Hi everyone! I’ve been absolutely blown away by not only how well this short film has done since uploading it in January but also how much my channel has grown within the same time frame. I went from 70ish subscribers to close to 110 as of this morning and still growing. And while that may not seem like a huge number, I’m thankful for all who are curious to see what I do next with my filmmaking journey. I’m also thankful for the comments that people have left for me. I think while there’s elements I enjoy about this short film, there’s a ton of problems I have with it which I hope to remedy in future short films. I cannot understate how important constructive criticism is to me and while there’ve been a few laughably short-sighted comments, most have been very respectful and I’m so appreciative of that! Speaking of my filmmaking journey, I’ve done some more work over the past few weeks and I have more work on the back burner that I hope to complete this month but in the meantime, be sure to check out the Director’s commentary, where myself and the two main actors discuss some of the behind the scenes of the project. Additionally, if you’re curious to see my other work, check out my short film playlist on YT. The most recent film as of right now, Adam and Jonathan’s Daring Escape, has some of my best work so be sure to check that out! Links to both of these are down below. Thank you all so much again. I can’t emphasize enough how appreciative I am of your support! Short Film Playlist: th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html Director’s Commentary: th-cam.com/video/Q3V2ySnrWiI/w-d-xo.html
Imagine being alone. In world with only a teddy 4 company Can't wonder how they all kept so clean and well groomed. Also is there an Uxbridge in USA 😮. In london,UK used to go there as a child On bus no 607,..birdsong audible ,not at Auschwitz to this day..
Bikes, motorcycles, cabs, cars, trains, planes, helicopters, sailboats, motorships, scooters, jet skies, trikes, trucks, tractors, jeeps, tanks, and all the extra ways for transport..... everything is for grabs.... and still they ALWAYS walk in these types of movies. Why? I should find myself a badass tank to move from A to B. How fantastic would that be😂
I’ve gone down a rabbit hole with these - a few years later and I made the same comment on another film. Even with EMF mechanical bikes still work. So much walking!
Lot of terrain in woods were I would be. Unfortunately my health is bad. I could cover some ground when I was younger.Its a Alamo fight for me. You know how the story goes. Good luck to all
This being only 10 years after, he should have found a fishing pole I'd think, but I like the imaginative "rigging a pole" with floss and a pop top. Nice touch.😊
Hey man, I really do appreciate this comment despite what’s said. This film for me was a great challenge to make and I rushed through making it a lot. Despite all the other work I’ve done, I’m still upset that this has gained the most traction out of all of them because I watch it and only see the mistakes. Despite there still being elements I enjoy, I learned a lot by making this movie and I have since acknowledged and accepted that this film was a necessary part of my filmmaking journey. And while I always love the support this film gets, I absolutely get why it didn’t jive with a good amount of people, you included. If you’re willing to give me another chance, I have a playlist that’s more up to date with my more recent shorts as well as my old ones. If my style’s not your thing, to each their own but again, thank you for the comment and for watching this. th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html&si=06ScE4zEENMsrLJj
I am in Eric. For sure I did not pay attention to the little things. When I do that, I embarrass myself most of the time, so I feel better now having learned that lesson. The film was the greatest!! I encourage you to move forward in this endeavor. Your talent in this field is much appreciated. OH before I forget, I loved your replies just as much as the film. ha ha Have fun Eric and remember this: Be kind, be loving and most of all, Be Yourself. Sincerely with no regrets at 78 I remain, Doug in Los Angeles, California, USA
Bravo! I was thoroughly entranced and entertained. I can't say enough about some of those gotcha moments...you got me. Keep up the good work. Count me subscribed. Looking forward to more.
fair comment, but honestly, to survive nuclear storms and whatnot, you'd probably be much safer in a mineshaft than in what remains of any house. Also, this location is really cool so if you're in the area, definitely check out the Clinton Tunnel in Clinton, Massachusetts. It's this old abandoned train tunnel that provided some great filmmaking opportunities! It's also legal to go to so check it out if you get the chance!
Houses are often scanned by dangerous Marauders looking for supplies and resources and can usually tell if someone is staying their or not! So to alleviate the threat of short term survival you may not want to stay in a house where you could experience an unwelcome surprise coming back from your own wandering!
