IELTS Writing General Task 1 Letter | SAMPLE ANSWER

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ความคิดเห็น • 75

  • @anweshapatnaik8884
    @anweshapatnaik8884 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thank you so much! I watched and got a 7.5 with only a week's preparation !! Your videos are amazing, they're easy to follow and the tips are top-notch!

  • @beginner313
    @beginner313 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Thank you , Got 7.5 with just 1 week of prep watched just your videos and I am glad I did them . L:9,R:8.5,W:6.5,S:6 overall :7.5

    • @electromecstore1367
      @electromecstore1367 ปีที่แล้ว

      U must be a guru

    • @beginner313
      @beginner313 ปีที่แล้ว

      @ Our Life 365 -The Bhakuni Family dec14

    • @beginner313
      @beginner313 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@electromecstore1367 no 😔

    • @wardawahan5672
      @wardawahan5672 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      How can I examine myself before go through the ielts exam?

  • @SAMUELBELA
    @SAMUELBELA ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You're such an inspiration. I'm currently documenting my relocation journey

  • @sanyagajria5819
    @sanyagajria5819 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I came across your videos for IELTS, your tips were extremely useful, I have managed to score a 7.5 and I couldn’t be more grateful to you, thank you so much

  • @eneobiabo2607
    @eneobiabo2607 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Asiya,I got my result today and I got a band 7 in speaking by just watching your videos for a week.
    Thank you so much

  • @ahmadniaz6330
    @ahmadniaz6330 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Asiya. I got overall 7.5 today and 7 in speaking. Your videos played an important role. My cue card was quite difficult for me but still I made up an answer and it went well. It was describe a change in daily life which helped me save a lot of time. My fluency was excellent.

  • @ceciliahncube5955
    @ceciliahncube5955 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hie asiya I am really really grateful for your videos. I got my results today with an overall of 6.0 having a band 8 in speaking.. i always wana do things last minute.. so 5 days of your videos were very much effective.. I'm from zimbabwe...I hope you see this comment cause I am now a big fan... No amount of words can really explain how grateful I am.. may God bless.. your are really working wonders dear....

  • @juanpablobetancurrengifo9447
    @juanpablobetancurrengifo9447 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, Asia!
    I got an overall score of 7.5! thank you so much. I could study a lot because of your videos!

  • @gofurmia6997
    @gofurmia6997 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your videos were really helpful for me. I only took 1 weeks preparation and I followed your instructions. I got overall 7.5 with( L 8 ,W 6.5 S 7.5 R 7.5 ) thanks a lot ! I will recommend other your videos

  • @notafraidofytube3304
    @notafraidofytube3304 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you Asiya, because of your insights and IELTS tips I got overall band 8 score.

  • @happyEnglish12
    @happyEnglish12 ปีที่แล้ว

    *Very interesting and important video lesson. Thanks*

  • @nabilaaktershampa1680
    @nabilaaktershampa1680 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey there Asiya,
    I got overall 7 in my ielts, 8 on reading and 7 on speaking, in writing and listening I got 6.5.
    Please take my heartiest thanks for being so helpful in your videos which the only thing I watched or learn from as my preparation.
    Good luck and keep doing the best what you are doing.

  • @patrickegbon1855
    @patrickegbon1855 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Good day, one of your videos on task one was really helpful in my test.
    Thank you very much.

  • @richartyt5793
    @richartyt5793 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam today onwards I am going to prepare to my ielts exam I have 1 year time today I found your channel hope it will be useful, I was reading many of them sharing their ielts score that's makes me feel better gives confidence that I can also do better,thx for your help mam

  • @surya143s
    @surya143s ปีที่แล้ว +1

    1 million subscribers congrats🎉

  • @lika5603
    @lika5603 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi, Asia!
    I got Band 7.5 for speaking and your videos helped me a lot. Thanks 😊

  • @EllEyre
    @EllEyre ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Dear Asiya, I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart. I bought a subscription for your academic pack since I had no idea how to prepare for the IELTS writing. Just in 10 days, I've managed to boost my score from 6.0 to 7.0.
    Thank you so much, you are the best!

  • @Jkogade
    @Jkogade ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you Asiya. Watched most of your videos for my academic ielts.
    L8.5
    S7.5
    R7
    W7..
    I really appreciate it. Never give up. Watch and follow the techniques for your own success story.

