I really liked the concept behind the story. Very interesting idea and it could have made for a great story. However, I think the writing was amateurish, the pacing and character building poorly done, and just overall it wasnt properly fleshed out. A story this grand needs to be longer and it needs good writing to really shine. One particular issue when it came to the story was the missing explanation for Pam and the hacker guy. It was never explained what happened. Pam was supposed to be the main characters love interest yet he seemed to care very little that she dissapeared. A lot of the motivations for the characters just didnt make sense like why dale would give a ring of that kind of power to the main character or even allow him permission to travel to earth at all, why risk it? It just doesnt make sense. There is a lot more but I'll stop here I'm not trying to be mean btw. Just giving some constructive, and honest, criticism
Voice actor here! I certainly appreciate anyone taking the time to offer feedback on our content, as long as it's given in good faith. So thank you :-) I'm sure Arinze (the writer) will find it useful.
@@bominablebominations Yeah I really did mean it in good faith. For whatbits worth I enjoyed the voice acting and the audio effect edits and soundtracks too. Cheers
Omg wtf is happening my dudes!?🤷♀️ Am I just an idiot or does it not feel like being told to start reading a book, but then you realize that the book your reading is actually the second book in a series of books. Except when you say screw it and go to start at the beginning of the book, suddenly you notice that the first 2 chapters are in fact missing. So there you are…trying to enjoy a story that seems quite interesting but your missing like most of the “set up” to the story oss !?🤦♀️🤨😳 But…it still has some interesting stuff going on within that intrigues me a bit🤔
@@Aburame9595 I’m Pureblood and had symptoms for one evening. I’m outside doing yard work and living life. I’ve had a normal flu far worse that this chumanflu
Thanks for the feedback. All entertainment is pretty subjective (as evinced by your remarks) and we tend to do stories you engage with rather than snooze to, however, I'd be super-appreciative (if you've listened to any of our other stories) if you could nominate any that would work as sleep-fodder? Or even some aspects. Cheers!
Enjoying this while sitting across from a beautiful lady on the lightrail. Short blonde hair and she's keeping it Cosmic 💯
Ask her to subscribe to the channel! 😆
What?
Exactly
That was very creative and fun, great voice acting! I really love the sound effects.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome! A new story!
Apart from the beginning, middle and the end it was great.
Thanks for helping the algorithm.
Another amazing production.
Thanks!
We need more stories about visiting earth centuries to millennium later.
Who else noticed the pic for this video is tiberium growth from command and conquer
I notice nothing, I'm just a brain in a jar croaking out the dark tales of a dying earth. You should worry less. That aside..... : How's the Tiberium?
Thanks 👽🖤
No, thank you!
Loved it
Thanks!
So Stellaris The Story? I've been playing Stellaris recently.
I really liked the concept behind the story. Very interesting idea and it could have made for a great story.
However, I think the writing was amateurish, the pacing and character building poorly done, and just overall it wasnt properly fleshed out. A story this grand needs to be longer and it needs good writing to really shine.
One particular issue when it came to the story was the missing explanation for Pam and the hacker guy. It was never explained what happened. Pam was supposed to be the main characters love interest yet he seemed to care very little that she dissapeared. A lot of the motivations for the characters just didnt make sense like why dale would give a ring of that kind of power to the main character or even allow him permission to travel to earth at all, why risk it? It just doesnt make sense. There is a lot more but I'll stop here
I'm not trying to be mean btw. Just giving some constructive, and honest, criticism
Voice actor here! I certainly appreciate anyone taking the time to offer feedback on our content, as long as it's given in good faith. So thank you :-) I'm sure Arinze (the writer) will find it useful.
@@bominablebominations
Yeah I really did mean it in good faith. For whatbits worth I enjoyed the voice acting and the audio effect edits and soundtracks too. Cheers
Are you a writer? If you are, perhaps you'd like to submit a story or two so we can give it life on the channel :)
Omg wtf is happening my dudes!?🤷♀️ Am I just an idiot or does it not feel like being told to start reading a book, but then you realize that the book your reading is actually the second book in a series of books. Except when you say screw it and go to start at the beginning of the book, suddenly you notice that the first 2 chapters are in fact missing. So there you are…trying to enjoy a story that seems quite interesting but your missing like most of the “set up” to the story oss !?🤦♀️🤨😳 But…it still has some interesting stuff going on within that intrigues me a bit🤔
Is Covid still a thing tho?
Never was just a tool
A couple cases in my town n my work
I just got it and it’s just like the Flu.
I had it last week. Bf has it now. Both vaccinated so symptoms were mild. Still felt miserable.
@@Aburame9595 I’m Pureblood and had symptoms for one evening. I’m outside doing yard work and living life. I’ve had a normal flu far worse that this chumanflu
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Cheers!
i'd love to listen to this story but your use of way too loud music and your way too loud character actors makes this hard to fall asleep to.
Thanks for the feedback. All entertainment is pretty subjective (as evinced by your remarks) and we tend to do stories you engage with rather than snooze to, however, I'd be super-appreciative (if you've listened to any of our other stories) if you could nominate any that would work as sleep-fodder? Or even some aspects. Cheers!
Well it's not exactly an ASRM video dude. It's for entertainment get better headphones & adjust your settings