Shelter, fire, water, cooked fish... little things, like when he picked up the bandanna, most people would smell it before tying it around their head... little details for realism. and faster scenes... but congrats!
Since it seems appropriate to critique these fioms, I'm going to throw two cents into the ring... tell me "it's ten years since the apocalypse" and the open with a tire rutted field and underpass full of foot prints and fresh tire tracks... a clean paper cup that survived ten years outdoors? The bandana hanging in the trestle... and suddenly (wow- "after thought") let's find MORE clothing lying on the grass... so starved he eats a fish raw after packing it for--- half a day?-- rather than eat it raw, but FRESH, where he caught it? Dunno, but I couldn't suspend belief much longer than ten minutes. Good effort, though-- keep it up, just pay attention to continuity in the story line. It's the details that draw the viewer in.
@@ericbielakiewiczvideography I really like to support people making their own movies like yours. With no budget you guys come up with great ideas that Hollywood would never touch
@@walterdavis4808 thank you so much, man! Those words mean a lot! I have some more ideas on the back burner that I plan to develop and put on this channel, but in the meantime, check out my Short Film and Narrative Projects playlist! Including The Wanderer, it has some of the other films I worked on! Thank again! People like you are the reason I keep making these films, even with no financial gain of my own. And while I know there’s a lot I can improve upon when it comes to this film, I’m so happy you and many others here have subscribed to see the other work I produce!
A great friend was a film major in college after he graduated we were going to make a documentary on the summer greatful dead tour and then one on riding horses across the United States using the old pioneer wagon trails . But we ended growing up and having families instead.
Dude, I commend the video; I don't have nearly enough effort to create a short film, but like, the blood always disappearing after he was stabbed?! Perfect example was the end beach scene. Everything he found was in good condition. It's meant to be post apocalyptic; everything should be at least dirty if not torn. I've honestly seen better from lower budgets. Acting though was good; you guys have that down pack. As for your story line and the small details; massive improvement needed. Pay attention to the small details, they're what counts. The amount of times you missed small details and could tell it was done in multiple takes was a bit poor. 1 star out of 5. Also the end scene with the beach and houses didn't make it post apocalyptic at all. Sorry guys. Keep trying though.
I appreciate your critiques, man! Thank you! I totally agree with all of these points, I felt that with more time (something which I unfortunately lacked), I felt this could’ve been a lot better. The genre was definitely a bit more ambitious than what we had the budget for. However, there are moments that I’m legitimately proud of as a filmmaker. I’m definitely gonna try to simplify the kind of stories I tell with future films until I can find a larger crew because this was guerrilla filmmaking at it’s core. There will definitely be more consistency in the future. Thanks for the comment!
@@ericbielakiewiczvideography I'd say to just keep it simple so you don't outstrip your resources, or spend too long setting the scene..but I'll say this too, when it was good, it was *really* good. You've got the vision, a good camera, and a nice cadre of talented actors - no doubt that with some patience and effort, you''re bound to attract a good solid crew and decent investment. But whatever you do..don't get distracted by low budget! Here's a channel that'll help you overcome a lot of the issues budding film-makers face>> th-cam.com/channels/6P24bhhCmMPOcujA9PKPTA.html Keep on trucking!
Wow this was nice. I like the red book and scavenging motifs. The rain was very atmospheric and I enjoyed it. Use of sign language was nice touch too. Some nice music in there. Nice film. Film with the same name and similar topic. ---> th-cam.com/video/efw-Zb6e4fk/w-d-xo.html
Good enough...you have talent....it will grow and get better......like the guy in the mask....crazy or what?Sound effects and timing are accurate and a faster edit in some scenes would help.good luck. 3/5
A bit silly, gets blood on his hands, finds pistol doesn't check for bullets, leaves the fish he tried so hardto catch behind.... Turned off. But keep trying.
