This is perfect for a Mario game where Mario finds out that Bowser has dragged Peach down to Hell. While in Hell, Mario embraces his evil side that he has hid since 1983 and kills Bowser in cold blood. This plays as Mario is still holding the severed head of the Koopa King, sending a message to any other ruler who tries to take over the Mushroom Kingdom that he won't let his kingdom be threatened and assumes the role as king of the Mushroom Kingdom.
+WolkerSam No, it's worst. Much worst... Imagine if Raven from Teen Titans met Dante from Devil May Cry, as they went on a futile quest to try and prevent the apocalypse. That's basically what I'm working with. I've been rewriting it for the past three years, because the first draft was Twilight levels of bad.(I know this because I read Twilight and saw many similarities between its sentence structure and that of my first draft.)
+WolkerSam That's my fault as I read more comic-books and manga during my latter adolescence as opposed to novels. :p Hell, it unfortunately is dialogue heavy like a comic-book, which I'm trying to fix. And yes I unfortunately am referring to the very Twilight you're thinking of. While the story is action oriented like Naruto or DBZ, as I said the sentence structure, grammar, and I think maybe dialogue were as bad as Twilight...-_- The revelation of Twilight being a published rough draft scared the crap out of me. On one hand, it would explain the 500 rejections from Agencies and publishers, as Meyer got lucky. On the other hand it gave me an excuse to revisit one of my favorite pieces and rewrite it from scratch. :p
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This is perfect for a Mario game where Mario finds out that Bowser has dragged Peach down to Hell. While in Hell, Mario embraces his evil side that he has hid since 1983 and kills Bowser in cold blood. This plays as Mario is still holding the severed head of the Koopa King, sending a message to any other ruler who tries to take over the Mushroom Kingdom that he won't let his kingdom be threatened and assumes the role as king of the Mushroom Kingdom.
Never did I imagine my desire to finish my book to be stimulated by vocals put to an 8-bit remix of Inside The Fire. Life is strange...
Your book is about 8-bit games secrets???
+WolkerSam No, it's worst. Much worst... Imagine if Raven from Teen Titans met Dante from Devil May Cry, as they went on a futile quest to try and prevent the apocalypse.
That's basically what I'm working with. I've been rewriting it for the past three years, because the first draft was Twilight levels of bad.(I know this because I read Twilight and saw many similarities between its sentence structure and that of my first draft.)
This is more comics theme than book, but Twilight is for little girls man, hope you mean other Twilight xD
+WolkerSam That's my fault as I read more comic-books and manga during my latter adolescence as opposed to novels. :p Hell, it unfortunately is dialogue heavy like a comic-book, which I'm trying to fix.
And yes I unfortunately am referring to the very Twilight you're thinking of. While the story is action oriented like Naruto or DBZ, as I said the sentence structure, grammar, and I think maybe dialogue were as bad as Twilight...-_- The revelation of Twilight being a published rough draft scared the crap out of me. On one hand, it would explain the 500 rejections from Agencies and publishers, as Meyer got lucky. On the other hand it gave me an excuse to revisit one of my favorite pieces and rewrite it from scratch. :p
it's incomplete, but I'll work on it with missing parts, as well Asylum is mine to take
MP3?
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WolkerSam Thx.