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"They Mostly Come At Night"

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 ก.พ. 2018
  • By - KillaHawke1
    creepypasta.wik...
    I'm a big fan of this franchise so I couldn't help myself with this one.
    Story: creepypasta.wik...
    Music: / @co.agmusic
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ความคิดเห็น • 466

  • @SwedetasticGames
    @SwedetasticGames 6 ปีที่แล้ว +155

    "Building Better Worlds" this is about Xenomorphs isn't it?
    Edit: yep and holy shit it was good.

    • @chargerrex2430
      @chargerrex2430 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @Stealing Fate Yeah it was Aliens....well the fate of Hadley's Hope which is before Ellen and the USCM arrive

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      [DB] Xerxes first alien. The kid his in vents too

  • @carolustheveinripper.5107
    @carolustheveinripper.5107 6 ปีที่แล้ว +117

    "Building Better Worlds."
    Weyland-Yutani.

  • @DerekHawke
    @DerekHawke 6 ปีที่แล้ว +121

    I want to thank you for such an amazing narration of my story. Simply outstanding and a true show of just how talented you are. You not only brought emotion and tension to my story...you brought class and sophistication. Well done

    • @kiyaluque
      @kiyaluque 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Derek Hawke may I ask why the brother seems to be missing (excuse me if he isn’t as I’m not finished listening yet), I’ve always been curious about Newts time with him before the marine corps arrived, had they outlived their parents together, had Newt felt responsible for him, or he for her, what was it like to lose him and be left alone.. bloody brilliant story but I’m gutted I didn’t get a story that explored her brother and herself surviving together for some time, or how little he had survived the aliens. Good writing nonetheless.

    • @angelaonly7983
      @angelaonly7983 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey you! I love your stories! Happy too have found you here and to be able to give you random appreciation. Thank ye!

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Derek did the kid get rescued ? Do you the kid get lunched on like aliens ?

    • @katiedishneau115
      @katiedishneau115 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      YES INDEED!!

    • @exploringwitheikenvargr5613
      @exploringwitheikenvargr5613 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Heard this before, it was good then but you’re right he does add something to all his stuff. Like the worstverse loved it the first time then heard tempers version. He’s great!
      Also a huge fan of the aliens series, and you’ve done them justice and then some.

  • @SKELTER.
    @SKELTER. 6 ปีที่แล้ว +138

    This story turned NaturesTemper in to a Newt. He got better.

    • @Morgraz2k
      @Morgraz2k 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      SKELTER1SKELTER is that a Monty python referens? 😂 or am i over thinking it

    • @MadameRaven1
      @MadameRaven1 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      SKELTER1SKELTER that. Was. Clever!

    • @MadameRaven1
      @MadameRaven1 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Gustav Grass yes and an aliens one as well.

    • @BreakerInc
      @BreakerInc 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Nice! A Monty Python and Aliens reference all in one XD

    • @SKELTER.
      @SKELTER. 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Gustav Grass I fart in your general direction!😁💨

  • @crystal.hangovergang
    @crystal.hangovergang 6 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    Omg!!! It's the freakin story about what happened to Newt and all the others before Sigourney Weaver & crew found her!!! This was a really cool creepypasta man!! Good job!

  • @Captainkebbles1392
    @Captainkebbles1392 6 ปีที่แล้ว +187

    "..Mostly "

    • @RudyCantGame
      @RudyCantGame 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      kevin texter I was just about to comment that....

    • @brandonrauls3875
      @brandonrauls3875 6 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      kevin texter “Game over man game fucking over i’m Hicks he’s Hudson quit screwing around Assholes and elbows absolutely bad ass
      Hey Vasquez, have you ever been mistaken for a man?
      Private Vasquez: No. Have you?
      pause] Seventeen days.
      Private Hudson: Seventeen *days*? Hey man, I don't wanna rain on your parade, but we're not gonna last seventeen hours! Those things are gonna come in here just like they did before. And they're gonna come in here...
      Ripley: Hudson!
      Private Hudson: ...and they're gonna come in here AND THEY'RE GONNA GET US!
      Ripley: Hudson! This little girl survived longer than that with no weapons and no training.
      [to Newt]
      Ripley: Right?
      [Newt apes a salute]
      Private Hudson: Why don't you put *her* in charge?

    • @brandonrauls3875
      @brandonrauls3875 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      kevin texter Oh I almost forgot
      Get away from her you bitch!!!