Absolute garbage ,, ten years after nuclear war and ya find a book in the grass looking brand new , even a ten year old wouldn’t make that mistake in a film , where the hell as that fish come from u ate raw hahahahah,, don’t give up ya day job guys it’s shxte
@@KristianMcKenzie-gc8ej wow, it’s crazy this film still gaining as much traction as it is! Appreciate the comment regardless. I imagine most ten year olds would make way worst mistakes but I see your point haha. And unfortunately, not everyone could’ve been Leo DeCaprio, the fish was a prop but convincing, huh? Lol. Anyway, I made this back when I was still relatively inexperienced and still in school and I’ve stated, I have a lot of problems with it but there’s parts I’m still proud of. I think I’ve def made better work since then so if you have time, check out some of my other shorts! th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html&si=ZFEaTyr7GVPDObzW
Hi everyone! I’ve been absolutely blown away by not only how well this short film has done since uploading it in January but also how much my channel has grown within the same time frame. I went from 70ish subscribers to close to 110 as of this morning and still growing. And while that may not seem like a huge number, I’m thankful for all who are curious to see what I do next with my filmmaking journey. I’m also thankful for the comments that people have left for me. I think while there’s elements I enjoy about this short film, there’s a ton of problems I have with it which I hope to remedy in future short films. I cannot understate how important constructive criticism is to me and while there’ve been a few laughably short-sighted comments, most have been very respectful and I’m so appreciative of that! Speaking of my filmmaking journey, I’ve done some more work over the past few weeks and I have more work on the back burner that I hope to complete this month but in the meantime, be sure to check out the Director’s commentary, where myself and the two main actors discuss some of the behind the scenes of the project. Additionally, if you’re curious to see my other work, check out my short film playlist on YT. The most recent film as of right now, Adam and Jonathan’s Daring Escape, has some of my best work so be sure to check that out! Links to both of these are down below. Thank you all so much again. I can’t emphasize enough how appreciative I am of your support!
Short Film Playlist: th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html
Director’s Commentary: th-cam.com/video/Q3V2ySnrWiI/w-d-xo.html
Eric, this was a really good film you made. My first time watching it. Congrats on it!!
Imagine being alone. In world with only a teddy 4 company
Can't wonder how they all kept so clean and well groomed.
Also is there an Uxbridge in USA 😮. In london,UK used to go there as a child
On bus no 607,..birdsong audible ,not at Auschwitz to this day..
Bikes, motorcycles, cabs, cars, trains, planes, helicopters, sailboats, motorships, scooters, jet skies, trikes, trucks, tractors, jeeps, tanks, and all the extra ways for transport..... everything is for grabs.... and still they ALWAYS walk in these types of movies. Why? I should find myself a badass tank to move from A to B. How fantastic would that be😂
Hahaha believe me man, if I had the budget and the means to have gotten a tank for this, I would’ve!
but you will walk till you find your tank.
I’ve gone down a rabbit hole with these - a few years later and I made the same comment on another film. Even with EMF mechanical bikes still work. So much walking!
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Lot of terrain in woods were I would be. Unfortunately my health is bad. I could cover some ground when I was younger.Its a Alamo fight for me. You know how the story goes. Good luck to all
This being only 10 years after, he should have found a fishing pole I'd think, but I like the imaginative "rigging a pole" with floss and a pop top. Nice touch.😊
A very effective and convincing illustration of how hard it is to create a useful movie and story. Massive number of views prove the loneliness.
Hey man, I really do appreciate this comment despite what’s said. This film for me was a great challenge to make and I rushed through making it a lot. Despite all the other work I’ve done, I’m still upset that this has gained the most traction out of all of them because I watch it and only see the mistakes. Despite there still being elements I enjoy, I learned a lot by making this movie and I have since acknowledged and accepted that this film was a necessary part of my filmmaking journey. And while I always love the support this film gets, I absolutely get why it didn’t jive with a good amount of people, you included. If you’re willing to give me another chance, I have a playlist that’s more up to date with my more recent shorts as well as my old ones. If my style’s not your thing, to each their own but again, thank you for the comment and for watching this.
th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html&si=06ScE4zEENMsrLJj
NEVER leave your backpack no matter what!!!
Very happy to be a part of this short film, that was real blood btw guys
Hey Mike.....you were fantastic in every respect. My hat is off to you. 10+ for the guy with the bandana.
Did you feel like the Predator when you cauterised yourself????
I bet that was a real BB gun too
Good job. Probably it would a fight for survival at every turn.
And then they all die. So so original for this genre of film! Never seen anything like this before.
