I was thinking not only jazzy but something along the lines of upbeat swing- I can't do much with my current resources but notes are being taken and plans are being made
I swear if this doesn't get canon... This is a true masterpiece and the lyric you choose was pretty fitting to Alastor ❤ And Adam really needs Karma too and the one who should show him is the one he almost killed: Alastor! I hope Vivienne sees this and adds the song to season 2 or 3 ☺
Dude this is awesome! I was just talking to someone about potentially Sinner Adam. A reprise and reworking of Hell is Forever being thrown back in his face, even mirroring the og song, except where all his exorcists come out, its other sinners and demons. Have them function as a chorus against him. Very well done!
I keep looking back on this comment like "Yeah that is such a cool idea" Also I'm very thankful that you think this was done well! Makes me feel like posting this was worth it.
@kingpugisthebest After recording I was like "In hindsight, I should've put a guitar breaking sound at the end of this as if alastor broke adam's guitar axe- that would've been so hilarious."
Why is this Actually good Edit:somehow this comment has the most like i ever had Edit:hopefully someone makes a different one with a good singer no offense
How did I not find this sooner?! It is _amazing!_ The only way it could possibly get better is if someone made an animatic to illustrate the battle but otherwise it’s perfect, you captured Alastor’s smugness perfectly (and it’s earned) 😍😍😍 Thanks for a great cover and go hug your furbabies all 💙🐱💙
@LadyLeomon There are a lot of things even I wish were improved on but I can count this as almost an interest gauge of sorts And from the looks of it people are interested So it should be worth the resources to redo it in the future, maybe with an animatic and with the music closer to how i had originally imagined it
It was covered by other people 3 times and it just keeps getting more views- It's doing great in the algorithm given it's only a month and a half old, give or take
Awesome lyrics! Little constructive criticism, maybe use more diaphragm for Alastor! But still I'm definitely downloading this I want to learn these lyrics and make a cover (I'll give credits ofc lol)
@@spencerpetunia8268 My main inspirations for Alastor's voice impression were Pilot Alastor and the way ParanoidDJ sings as him in Smile Like You Mean It
@_Malfoyy Oh my 😱 Well uh That's not something I can control and I have it set to "not made for kids" for a reason but thank you for letting me know... 🥲
@Lia-hm2br Ngl they probably won't even bring adam back after that- but I guess we'll see. I'll be ok either way cause at least there's fan content to fall back on
Hey! Just wondering if I could sing this on my channel? I will give full credit to you, if you allow me to use this. Im trying to find a way to introduce music into my channel and I think this song would be perfect for it! Please and thankyou! 🙂
You did an awesome job at this!! I actually did a rewrite cover too but it was a Welcome To Heaven reprise (I posted it last week on my channel if you wanna see)
The dialogue and lyrics are both great, though some word choices feel awkward for the song. I'll subscribe just to see how this channel will evolve over time. You should definitely remake once you're confident that you are able to improve it.
@oddtomato1049 yeah my biggest dislikes were probably that "consider it" and the "You Thought you" and the "but don't forget" but I swear the hardest part to actually sing lyrically was "No use wasting your breath" cause of the S's in quick succession- kept saying "no used" instead of "no use" cause my brain was trying to fill what really felt like a gap in the words when singing it
@@PatchworkGremlin "You may have won the battle, but I will win the war" bit was my least favourite line, it just feels off for both the song and the characters.
A bit of criticism if that's okay, but if you're able to have a filter for alastor why not have a filter to deepen your voice for adam? Honestly you dont really sound like the characters. The lyrics are cleaver and amazing, but I think your voicing needs work. The song as a whole is really good though, keep up the good work and try it again once you've mastered it.
Honestly the only reason I didn't have my voice deepened with a filter for adam is simply because I tried and decided I don't like how I sound when my voice is deepened like that... and I didn't want to make my own video unwatchable to me. I do plan on redoing it someday though
@dragonemperor5986 If only I had friends XD But the plan is to put up a project listing on a casting website and have people voice act it for me, But that's still a goal for the distant future.
@matthewsimmons9277 I had considered that but I don't know how to do that and don't have the funds to pay someone... Perhaps someday I'll redo it more like how I had originally envisioned it but until then at least I'm getting the interest and support necessary to potentially make that happen later.