    • @brandonrauls3875
      @brandonrauls3875 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      kevin texter I can do this shit all day

    • @seconds-kr5uj
      @seconds-kr5uj 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Brandon Rauls lmmfao

  • @duckheadbob
    @duckheadbob 6 ปีที่แล้ว +174

    Alien creepypasta? Damn sick

    • @insekta1701
      @insekta1701 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      johnamsn There’s another great one called F.E.L.I.N.E. told from the perspective of Jonsey the cat that Ripley had.

    • @chillnowmate997
      @chillnowmate997 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      johnamsn I knew it sound familiar

    • @nignogdirka
      @nignogdirka 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      newts origins?

    • @VideoCesar07
      @VideoCesar07 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Casper Willows That's what I was thinking as well.

  • @kameronpasswaters8245
    @kameronpasswaters8245 6 ปีที่แล้ว +77

    Half way thru I realized that the monsters were xenomorphs also I think this is how the colony was in aliens was taken over

    • @kameronpasswaters8245
      @kameronpasswaters8245 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      xisobelx373 graphic novels tell me more

    • @chickennoodlesoup6236
      @chickennoodlesoup6236 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Holy shit, I did not realize that till I saw your comment. Good job

    • @kameronpasswaters8245
      @kameronpasswaters8245 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Candice K. OH MY GOD I SEE NOW THEY ARE EVERYWHERE THEY ARE THE EARTH AAAAHHHHH PPL ARE AT THE DOOR AND ARE TRYING TO HIRE ME FOR A SPECIAL JOB AAAAAHHHHH

    • @Shineynsparkles
      @Shineynsparkles 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Candice K.
      Yo Candice
      I have seen these beast in academia
      Its getting out of control!

  • @laurametheny1008
    @laurametheny1008 6 ปีที่แล้ว +53

    I don't know why you would think it weird-or that we would-for you to do this. You made a fine "Newt". This was also excellent writing. The two of you-author and narrator-go very well together. Thankyou NT!💃😀🐲🌑🚀🆘

    • @blowitoutyourcunt7675
      @blowitoutyourcunt7675 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      th-cam.com/video/x3WthclKneE/w-d-xo.html POV Ridley's cat

  • @CarMADforever
    @CarMADforever 6 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Aliens, as soon as one hatches on your planet it's..... game over, man. *YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH*
    Seriously though, this was so good... I knew it was gonna be good cus it is Aliens and Xenos make everything better, and I knew it was gonna be a Newt thing cus of title, but I didn't expect it to be just THAT good. Hats off to KillaHawke, he knew exactly what he was doing when he wrote that.

  • @Jannfndnanakid
    @Jannfndnanakid 6 ปีที่แล้ว +152

    Humans are biologically wired to fear the dark because of all of the predators that come out at night and nocturnal predators such as a few types of scorpions, wolves, cougars and bobcats etc.
    But I find dangerous animals or a scary monster in the daylight to be more frightening because it doesn't fit.
    Having something terrifying or unusual in your view when you're doing something like going for a peaceful walk down the street makes it feel out of place which plays into the fear of the unknown or "creepiness."

    • @christophercombs7561
      @christophercombs7561 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      sokmin not all im one of the nocturnal humans

    • @PyroGhost913
      @PyroGhost913 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yay for delayed sleep disorder.

    • @christophercombs7561
      @christophercombs7561 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      PyroGhost913 na its an evolutionary adaptation just imagine if every member of a ground dwelling primate all slept at the same time it wpuld have been bad if the tribe dodnt have at a couple people watching out for Everton

    • @Jannfndnanakid
      @Jannfndnanakid 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      that's not a correction

    • @ldavis5734
      @ldavis5734 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Lack of sight is a scary thing to someone not used to it. In the daylight you can see the predator coming. In the darkness it's already there.

  • @pandorasflame7742
    @pandorasflame7742 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I absolutely LOVE how this is such a recognizable story without once stating the character’s name. I always felt so bad for the little girl... She died from drowning inside her own pod....

  • @richardcapella5421
    @richardcapella5421 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    "They mostly come at night" is one of the most iconic sayings instantly knew or at least thought this was about aliens. You truly brought it to full life, awesome, awesome, AWESOME JOB, THANK YOU FOR ALL YOU DO!!!!!