  • @blessingakintola3549
    @blessingakintola3549 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks alot for the ever great Content! In respect to this video, If I may ask a question Asiya?
    Task 1 sample:
    A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice.
    Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
    • make suggestions as to how they could make friends
    • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities
    • give any extra general advice
    My answer (Introduction only):
    Dear Asiya,
    It was great to hear from you and congratulations on changing to a new school! I'm sure you can't wait to start adapting to your new school, but you've asked for my advise on adapting to your new school and I honestly believe making new friends sooner than later is the answer.
    My question is what subtle way can I use in other not to repeat the phrase "new school" three times like I have done in my introduction and please if you could rate my overall introduction.

  • @bru_wa
    @bru_wa ปีที่แล้ว

    Just came to like the video. Love from 🇬🇭

  • @user-mv2kf8gq5o
    @user-mv2kf8gq5o 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for this ms.Asiya😊❤

  • @apriljoysarco7383
    @apriljoysarco7383 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you Asiya, hope that I got high band score for GT from Philippines

  • @manwesha
    @manwesha ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so very much. I just watched a few tips from your videos and with a week's preparation, i scored band 7 in my very first attempt. Grateful 💕 (academic)

  • @vedanthesecretninja7777
    @vedanthesecretninja7777 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Asiya I’m very much thankful to you…..my results are out and I got L-7 R-7 W-6.5 and S-7 overall 7……😍😍

  • @rowletGaming
    @rowletGaming ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello there! I am not convinced that the number of words is not relevant as long as we cover each topic. The letter in video has 220 words and in computer-based exam, the system does not allow one to write more than 150 words. It would be difficult to write a letter on this topic with hard constraints.

  • @nihayamohamed5995
    @nihayamohamed5995 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much

  • @musichub8655
    @musichub8655 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you mam its organizing awesome

  • @marambashar4765
    @marambashar4765 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want to thank you for your videos I just received my results yesterday with band 7 - general from first attempt 😍and with very short period of preparation

  • @sallylo7135
    @sallylo7135 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you, Asia.
    I usually spend over an hour to finish task 2 writing practice exercise. Have any skill to improve writing faster? 😅🙏🏻

  • @AbdulRahman-ir5zn
    @AbdulRahman-ir5zn ปีที่แล้ว

    How to use connectors wisely? And how to ensure that we have given the right punctuation? Please help me on this.

  • @omozokpiaharrison6555
    @omozokpiaharrison6555 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Gooday ma, i enjoyed your class, iAM actually preparing for IELTS exam

  • @linessjimmy1651
    @linessjimmy1651 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Asiya ... I'm from Malawi

  • @sanjarolimjonov3970
    @sanjarolimjonov3970 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You can't imagine how huge advantage gave me😁

  • @legend_vlogz12
    @legend_vlogz12 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanku so much Asiya
    I got my result today and i got (L-6.5 ,S-6.0,W-6.5 ,R-7.0 ). May God bless you❤(academic)

  • @TibetanPunjaban
    @TibetanPunjaban 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Mam please I’m preparing for ielts general UK Vi and need more videos of General ielts 😊

  • @lyndawaethan755
    @lyndawaethan755 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Asiya greetings 🙏 me am asking which ielts English does uk 🇬🇧 require am some how stuck

  • @anglebell8116
    @anglebell8116 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks so much mam I got 6.5 in writing am greatful to your videos

  • @user-xw8ue6jn8c
    @user-xw8ue6jn8c 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is it oky to write in past tense provided the letter received above has expressions such
    as " A friend has written" which is present tense

  • @parulgupta5029
    @parulgupta5029 ปีที่แล้ว

    Received my score today. L=8.0,R=6.5,W=7.0,S=7.0, OverAll=7.0
    Thankyou so much😊
    Because of your lessons and tips, I cleared the exam in just 15 days of preparation.

  • @ouahibaaff4414
    @ouahibaaff4414 ปีที่แล้ว

    done thanks

  • @simranmohammed5624
    @simranmohammed5624 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi my IELTS exam academic is on 17th dec can you give me some suggestions please 🥺

  • @medicosshalinirajsinghtoma882
    @medicosshalinirajsinghtoma882 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma'am are u providing any coaching also? I m really interested to do.

  • @good5313
    @good5313 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks u❤️....

  • @NSGboy99
    @NSGboy99 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear teacher,
    Do our masks get deducted if we write spelling of American English rather than British for Centre/Center , programme/ program, etc... in reading , listening and wtiring?

  • @gabrielojobo9012
    @gabrielojobo9012 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good day.please in my IELTS writing part one we were told to start the letter with dear sir/madam but I didn't see it and started it with dear Manager please how much is that going to affect my band score?

  • @abulkalamazad9845
    @abulkalamazad9845 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love ,Asiya

  • @Him_Ps
    @Him_Ps ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam i gave my exam on 26th of November and i supposed to get my result by 9th of December but i got a mail stating my result is under investigation. Mam can you please tell me how long it will take or what shorts of thing i can do to get my result early.

