Ok, amazing video. A bit of a critique, the words appear / disappear from the screen faster than I can read them. It would’ve been cool if you had your sisters and maybe a brother to voice the different verses when they appeared. Then have you voice your poem, like you did
i know they were fast, i was attaching them to certain moments in which i had felt them, my idea was one could pause if they wanted to appreciate them more. Voiceovers are too distracting but i appreciate the critique, i knew it would not be straight forward to read them but that’s part of the fun of it
Best fall colours I’ve seen in a long time ☺️
Such stunning views! You’ve really captured the essence of these landscapes. Incredible videos! sub 👍26
nooo not the end!
Ok, amazing video. A bit of a critique, the words appear / disappear from the screen faster than I can read them.
It would’ve been cool if you had your sisters and maybe a brother to voice the different verses when they appeared. Then have you voice your poem, like you did
i know they were fast, i was attaching them to certain moments in which i had felt them, my idea was one could pause if they wanted to appreciate them more. Voiceovers are too distracting but i appreciate the critique, i knew it would not be straight forward to read them but that’s part of the fun of it
@@ComplexPatrick groovy video, u love Michigan ❤️