I tried my best with what I have... Glad you liked the lyrics, That's the most important part IMO- I feel like the reference could have been done slightly better but to be fair... I'll admit... I never expected this low-quality rewrite cover to get this big. There's always time and room for improvement now that I know people like the concept though 😆
@@PatchworkGremlin Not to be rude, but the voices are a bit weird. Not that you can fully control that, like I get where you’re coming from with giving Alastor a radio like voice. It’s just he doesn’t really have that going for it, other than a small tone of radio in his voice from the actual series. Overall it’s not bad, but not my taste either, but you didn’t make it to please one sole person, so don’t think too much on it.
Yeah, I did my best with what I have... This is actually one of the better criticisms I've seen though so thank you for that- I'll try to take this input into account the moment I have the means to do so.
I could see Alastor singing this song back at him just like Stayed Gone. But maybe in his own jazz style. I'd love to see that.
I was thinking not only jazzy but something along the lines of upbeat swing-
I can't do much with my current resources but notes are being taken and plans are being made
I swear if this doesn't get canon...
This is a true masterpiece and the lyric you choose was pretty fitting to Alastor ❤ And Adam really needs Karma too and the one who should show him is the one he almost killed: Alastor!
I hope Vivienne sees this and adds the song to season 2 or 3 ☺
Honestly I doubt it will be anything more than a fan cover but I really appeciate the enthusiastic sentiment
Good job, it's strange hear Alastor without radio effects but the lyrics were incredibles, continue this way
Dude this is awesome! I was just talking to someone about potentially Sinner Adam. A reprise and reworking of Hell is Forever being thrown back in his face, even mirroring the og song, except where all his exorcists come out, its other sinners and demons. Have them function as a chorus against him.
Very well done!
I keep looking back on this comment like "Yeah that is such a cool idea"
Also I'm very thankful that you think this was done well! Makes me feel like posting this was worth it.
Unironically, slaps.
If the audio was better, it would be perfect
Vivian, SOMEONE ANYONE ACKNOWLEGDE THIS PERSON
Don’t know why but I have this strong image of Adam trying to hit Alastor but alastor just keep dodging and keeps taunting him
@kingpugisthebest After recording I was like "In hindsight, I should've put a guitar breaking sound at the end of this as if alastor broke adam's guitar axe- that would've been so hilarious."
Basically what he was trying to do in their first fight, but now he knows about Adam's guitar-axe and won't get caught off guard by it.
1:27 THE INSANE REFERENCE IS SO GOOD OMG
Yknow that the part from Insane was actually taken by another song called Betty Boop by Charlie Puth
Shameeeee on you-
@Yellowguy0619 Very heavily based off of it maybe but it's not the exact same
@mrfallout1 Charlie Puth
@mrfallout1 damn
Why is this Actually good
Edit:somehow this comment has the most like i ever had
Edit:hopefully someone makes a different one with a good singer no offense
8 likes is the most you ever got? okay man
1 reply and only 56 likes? Let me change that…
69 likes, noice!
I am a good singer, This just isn't my best work. You'll see better work from me someday, I guarantee it.
@@PatchworkGremlinyeah sure
How did I not find this sooner?! It is _amazing!_ The only way it could possibly get better is if someone made an animatic to illustrate the battle but otherwise it’s perfect, you captured Alastor’s smugness perfectly (and it’s earned) 😍😍😍
Thanks for a great cover and go hug your furbabies all 💙🐱💙
@LadyLeomon There are a lot of things even I wish were improved on but I can count this as almost an interest gauge of sorts
And from the looks of it people are interested
So it should be worth the resources to redo it in the future, maybe with an animatic and with the music closer to how i had originally imagined it
@@PatchworkGremlin well what you have now is amazing, I’ll look forward to whatever you do in the future. Thank you 💙🐱💙
This is a 10/10!How come some fan songs like this one are better than most of the songs in the show!
1:29 Insane music
Okay this is actually really good
1:28 slay
Wait... I actually really love this❤❤
The rewrite is so good! I love this :) and the singing is so good! 💙💛💚❤️
Thanks! I tried my best!
I am listening to this on repeat. My favorite version of hell is forever!