  • @hartwellj100
    @hartwellj100 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Excellent work! I have always believed that a prequel film to Aliens like this one you have narrated is well overdue

  • @simonsundberg
    @simonsundberg 6 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    As a massive alien fan I have to say this was EPIC!!😀

    • @joeymilkman9228
      @joeymilkman9228 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Simon Sundberg
      As a massive alien I have to say this was indeed epic

  • @jankamoos9869
    @jankamoos9869 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This story was truly AMAZING. I love how you can play so well with your voice. You could impersonate a little boy truly fascinatingly, and I loved the sci-fi vibes, and the slow build up.... Ahh. Just perfect! ♡

    • @monicledmarauders9359
      @monicledmarauders9359 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Elishka Ghostley the character is actually a little girl called newt, not a boy

    • @jankamoos9869
      @jankamoos9869 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      monicled marauders Where do you know that from? Have I missed out on something?

    • @monicledmarauders9359
      @monicledmarauders9359 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Elishka Ghostley have you ever seen the alien films?

    • @jankamoos9869
      @jankamoos9869 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      monicled marauders No, unfortunately

    • @monicledmarauders9359
      @monicledmarauders9359 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Elishka Ghostley its based on one of the characters from it, aliens (and alien) are great films, you should definitely give them a watch

  • @Nemmy-sys
    @Nemmy-sys 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This one was super interesting. I'm a delivery driver and mainly play creepypasta's and true crime stories while I drive. This one was actually so captivating that I actually had to go by my house and grab my bluetooth headphones so I could finish this while I was washing dishes. Something about the space/terraformimg theme really grabbed me. Even made me tap that bell icon it was so on point

    • @aylamaiia
      @aylamaiia 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      N3M1SI5 FR4K7UR3 it was a retelling of aliens, damn good wasn't it?

    • @omniframe8612
      @omniframe8612 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      it’s a canon alien story

  • @shydog7276
    @shydog7276 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    The shafts immediately gave me Newt vibes. God this story was such a beautiful surprise 😍 you narrated this flawlessly.

  • @greatfull6191
    @greatfull6191 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    What a voice! Love it. I'm such a fan! Your very expressive reading is the icing on the cake. Thank you. I listen to a few every night before bed.

  • @loganlorn
    @loganlorn 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Outstanding! As a long time Alien series fan, this is fantastic. Newt certainly deserves to have her story told. And the reading of this was so powerful, it actually made me glassy eyed at one point. Newt went through so much. Her character really comes through here. It's like finding her diary or something.
    I'd certainly like to find more short stories within the Alien franchise read by you!
    Thanks!

  • @joshadkins4120
    @joshadkins4120 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm so glad that you performed this story. It's one if my favorites. You Sir just blew my mind. Thank you so very much. :)

  • @JenniferDamron
    @JenniferDamron 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I know this has been posted for a while, but I wanted to leave a comment.
    I really dig your channel and I adore your narrations. I appreciate your choice of stories, as well as your style. The inflections of your voice, the delivery of your speaking, the way you inject emotion, gender and age, is perfect and allows me to follow these tales without distraction.
    Thank you for the work you put into this. You entertain, yes, but you do much more...I have found your channel cathartic in many situations, and there are no words I can quickly drop in a TH-cam comment to adequately convey what I truly mean. It has been a rough period in life for a lot of people and I am no different in that aspect, but your channel has actually helped me to find comfort in the interim.
    I hope you never stop, sir, and I wish you great success in all you accomplish.

  • @belleyupable
    @belleyupable 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for taking the time to narrate this

  • @WantingMemoriesLJM
    @WantingMemoriesLJM 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    A good narrator can transcend sex, gender, and age. This was very well done. I am glad you decided to try it out.

  • @katherineheasley6196
    @katherineheasley6196 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Right away, I picked up on the fact that this was Newt from "Aliens" (one of my favorite movies). I love how you narrate this, with her innocence and her tough core that gets her through the sort of things that make soldiers give up.

  • @MPT1983
    @MPT1983 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This should have been a short film! Great job.

  • @carolustheveinripper.5107
    @carolustheveinripper.5107 6 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    I was reminded of Aliens from the title. Lol

    • @carolyns.672
      @carolyns.672 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It was the back story for the character Newt in that movie

    • @jackjackson4816
      @jackjackson4816 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Bl00d_ Nehi_ same here

  • @ShindaRatto
    @ShindaRatto 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just put this on and somehow in a few minutes I automatically started to imagine it with xenomorphs instead of generic creepypasta monsters without realizing, it was very well written. I'm a sucker for Aliens. This is was great, thank you. 💖

  • @ChaoticComic
    @ChaoticComic 6 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    I remember seeing this movie, and I love this version of it.

