Your First Draft SUCKS… Here’s how to fix it!

Your first draft sucks, it's supposed to suck. You can improve you writing but that's not what a first draft is.
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[@PetrosofSparta]

Thanks me, this is really useful information.
What? I was talking to myself most of the video anyway! Quarantine has me going a bit crazy.

[@GabriellaFitzGerald]

Loved the video Petros!! First drafts really scare me, but having it broken down like that makes it seem so much more approachable and achievable - thanks for some great motivation!

[@LeonUnity]

Anything I can do to help makes it worth it!

[@ChrisMortee]

Thanks Leon unity, i get this alot. Guess I just need to be less hard on myself when it comes to content. its so hard though. Will defo try the paper instead of screen and see what happens, Thanks!

[@danielheartman1415]

Very inspiring, and it gives me confidents 😊👍

[@XxSEETH3RxX]

I've written 4 screenplays. The first drafts all sucked. The first draft is for discovering. M. Night Shyamalan says he writes 10 to 11 drafts. Antwone Fischer wrote 100 drafts on his first ever screenplay and was made. It's okay if the first draft is bad. Because if you can see that it needs improved then you're a good writer

[@LeonUnity]

Bingo! Exactly this!

[@sukhiwahiwala]

I’ll have to refer back to this one.

[@AmritaSingh-wf7zz]

so helpful!!!! thank you so much

[@clestrange172]

Thank you for this! Was very informative and I loved learning everything! 🙂

[@LeonUnity]

Thank you, Cassandra!! 💙

[@ziyanda_theartist]

Not a script doctor, just a regular one 😂

[@Starsky3022]

11:10 and now Disney has killed it xD

[@LeonUnity]

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I will not ask students to subscribe--but....who knows.

[@LeonUnity]

Well there’s a video on horror cinematography coming v.soon!