  • @favourwogu357
    @favourwogu357 ปีที่แล้ว

    First to comment from Nigeria

  • @obasipresh3208
    @obasipresh3208 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want to use this medium to thank u dear Asiya. Ya videos helped me to get my desired band scores. I got 8 in listening 7 in reading 7 in writing 7.5 in speaking. God bless u Asiya. I will invite all my friends to join your channel.

  • @sazzadmehedi
    @sazzadmehedi ปีที่แล้ว

    Love from Bangladesh 🇧🇩🇧🇩🇧🇩

  • @shivaniupadhyay5645
    @shivaniupadhyay5645 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What is the maximum number of words for both task 1 and 2?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      How many can you write in sixty minutes? ;) There're no definite max word count, only minimum. The goal is to write two good answers and finish both

  • @dedgaming917
    @dedgaming917 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Third comment from Pakistan.

  • @jamesmcintosh7448
    @jamesmcintosh7448 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey Asiya, I'm a native English teacher. I've noticed you often use the /s/ sound instead of the /z/ sound. For example, when you say the word "letters" you should use a /z/ sound and not a strong /s/ sound like you do.
    Just a pronunciation tip for you.

    • @Jkogade
      @Jkogade ปีที่แล้ว

      No one is interested in how you pronounce s or z as long as the listener understands your idea. Thats all good.

    • @jamesmcintosh7448
      @jamesmcintosh7448 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Jkogade True. But some learners are committed to trying to get 100% perfect English. They're crazy people though.

  • @priyadarshini1405
    @priyadarshini1405 ปีที่แล้ว

    I like hearing your video in 1.5x .

  • @lavanyagupta9399
    @lavanyagupta9399 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Pls check :
    Dear Prerna,
    Hope you are doing good. It's always pleasant to hear from you. Congratulations on your exam results! You'd asked me about the advice regarding what you should do before joining the university. Well, in my opinion, you should get a job.
    Since, I personally know you, job would he the right option as you are financially bounded. Moreover, travelling would cost you an arm and a leg. To explain, travelling includes costs like food, accommodation, transport, etc. Apart from your financial situation, I'm pretty sure, you'll get exhausted as you don't like to come out of your comfort zone.
    I believe, getting a job is totally the right idea as this will not only help in gaining experience but will also help in getting to know people from the corporate world. Additionally, you'll also earn lucrative salary with which you'll be able to come out of your financial situation.
    Adding on, I know you are great at writing articles. So, you should start looking for companies that are hiring Content Writers.
    I hope this letter proves to be beneficial for you.
    Best regards,
    Lavanya

  • @Sukhdeepsingh-wd6ci
    @Sukhdeepsingh-wd6ci ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Second comment from India (Punjab)

    • @Sukhdeepsingh-wd6ci
      @Sukhdeepsingh-wd6ci ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You helped me a lot you are such a kind role model and a teacher for me I got 7.5 bands , thankyou so much

  • @Joblessengineer2024
    @Joblessengineer2024 ปีที่แล้ว

    Madam I get confused with this type of senstence while dealing with plural and singular nouns. Can you plz help me with this. Which one is correct and why with Explain?
    He has collections of books.
    He has a collection of books.
    He has collections of book.
    He has a collection of book.

  • @navyashetty8535
    @navyashetty8535 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello everyone, I have started self study today . I am looking for a perfect TH-cam channel which would help me prepare for the exam . Please let me know if I am on the right channel now or u have any other suggestion

  • @loycekalembo972
    @loycekalembo972 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, Asia
    I got my results today, it was my first attempt.
    ~Overall 7.0, L:7.0, R:6.5, W:6.5, S:7.5 ( academic).
    I had less than 10days for preparation, I watched all your videos and followed your techniques. God Bless You🫶🏽 Thank You

  • @eprohoda
    @eprohoda ปีที่แล้ว

    Fastrack! How r u?!you created awesome - goodbye!~ 😈

  • @ceciliahncube5955
    @ceciliahncube5955 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hie asiya I am really really grateful for your videos. I got my results today with an overall of 6.0 having a band 8 in speaking.. i always wana do things last minute.. so 5 days of your videos were very much effective.. I'm from zimbabwe...I hope you see this comment cause I am now a big fan... No amount of words can really explain how grateful I am.. may God bless.. your are really working wonders dear....

  • @gabrielojobo9012
    @gabrielojobo9012 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good day.please in my IELTS writing part one we were told to start the letter with dear sir/madam but I didn't see it and started it with dear Manager please how much is that going to affect my band score?