It's a very beautiful song. The lyrics and rhythm are good, and your voice is special, too. Hope that more people can appreciate it. keep making songs, you got great talent.
lyrics denise, denise, denise i finally dreamt of you last night split into two, i chased after you and i and i told u to be patient and i told u to be kind but when i woke from my dream, you’re still seventeen my god does this hurts denise, denise, denise what happened to our celebration of life yeah you’ll never make it to eighteen guess you called it, guess now we won’t smoke so now i have to make it and give u a toast for we were the wild ones and you’re the one who got away you’ll live on forever in my heart
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It's a very beautiful song. The lyrics and rhythm are good, and your voice is special, too. Hope that more people can appreciate it. keep making songs, you got great talent.
thank you so much for your kind words, truly
lyrics
denise, denise, denise
i finally dreamt of you last night
split into two, i chased after you and i
and i told u to be patient and i told u to be kind
but when i woke from my dream, you’re still seventeen
my god does this hurts
denise, denise, denise
what happened to our celebration of life
yeah you’ll never make it to eighteen
guess you called it, guess now we won’t smoke
so now i have to make it and give u a toast
for we were the wild ones and you’re the one who got away
you’ll live on forever in my heart
Pretty good for a first original song 👌
thank u
beautiful cover as always ☺️
it’s my first original song!
@@melodylwy omg I didn’t even notice that makes it even better 😭
@@elmisterokanistero7612 thank you❤️
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