I am in Eric. For sure I did not pay attention to the little things. When I do that, I embarrass myself most of the time, so I feel better now having learned that lesson. The film was the greatest!! I encourage you to move forward in this endeavor. Your talent in this field is much appreciated. OH before I forget, I loved your replies just as much as the film. ha ha Have fun Eric and remember this: Be kind, be loving and most of all, Be Yourself. Sincerely with no regrets at 78 I remain, Doug in Los Angeles, California, USA
Thank. You ❤❤❤
Bravo! I was thoroughly entranced and entertained. I can't say enough about some of those gotcha moments...you got me.
Keep up the good work.
Count me subscribed. Looking forward to more.
I love your username
Great movie... You all did great... Well done...
I love it and enjoy every second, it's awesome on so many levels. At first I thought that he is guy with mask...
very good, i like this film👍👍
Talk about going crazy. This is insanity on steroids
Production - outstanding
Storyline/Meaning - Rather baffeling
But it kept me engaged none the less, so good job!
Favorite shot 22:53. Nice work!
This is the person who died from beyond the grave saying it was great to be apart of this film.
Good job
all those houses and he's living in a mine shaft being stalked by darth vader...
fair comment, but honestly, to survive nuclear storms and whatnot, you'd probably be much safer in a mineshaft than in what remains of any house. Also, this location is really cool so if you're in the area, definitely check out the Clinton Tunnel in Clinton, Massachusetts. It's this old abandoned train tunnel that provided some great filmmaking opportunities! It's also legal to go to so check it out if you get the chance!
To be accurate a mineshaft has one entrance. Houses have multiple points of entrance and attack.
My fav scene was when he threw away his emergency radio. Hilarious. Somehow this bumbling idiot survived 10 years in shtf. That's funny too
Houses are often scanned by dangerous Marauders looking for supplies and resources and can usually tell if someone is staying their or not! So to alleviate the threat of short term survival you may not want to stay in a house where you could experience an unwelcome surprise coming back from your own wandering!
I wish I had had a dollar for every bumbling dystopian who throws away a device in anger 🙄
Really really good short film.
The guy is so nice and he looks like a very nice person.
Congrats! And applauses 👏👏👏👏
Well done 👍
How tf did I miss this!?!? Amazing job Eric!!!!
Thanks Doug!
Welcome to the grafitti apocalypse.
Well done
Doesn't look terribly like everything has been nuked snd im pretty sure you,d cook the fish first!
Apparently Roger, you have never been starved. Hunger takes over as a basic need and no fire is gonna change that.
Shelter, fire, water, cooked fish... little things, like when he picked up the bandanna, most people would smell it before tying it around their head... little details for realism. and faster scenes... but congrats!
Nice film..
Such a fantastic video man! Your work is just constantly improving!
cool. can hrdly wait!☢
If the actors weren’t so ‘pretty’ and brand new I might have appreciated it more
looks like Northern Michigan.
It’s actually in Montana
Since it seems appropriate to critique these fioms, I'm going to throw two cents into the ring... tell me "it's ten years since the apocalypse" and the open with a tire rutted field and underpass full of foot prints and fresh tire tracks... a clean paper cup that survived ten years outdoors? The bandana hanging in the trestle... and suddenly (wow- "after thought") let's find MORE clothing lying on the grass... so starved he eats a fish raw after packing it for--- half a day?-- rather than eat it raw, but FRESH, where he caught it? Dunno, but I couldn't suspend belief much longer than ten minutes. Good effort, though-- keep it up, just pay attention to continuity in the story line. It's the details that draw the viewer in.
Um i assume it was his spirit at the beach? Like there was no blood on his clothes? Great movie though👍
You’d be correct!
Did I just see a clear road?
“We commend his body to The Deep…”
Good short movie, Eric. But i have to give you a B+ instead of A, because you dropped the gun or had it knocked away too many times. 😃
That was a good film . Other comments brought up valid points so I won't repeat them . Look forward to you work . Where are you making these movies?
I making these in the state I live in Massachusetts while attending college. Thanks man!
@@ericbielakiewiczvideography I really like to support people making their own movies like yours.
