At first I thought this was a real expose video and thought "Weird, this seems different from your usual work...." That being said, stories of this caliber are pretty fascinating since they tend to delve into human psychology and whatnot.
The fact that one of the cops that investigated jared never came back and is possibly missing scares me And sense there was only bubble solution at the scene made me think that jared killed the cop by poisoning him with said bubble solution and then Disposed of the corpse. But knowing spongejared, he most likely threw the corpse in a dumpster or a ditch, so he'll be caught easily
Spongejared gives me the vibe of a user that DeadwingDork would do a stream about. Like I can vividly picture a part of that stream where he reads out the discord message at 8:09, and he starts increasing the size of the Sangie PNG he has in the corner while playing something from his soundboard to emphasize the horror of the statement.
I like this, mostly because the messed up thing is that there are people this crazy in real life that is just as bad or worse then the character Jared. People that get so into their favorite show or games or whatever they more or less actually think they are their favorite character from the show or whatever.
I like the format of being based on a Twitter cancelation thread that's fun but the actual contents of the story itself is just goofy as hell I can't really take any of it seriously
As the writer of the story, I can understand how it doesn't sit with seriousness for some. I mean, it's an expose document about a guy who thinks he's SpongeBob. That can pretty much go two ways.
I certainly do find it funny, but I can't say I think any of it is actually 'scary' if that makes sense? I mean, you've gotten a good idea, and you seem to understand the idea of a cliffhanger at the end of a story/a wham line... but in execution your wham line at the end is really just, nothing? The two people being missing with a bubble canister they both held is interesting I guess, but there's really nothing to be gained or inferred from that tbh
@@Glacidon It was my attempt at providing a form of mystery, that's why it isn't explained in the end. Something that is left up to the reader's interp and is meant to invoke questions, like why is that all that's left, and why would it be half-empty? Not to mention, why would that bubble canister of all things have the officer's fingerprints on it?
You guys are awesome! Kudos to you and RedZ Gaming for excellent voice acting. I'm going to be doing some voice acting of my own and send you a couple of improves of mine for future stories.
One time I searched SpongeDru, and this popped up, and I was like “Is that Prea?”, I tapped on it, and it was like a horror version of an exposed video, in fact that user has picked on me several times, in fact I was “underaged” back in the day, but I’ve outgrown that behaviour since when I returned uploading videos on TH-cam since November 16, 2022, by the way earlier this year when I was in Discord, I saw a picture of him calling me names under my friends’ mean comment which was taken in 2020, I was like “Seriously, man?”, I also didn’t care for it, and also the first thing I said was around this week I think.
Hey man, I was wondering if you could read a story I’d suggest It’s called “Crybaby Lane:Retake” and it’s a retelling/remaster of the old terrible creepypasta by the same name that the Dark Author hates with a passion.
My mutual on Twitter recommended this one and I enjoyed it a lot. Bit disappointed the reading isn't structured like a TH-cam exposee but eh, kinda hard to get down I guess
(SPOILER) I'm sorry but my brain went to the goofiest possible explanation and thought that jared used a bubble to lift himself and the cop to the sky or something
The scariest thing is how realistic it is. Especially since it's Discord.
I know, because there is people like Sponge Jared out in the real world.
spongejared gives me chris chan vibes and that is terrifying
chris chan if he was even more fucked up ig
I’m glad I wasn’t the only one thinking: “Yep, it’s Chris Chan. Yep it’s Chris Chan.”
I will send him a friend request pretending to be Ms. Puff and inform him that he passed
in an alternate universe spongejared is a real person and frankly I don't want that to be the case
Jesus Christ, I never thought that someone like Jared could be this demented ever.
At first I thought this was a real expose video and thought "Weird, this seems different from your usual work...."
That being said, stories of this caliber are pretty fascinating since they tend to delve into human psychology and whatnot.
The fact that one of the cops that investigated jared never came back and is possibly missing scares me
And sense there was only bubble solution at the scene made me think that jared killed the cop by poisoning him with said bubble solution and then Disposed of the corpse.