So underrated
This is actually really good whatt
Finally smth unique!
I really loove this cover,
Lucifer Approved! Noted! 🤣
FINALLY!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤
Great job with the lyrics, I LOVE IT and (take no offence to this next part) most of the voice(btw nailed Adam's swearing)
thats so good i love the lyrics!!
why isn’t this more popular and recreated???
It was covered by other people 3 times and it just keeps getting more views- It's doing great in the algorithm given it's only a month and a half old, give or take
oh, sweet!
Awesome lyrics! Little constructive criticism, maybe use more diaphragm for Alastor! But still I'm definitely downloading this I want to learn these lyrics and make a cover (I'll give credits ofc lol)
Thanks! I'm no professional singer and this was very rushed but I feel like I did pretty good with what I have :)
You have a pretty voice 😊
@@thebestgummybear9744 Thank you!
This is actually good
Alastor ❤
SO good! You nailed it. Awesome lyrics too.
Thanks!
I love chill Alastair is throughout this!
1:27 I love the reference to Insane you squeezed in here
HOLY SHIT THATS FIREEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Damn good job! Actually pretty nice.
holy shit! so good, really! GO AHEAD!
I LOVE THIS! I especially appreciate how you rolled your Rs and otherwise made Al's Trans-Atlantic accent more pronounced.
@@spencerpetunia8268 My main inspirations for Alastor's voice impression were Pilot Alastor and the way ParanoidDJ sings as him in Smile Like You Mean It
@@PatchworkGremlin I can definitely hear the influence of PARANOiD DJ in yoru Alastor, nice work! :D
THIS CAME UP IN THE CHILDRENS MUSIC CATAGORY 😭😭
@_Malfoyy Oh my 😱
Well uh
That's not something I can control and I have it set to "not made for kids" for a reason but thank you for letting me know... 🥲
My favorite part is when he says “I’m f**king Adam!” 0:20
That's actually good
Wow, you're a pretty good singer
I'm SO EXPECTING this for a future season
*love it* If they don't do a reprise of 'Hell is Forever' for Adam then ima be sad
@Lia-hm2br
Ngl they probably won't even bring adam back after that- but I guess we'll see. I'll be ok either way cause at least there's fan content to fall back on
This has such potential
just get better voice actors and this will be perfect!
Nah, this IS perfect
@@MapleLeafAnimatezFR this one is amazing the way it is!!
JEEZ, THAT WAS GOOOD!!
Thanks!
This is your first time, you say? I think you did an awesome job. Good work.
1:28 insane reference
Really good lyrics, would you mind if i make a cover of this? I'll give credits of course
@@TacoRon I would love to see that 😂
THIS EATS SO MUCH GREAT SINGING💕
I can hear her regreting this as she sings but it is good
Hey! Just wondering if I could sing this on my channel? I will give full credit to you, if you allow me to use this. Im trying to find a way to introduce music into my channel and I think this song would be perfect for it! Please and thankyou! 🙂
Feel Free- But yes please do credit me XD
@@PatchworkGremlin thank you!
*puts this on repeat*
THIS IS ACTUALLY SO GOOD!!!!!!! AHKKJKJJJKKKKKKKODHODJFEBOFJEJEJD LOVE ITTTT
Those lyrics were good.
You did an awesome job at this!! I actually did a rewrite cover too but it was a Welcome To Heaven reprise (I posted it last week on my channel if you wanna see)
@@acesinger6092
I did check it out! I like it a lot! And I'm very glad you like this too 😁
Looks like Adam was the one who lost to Alastor.
SOMEONE BETTER PROMOTE THIS PERSON!!! HE SANG HIS HEART OUT AND HE ONLY GOT 650 LIKES!
@bltznash To be fair, That's 650 more than I had 2 months ago 😅
@@PatchworkGremlin i hope you get promoted soon if you didnt, this song was stuck in my head, seriously
@@BLTZNash That is high praise. Thank you 💖
@@PatchworkGremlin your welcome
keep going, boi!
(also the og growl is charlie to adam)
I just love how a good 25% of this comment section is just people asking for permission to make covers... XD
How much do you wanna bet none or at most one of them are actually going to😅
@@PatchworkGremlin As they say over on Spain, I bet you 5 butts that at the *very* most, 2 of these guys are actually gonna deliver... XD
think you should sing by yourself cause it's quite good
Question: You're like it me make a Spanish Traduction to your lyrics?