With no budget you guys come up with great ideas that Hollywood would never touch
@@walterdavis4808 thank you so much, man! Those words mean a lot! I have some more ideas on the back burner that I plan to develop and put on this channel, but in the meantime, check out my Short Film and Narrative Projects playlist! Including The Wanderer, it has some of the other films I worked on! Thank again! People like you are the reason I keep making these films, even with no financial gain of my own. And while I know there’s a lot I can improve upon when it comes to this film, I’m so happy you and many others here have subscribed to see the other work I produce!
@@ericbielakiewiczvideography I got a boat in new jersey if you ever want to try something to do on the water
A great friend was a film major in college after he graduated we were going to make a documentary on the summer greatful dead tour and then one on riding horses across the United States using the old pioneer wagon trails . But we ended growing up and having families instead.
I. Like. This
This was really good, but i feel like u have left me with a few questions..!! But overall, i enjoyed watching this anyways.
Thank you!
Dude, I commend the video; I don't have nearly enough effort to create a short film, but like, the blood always disappearing after he was stabbed?! Perfect example was the end beach scene.
Everything he found was in good condition. It's meant to be post apocalyptic; everything should be at least dirty if not torn. I've honestly seen better from lower budgets. Acting though was good; you guys have that down pack. As for your story line and the small details; massive improvement needed. Pay attention to the small details, they're what counts. The amount of times you missed small details and could tell it was done in multiple takes was a bit poor. 1 star out of 5. Also the end scene with the beach and houses didn't make it post apocalyptic at all. Sorry guys. Keep trying though.
I appreciate your critiques, man! Thank you! I totally agree with all of these points, I felt that with more time (something which I unfortunately lacked), I felt this could’ve been a lot better. The genre was definitely a bit more ambitious than what we had the budget for. However, there are moments that I’m legitimately proud of as a filmmaker. I’m definitely gonna try to simplify the kind of stories I tell with future films until I can find a larger crew because this was guerrilla filmmaking at it’s core. There will definitely be more consistency in the future. Thanks for the comment!
@@ericbielakiewiczvideography I'd say to just keep it simple so you don't outstrip your resources, or spend too long setting the scene..but I'll say this too, when it was good, it was *really* good.
You've got the vision, a good camera, and a nice cadre of talented actors - no doubt that with some patience and effort, you''re bound to attract a good solid crew and decent investment.
But whatever you do..don't get distracted by low budget! Here's a channel that'll help you overcome a lot of the issues budding film-makers face>> th-cam.com/channels/6P24bhhCmMPOcujA9PKPTA.html
Keep on trucking!
Who was the girl? What was the plot? Can you make a movie without violence? At least nobody could guess the ending. Pretty scenery.
Wow this was nice. I like the red book and scavenging motifs. The rain was very atmospheric and I enjoyed it. Use of sign language was nice touch too. Some nice music in there. Nice film.
Film with the same name and similar topic.
---> th-cam.com/video/efw-Zb6e4fk/w-d-xo.html
Good enough...you have talent....it will grow and get better......like the guy in the mask....crazy or what?Sound effects and timing are accurate and a faster edit in some scenes would help.good luck.
3/5
Good movie, good filming and editing skills .... very very poor SHTF skills. USMC 70-74, Semper Fi.
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A bit silly, gets blood on his hands, finds pistol doesn't check for bullets, leaves the fish he tried so hardto catch behind....
Turned off.
But keep trying.
Ein schlecht gemachter Film, bei der eine Luftpistole eingesetzt wurde
Absolute garbage ,, ten years after nuclear war and ya find a book in the grass looking brand new , even a ten year old wouldn’t make that mistake in a film , where the hell as that fish come from u ate raw hahahahah,, don’t give up ya day job guys it’s shxte
@@KristianMcKenzie-gc8ej wow, it’s crazy this film still gaining as much traction as it is! Appreciate the comment regardless. I imagine most ten year olds would make way worst mistakes but I see your point haha. And unfortunately, not everyone could’ve been Leo DeCaprio, the fish was a prop but convincing, huh? Lol. Anyway, I made this back when I was still relatively inexperienced and still in school and I’ve stated, I have a lot of problems with it but there’s parts I’m still proud of. I think I’ve def made better work since then so if you have time, check out some of my other shorts! th-cam.com/play/PL8xab-uQCqSqMvSk8qqlWve6nM-Po_ECs.html&si=ZFEaTyr7GVPDObzW