  • @loriweikel9551
    @loriweikel9551 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just started listening to ur stories a few days ago & haven't listened to anyone else since! : ) This story & the way you narrated it was gr8! Thank you

  • @solwoot4331
    @solwoot4331 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was absolutely amazing, and your narration was as good as ever!

  • @sunshinethor420
    @sunshinethor420 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    My favorite narration you've done.

  • @Diva-Biker
    @Diva-Biker 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was fantastic! A great read which really got you into the action and and excellent choice. Can't believe I waited so long to listen to this. Will have to share. Hope you do more like this, this was GREAT!

  • @jeffreese9707
    @jeffreese9707 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Very well narrated , young man !!
    I am always impressed by your show and place you definitely in the top 5 and quite possibly top 3 narrators of creepypastas that I enjoy. For one thing I always dug the British accent (easy point , huh ?) , but it is your honest inflection , and emotion that earns my praise.... for what it's worth! When I said possibly top three it is very hard to pin this down I mean it's almost like the top three would be a tie... So when I say you're possibly tied with the likes of Dr Creepen + Horror Babble's Ian ,or just a tad behind that is high praise indeed. ! Keep up the great work and Cheers! from The States !

  • @seconds-kr5uj
    @seconds-kr5uj 6 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    "Maybe they don't show up on infrared at all"...

    • @splo1nger909
      @splo1nger909 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      15seconds99 micro changes in air density my ass

    • @penhullwolf5070
      @penhullwolf5070 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      10mm explosive tip caseless, standard light armour piercing round.

  • @jeanniebosch3628
    @jeanniebosch3628 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm a total Alien freakaholic fan! Lol. So to hear this story being read was AMAZING!! Btw, you made an excellent Newt!

  • @MaxsonAtTheFort
    @MaxsonAtTheFort ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “They mostly come at night, mostly.” - Cartman

  • @Damin-Danger-Ledford
    @Damin-Danger-Ledford 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    "Newt. My names Newt." 'Nobody calls me Rebecca. Except my brother.' I didn't catch the reference of the title, but not long after the start I understood. Love the way this story's writing was able to help me envision the deleted scenes of Aliens being written more like this. They're good enuff, but this b better. Love this channel, & your style, Mr. Narrator. Thank you for the pick me up. Turn this Friday n2 a fine weekend. Peace.

  • @justinkyp
    @justinkyp 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    The title sounds like my depression and anxiety.
    Also i love your voice so much I'm binge watching all your videos

  • @m3ntallyd3fficient11
    @m3ntallyd3fficient11 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Didnt expect to hear a story about the alien franchise. The narration was so good, and due to this being about the second movie in the franchise (aliens) everything is much more claustrophobic and scarier, due to the colonists not having anything to fight with and really only being able to hide and wait for the innevitable. You really captured the emotion and atmosphere with this story, another great job!!

    • @kameronpasswaters8245
      @kameronpasswaters8245 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Dillon Jassmond I know it was great how it showed it from a new perspective and how it would have sounded as a story like reading it from a report

  • @dilligaf9282
    @dilligaf9282 6 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    Great narration as always! Is this an origins story from Aliens, because the little child in the story reminds me of Newt?

    • @carolyns.672
      @carolyns.672 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yup

    • @blowitoutyourcunt7675
      @blowitoutyourcunt7675 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      th-cam.com/video/x3WthclKneE/w-d-xo.html POV Ridley's cat, great listen!

  • @VampyreFoxy
    @VampyreFoxy 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was tense.... Especially with your performance on top of it. O__O
    I really wonder where this story might take place...

  • @georgemcmillan9172
    @georgemcmillan9172 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Awesome!!! Aliens is one of my favorite movies of all time! Nice to get the backstory from Newt's perspective...

  • @kashmiroakley4733
    @kashmiroakley4733 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have been listening to your narrations for over a year and you have only become more and more superb with every reading. Your voice manages to convey so many different emotions. Soothing, dark and frightening, sorrow, joy, you make every story come to life with your words. I can only say I am addicted. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, for giving us nightmares, making us cry, and laugh. This is the first time I have actually managed to catch a fresh narration the day you uploaded it! Mmmm Fresh.

