Better Police Reports: Professional Sentences

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @storyteller34
    @storyteller34 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Recently found you and i have binged watch your Police report writing videos.....i can tell you as a Police Detective, your videos have helped me....going to purchase your book ....thank you, they should play your videos in the Police academy....

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It is wonderful to hear from a Police Detective! I occasionally hear from academies that do play my videos. I really appreciate your feedback.

  • @mikeb.5039
    @mikeb.5039 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Even Private Security Officer's could learn a lot from your videos. I recently had to rebuke a S/O for stating a person was drunk in a report with no qualifiers to support the statement.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the feedback, Mike! I'm glad i was helpful. I hope that S/O does a better report next time.

  • @lorenzovienna934
    @lorenzovienna934 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you, taking the NTN police frontline test in a week. I enjoyed your videos, very clear to the point.
    This will help me with the report writing portion on writing a police report report on a 10 minute video..

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi, Lorenzo - thanks so much for the feedback! It's great to hear that the video was helpful to you.

    • @lorenzovienna934
      @lorenzovienna934 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@ballroom16 your welcome thank you.

    • @malachiconyers6991
      @malachiconyers6991 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Have you pass because I’m take my tomorrow and I had failed the video the situational judgment video)

  • @minhquandam5792
    @minhquandam5792 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you for all the great tips!!! I have learned a lot from your videos, and I am confident that I will score well during my police written exam tomorrow.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thank you for the feedback! I'm so pleased you're finding my materials helpful.

  • @etneupon4028
    @etneupon4028 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you, Mrs. Reynolds, for explaining the basic fundamentals of writing. This was helpful.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm so pleased it was useful, Daniela - thanks for the feedback!

  • @samuelbatth4317
    @samuelbatth4317 ปีที่แล้ว

    Any book on proof reading for police officers ?

  • @meh6953
    @meh6953 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for the informative video Ma'am. I'm taking my Police writen exam test tomorrow.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Best wishes for success today, Francisco! I'm glad Ithe video was helpful.

  • @igohard4christ508
    @igohard4christ508 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great teaching!!!! Very helpful!!!! 👏👏👏👍

  • @mcloven83
    @mcloven83 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just purchased your book. I can’t wait to read it!

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks so much for purchasing my book! I hope you'll find it useful.

  • @gemeltutu8865
    @gemeltutu8865 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow!! Thank you! I wish you were my english teacher in high school.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks, Gemel! I'm glad you found this video helpful.

  • @EVD13-r3d
    @EVD13-r3d 9 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Great video! Thank you so much.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  9 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You're welcome! Thanks for the feedback!

  • @uyscuti5503
    @uyscuti5503 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I just purchased your book (.)

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I hope you'll find it useful! Thank you for purchasing it.

  • @vaijr.5004
    @vaijr.5004 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your videos are very helpful. Thank you for taking the time to do this.

  • @anthonyrayjr9721
    @anthonyrayjr9721 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks you for the video, I needed this refresher before I go into the police academy. (P.S. The book was helpful as well.)

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  8 ปีที่แล้ว

      +Anthony Ray Thanks so much, Anthony! I'm so pleased that my materials have been helpful.

  • @davidrush9444
    @davidrush9444 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    could you do a video about using past tense in a sentence

  • @CMCSS-to3to
    @CMCSS-to3to 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks for the tips

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad you found them helpful!

  • @EkBayonGaming
    @EkBayonGaming 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much for this, it really means a lot.

  • @leoneldeblanza9807
    @leoneldeblanza9807 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you mam jean..

  • @veravee1082
    @veravee1082 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thx you very much 😁 ur video is very helpfull

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!

  • @AConcernedCitizen420
    @AConcernedCitizen420 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    You know why police officers wished they had better grammar and writing skills right? The same reason I am going broke! Teachers in this country do not give a damn about “Our” real #education!
    I’ve had one teacher say about the other, “that teacher should have been fired”! 😂🔧💰 But they still keep don’t give a damn! Not enough teachers like you out their beautiful!

  • @AConcernedCitizen420
    @AConcernedCitizen420 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Why are you selling through Amazon?!😖

  • @98LS1210
    @98LS1210 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very informative , thank you .

    • @poodahthecreator
      @poodahthecreator ปีที่แล้ว

      I like the way you put that statement together lol

  • @benpal22
    @benpal22 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks. It really did help me.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're welcome! Thanks for the feedback.