But knowing spongejared, he most likely threw the corpse in a dumpster or a ditch, so he'll be caught easily
Not very spongebob of him disposing the body tbh, maybe he turned the corpse into "squidward" or smthn
@Spoon97 I like that theory, too
It makes sense
@@joeldank1708 or probably the cop could've been Patrick
Spongejared gives me the vibe of a user that DeadwingDork would do a stream about. Like I can vividly picture a part of that stream where he reads out the discord message at 8:09, and he starts increasing the size of the Sangie PNG he has in the corner while playing something from his soundboard to emphasize the horror of the statement.
I like this, mostly because the messed up thing is that there are people this crazy in real life that is just as bad or worse then the character Jared. People that get so into their favorite show or games or whatever they more or less actually think they are their favorite character from the show or whatever.
I would call making a creepypasta exposing a person on the internet silly. However, this sounds like something I would do.
I like the format of being based on a Twitter cancelation thread that's fun but the actual contents of the story itself is just goofy as hell I can't really take any of it seriously
As the writer of the story, I can understand how it doesn't sit with seriousness for some. I mean, it's an expose document about a guy who thinks he's SpongeBob. That can pretty much go two ways.
I certainly do find it funny, but I can't say I think any of it is actually 'scary' if that makes sense? I mean, you've gotten a good idea, and you seem to understand the idea of a cliffhanger at the end of a story/a wham line... but in execution your wham line at the end is really just, nothing? The two people being missing with a bubble canister they both held is interesting I guess, but there's really nothing to be gained or inferred from that tbh
@@Glacidon It was my attempt at providing a form of mystery, that's why it isn't explained in the end.
Something that is left up to the reader's interp and is meant to invoke questions, like why is that all that's left, and why would it be half-empty? Not to mention, why would that bubble canister of all things have the officer's fingerprints on it?
You Should Make A Part 2! This is Good, Well Written,And Amazing!
Absolutely 💯💯💯👍
Horrifying in the best way. One of the most realistic creepypastas I have seen.
10/10! BRAVO!
You guys are awesome! Kudos to you and RedZ Gaming for excellent voice acting. I'm going to be doing some voice acting of my own and send you a couple of improves of mine for future stories.
I heard about the sonic video you’re doing voice acting in! Nice job man!
I have thoughts like did spongejared k*lled himself with bubbles!? 😥😰😱😱😱great story though
Not me having a different interpretation as to what might have happened to Jared (demonic possession)
One time I searched SpongeDru, and this popped up, and I was like “Is that Prea?”, I tapped on it, and it was like a horror version of an exposed video, in fact that user has picked on me several times, in fact I was “underaged” back in the day, but I’ve outgrown that behaviour since when I returned uploading videos on TH-cam since November 16, 2022, by the way earlier this year when I was in Discord, I saw a picture of him calling me names under my friends’ mean comment which was taken in 2020, I was like “Seriously, man?”, I also didn’t care for it, and also the first thing I said was around this week I think.
Hey man, I was wondering if you could read a story I’d suggest
It’s called “Crybaby Lane:Retake” and it’s a retelling/remaster of the old terrible creepypasta by the same name that the Dark Author hates with a passion.
I'll give it a read soon.
@@LafawndaPasta :)
SpongeJared feels like if Judge Holden and Chris Chan Merged
My mutual on Twitter recommended this one and I enjoyed it a lot.
Bit disappointed the reading isn't structured like a TH-cam exposee but eh, kinda hard to get down I guess
(SPOILER)
I'm sorry but my brain went to the goofiest possible explanation and thought that jared used a bubble to lift himself and the cop to the sky or something
LafwandaPasta, you are G for this expose!
Subterfuge reference
Was this inspired by the "Edd216" creepypasta?
Oh SpongeJared, whyyyyyy?
lawnfandapasta , lafawnda
Is this a real user or Is he made up?
I made him up.
LaFawnda voiced SpongeJared, and I voiced ImTortilini.
@@redzgaming6880
Awesome
Is the cat ok😢
Hi! I'm Spongebob!
Was this story inspired by Chris Chan?
It's inspired by lolcows who take personifying a fictional character too seriously, like Sqrlyjack.
@@LafawndaPastaTHIS WAS INSPIRED BY JACK??? HOLY SHIT
@@pirateadventure895 Not Jack specifically. People like Jack in general.
Plz tell me this wasn't based off a true story
Awesome scary story, LafawndePasta!!! Btw, do you have a Discord account?