@@Allen-zo8ff If you want to, I would love that.
🤌
You know what they say about payback :)
It's a beech
The dialogue and lyrics are both great, though some word choices feel awkward for the song.
I'll subscribe just to see how this channel will evolve over time. You should definitely remake once you're confident that you are able to improve it.
@oddtomato1049 yeah my biggest dislikes were probably that "consider it" and the "You Thought you" and the "but don't forget" but I swear the hardest part to actually sing lyrically was "No use wasting your breath" cause of the S's in quick succession- kept saying "no used" instead of "no use" cause my brain was trying to fill what really felt like a gap in the words when singing it
@@PatchworkGremlin "You may have won the battle, but I will win the war" bit was my least favourite line, it just feels off for both the song and the characters.
@@oddtomato1049 Ngl thst was Entirely filler cause I had no clue what to put there... And maybe a slight nod to all the alastor mean girls edits...
@@PatchworkGremlin What is a mean girl edit?
@oddtomato1049 oh its an edit to one song from the musical called mean girls
A bit of criticism if that's okay, but if you're able to have a filter for alastor why not have a filter to deepen your voice for adam? Honestly you dont really sound like the characters. The lyrics are cleaver and amazing, but I think your voicing needs work. The song as a whole is really good though, keep up the good work and try it again once you've mastered it.
Honestly the only reason I didn't have my voice deepened with a filter for adam is simply because I tried and decided I don't like how I sound when my voice is deepened like that... and I didn't want to make my own video unwatchable to me.
I do plan on redoing it someday though
@@PatchworkGremlin maybe you can get a friend or someone you know to join you?
@dragonemperor5986 If only I had friends XD
But the plan is to put up a project listing on a casting website and have people voice act it for me, But that's still a goal for the distant future.
@@PatchworkGremlin I'll help
Neat but realistically Alastor would remix it into an older music genre. Swing maybe?
@matthewsimmons9277 I had considered that but I don't know how to do that and don't have the funds to pay someone... Perhaps someday I'll redo it more like how I had originally envisioned it but until then at least I'm getting the interest and support necessary to potentially make that happen later.
HaHAAAaaahahahaHaHaaaaHHhhAaaaaaH ahh laugh
but good if this is your first song
I mean, Alastor laughed in a similar way when he fought sir pentious- It sounded insincere on purpose 🤣
NGL, the voice is kinda cringe, but the Lyrics and the 'Insane' reference were just (chef's kiss)
I tried my best with what I have... Glad you liked the lyrics, That's the most important part IMO-
I feel like the reference could have been done slightly better but to be fair... I'll admit... I never expected this low-quality rewrite cover to get this big. There's always time and room for improvement now that I know people like the concept though 😆
would it be cool if i made a cover of this?
Just make sure I get credited for writing the lyrics in either the video title or description
Hello there
Hi! 😊
@@PatchworkGremlin how are you
@@comedy_stories758 Pretty good! You?
@@PatchworkGremlin good. Love your channel
Thanks! I really appreciate that!
Yeah idk about this…
Is that just in general or is there anything specific you think I could've improved on?
@@PatchworkGremlin
Not to be rude, but the voices are a bit weird. Not that you can fully control that, like I get where you’re coming from with giving Alastor a radio like voice. It’s just he doesn’t really have that going for it, other than a small tone of radio in his voice from the actual series. Overall it’s not bad, but not my taste either, but you didn’t make it to please one sole person, so don’t think too much on it.
Yeah, I did my best with what I have...
This is actually one of the better criticisms I've seen though so thank you for that- I'll try to take this input into account the moment I have the means to do so.
Y is it funny y this is trash😂😂😂😂😂😂
I appreciate you sharing your opinion, What do you think I could have improved on?
We all have our different opinions so I don't like it but it's my opinion
Do you just not like the concept, or is there any specific feedback you have?
Ngl kinda sounds like gender swap
@CuanMatthews-wm7hz That's just kinda how I sound... I did the best I could with what I have.
@PatchworkGremlin you did a good job