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Seriously long ass pointless dream In the middle of the story

Correct me if im wrong, but "ght" is fight. Took me awhile to figure that one out.

This is the longest 4 days I've ever heard so basically the end of the book is gunna be the hearing

I dont understand who these new characters are??? Like were is the main character whats going on? Im so confused the story wasnt great but i love the idea but now what am i listening to i feel like i missed something or didbthey just change the main character like they chagemd the voice??? Its been hours and im so lost???

Love the chactorers

What is the name of this Ai voice and where to find it?

I thank you for making my life and job better.

5 hours 35mins in wow plot twist

Lmao where the f are the f's?

This sounds like the lone necromancer web comic

Why give him a fair fight when he didnt care about fair when he killed you and your friends goofy.

When's the next release?

I HATE AI narration exclamation equals equals dash

Good story. Thanks for posting it.

Thanks good little story

Any can't they ever pronounce "bow" correctly?! Also what's with the missing Fi's?

Not gonna lie, I don't care about Ace 🙄

Lol the Solo Leveling Homage at ~ 9:33:50😂

what happened to one hidden video??

Minuteman is a true hero, in the vain of Captain America! Would definitely put his life on the line for those who can't protect themselves...

Where is the rest

Only 42 minutes in and I like how blackwater is as fucked up and bias as the mercenary company it seems to be based on.

Love the story but I don’t like the voice change 😅😢

Keep imagining Hat-Trick as a non-copyright version of Twisted Fate ♦️♠️♥️♣️

Bro where've you been we're missing you :(

There are too many characters in this story and sometimes change there name. Makes it pretty hard to remember who is who and what they are like. Maybe thats why so many of them have the same personality. Just in 3 chapters you introduced like 5 new people.

What did the giant say? - - fo fum 😂 If a story says fight alot maybe dont cut out all the fi in a story . Makes me want to ght you with my sts

What the hell. Each new section has it nee probably. Last one kept saying writer instead of fighter. This one has ?????¿??????????????????? For some reason i think one or two is enough to make your AI not just skip it as punctuation. If you're going to spend so much time writing a story and then doing an audiobook of it you should at least spend the time to listen to it to make sure it doesn't have problems throughout the entirety of your writing

Oh this is good

There's fr no more of the story

Lol the Japanese and Russians being the exact opposite of their real life counter parts is hilarious

4:56:36

Before I deep dive can someone tell me if this turns harem I really hope Not

Valera is just Battle Sister Albedo

The MC is making confusing statements how did he killed the demon king who supposedly ruled over the kingdom using dragons yet never faced a strong dragon before 😅

Mc is either overrating every demon's power or this demons were stronger than the demon king which he killed 😅

The heck! What happened in the space!

2:05:00

Does anyone understand what's going on at 3:37:53. Where are they doing this fight. No f****** idea. At first I thought that he pulled them into the crystal in his chest. Then it sounds like they're in some kind dungeon trial. Cuz he's talking about the main character having to keep away from skeletons but if those are his raised undead they should leave him alone. 90% of this book makes no damn sense

I love how you're describing an attack on a person called the editor. But I guarantee you every person that listens to this audiobook has no idea who the editor is so do they really care. No they do not the answer is no because they know nothing about the person. You have your main character killing off an entire room full of I think it was 30 or 40 people just to really kill too. And inside the fight sequence you're introducing new characters that we have no idea anything about, that are about to die who cares what their name is or anything else just explain how they die

How does a human jump into another human's hand. You never say anything about him being able to grow five times the size of a human or a 100 times the size of a human so how in the world is a full size human fitting in the hand of another human. So stupid

Also I played necromancers in every game that has the ability of a necromancer. I've never been able to raise more than six undead at a time. But also as a necromancer I never ever ever ever had almost full manna necromancers use man up all the time. It's one of their main tools as a necromancer if you're not regening mana your regening health one of the other. However this guy is always full mana full health. So far except for his first experiment with using magic I think the loss he's ever gotten was 160 out of 180

6:45:00

So this kid grew up his entire life. In a world of superheroes and some kind of creations. His parents were superheroes that fought these creations. And he wanted to be one of these superheroes his entire life. Yet he knows more about a f****** video game than he does about any of the creatures that he needs to fight on his planet. So many parts of the story are just so stupidly put together. I'm not going to say you didn't have good ideas or concepts because some of the ideas in the story are actually pretty good. I like the introduction part about the superheroes and villains the fact that not all superheroes are good. And then you f*** that all up by adding this whole new reality on top of it. His friends were really cool and then you killed them right away. And then you added some crazy concept of a video game inside the world and now the video people in the in the game are now sentient creations and he knows everything about them. Just so many failures on top of failures

You never realize how many words use f & fi until you're ghting o with your sts.

1:09:00 What chapter does he get his abilities? This story is boring as all hell and it's obviously made up of tropes stolen from more famous works. Get on with it!

Im only 4 hours in and there are so many problems. First the killing of all main characters, just stupid. Second the shift from one goal to the next with no remorse or even thought. Third the massive army he is able to create so early in level. So what is it at each level he can control a new undead or dead. HAVE YOU EVER PLAYED AS A NECROMANCER. That isnt how its goes in any game or storie cause it make someone impossible to lose. And 4th the ai reading this has at best a 5th grade reading level.

Oh wow the author hasn't released any more!

Around 4:13:00 or something... Delta lied. She said she was there to uplift mankind... but Beta said Delta was the part whose directive was to control mankind and that He (beta) was the one to uplift mankind

Ok so Im calling it. Aldridge is a reincarnate. He was the Necromancer who actually lived the events of Elden World. His soul came over after "The Event" and his past lives in Elden World were somehow made into a video game. Maybe by a previous life he had on Earth or someone who could see his life in Elden World, the mysterious shop owner maybe. So while he lived his life as Aldridge, he naturally gravitated to Elden Worlds lore. That is why everyone from Elden World remembers him because they are not from the game but the actually Elden World. And it's possible that His present life used the inheritance of Vanguard to punch a whole through space time and brought them over to his new world. Then the power manifested as a "system" most familiar with Aldridge.