  • @missveiled7095
    @missveiled7095 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This made my little fan heart leap with joy. I love Newt!

  • @narcat3999
    @narcat3999 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Fantastic job mate. A favorite film from a new perspective.

  • @damiengarner1015
    @damiengarner1015 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Holy shit running through the comments trying to remember the movies thinking to myself “who the hell is newt.” OMG I REMEMBER EVERYTHING NOW!!! This is so AMAZING!!! Thank you NaturesTemper

  • @kconnor4568
    @kconnor4568 6 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    That was incredible .
    Since you are a big fan , does that mean that we will be treated to more stories like this ?

    • @tacticalfenris662
      @tacticalfenris662 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      K Connor i would love to see more alien stories its a great franchise

  • @EksaStelmere
    @EksaStelmere 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    >>Trying to get into the story, but the narrator is too damn relaxing
    >>Even though terrible things are happening, I end up somehow soothed
    What are you doing to me, NaturesTemper?

  • @timothyzeiner3695
    @timothyzeiner3695 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am so lucky to have came across your channel. Wow!! Keep up the Awesomeness!

  • @elliusagi
    @elliusagi 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Reading with Cartman voice:
    "They mostly come at night. Mostly."
    But seriously, this was a very beautiful story and well narrated too, good job 💜

  • @j.b.browning6205
    @j.b.browning6205 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Holy shit I was not expecting this. Absolutely awesome!

  • @EndingTimes0
    @EndingTimes0 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Bad air goes in, good air goes out! You can't explain that!

  • @CrystlRain27
    @CrystlRain27 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Nice story from Newt's perspective.

  • @redradiodog
    @redradiodog 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's rare that a story holds my attention like some of yours!

  • @jutlee4943
    @jutlee4943 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    lovely narration as always.💀💀💀

  • @johnhoben7421
    @johnhoben7421 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    "They mostly come at night, mostly" Cartman voice lol

  • @dylanmorris7357
    @dylanmorris7357 6 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Amazing story NaturesTemper.

  • @raven6565
    @raven6565 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    You did fantastic. I loved it.

  • @cincylaw14
    @cincylaw14 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Damn, Nature. That was really good!

  • @geeneeb
    @geeneeb 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    OMG!!! I love you now!! I love Aliens!!! I have a lot of the books, and in the process of collecting the comics. Awesome read, absolutely awesome! Lol. Now, you need to read more of this series of stories!!

  • @sxurce_
    @sxurce_ 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    this is great, i'd love to see more of this

  • @rickc2102
    @rickc2102 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    She turned you into a newt!
    Unconventional, yes, but quite well done!

  • @wolmntn
    @wolmntn 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Awesome voice for these stories.

  • @bevkenny1843
    @bevkenny1843 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your voice was absolutely on point. I loved this. Really loved it. Bravo Sir ⚘

  • @carolyns.672
    @carolyns.672 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    As soon as I saw the title I was hoping it would be about Newt!!! I love the back story for the Aliens movie and think it was a great story for you to narrate!

  • @OFCINC
    @OFCINC 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    "SLUTE" you just got a new sub my friend!!!

  • @Tralman1965
    @Tralman1965 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Outstanding story and narration!

  • @israelvaldez26
    @israelvaldez26 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    That was a brilliant reading of Newt's story.

  • @kingjay6009
    @kingjay6009 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Oh wow!!! not gonna spoil it, but im a HUGE fan of these "monsters" and an even bigger fan of the dread headed "monsters" :D
    good to listen to the perspective of Newt :D

  • @tomkeithley8598
    @tomkeithley8598 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wonderful story. This was well done.

  • @splo1nger909
    @splo1nger909 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Tonight you spoil us sir!

  • @evanmcarthur6811
    @evanmcarthur6811 6 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Are these monsters xenomorphs?

    • @wee2399
      @wee2399 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Evan McArthur yea

  • @wolfloganj.461
    @wolfloganj.461 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Newt is a beast. That was awesome, thank you.

  • @selenepickins4874
    @selenepickins4874 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great job on this story, Natures Temper! The story was 1st rate so great job with that choice & the storytelling was excellent. You didn't just read it, you lived it. I'm an older lady who doesn't quite remember radio plays but who heard a lot about them & I do have degrees in Creative Writing, English, Nursing as well as Masters level work in Communications so I'm a tough nut to impress, so to speak. But you did it & earned yourself another couple subs because it was my adult son who turned me on to you so great job! Give yourself a couple pats on the back & keep up the good work!