  • @tyronethompson469
    @tyronethompson469 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thanks

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're welcome!

  • @christophergarcia225
    @christophergarcia225 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you

  • @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11
    @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11 ปีที่แล้ว

    BEST TRAINING VERRY GOOD UNPOL INTERPOL DETECTIVE INVESTIGACIÓN SECRRT SERVICE POLICE INTERNACIONAL

  • @roryrwneilson
    @roryrwneilson 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    My neighbor needs to watch this...

  • @Harlem55
    @Harlem55 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Except for the fact she's dead wrong for all intents and purposes of the English language. Sentences in English do not always begin with a noun cognate. For example the first word of the first sentence in this post (which is grammatically correct by the way) is a transitive verb, not a noun. The second sentence of this post begins with "For" which is a preposition. The third sentence of this post begins with an article Adjective (the word "the"). In fact, We can't use He/She (pronouns) at all in a written sentence (and still make sense) unless we have previously declared a personal noun to attach to the pronoun. (the exception to this rule is "I" sentences). Rather, she's forgetting that in English any word that modifies the noun usually comes before the noun, and any word that modifies a verb usually comes before the verb, with the exception of prepositional phrases which usually come after a verb.
    Commas do one of the following in non-fiction writing (don't use a comma unless you're doing one of these):
    1. Separate independent clauses of a sentence which can grammatically stand alone and still make sense. (e.g. Mrs. Reynolds walked down the street, and then turned the corner.)
    2. Lists of things or lists of constructs. (e.g. you should eat apples, pears, and bananas on Sunday.)
    3. distinguishing appositives (e.g. Her favorite teacher, Ms. Reynolds, ate a taco on Sunday)
    4. Set off a direct address (e.g. Hey, You! Yeah, You. The idiot with the badge who can't write reports without errors in grammar. Yeah, You.)
    5. Set off a non-restrictive clause. (e.g. The children needed new shoes, which were expensive.)
    6. Set off a introductory clause. (e.g. When Tom was ready to iron, his cat tripped on the cord.)
    7. Set off quotations. (e.g. Mary Said, "I dislike concerts". "I dislike concerts", Mary Said.)
    8. Dates, addresses, etc. - We all should already know the conventions for these.
    Semicolons have but one function (unless you're extremely careful) - which is to allow you to omit the word "and". normally it is better to use two sentences as opposed to using a semicolon when we want our writing to be clear and unambiguous, such that we avoid them like the plague in non-fiction writing.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, "John"! I never said that all sentences begin with a noun! Many sentences start with "but," "and," "yet," and the other FANBOYS words, for example. I said that one way to spot a sentence is to see if it starts with a person, place, or thing.
      Similarly one way to spot an extra idea is to see if it starts with a word that's NOT a person place or thing. It's a handy rule of thumb that my students have used for decades.
      There's no need to learn a lot of gobbledygook about dependent clauses, independent clauses, prepositional phrases, and so on. I never use those terms.
      It sounds like you have a solid background in grammar, and that works for you. Great!
      You might be interested in the way I teach comma rules. You have eight rules. I have three. You can see my handout at this link: bit.ly/EasyCommas. (I don't teach commas with dates, addresses, and lists - students always know how to do those already.)
      Semicolons join two sentences. Change the period to a semicolon and lower-case the next word (unless it needs a capital). The store is closed. We'll go back tomorrow. The store is closed; we'll go back tomorrow.
      Semicolons are a great way to show off a little while keeping a sentence simple and readable. I recommend using them sparingly.

  • @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11
    @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11 ปีที่แล้ว

    GOOD WORKING GOOD JOB UNPOL INTERPOL DETECTIVE INVESTIGACIÓN SECRRT SERVICE POLICE INTERNACIONAL AMÉN AMÉN AMÉN

  • @furqanabbas8337
    @furqanabbas8337 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

    • @furqanabbas8337
      @furqanabbas8337 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ballroom16 thanks teacher ,i am working in police department.

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@furqanabbas8337 Thank you for your service!

  • @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11
    @josephwilnoirbarthelemy11 ปีที่แล้ว

    I LOVE MY JOB I WANT I NEED UNPOL INTERPOL DETECTIVE INVESTIGACIÓN SECRRT SERVICE POLICE INTERNACIONAL AMÉN

  • @santoshsodary239
    @santoshsodary239 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thanks

    • @ballroom16
      @ballroom16  8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're welcome, Santosh!