At 4:21:30 I think I get what the death lord is doing with Chrisa she is making a replacement for Aldritch hopefully not in a negative way but she 100% giving herself a contingency if he was to die or turn against her somehow I think she pushed him into the trial quest and the soul bond with Chrisa partly to make them both grow stronger but also to tether Aldritch's being to something that could inherent his role as the nexus/anchor to that world and the trial was to get him to use the Dark Wisdom on her I mean it her Wisdom right My only hope is the Death Lord isn't doing it maliciously or trying to brainwash and steal the powers through chrisa I don't want the Evil Dragon Death God to be an antagonist
Thank you for this story. Just a note, during the first hour there are various parts in which the AI reads "question mark question mark question mark..." and so on. It would be nice if you could fix that issue, but you did a good job already. Again, thank you
Yes actually, a story dealing with time travel, set in our universe. You could draw from our history And address issues that are still relevant today (migration, nationalism, human rights, ...). What if we can change the past? What if it cannot be changed, even if you travel back? What if present knowledge is transported in the past ages? Maybe not that "light" as a story, but I find the theme intriguing. The time travel mechanic would allow you to add fantasy elements, SciFi elements, and so on. Or maybe a story about a D&d game turned real, Jumanji style. Just some suggestions, but I'm an actor, not a novelist😅 Appreciate the work though.
@@Black_Cat_Association I been reading auto books for a while, I know of a few with longs stories worth auto booking. Just message me and I'll hit you with a list and you can pick/choose what you wanna look into
There are too many characters in this story and sometimes change there name. Makes it pretty hard to remember who is who and what they are like. Maybe thats why so many of them have the same personality. Just in 3 chapters you introduced like 5 new people.
What the hell. Each new section has it nee probably. Last one kept saying writer instead of fighter. This one has ?????¿??????????????????? For some reason i think one or two is enough to make your AI not just skip it as punctuation. If you're going to spend so much time writing a story and then doing an audiobook of it you should at least spend the time to listen to it to make sure it doesn't have problems throughout the entirety of your writing
Thanks so much for continuing this story!
At 4:21:30
I think I get what the death lord is doing with Chrisa she is making a replacement for Aldritch hopefully not in a negative way but she 100% giving herself a contingency if he was to die or turn against her somehow
I think she pushed him into the trial quest and the soul bond with Chrisa partly to make them both grow stronger but also to tether Aldritch's being to something that could inherent his role as the nexus/anchor to that world and the trial was to get him to use the Dark Wisdom on her I mean it her Wisdom right
My only hope is the Death Lord isn't doing it maliciously or trying to brainwash and steal the powers through chrisa
I don't want the Evil Dragon Death God to be an antagonist
Thank you for this story. Just a note, during the first hour there are various parts in which the AI reads "question mark question mark question mark..." and so on. It would be nice if you could fix that issue, but you did a good job already. Again, thank you
@@P3CC10N3 any suggestions for new light novel??
Yes actually, a story dealing with time travel, set in our universe. You could draw from our history And address issues that are still relevant today (migration, nationalism, human rights, ...).
What if we can change the past? What if it cannot be changed, even if you travel back? What if present knowledge is transported in the past ages?
Maybe not that "light" as a story, but I find the theme intriguing.
The time travel mechanic would allow you to add fantasy elements, SciFi elements, and so on.
Or maybe a story about a D&d game turned real, Jumanji style.
Just some suggestions, but I'm an actor, not a novelist😅
Appreciate the work though.
@@P3CC10N3 🫠 suggestions noted
@@Black_Cat_Association I been reading auto books for a while, I know of a few with longs stories worth auto booking. Just message me and I'll hit you with a list and you can pick/choose what you wanna look into
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Hey will their be more of this story?
Sadly the author has dropped it
There are too many characters in this story and sometimes change there name. Makes it pretty hard to remember who is who and what they are like. Maybe thats why so many of them have the same personality. Just in 3 chapters you introduced like 5 new people.
What the hell. Each new section has it nee probably. Last one kept saying writer instead of fighter. This one has ?????¿??????????????????? For some reason i think one or two is enough to make your AI not just skip it as punctuation. If you're going to spend so much time writing a story and then doing an audiobook of it you should at least spend the time to listen to it to make sure it doesn't have problems throughout the entirety of your writing