    • @DerekHawke
      @DerekHawke 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello, I am the author of this story. I really appreciate your compliments to NT. I am still amazed how he took this tale to such a different level i never thought possible. thanks for your comments

    • @selenepickins4874
      @selenepickins4874 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Derek Hawke, what a pleasure! Comments from the author! Yay!! Thanks for surfacing so I can properly thank you, the author, for this fabulous story!! I loved what you did here. It's tough for us authors to figure out how to write within the boundaries of a universe that someone else created but, dude, you did it as well as I've ever seen it done. You have every right to be proud of this work. Would love to read other stories you've written. Dunno, if you have a "day job" (& really, don't most of us?) but whatever you do, do NOT stop writing because you've got that lil sumpin-sumpin that is likely to make you a great horror writer. Thanks again.

    • @SidsSuperSidiousCreepypastas
      @SidsSuperSidiousCreepypastas 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      thank you so much. I have about 30 short stories. you can find me under my writer's tag Killahawke1. BTW, if you liked this story, you'll love this one. www.creepypasta.com/feline/

  • @billiecomeaux
    @billiecomeaux 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well done, sir (mostly)!

  • @nikkilynne38555
    @nikkilynne38555 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Excellent narration on the story. Hope I can sleep tonight

  • @stonermeds7499
    @stonermeds7499 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great story and narration!

  • @projectOMA
    @projectOMA 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great narration! The story kind of reminds me of that show Wayward Pines when the ferals invaded the town when the defenses were down

  • @patrickevans3457
    @patrickevans3457 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    So well done! In my mind only Alien and Aliens exist. None of the other movies even happened. Newt, Ripley and Hicks made it.

  • @remyn.9198
    @remyn.9198 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I LOVED ALIENS! This was an awesome view on Newt's perspective and an excellent narration.

  • @steff.7028
    @steff.7028 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great narration, and with headphones it sounds like you are whispering in my ear👍

  • @ricywright8296
    @ricywright8296 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautifully done

  • @jonathanferguson2423
    @jonathanferguson2423 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great job dude! Someone needs to sign you on to do audio books! Here is your 🍪

  • @DrakeD3th
    @DrakeD3th 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very good take on the events leading up to the Marines arrival in Aliens, from Newt's prospective.
    LIKED 👍

  • @robinhood5449
    @robinhood5449 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well done!! I love this story! I collected ALL of the Alien bubble gum cards! 😉

  • @LuckyHighlandMu
    @LuckyHighlandMu 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    amazing story and so happy to see a story about xenomorphs as well!

  • @johngolden3714
    @johngolden3714 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very nice. The Fall of Hadley's Hope from the perspective of the sole survivor.

  • @wpBill
    @wpBill 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    “Building better worlds”.... Weyland-Yutani??

  • @lykophobetor
    @lykophobetor 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Cool xenomorph vibe, nice !

  • @waydebain9672
    @waydebain9672 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love this video it truely captures the terror of the events of that took place in aliens,they should really consider making this into a playable game.

  • @UGNAvalon
    @UGNAvalon 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Newt is a surprisingly eloquent narrator!

  • @memyselfandi8232
    @memyselfandi8232 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Very good job!!!! 😃😀😀😀

  • @celestemac6831
    @celestemac6831 6 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    That was a good one...damn good

  • @bodkavandit6369
    @bodkavandit6369 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I listen to the stories in the background, as soon as terraforming and 'the monsters got my parents' was mentioned I started asking everyone else in the room (who couldn't hear the story) "IS THIS ALIEN?! OH GOD PLEASE BE ALIEN!"
    ...I think I scared them...

  • @terriewatson8828
    @terriewatson8828 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I heard one inconsistency. If this is Newt's pov then her dad died before all this. He was the first colonist to come in contact with the face hugger. He died when they tried to take it off.

  • @IronGloochIMAX3D
    @IronGloochIMAX3D 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You have my sympathies.

  • @theqgene826
    @theqgene826 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This brought to life the horrors just before Ripley and the Marines landed

  • @tacleohjoe7577
    @tacleohjoe7577 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good job naturestemper !

  • @gabrielpack695
    @gabrielpack695 6 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    this is so dope

    • @gabrielpack695
      @gabrielpack695 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      your opinion is dope to you, but I think dope is a dope saying, you dig?