording on a phone of someone just talking. The whole composition is dope AF I'm genuinely not trying to be a hater. The clean vocals just threw me off immediately, I thought different audio was playing behind it from another app or something at first. Instrumentation is sick af tho can't stress that enough. Also I'm a dumbass so feel free to completely disregard.
hey man no worries! this is our first production with vocals entirely done by us so there’s definitely room for improvement. thank you for the feedback and i’m happy you enjoyed the rest of the song 💚
@@PierceAkersI think the only thing the clean vocals needed was to be a lil quieter, the overall eq and compression on them sounded good 🤷🏻♂️ sick ass track though!!
This track is almost there. I'm gonna reiterate whats already been said, vox are a lil hot in the mix. Maybe too forward, like the band is playing behind the singer or something. Much love, will keep an eye out for this project!
Absolute banger my man, athough I have to agree with others on the clean vocals mix. Especially the first part sounds weird. You are a very talented musician, so this is just some friendly feedback from someone who would like to see you gaining more traction in the music world. You absolutely deserve it.
amazing song my G!! hate to be one to compare when this is very very original sounding but there were parts of this track that really gave me Glass Cloud vibes and i loved that so much :') and that ending was SIIIICK
It’s sick to see that you got your own music going. I’m excited what you have in store with us soon 👀. On another note, and if you’re not willing that’s okay, would you release the stems? I wanna try mixing what you’ve got here!
Amazing work man, stank face throughout. Instrumentals sound on point, but the vox could use a little more glue. The clean and dirty stand apart from the rest of the mix a bit too much. Composition and musicality was freaking top notch though!
guys will listen to something like this and think, "hell yea"
Hell yeah
This is sick af but the clean vocals sound weird and don't fit. It sounds almost like an audio recording on a phone of someone just talking. The whole composition is dope AF I'm genuinely not trying to be a hater. The clean vocals just threw me off immediately, I thought different audio was playing behind it from another app or something at first. Instrumentation is sick af tho can't stress that enough. Also I'm a dumbass so feel free to completely disregard.
hey man no worries! this is our first production with vocals entirely done by us so there’s definitely room for improvement. thank you for the feedback and i’m happy you enjoyed the rest of the song 💚
Imma agree with you 100%, same happened to me.
Clean vocals need to be completely remixed.
However, instrumental fucks häard.
I wanted to write the same. Cool track though. Reminds Joshua Travis a bit.
@@PierceAkersI think the only thing the clean vocals needed was to be a lil quieter, the overall eq and compression on them sounded good 🤷🏻♂️ sick ass track though!!
Big chungus
This track is almost there. I'm gonna reiterate whats already been said, vox are a lil hot in the mix. Maybe too forward, like the band is playing behind the singer or something. Much love, will keep an eye out for this project!
Absolute banger my man, athough I have to agree with others on the clean vocals mix. Especially the first part sounds weird. You are a very talented musician, so this is just some friendly feedback from someone who would like to see you gaining more traction in the music world. You absolutely deserve it.
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Been waiting a long time to hear this. So thicc. Can't wait to see where this goes next.
Amazing guitar work and screams. Clean vocals are really hard to place in Thall/Deathcore. Can't wait to see you perfect it.
Some pretty gritty lows. And that crazy guitar shit around the 2:20 mark and after was wicked cool too. Stoked for some more new jams!
Love it! Sooo good bro!
Chorus is sick. Glass cloudy / Loathe cold sun vibes
Instrumental is insane.
Love how it gets super thally towards the end.
Poopoopeepee 😮
So proud of ya bruv. Was awesome to listen with you at GORF!!
amazing song my G!! hate to be one to compare when this is very very original sounding but there were parts of this track that really gave me Glass Cloud vibes and i loved that so much :') and that ending was SIIIICK
Instrumental plz. Sick track
1:12 reminds me of a band but i can't remember their name ! fml anyway this song is sick !!!
It’s sick to see that you got your own music going. I’m excited what you have in store with us soon 👀. On another note, and if you’re not willing that’s okay, would you release the stems? I wanna try mixing what you’ve got here!
@pierce a please let him do this!
Its too soon for them to release stems imo, let them cook their sauce
@@anonazerty165 touché
man y'all ain't come to play
Amazing work man, stank face throughout. Instrumentals sound on point, but the vox could use a little more glue. The clean and dirty stand apart from the rest of the mix a bit too much. Composition and musicality was freaking top notch though!